Hi guys sorry to say once again.. I m late??plzzplzz forgive me i have decided to end this fs in nxt 3or 4 shots.. So till then bare me nd this fs??.. Then.. maximun in5 shots end ishq dua yaa h sazaa too??.
Ok so without wasting time i gave u a quick summary of all epi..
Episode – 1
Sanchi working in a NMC and hospital(random name) her only friend name is akshay …
Sanchi nd a team of doctors r going to attend a free medical camp…
Sanchi stuck in the traffic..
Goes in to flashbacks..
Episode- 2
Sanishgya ist day in sdch..
Sanchi collide with kabir..
Kabir announced sanchi as his personal assistant..
Episode 3 –
Kanchi in the lift…elevator shake and both fall on the ground..
Share a romantic eyelock..
Disturb by our gang???
Episode 4-
Kanchi r going to attend a conference..
Sanchi’s accident r going to happen but kabir saved her..
Botb realised how much they r imp. For each other..
Episode 5 –
New entry mahima and kartiik.. Common frnds of girls nd boys gang..?..
Inviting all the gang in their prewedding party..
Gang aarav and isha
Veer and pragya
Mahima and kartik
All decided to unite kanchi..
Veer share a plan with the gang that is muted ?…
So here is the nxt part…
(I m bad in explaing dress or u can say bad designer?)
@party venue…
Everything is so beutifull..
Flower lighting and decoration???..
Guests r coming..somes r chit chatting some drinks ..
Some enjoy the dance..
But whr is our gang..
Lets see.. Kya khichdi pak rahi h unke dimag m?
Whatttt?
Whatt is this..isha and aarav r fights that too badly???..
But why???
Lets go..
? ?
Action??,.
Isha- u idiot u can’t do a single thing for me that too without ur bro’s help .. Look at veer he’s always doing so much for pragya
Aarav – but baby u know naa i m not like veer bhaiya
Isha – huhh?. Can’t u even do a work for me atleast dance with me
Aarav – ??
Pragya – abeo isha maharani chudail ghuss gyi h kya ab bechare ko noch noch k kha k manegi ka ( abeo Isha a witch has entered, what is in your heart today that it is intended to scrape the poor)?
Isha – stop it pragya otherwise i will kill u surely?
Veer – what happend my sweet frnd or future bhabhi..why r so upset..
Isha – look at naa veer ur bro is dumb.. He never feel me so special as u did for pragya..?
Veer ohh thats it u know (rest his hands around her shouder) what if i can’t do that ur bestie will eat me alive???
At this statement isha’s face turns??
Veer turns nd see pragya gives him a deathly glare … So they two also fights???
So now its turns too our couple kanchi….
Both rushed towards the gang..
Both- what happened guys..
Kabir – why r fighting with ishgya..
Sanchi – nd u both why r u too fighting with veerav..
So meanwhile all r explaning ..or unki dukh bhari kahaani???.. And at a time.( exactly when our parents scold us we always put blames on others??)
Both kabir and sanchi tried to stop alls but all efforts goes in vain..
Kabir and sanchi look at each other and smirks
Suddenly two buckets of water on the gang?..
All shouts – what t hellll??..
Kabir and sanchi – shuttt up???..
Kabir in kkk style – thiz is a party not a playground u all fighting.. Blah blah blah…?
All r quiet( mil gyi shanti lecture sunke??)
Kabir – aarav and veer say sorry to ishgya
Ishgya ???
Sanchi – same apply on both of u
Uff finally world wàr finish?…
But no?,..
I don’t think so they r in the mood to solve their fight?
Pragya – lets go isha and sanchi we girls can enjoy party alone and batter that too without boys boring company..??.
Veer – ohh really miss yadov lets wait nd watch who will gonna to enjoy the party.. Lets go bhai and aarav..
Ishgya drag sanchi with her and joins mahima in their masti mission gang?
Otherside kabir also stuck in the boys kartik too join them..
( poor kanchi kahan phass gaye ??)
After half n hours.. All ready for the party..
Sanchi came in the party… Looking beautifull.. Kabir mesmerized too see her.. Boths eyes meet nd share a cute short eyelock…
Pragya nd veer r fighting again?..
Pragya – abeo nalayak mike p bolna bhi aata h jo host banoge..
Veer – miss pragya yadov i m veer malhotra i can do everything?
So finally announced starts??..
Pragya – all of u know that today is our sweet couple kartik and mahima’s pre wedding çum bachelors party but..
Interepted by veer — but but this is not a ordinary bachelor party..girls and boys both are invited so enjoyes the party
????????
? cheers???
????
All enjoying the dance a girl starting to flirt with kabir..
Sanchi feels jealous…and goes from their ..
Isha – look sanchi still u have time.. Tell him how much u lovv him.. Otherwise koi or usse le udega..mera hottie h hi aisa..
Sanchi glared at isha
Pragya – kasam se yaar sanchi ist time this isha maharaani is ri8..
