mere rashke qamar tune pehli nazar jab nazar se milaayi maza aagaya
Which mean…. O my moon’s envy, when for the first time… you met my gaze, it was wonderful.
You ppl will think that many stories are pending and still i m writing the new one.. Wat to do it has become my passion to write on RAGSAN…
The idea jst popped my mind and i presented in front of u all
Plzz tell me should i continue this or not?
Short intro
Ragini mathur:an orphan… Stayed in shining home orphanage… A silent girl bt cannot tolerate the pain of the loved one.. Studied hard now she’s moving to her friends place to achieve success.. So that she can also take care of the orphanage… And she is in love with nikhil arora
Sanskar khurana:a top most buisiness man… Golden hearted person.. Bt during the office hrs he is very rough and tough person… Loves his parents a lot…
Gunjan(played by roopal thyagi) :friend of ragini
Nikhil:a bad boy… Who changes gf like a tissue.. He got ragini with many try.. And he wants to use her bt still he couldn’t do it….
Ram prasad khurana:father of sanskar… Loves his wife and only son…
Sujatha:mother of sanskar… Loved her husband and son a lot… Searching a suitable match for sanskar
Other characters will be introduced when the story progresses…
Lets begin…..
A girl gets down from the train
She’s none other than ragini….
Rag:i Ragini going to write my destiny from today… I want to be the support of shining home… I want to be succeeded in my destination… I don’t know who were my parents bt by shining home i got a family.. So i want to do small thing and it will be only possible… If i get succeded…
A girl comes and hugs her tightly.. Shes none other than gunjan
Gun:ragini… I m so so so happy today…. Finally u came…..
Rag:gunjan.. She too hugs her back…
Gun:so… Ms. Ragini mathur… All set for the job
Rag nods
Gun:let’s go…
They goes
Gun gets a call….
Gun:wat???
She was worried
Gun:wat hpnd gunjan
Gun:u know sherna.. I always talk abt…
Rag:yes…
Gun:she got ditched by her bf.. Now she is pregnant of his child…
Rag:i hate those boys…
Gun:i should teach him a lesson
Rag:i no we
Thy goes to hospital
Sheena was crying hard
Sheena hugs gunjan
Gun:sheena.. Tell me who is he?
Sheena cries hard
Sheena:now why to find him
Rag:see sheena… He vl target many other girls now if you take a stand now we can get him arrested for his doings
Gun:yes sheena
Sheena :no.. I dont want to he has threatened me.. If i do something against him.. He will post my…. video in internet
They were shocked…
Rag gets a call she cuts the call
Rag:now wat gunjan..
Gun:at least tell us who is he? We vl punish him in our way
Sheena nods in no….
Gun takes her phone.. :let’s go ragini
Sheena:plzz.. He
Rag hugged her:don’t worry we vl be there with you in every moment
Rag get call again… She excuses and goes out
It was from shining home
Gun:plzz sheena we vlnot do anything u jst tell us who is he?
Sheena:NIKHIL ARORA
Gun:he!! I hate him…. I told you dont be friendly with him… Bt still u….
After talking to shining home.. Now she gets call from nikhil
Nik:raagini.. Wr r u now?
Rag:actually my friend has been cheated by her bf.. She’s in hospital now so i didn’t call u or accept ur call
Nik:oh.. K.. Wn vl u meet me my love?
Rag:not now.. I cant today.. Tmrw i hv a job interview.. I vl call u after that
Nik:ok dear
Rag:ok now bye…
Nik evil smiles:bye….
Rag:really none are like my nikhil
She see gunjan
Gun:sheena is on rest… I m thinking of her mom…
Rag:yes… They vl be very upset…
Gun:yes she was crying
Rag:did u got to know who is he…?
Gun:yes…. And we will teach him a lesson on our way
She forwards her hand.. Ragini holds…
Gun:come with me….
They moves in scooty
Gun sees nikhil:oh its him….
Rag:wr?
Gun stops and points towards nikhil with another who is coming out of the cafe
Rag :wr?
Gun:see the cafe
Rag:he…. She sees some other guy….
She gets down the scooty
Gun:wait i vl….. She sees ragini has already moved
Now nikhil has already moved from there
Rag sees the guy who is talking with girl
Rag:i think he is behind another girl…
She sees the girl going…
She goes to the guy and held his collar…
mere rashke qamar tune pehli nazar
jab nazar se milaayi maza aagaya
O my moon’s envy, when for the first time
you met my gaze, it was wonderful.
The guy was shocked….. He was wearing a cap and goggles
Rag:how dare you? How dare you to cheat my friend? She is crying for u in the hospital and you….. Chi… Now u r behind another girl…
Guy freeing himself from her clutch :excuse me…. I think u r misund……
Thudd slap(oh no ragini????)
He was shocked….
He sees the ppl were seeing them
A man:may be he cheated this girl
A woman :these girls hv no sense… First going behind the guy then getting cheated and now slapping drama
Rag:may be now you remember her…
Guy was confused.. He knew that she misunderstood him
Gunjan who came searching her was shocked
She goes to ragini and drags her
Rag:gunjan.. Why r u dragging me
Gun:ragini
Rag:he should be punished for his deeds
Gun:ragini he is not
Rag:wat no… I will punish him and also he threatened her
Gun:ragini… He is not the whom sherna told
Rag was shocked
The guy was looking at them.. He removes his goggles he glares her
Rag was guilty
He goes from there
All ppl around start to taunt ragini
Gun takes her from there…
Gun:cant you wait for me to come…bechaara
Rag was guilty and pity on him
Here the guy angrily sits in the car
Guy:great Sanskar… Who even didn’t see a girl in that way has been blamed… That too by a misunderstanding… Thank God nobody identified me… Nahi tho it will be a disaster… Sanskar khurana ki tho watt lag jathi…
And the girl couldn’t she first confirm… I hate her…
He drives…
And the guy is none other than sanskar bechaara????
Precap:sanskar’s mom dad introduction.. Sanskar’s frustration and Ragini’s interview
Guys hows this.. If u didnt like this concept then plzz tell me.. I vl stop this here itself
How was the first gaze or pehli nazar of our sweet si ragsan?? Will they meet again??will this golden hearted sanskar become evil hearted for ragini?? Will ragini gets to know abt nikhil???
Stay tuned…..
14 Comments
Awesome yaar
awesome continue
Nice
Interesting in ur cover pic both are looking cute dr.
Superb u made my day with ur 3 stories
Nice continue keep going
Wow sissy i thinking ragini interbplace is sanskar’s place
awesome aliaaa! !!???? awwww bechara Sanskaar …. n poor ragu ???? loved it! !!!
Awesome dr
awesome dear….loved it alot….oh poor Sanky….eagerly waiting for nxt one..tkcr dear
Superb
Awesome
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