Hey guys i m big fan of our kanchi nd i have read all of ur ff’s and m also feels the ff is far better than the real seriel…A thought came into my mind so decided to write an fs(not more than 4 or 5) depend on its length hehehe…this is my first time i have never ever written anything before..am very nervous bcoz m not gud writter as all other so pardon me for any mistake (especially Grammer) now m stop my bak bak
Here it goes…
At hospital:
a girl around 24 yr working on labtop…
suddenly a men enter…
Men:hey sanchi (yes she is sanchi mishra)whr r u lost dear ur mom called u many times nd u did’t pick her call so she called me nd she is worried for u plzzz call her back
sanchi look at her phone and noticemom 10 miss call nd ph on silent mode ..
Sanchi:sorry akshay actually my phn on silent and forget about it thanks nd sure i call back mom
dr. akshay: no thanks at all … suna nahi friendship me no sorry no thanks take care nd plzzz go nd tk rest ok bye
ok baba bye take care u too reply sanchi and start packing nd locked cabin cabin nd goes towards car and then phone rang again..
Sanchi: oh sit i forget to call mom nd picked the call “hello maa sorry actually first surgery then i have to do lots of preparation for tomorrow u know free camp organised by xyz NGO for free medical checkup for children so m sorry maa
jaya mishra(sanchi’ mom)- haan beta i know u had lots of work to do that does’t mean u forget urself, u have lunch?
sanchi- wo maa actually…
Jaya- i know…tum nahi sudhrogi ab to pragya isha bhi nahi h tumhare sath jo tumhe dante yaad dilaye
sanchi-maa not again
j- i know u can’t meet them but atleast u can a call…they all really missed u a lot beta plzzz
s- i wish maa m kar pati per aap janti h jo kuch hua uske baad
jaya interruptes sanchi-2 yrs r enough beta kab tak yu hi rahogi kyun nahi bhul jati usse or apni life mein aage bad jati .
S-maa m driving plzzz ghar aakar baat karte h
j-but beta
s-bye maa
j-ok beta drive safely and came fast we r waitting for u bye
s to herself – no i can’t forget him i can’t i still love him i try my best per usse nafrat nahi kar payi kya karun ye dil h ki manta nahi and wheeping badly(bg play teri khushboo or teri batein from movie MR X)
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sanchi-today my dream comes true we r going to do my internship in india’s best hospital sdch woahhhh and gave hi fi to her bastie ishgya
isha-yes sanchi finally hum sath me internship complete karenge nd wo bhi sdch se u heared that here is the most eligible handsome but strict dr. Kabir he is so hot i show his pic nd u both show me how can i impress him with my beauty
pragya-abeo chup kar kasam se ye aate hi apni laar tapkana mat shuru kar he is our mentor for god sake atleast leave him..
isha pouts ok nd makes puppy faces
sanchi-ok guys lets go today is our first day nd we can’t spoil our image in front of dr.kabir otherwise we got punishment
ishgya-yaaa lets go and c the hospital
trio divided nd enquires hospital
pragya-abe o kasam se hospital k naam per kya 7 star hotel h
suddenly a boy jump from other side ….nd shout chipkali
pragya screms nd in fear hugs him tightly…..Boy burst out in laughter-helllo miss beauty pehchana mujhe
pragya-abeo o nalayak tum yahan hamara pichcha kar rahe ho kya
veer -no miss pragya yadov u know na me m veer malhotra and son of dr.anand malhotra … As u r m also came here for doing my internship
pragya in excitement hugs veer and veer smiles nd reciproctes the hug…aftersome times they realised their closeness nd parted away(praveer likes each other from college time but never confessed )
lets see whr is isha….
Isha’s eyes stop on the mall -wowww yaar now i have no need to go outside for shopping yipppeee and goes inside she llikes a dress wowww beautiful
a men-but not more than u
isha turns nd shouts arav
(dr arav malhotra(veer younger bro nd gang frnds too, had crush on isha nd isha also likes him)
arav-close her mouth sssshh r u mad koi bhut dekh liya kya
isha-u here why nd how
arav -same as u and other gang
isha happily-great
lets go meet the gang and they go to find others
(Note sorry guys i know this is kanchi os but rest other r imp and playing important role so bare me)
Sanchi going towards their respective way and a young men come towards her from opposite direction talking on the phone nd did’t notice sanchi nd so on sanchi too …nd both bumps nd collides their head
men-can’t u….