Sanchi – no guys.. Its his choice i can’t force myself on him..??..
Ishgya – but sanchi
Sanchi – guys plzz
Scene shift…
Abe yaar ye plan to fail ho gaya ab kya karenge..said pragya
Isha – i don’t think this plan will be worked out
Aarav – yess guys even i don’t think ab kuch hoga.. We did all the fighting drama for both may be both came close nd…but no…
Veer- tu apna dimag mat laga what we have decided its going to be …. What happen if plan A flopped we have plan B .. I m sure this is going to be more fun..i m 200% sure?..
Fb show-
Veer – i know a girl aaliya she can help us guys and m sure when sanchi sees both kabir bhai and aaliya to be close she will react 100%
Ishgya- bakwas idea .. We know sanchi more then u .. Sheis not like us ?
Aarav- yaa istly bhaiya never allow someone that too a girl get close to himself.?..
Veer then i have a plan B ..
All- what
Veer – just wait and watch but u guys have to to do a work… We have to do a fake fights then no one can suspects us and isha pragya u have to convinced sanchi to enjoy the party( without the boys gang especially without kabir?)..
Pragya – but how its going to be
Veer smirks..
Fb ends
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Girls enjoying the drinks and chitt chatting their ususal convo..
Suddenly some boys entered in the frame and offer the girls for dance{ other than the gang)..
Ishgya – sure..
But sanchi nodded in no..
Kabir sees all this and smile
But ishgya forced sanchi- u promised sanchi u enjoyed the party nd that too wthout our boys gang(start melodrama)..
Finally sanchi agree and and kabir angree??
All thumps up..
While dancing ..
The men – hi i m rithik ahuja
Sanchi- myself sanchi
All r enjoying except sanchi due to uncomfortable and one is kabir due to jealously?
Some one too r also burning ???
Aarav..- kya yaar hum yahan kabir bhai ko jalane k liye itna kuch kar rahe h.. Or hum hi jal rahe h?
Veer – yes u r right just finish the mission kanchi unite afterthat i sweari m gonna to break the bone of the boys???, seeing their lovv enjoying dance with other..
Isha pragya see nd smile??
Music stop and they parted away..
A boy shivam sing a song for his gf and purpose infront of all..( just needed ?)
All claps…
Pragya -wow yaàr .. With a puppy fave-veer u never sing a song for me.. Why u not purposed me lke this…
Veer – aww mela baby nxt time when i fall in lovv i m definately purpose a girl like this afterall i knew a secret of u girls u r impressed by singing..
Pragya puntch on her stomach..sochna bhi mat
Veer oouucchh
Sanchi smile to listen their convo..
Veer teasingly- why r u smiling miss golgappa
Sanchi – nothing but yaa seriously no one can reject the purposal when some one special sing a song that too for u.
Kabir listen all ..
Suddenly rithik came from behind- then what sanchi if i sing a sonv for u .. U will accept me???
Sanchi also in same tone – ye to tumhari aawaaj sunne k baad decide karungi??
All laughed
But some one is burning like hell obviously none other then kabir..throw the glass of juice nd goes from their..
Sanchi see this nd get tensed
Sanchi searches kabir but….
Precap– sanchi turns and shock to see kabir.????
Thats all for today guys .. Sorry for a boring lengthy chappie.. Actually nothing come to my mind i wrote this chappie 2 times and deleted that time is better then this one..but i forgett what i was written last time??
.. So jo aaya wahi likh daala?..
Forgive me guys i just want to end this one infact i decided to end the party in this one but ??.. Ok enough of my bak bak see u guys soon .. Bye lovv u tc..???..
And one more thing if u like plzzz press ? and if u have time leave a commnt even a single word too… And if u not like press ?but plzzzz plzzz tell me what u not like what u want to improve in me…
Last not least..
Do ignore grammatical and typing mistake..
Regards
Niyaa
31 Comments
it was amazing
thank thank u so much dear.. I think u first time commnting on my ff .. That really means a lot to me.. Loovv u dear… Give ur support always????
So so amazing and awesome episode yaar……..I am eagerly waiting for the next part….
Thank u so much dear for ur constant support.. Glad u like it.. ??yaa i will try my best to post nxt one asap.. Bye tc.. Lovv u???
Hoye hoye!! Niyu ne apna ff post kr diya???…iss dayan ne tje bhut preshn kiya na ?….zombu tu toh chaa gyi….aur haa tune apna promise pura kiya???…aur haa dhanyawaad(dekhle thanku nhi bol rhi hu?) kyuki tune ff post kr diya?..aur ye kya?…Tu ff band krri h..kyu??? ???…aisa mt kr…….mein ro dungi vrna aur jb dayan roti h toh????…..mje bhi ni pta ky hota h????…so mein toh bhut khush hu ki tune post kr diya…keep rocking✌✌✌…..
