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MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR
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| EPISODE 13 |
Episode starts from swara runs upstairs….leaving broken sanskar….!! Shan went near sanskar nd taps his shoulder…..!! Sanskar turns…hugs him nd broke down in his arms….!! Shan rubs his back in order to console him….!!
After a long cries sanskar bcm normal….!! Shan makes sanskar sits in the sofa nd kneels down infront of him…!!
” bhai…calm down ok abhi sab kuch patha chalgaya na….now what u going to do….!! I already said na bhai….!! U ll regret one day….see now what had happened…??
U broke her bhai…!! U broke her trust….!! U broke her heart…!! All the above u broke her love for u…!! I dont think u can get her back…!! ” shan said while passing him a glass of water…
” i have realised shan…i have tortured like hell….!! But that time i thought that shekar uncle only killed my father….i thought swara also know about that thats y i done like this…
but u know shan everytime when i hurt her it hurted me also….when i m seeing her tears…i thought to stab my hands for beating her…
but my bl***y revenge had covered my feelings….!! Now she is far away frm me…!! Plzzz shan help me…i want my swara back…i want my love back….she is my love….!!
HAMARA BACHPAN KA PYAAR….!! I want her back shan plzzz help me….” said sanskar while holding shan’s hand with pleading eyes….
Sanskar seeing shan with eager eyes that shan can help him in getting his swara back…!! But shan smiles sadly nd took his hands out frm sanskar’s nd stands up….!!
” shan….!! ” sanskar asked while looking up at shan who is turning towards otherside….sanskar holds his wrist…!! Shan turns towards sanskar nd removes his hand from his wrist…!!
” i m sorry bhai…now i cant do anything…!! Till last min swara had beared ur vemon words nd ur tortures….!! Now its time for u to bear the punishments…haahaa ( laughs sadly )
i dont know bhai what type of punishments are waiting for…!! May be swara can leave u also….!! U have tortured her that much….!! I cant help u…!! ”
Shan said nd was about to go…
” shan plzzz dont leave me….” said sanskar with teary eyes….
” bhai i just said i cant help u…that doesnt mean i m leaving i ll stand by ur side all time…dont worry…!! Now think how to convince her….” said shan nd leaves from there….
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SWARA ROOM
If u guys think that swara will be crying as always than u r wrong yes swara was jumping in her bed nd dancing like anything….!! ( heheeee )
” huh finally sanskar sab kuch saame aagaya now….i know sanskar had realise his mistake for torturing me…but sanskar i wont forgive u that much easily…..
U have to face the HELL…ok ok dialogue lil dramatic hai na but sure sanskar i ll punish u for sure…!! Nd finally u cant get me that much easily….!! ” said swara sitting on the bed hugging the pillow….
Suddenly the door got bang opened…swara bcm shocked by the sudden entry….shan came in nd bolts the door….nd sat beside swara….
There is a silent for sometime…both burst out into laughter…!!
” kya dialogue mardhiya tune shan U BROKE HER TRUST, U BROKE HER HEART , U BROKE HER LOVE wowwww shan….” said swara while punching his arms playfully….
” but vo…he is really broken swara…i cant see him like that..bohot roraha vo….” said shan with brimming eyes….!!
” i know shan do u think it is easy for me to see his tears but…!! U know na it is necessary to give him this punishment….” swara said while wiping her tears….
” you are right swara…but u know right he is so sensitive….!!
He is fully broken swara…!! But its needed…but plzzzz swara dont give him lil punishment…he cant before that…!! ” shan said nd getsup….
” shan thank u sooo much…!! For everything….!! Bcz of u only today he realised his mistake…!! Nd thank u for proving me innocent shan…” swara said with a bright smile…
” oiii friendship may no sorry nd no thanks yaadh hai bhai ka rule….” swashan side hugs eo….
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AT NIGHT
” bhai swara didnt ate anything till the morning…!! Go nd talk to her plzzz…” shan said while arranging the dinning table….
” shan do u think she will talk to me…plzz u go na…!! ”
” bhai how long will u hide frm the truth bhai….u have face it…!! Mistake is urs nd u have to correct it…!! Go nd talk with her….!! At least try to clear this mess…!! ”
” but what if she….” said sanskar in a scared voice….
” nothing will happen go bhai…!! Talk with her…!! If u ran away from the present…than swara will not be in ur future…”
” shan plzz dont say like that…i ll…i ll talk to her…!!” Said sanskar nd goes upstairs…
” oh god this couple na…impossible….god knows how i m going to solve this mess…” said shan nd again engrossed in his dinning setting….
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AT SWARA ROOM
” shona ” sanskar calls while entering swara’s room…
” mr.maheshwari this may be ur mansion but this is my room…first knock the door…!! ”
Swara said with attitude….
“I m…i m sorry….” sanskar said nd knocks the door nd came in….
” nd mr.maheshwari may be u can forgot ur tortures towards me but i cant forgot nd forgive u easily…so first stop calling me shona…nd i dont have any intrest to talk with u so plzzz u can leave…”
” shona plzzz….i know did a sin…give me any type of punishment u want…but plzzz shona come back in my life as my love as MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR… ”
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Precap : over to navi akka….akka sanskar’s punishment is up to u…u have to write nxt part bcz i cant find any cruel punishments for sanskar…..so u give him punishment…..
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So guys how was epi i know its boring na….so sry but guys do cmnts negative nd positive both are accepted….love u all
Bye….
24 Comments
I think you have given promo na
Epi was nice but I am angry on you why you did not wish me?
oh varshu i m really really sorry ma bcz MB balance illa nan talktime amount la irundhu dhan post panren so only posting dhan adhan unnoda wall paakala i m reallyyyy sry a very very happy belated birthday…..see now i m wishing u on early morn
nice..
Awesomeeee dearrr andd may bee both r doing funn but sanskar’s punishment should be seriouss its upto navi naa then navi im warning u or else i will make u ghost again ???????
Nice
Loved it
Just loved it dear
Awesome dr
awesome
Nice dear
Awesome
nice
Awesome dear…
That teaser part were Swara n shan’s plan??
nyc
Loved it ❤❤❤
Awesome dear
Soo.outstanding!!!
Update next part soon!
Awesome part… I did not think swara will still love him ?? precap nan ah???
awesome
Awesome dear
teaser me jo likha tha mai uske hisaab se khudko ready kar dahi thi… par chappy ne toh heart attack de dia… hahaha kya twist hai.. waise shantanu ne sahi bola… these people are total mess.. hahaha
Sorry to say bt for me u spoiled swaraz chrctr here…
She dun hve any slf rspct kya??
He hurted her n didnt trust on her love… tortured her… n here shez jumping n laughing n makin plan wid shan to make h8m rlze n feeling guilty for hurting him ????
Disapointed….
nice