MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR – LAST EPISODE ( ENDING 2 )
SANSKAR ROOM
Sanskar sat on the floor with his back resting on door ” As i was engrossed in my revenge plan i did not think u as my love. My only motive was to punish u as urfather killed my father who is my everthing after u shona.
Every time while hurting u, my heart was being pricked with needle.do u know shona i only ask that man to scare u on our first night but he did many more…!! Nd u know now he is not in this world too..!!
What would have happened if i didnt come on time that day …!! I cant bear anyone touching u shona…!!
You tell me shona when ur papa is dead and im reason for his dead will you leave me?? Wont u punish me r tryto hurt me???
I did the same thing shona…!! But now ur far away from me. I know that i can never be forgiven but atleast give me a last chance to rectify my mistake???? ”
Sanskar was weeping silently he had slept like that..!!
SWARA ROOM
After sometime…While swara was talking to herself holding her sheet..!! She felt an arm on her backside.
Swara turned to look at the owner. Her eyes popped out and swara sat on the bed with amazed reaction….!!
She whispered ” sansskar…!!”
Sanskar moved towards her and looked into her eyes with pain and love. Swara too drowned in his eyes..!!
Sanskar immediately gave her bone crushing hug and cried…!! As a result his tears wetted her neck and hairs…!! Swara too wanted to feel him and need support…!!
Unknowingly swara hugged him back crying on his nape…..Both stayed for 15 mintues feeling pain and relaxing in eo arms…!!
Sanskar parted and kissed swara’s forehead ” you have full rights to punish me swara and im ready to bear the pain..!!
He left the room with pain…..Swara was not able to believe what he has done to her. She was crying and confused…!! She was messed up by his actions….!!
Soon she resumed her sense and stops him…!! ” ek minute mr.maheshwari….!! ” saying so goes infront of him…!! Sanskar bows down…!! ” acha abhi isi wakth iss second se ur punishment is starting….”
Sanskar looksup swara within no time pushes him out and closez the door on his face…!! Swara from inside ” so listen mr. Sanskar maheshwari…!!From now dont u dare to see me or come in front of…!! This ur punishment sanskar u have to lose UR BACHPAN KA PYAAR…!! ”
Sanskar bangs the door…!! ” swara plzzz dont do this to me…!! I can bear anything but not this…!! Plzzz swara dont do this….!!” sanskar was continuously banging the door but it was of no use…!!
Soon shan came there nd takes sanskar to his room…!! While convincing him…!! Sanskar unwillingly goes to his room…!! Hehimself dont know when he went unconsious….!!
Soon the night passes….!! Sanskar was waken up by shan by splitting water in his face…!! Sanskar got up with a jerk…!! ” shan swara…!! Kahan hai wo…!! I wanna see her plzzz…!!
I need to see her…!! “Saying so sanskar getsup and ran towards swara room…!! While shan is following him…!! And continuosly calling him…!! Sanskar reaches swara’s room…!! He was about to knock the door…!! But it got opened…!!
Sanskar getsin and doesnt find swara anywhere…!! Shan also came there runningly…!! Sanskar searches her in the washroom…!! Balcony…!! But she is nowhere to be found…!!
Sanskar runs downstairs…!! Nd searches her everywhere…!! But all in vain she is nowhere…!! He turns and sees shan who is leaning on the wall with tears….!! Sanskar runs to him nd holds his shoulder….!!
” shan i know that u know about swara’s whereabouts…!! Shan tell me where is MY SWARA…!! plzzz shan tell me where is my isshona…!! Kahan hai MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR…!! ” sanskar shooks him…!!
Shan jerks him harder which starled sanskar…!! ” she is gone bhai…!! She went far away from…!! Ur swara…!! Ur shona…!! APKA BACHPAN KA PYAAR…!! chalagaya apko chod ke…!! ” said shan while broke down…!!
FLASH BACK STARTS
Shan comes to swara’s room after leaving sans in his room…!! Swara opens the door after shan’s screams to open the door…!! Swara came out with her bags…!!” swara u said u wont leave bhai than…!!”Said shan with a shock xpression…!!
” bas shan i said but ur bhai made me to do this i cant be hear anymore….!! I m leaving…!! “said swara and goes out…!!Swara stops hearing shan ” where will u goat this odd hours…!! “Said shan…!! ” i can manage…!! ” said swara..!!
Swara was standing there for few minutez…!! Shan thinks sometime nd held swara’s hand…!! And drags her downstairs…!!Swara goes with him as she trust him…!!
FLASHBACK ENDS
” I know where she is…!! But i cant tell u…!! And i wont tell u…!! ” sanskar looks at him being amazed…!!
Shan adds ” yeah bhai..!! I wont tell u her whereabouts..!! Bcz i dont want her to suffer more…!! Bhai how many times i told u not to torture her…!! Or u will repent for this oneday….!!
But no…!! U r engrossed in ur revenge…!! That u dont even thought once b4 hurting ur own love…!! Haan kya bola tune…!! Yeah AAPKI BACHPAN KA PYAAR hai na…!! Than why the hell do u distrust her…!!