Haan meharbaani aapki karna hi pada .. Wrna is zombie ne ab tak jitna khoon piya ye daayan sara nikaal leti?????.. And yaar mujhe bhi nhi pata daayan roti h to kya hota h search karke dekhti hun kya milta hai.??.. Sukhriya meri jaan tujhe ye pasand aa gya wrna mera kya hota?lovvv u yaar bye ig p milte hain???
Zombie kahi ki finally time mila. … kya mast episode bichare veer arav kabir ko jalane ke chakkar me khud hi jal gye ???? mast mind that episode. Ab ye jinny betal ka aashirwad hai bohot jald vs ka like milega …. tathastu meri zombie ??? milte h raat ko. Luv u meri zombie ? ? ?
Jai ho jinny betaal devi ki.. Bas aapki kripa drishti yun hi banaye rakhe???or pehle koi post to karu baad m hi to like milega??.. Aha ab kosish karungi jitti jaldi hoga utni jaldi post karu..khatam bhi to karna h?.. Lovv u ??bye tc milte h ig p????
its sooooooo cute
loved it dear and quick recap is amazing
post next asap
love kanchi jealousy
Thank u so much yaar… Try my best to post nxt asap as ican.. Lovv u yaar???..thanx for ur support .. It really means a lot to me.. Bye tc??
Awesome episode..I just love it,I read it 3times and was imagining the whole scene..too good.Please post the next epi soon..can’t wait
Srija srija srija lovvv u yaar for such an lovely comment..u first time vommented on my articles..that too so sweet as u r.. I m on cloud 9 after resding ur commnt… Thank u thank u so much.. I never expected this type oc commnt on my article??.. U made my day sweety…thanx again keep ur support nd showering lot of lovvv…post my ff soon as i can till then bye tc lov u?????.. Waitting for ur response on nxt one nd pray u may like. That too??
oooooyeeeeeeeee why you want this chap end it was superb and the way kanchi jealous to see each other with someone else………….regular raha kar TU to kabhi bhi kuch bhulegi nahi
post next one asap…………….tc…….love you niyu…………..
Haha?? sahi kaha dhruti irregular rahne ke side effects?.. Thañk so much yaar for liking it … Kya karu yaar strt to kar diye ff but ab mann hi nahi karta sdch kj wajah se interest nhi raha.. Isliye incomplete se better isse complete kar dun jaldi se jaldi…okkk bye lovv u yaar.. Nd puri kosish karungi isse jaldj jaldi post karne ki??.. Lovvv u yaar tc bye????
Great…..Awesome as always di…..loved it to the core…..waiting for next…..update soon…..love u infinity times ? ?
Sukhriya meri chotti??Lovvv u to dherr sara.. Tu kab post krne wali h do din kab honge tere??…itna intzaar karwate h kya??… Okay okaay bye i know tu studies m busy hai..per try krna bye.. Lovv u tc????
Zombu finally tune post kardi ???oye yaar, mast mindblowing khidkitod episode tha ye…ek dum superrrrr se uparrrrrrr waala tha…ab, ek achhi zombu ki tarah jaldi se iska next part submit kar…samjhi ki samjhaaoon???luv u meri pyaari zombu ???
Haan m samjh gyi achchii bachchii k jaise???.. Na samjh k marna h kya..itne pyaar sr samjhati ho ki smjhna hi pdta h???…lovv u to yaar bhala ho tum sabka jo pasand aa gya,.??.. Lovvv u???bye bye milte h ig p??
Its so awesome…. Update soon
Tysm yaar .. For liking this one nd for ur constant support.. Lovv u ????
Superb….
Tysm dear for ur constant support.. Keep showering ur love like this??.. Lovv u sweety.. Bye tc??
It’s not at all boring!!! Bothbsanchi and Kabir’s jealousy is cute!! And don’t know why you decided to end these fs suddenly, but I love your writings ???
Thank u so much ruwani… I don’t know what to say u… U praise my writting thats a big thing for me…??.. Really really u made my day sweety.. Lovvv u dherr saraa????
Superb
Thank u so much rishu for ist time commnting on my fs.. Lovv u a lot sweety???tc bye??
Ha ha…even though the idea is dumb, it always works??? and Sanchi doesn’t deny liking kabir. Hope they unite soon….?
??? i know faltu crapy idea tha per jo aaya likh daala?.. Thank u so much yaar for giving ur precious time… Nd wait whr r u nd ur post..??.. Nd tumhare test ka kya hua hope so u clear the test??… Lovv u ???.. Bye tc??
Thanku dr. The test went well. ?
And ya, I’ve posted the new episode. Hope you like it. Enjoy reading ???
Sorry Zombu…….Main beech se pdh rhi hoon……jhakkas tha…..phir se pdhna pdega saara epi……ja rhi hoon wapas….love you zombu….aaj wala chappy mst mindblowing tha
Oyee meri golu..ana.. Ye kya tha bich se????.. Kya yaar mere fs ko phir se padhna padega starting se ????.. Lagi rahtu apna ff kab post kar rahi h…sukhriya isse pasand krne k liye??.. Lovvv u too dherr sara???milte h ig p?