Sanchi-m sorry held one ear nd help him to picking files
men-sorry my foo..
Before he complete sanchi-hey plz we’ve do it again
men-what the hell…r u out of ur mind
sanchi-yes i mean no my dadi said if u can’t do it again then dog will bite u if u don’t want that… without waitting for answer sanchi held his head and slowly collide with him and share cute eyelock(bg plays na na naree)
Precap-in the lift.sanchi on the top of kabir
regards niya
gud nd bad commnt all r welcome guys but gave ur opinion nd throw whatever u want but notegg m pure veg hehe luvv u
42 Comments
First of all a heartiest welcome to kanchi family… One more ff yippee, I m driving crazy…. What a plot, a totally different concept… Excellent, fantastic, superb… Mithun da k style mein “kya baat””kya baat” “kya baat “….lots of love to u dear…. Keep writing… Can’t wait to see kanchi’s romance…
Hey annu thank u thank u so much dear u made my day sweetie i’ll try to post nxt one soon as possible lovvv u sweetie
Niyaaa first of all welcime to kancgi famiky dear.. Congrats for the first article.. i am really very surprised that its ur 1st post…much better than mine 1st post… u have skills dear..just go ahead.. good luck
And the episode was fab.. dialogues of all were amazing especially of Pragya and Sanchi… too good dear
Lots of love
Hey mitali thanks a loats dear… All credit goes to u thanks bhi chota padega tumhare liye sweetie ek big breakbone hug for u…hahaa but don’t worry sach mein tumhari bone nahi todungi…lovvv u too lots of kisses for u
No need to thanks me dear.. it was my duty to help u and motivate u..the result is in front of us…u wrote such a fantastic article.. hope u carry on with writing with this passion only.. keep it up dear..lots of love to u …. Jhaa Jaa Sab Ke Dil Pe ?
Thank u mitali tumse ye sunne ke liye mere kaan taras rahe the sweetie…m specially tumhare response ka intzaar kar rahi thi..i know m late reply kar rahi hun actually meri mom ko bp problem ho gayi thi but ab wo thik h …thanks again sisy all credit goes to u for boosting my confident.nd try my best to post nxt one asap..lovvvv u too
Take care of aunty dear..bcoz my father also have BP problem..so i can understand the situation…and dear u r like my little sister..don’t say sorry..
I was waiting for ur posts not your comments/reply.. love u dear. And Get Well Soon wishes to Auntyji
OMG OMG my sis also knw how to write not bad sweetie it’s outstandinggggggggggggggggg amazingggggggggggggggggggg ravishing lovely historic unlimited package khidki tod darvaza tod beyond everything. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads. pliz accept it from yr sisy
Hey my suspense thriller queen thank u sweetie and huzoor aapka itna pyaar or kisses dene k liye sukriya….it means a lot too me and return double lots of lovvv nd dher sari kissy for u…. catch it nd handle
Hey my susspense thriller queen thanks a lot nd yaa sweetie maine bhi socha ki kuch try karu u all inspired me a lot nd warm welcome to u and ur lots of lovvv sweetie nd return gift for u double lovvv and dher sari kissy meri taraf sona ….tc sissy
plz post next 1 asap dear
Thanks dear m glad u like it lovvv u sweetie nd tc
Nice episode
Hey dear anu m glad u like it
Hey sorry guys this is my first time i have write anything nd i forget to introduce the story plot nd did’t gave intro….IN MY FF NO MISHRA/agarwal confusion,no revenge drama,veer kabir and aarav r sons of dr. Anand and savitri, sanchi parents r jaya mishra and sunil mishra same as show… And A BIG BIG BIG THANKS TO KHAMOSHI(mitali) FOR UR ADVISE AND BOOSTING MY CONFIDENCE LOVVVV U A LOADS…
Thanks to you dear…and that too a BIG BIG BIG wala..for trusting me.
God bless You dear
It was super se upar. I don’t believe that u write first time. Awesome…..Amazing plot ……different storyline…..loved it from bottom of the heart.A big wala congrats for ur first ff. Lots of love to u di. Update soon.Waiting for next part.
Thanks niyati it means a lots sweetie my angel m glad u like it nd try my best to post nxt asap tc nd lovvvv u too my little sis
A warm welcome to the writers world sweetie ??? for your first attempt this is awesome and I like how you started the story ???