Bhai do u know how much she suffered in the past 10 years…!! U know how much she had beared for saving her dignity…!! Do u have any idea..!! ( guys let me clear swashan are bff so swara shared everything with shan )
God damn bhai plzzz let her leave in peace afterall…!! ” said shan with a rage eyes filled with tears…!! Sanskar is fully shocked by his burst out…!! But he cant live without his shona…!! He needs to see her…!!
Sanskar tries to hold his shoulder…!! But shan takes aback…!! Tears starts to flow down from his eyes…!! First his love had leaved him…!! Nd now he is going to lose his brother also…!! This all are only bcz of his b***** revenge…!!
Sanskar falls in his knees…!! Nd folds his hands infront of shan….!! ” shan plzzz i can understand…!! I know i did a big mistake i m repending it now…!! But shan how can she leave me…!! What will she do in this society that too alone…!!
No shan i cant leave her in danger again…!! Plzzz shan bolo na where is she…!! Plzzz i cant leave her like this…!! ” said sanskar while falling on shan’s feet…!! Shan also having tears in hia eyes…!!
He makes sanskar stand…!! “U no need to worry about that..!! Swara is safe…!! But i cant tell her whereabouts…!! ” saying so shan was about to go….!! Sanskar held his wrist…!!
“Shan plzzz…!! I trust u…!! Plzzz,u also dont leave…!! ” said sans witn brimming eyes…!! “Dont worry bhai…!! Bcz of u only i m alive…!! I wont forgot that so till my last breath i wont leave u…!! ”
Saying so shan leaves upstairs…!! Leaving broken sanskar…!!
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After a month or so….!!
A clif is shown…!! There we can see a man tying in the chair…!! Nd it is place at the edge of the cliff….!! An another man in black…!! Came towards him…!! With two guards following him….!!
Tied man ” plzzzzz sanskar…plzzz leave me…!! I wont be infront of u…!! I wont be in this country plzzz leave me…!! I beg u…!! Plzzz…!! ” says with a fear…!!
San “no need for leaving this country sahil…!! Bcz now u r going to leave this whole world
..!! Are u ready sahil….!! “Said sanskar with red shot eyes…!!
” plzzz sanskar….!! I m sry…!! Sorry plzzz leave me…!! ” said sahil…!! While crying….!!
” sorry my foot…!! U b***** killed my father…!! Than u sold my swara…!! Than after ur confrontation u ll say i m sry than i ll leave…!! Do u think i m a joker….!! ” said sanskar while taking a sword from his guard…!
Sanskar stabs sahil chest…!! ” u stab my father like this na…!! ” saying so sanskar stabs in his forehead…!! Than legs…!! Than arms…!! He stabs in his whole body….!! Sahil screams like hell…!! But sanskar is not affected by his screams….!!
” this is only for my father’s death…!! Now its time take revenge from my shona’s side…!! Guards….!! ” saying so he forwardz his to guards…!! They gave a can of petrol…!! Sanskar pours the petrol fully in sahil….!!
” sanskar….!! Plzzz no…!! ” sahil said with week voice…!! Sanskar fires the matchstick and throws it sahil…!! Before he could burn completely sanskar kicks the chair…!! Burning sahil felldown from the cliff….!!
Sanskar smiles nd left from there…!! He droves off to SM…!!
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AT SM
sanskar came in…!! He staraightly stroms into his room….!! Nd takes a photo…!! First kissed the photo…!! Nd hugs….!! After sometime he looks at the photo…!!
Sanskar while looking and caressing the photo “Shona…!! Today i killed him….!! I killed that b***** sahil…!! Who is responsible for papa’s death..!! And responsible for our seperation…!! I killed him swara…!!
I know swara i cant put all the blames on sahil…!! Its me who distrusted u…!! Its me who tortured u…!! Its me swara…!! I m also rezponsible flr ur sufferings…!! But i m sorry shona…!! I m repending it…!!
U know it is hell without u…!! Its killing me swara…!! I cant tolerate this seperation…!! In the past ten years…!! I need to take revenge on u…!! Moreover my shan is with me that time…!! So somehow i managed our seperation…!! But still i missed u…!! Haa ( smiles sadly…!! )
Now also he is with me shona…!! But far away from me…!! U know he said he wont leave me…!! He is rite…!! He didnt leave me…!! But u know i dobt deserve him…!! Its been one month since shan talked to me…!!
He cares for me…!! He stands by me at every situations…!! But he is not talking to me..!! Its killing me shona…!! Plzzz come back to me…!! HAMARA BACHPAN KA PYAAR…!! Plzzz shona come to me…!! ” saying so sanskar cries hard…!!
After sometime he getsup and leaves to office…!!
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SM INDUSTRIES
sanskar enterz in his cabin and found shan already sitting there…!! He goes nd was about to say b4 that…!! ” today there is an important meeting at noon..!! U need to attend it…!! Nd yeah here is the presentation…!! U look into it…!! I m leaving…!! ”
Saying so shan handovers a file to sanskar nd without waiting for his reply…!! Sanskar sat on his chair…!! Nd closes his eyes a lone tear escapes from his eyes…!!
