Hey guys ….I am back …thanks for ur beautiful comment …guys ..so here is fifth part ..
@Kolkata ..
Swara and diya reach their flat …
Swara : diya stop crying yaar ….they r just joking I guess …
Diya : but ..
Swara : listen yaar ..now come sleep …tomorrow we can go and wander Kolkata
Diya : OK ..
They sleep ….
@mm
Ragini serves them dinner …….
Laksh : dad ..u know what we saw a girl today …she was just like us ….very courageous ..
Dp : really …
Sanky : haan dad …..
Dp : hope we meet her again …
Laksh : haan dad ,,I wish so…
Sanky smiles ….
Laksh finishes ,..
Laksh : ragini come let’s go ..
Ragini gets scared ..
Laksh shouts
Laksh : don’t u hear what I said ..
Ragini jerks and leaves with him ..
Seeing ap …
Ap feels sad …………
@ragalk room ..
Ragini quickly goes to bed and sleeps ..
Laksh enters ..he sees ragini slept …..
Laksh : hmm …so u slept ..OK today I am leaving u ……
He switches off the light ….
Ragini gives a relief sign ….
Ragini starts to cry ……
@morning
Swara wakes up ..she sees the light rays passing her room ..
She gets up and opens the curtains and takes a cup of coffee ..
She goes to balcony …
Swara : wow its so beautiful ..
She sips …….
She feels someone is staring her ..
She looks down ..
Its sanskar
Sanky was glancing her every minute …………
Swara feels something and smiles ..
Sanky gets surprised ..
Swara comes out of senses …..
Swara goes inside …
Laksh : so what’s going on sanky ..
Sanky : nothing is going …..
Laksh winks ….
Sanky smirks
@9:00 am ..
Swara and diya comes out of flat ….
Swara takes her phone
Swara : so today we will go to Victoria memorial …
Diya : OK done I have of it ..its a grand museum of arts ..
Swara : so challo ..
Diya : come get in the car ..
Swara : Buddy ..u always want royal life ..we will rent two scooters and ride ..
Diya : OK come ..
They leave …
Laksh : so they went ..come let’s go and find ..
Sanky : OK ..
Sanlak and group enters swaya (Swara and diya) flat ..
Sanky : guys check everywhere ……
Laksh : OK ….
They search the drawers ….cupboards ……..
All over but they could find nothing ,….,
Laksh : what we will do now ..
Sanky : lucky she is not more intelligent than us ..
He points ..
Laksh : super come let’s check ….
Its swara’s phone …….
@Victoria memorial …
Swara and diya comes ..
Swara : oh shit diya ..I forgot my phone ….
Diya : what year ..OK we will take photos in my phone and I will send it to u …
Swara : but what if papa calls ..
Swara gets confused …
Diya : idea …u go home and take …..I will wait here ..u go take and come ..
Swara huhs
Swara : u r best …
She leaves …..
@swaya flat
Sanky takes her phone ..
Lucky checks the contact list …
Sanky : here it is …..arjun no.is matching with it ……
Lucky : good ..
Sanky was shocked ..
Lucky : what happened ..
Sanky : its saved as dad ..
Laksh shocked …
Laksh : arjun has daughter …our father never told …
Sanky : that’s what ….
Laksh : we should inform it to our dad …he will tell a plan to us
Sanky : OK u inform ..
Sanky goes to balcony holding swara phone ..
Sanky checks Swara gallery …..
There were many photos of arjun and Swara ….
Sanky sends some photos to his phone via Bluetooth …
He sees Swara coming ..
Sanky runs inside ..
Sanky : guys she is here ..
Laksh : what …..OK everyone hide ….
Everyone hides …
Swara comes and opens the door ..
Swara sees her phone on table ..
She goes and picks it …
Paper falls ..
Sanky is below the bed …..
Swara bends to pick it ..
Sanky closes his eyes …………..
Someone from behind puts hanky on her nose ….
She faints …..
Its Laksh …
Sanky comes out …
Sanky shouts : what r u doing ..
Laksh : what dad said to do ….
Sanky : what he said …
Laksh : to bring her home ……
Sanky : OK come …….
Laksh : how we will take her like this ….
Sanky picks her in arms …in a bridal style …
Sanky was continuously staring her ….
Laksh was seeing this ……
Sanky keeps her in car …and sits with her ….
Swara in middle Laksh and sanskar on either sides …
Laksh : fast rah in take the car from here ….
Swara falls on sanky’s shoulder …
Sanky smiles ……
@mm
Ragini : ma ma …..
She was calling ap ..
At that time she saw Laksh and sanky taking Swara inside by holding her
Ragini was shocked seeing a girl (ragini doesn’t know Swara )
Laksh sees ragini staring Swara …..
Laksh : I think its our problem and no one needs to interfere ….
Ragini gets scared hearing his word ..and runs to her room ..
Laksh : listen sanky u keep her in ur room …I will go pick up dad and come …OK .
Sanky nods ….
Sanky takes her in arms to his room …..
Sanky places Swara on bed …..
Sanky feels really happy ……
Sanskar POV
I wanted to make u mine …but see destiny made u to come here and that too my room
Sanskar POV ends ..
Sanky sits on sofa takes his laptop
But every minute he checks Swara ……..
Laksh comes in …
Laksh : sanky dad came ..
Dp : Swara came …
Sanlak were shocked
Laksh : dad how u know her name …..
Dp : she is my …….(he has tears )
Dp : nothing …just take good care of her …we can threaten arjun with her ….
Sanky confused : OK dad ….
Dp leaves ..
While going he sees sanky staring Swara ..
He thinks something and leaves …
Precap : “”evils rule””
How was it guys ..hope u all like it ….plz comment
32 Comments
Awsm yr
Amazing
wow please upload one more i can’t wait please its a request i loved ur ff its too good please try to upload one more i want to read the expression of swara when he sees herself in sanky’s room please upload one more part
Nice…..
I want to slap laksh yaar
raglak scenes plz
Awesome dear …waiting for the next part and please write long …
Write long because its awesome…nice story and what is swara and dp relation…waiting eagerly for next update…
Its nice..waiting fr nxt part
You have done a slendid him riya !! Your story is just perfect….it was fantastic!
Waiting for your next episode! Post it as soon as possible! Eager to know what happens next!!
***splendid job!!
super yarrr…
This is just amazing.. read all parts in one shot.. good going.. keep it up..
It was just WOOwW….. Can u rit one more ep today…..plzzzzzzzz
It’s my request
Nice
Pls update nxt part today only
Plzzzzz
Nice yar suspence
It ws good dear…. waiting for next episode. …
Nice ff
Superb
Are raglak ko thodasa tho importance dedo yaar
Plzz give previous links of dis ff
Pls darling pls update 2 parts can’t wait pls it’s my req
Awesome yrr
Wow it was too good… Ragini is really scared of Lakshya
I agree plz give some imp to rag nd lak
Loved it.
wow so superb yaar..
next pls…. one more part plead upload yaar…
I luv ur ff
Give 1st an 2nd epis link
Loved it awesome plz upload nxt ASAP.