Thanks ruwani m glad u like it this is my first time m lill nervous but now m happy to see ur commnt nd praise from u is like a dream thanks again sweetie
Awwww a super warm welcome to the family of writes niyaa ! Start is amazing dear ! Fabulous ! I loved ur title as well as the plot the most ! Keep going luv uh loads ! U rocked the episode !
Omgggggg trisha u commnted on my ff hey our queen of os such a huge compliment for me…awwww thanks a lot cutie pie nd yaa i try my best to update nxt asap nd improve my writting skills abhi to mujhe tum sab se bahut kuch sikhna h sweetie …lovvv u tc
A warm welcome to u dear in abhilasha style in our kanchi family….. Well glad that u pick the pen or we can say phone/laptop but its good. Coming to ur story its amazing dear ..
…will love to read it niyaa and u r Amazing!!! All the best!!
Hey abhilasha thanks sweetie nd maine bhi socha chalo apna pen i mean phone udati hun or kosish krti hun kuch likhne ki and surprisingly m glad u liked it … Commnt from a gud writter like u is like dreams come true sweetie u all r my inspiration….thanks again nd lovvv u tooo dher sara
Welcome Niyaa. Hey we have got a new writer. Yayy…… 1st epi is so awesome that I can’t wait to read more epis.
Precap; ye kya thaa yaar????? No problem actually I love Kanchi n their scenes.
Plz post next epi asap.
Ohhhh so sweet of u sweetie u made my day …nd sure sure after read ur beautiful commnt m try my best to post nxt asap…apka hukum sar ankhon per jahanpanah..lovvv u dear
Its not boring…. It was amazing
Thanks amnaa dear really its means a lots ….lovvv u dear
Amazing
Thank u sweetie m glad u like it
Niyaa dear, first of all, a warm welcome to our kanchi family dear………& yaar….tune maari entriyaan, dil mein baji ghantiyaan…haha……..too good yaar……..tumne toh pehle hi ball pe 6 runs lagadia…….aagaz aisa hai toh aage ka safar toh matlabb khidkitod hone waala hai boss………too good…..plz update nxt episode asap…….
Hey prinku thanks itni tarif wo bhi meri … I know m tumhari line chura rahi hun but seriously thank uuuuuu sweetie ye jo teri mithi mithi batein h dil ko mere chura le gayiiiiiii….lovvv u sweetie nd i missed ur ff too after ur exams post new ff sweetie tc…lovvv u
Niyu dear, u really deserve this appreciations…….luv u yaar…………
Pls pls continue it.i m very exited to read the next part and i loved name of ur ff “Mere Nishan”.its my fav song from phir bhi ma mane badtamiz dil.. coming to the episode,it was ossum and last scene was so cute….❤❤❤
Hey yaashi gave me hi fi….actually maine apne ff ka title ussi song se liya one of my fav. Song sweetie nd mere nishaan iska matlab aage k episode me pta chalega kyun liya so stay tune …m glad u like it lovvv u tooo
hi dear it was superb ff and welcome in kanchi family as a writer it was not boring and i’m waiting for next one update soon dear….
Thanks dr m glad u like it i’ii try my best to update soon
Hey Niyaa dear…congratulations for your 1st post and a warm welcome to kanchi family…and I can’t believe this is your first time…it was too good, excellent……..camt wait to read further…what can amazing plot….great one dear….love you loads and post ASAP
Thanks tania dear it means a lot to me praise from a gud writter like u is like a dreams sweetie…thank u so much again nd again nd sweetie m waitting for ur ff u r too late plzzzz post ur ff too lovvv u sisy…lots of kisses for u
This is absolutely awesome Dr keep going BT my only request pls don’t separate kanchi at any cost pls…pls update next soon I am waiting…
Ohhhh thank u thank u so much sweetie m glad u like it….nd sorry dear sometimes seperation is necessary agar kismat sath la sakti h to door bhi kar sakti h…nd u can guess it from my title name mere nishaan this means nishaan(memory) always alive not matter one live or dead but don’t worry dr m also a big fan of kanchi soooo i made it happy endding…but how it is possible after one’s death…well ye jaldi tumhe pata chal jayega so stay tune…lovvvv u
Welcome to the great Kaanchi family… Your ideas are amazing dear.. It was awesome .. Keep going sweetie.. Love you