This is daily routine of sanskar…!! Crying , crying and crying….!! He is repenting hid deeds…!!
Like this another six months passed…!! Sanskar is living like a lifeless body…!! Shan is in contact with swara…!!
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AT SM
Asusual sanskar is getting ready for office…!! Suddenly he gets a call from shan…!! Sanskar bcm happy bcz this is the first shan is calling him after swara’s disappearance…!!
Sanskar happily attends the call ” haan shan…!! ” said with happy tears…!! ” come to AARI ORPHANAGE in 10 mins ” said shan in a go…!! ” but shan…!! ”
Before sanskar could complete he hears a beep sound…!! As shan had already cutted the call…!! Sanskar bcms sad but he is happy coz shan had called him…!! Sanskar leaves after wishing bye to swara’s photo…!!
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ORPHANAGE
Shan is waiting outside the orphange…!! Sanskar came there…!! Nd goes towards shan…!! ” shan why did u called me here…!! ” said sanskar…!!
” dont ask me anything…!! Just follow me…!! ” said shan by starts walking…!! Sanskar feels bad but without any option he follows him…!! Sanskar goes in…!!
A group of childrens came nd hugs sanskar…!! By this sanskar fell duet lack of balance…!! The childrens are hugging him…!! Nd kissing all over his face…!! Sanskar turns nd sees shan who was standing at distance smiling at him…!!
Sanskar had tears in his eyes…!! Soon the lights went off…!! The childrens made him stand nd ran from there….!! An audio starts…!!
” HAPPY BIRTHDAY SANSKAR..!! ” sensing the voice tear escapes from sanskar’s eyes nd wispers ” swara…!! ” as sanskar wisphers the audio continues…!!
” YEAH SANSKAR…!! ITS ME SWARA…!! SWARA SANSKAR MAHESHWARI…!! I KNOW U FORGOT UR BIRTHDAY…!! COZ U R REPENTING UR DEEDS TOWARDS ME…!!
I M HAPPY SANSKAR,,THAT U R FEELING BAD FOR ME..!! ND COZ OF THAT ONLY I LEAVED U…!! GIVING U OUR SEPERATION AS UR PUNISHMENT…!! NOW IT OVER SANSKAR…!!
YEAH UR PUNISHMENT,,,UR PAIN,,OUR SEPERATION,,EVERYTHING IS OVER TODAY…!! EXCEPT OUR LOVE..!! LETS START A FRESH SANSKAR…!! MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR KI TARA…!! WILL U ACCEPT ME SANSKAR…!! ”
the audio got over…!! The light went on…!! There infront of him the same childrens are standing there but this time along with his love,,,his life,,,his swara,,,his shan…!! Swashan is standing inbtw them…!!
They shouts ” HAPPY BIRTHDAY SANSKAR…!! ” tears are rolling down from sanskar’s eyes…!! Sanskar without wasting any second..!! Ran nd takes swara in a bone crushing hug..!!
He hugs her like his life depends on this one hug…!! After sometime swara tries to broke the hug but sanskar didnt let her to do so…!! Nd wisphers ” plzzz shona..!! Dont leave me again…!! I m sry i m sry…!! for everything…!! ” said sanskar nd cries his heart out…!!
Swara let him..!! Shan smiles inbtw his tears…!! Childrens leaves from there…!! After a long painful hug sanskar parted from her…!! He cups her face…!! ” i m sry shona…!! I m sry for everything…!! Plzz shona dont leave me again…!! Pl…!! ”
B4 he could complete swara closes his mouth by her palm..!! ” forgot everything sanskar..!! Lets start a fresh…!! MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR ki tara…!! Shall we…!! ” sanskar nods to swara’s sentencen…!! Nd hugs her again…!!
This time he parted soon…!! Nd sees shan who is having tears in his eyes…!! Sanskar hugs him nd cries…!! Shan rubs his back ” not again bhai…!! Leave all this…!! ” said shan..!!
Sanskar wisphers ” i m sorry ” shan shushes him…!! Than the childrens came with cake for sanskar..!! Then sanskar cuts the cake nd feeds swashan nd they too feeds him…!!
After that they leaves to home…!! Shan excuses and says swasan to go in…!! They goes in nd gets shocked to see the hall decorated nd had mandap at center with media peoples nd bussines men nd some frnds standing wearing traditional dress…!!
Shan came from back nd puts his hands around swasan shoulder…!! ” Dont think much…!! Go nd get married guys…!! ” said shan…!! Group of boys came nd takes sanskar…!! While the group of girls came nd takes swara…!! To make them ready..!!
After sometime…!! Swasan came down after getting ready in marriage attire..!! Shan took their hands nd leads them to mandap nd made them sit…!! Shan did swara’s kanyadhan…!!
Sanskar adores swara’s neck with mangalsutra once again…!! Nd fills her maang with sindoor…!! They are officially husband nd wife once again..!! They standsup nd hugs shan..!!
They live happily ever after…!!
Screen freezs in swasanshan happy faces…!!
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I think now u all are comfortable with the stry..!! Thank u soo much for ur every cmnts huh finally i finished it…!!
#mavina
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