Hey guys …dolly is back again …..thanks for the comments guys ..its an honor to get beautiful comments from u all …
Many asked me for swasan love track …next episode will be an intense romance package by me and alia …..I promise it will be more hot and intense …I assure u !
So here Is the story ,
Lisha : bhai (tears)
Dp : lisha (tears)
Both hugs tightly …..
Lisha (cries) : I did wrong bhai ……I shouldn’t have trusted this cheap arjun …..I shouldn’t have bhai …will u forgive me ….will u …
Dp (cries) : lisha ……its OK …..u don’t need to apologize ….that’s what is called live is blind …..we need to open to see the reality …
(Swara looks at sanskar)
Dp (cries) : I forgave u lisha ….u don’t need to ask for forgiveness dear ….
Lisha (cries) : no bhai ..I did wrong and I need punishment …give me anything ..I am ready to bear it …
Dp (cries) : be with me life long …..that’s enough !
Lisha hugs him more tightly …..
All were happy seeing them ….everyone had tears …..
But arjun wasn’t ….
Lisha breaks the hug and goes towards arjun
Lisha (angry) : u blo*dy bastard ….u cheated me …..u betrayed me …..u made my brother daughter life hell …u cheap ….
She slaps him had ….
Lisha : this for cheating me
She again slaps him
Lisha : this for betraying me
She slaps again
Lisha : this is for making problem in family
She slaps him again
Lisha : this for cheating mishti ….
She slaps him again
Lisha : this for being a fake father of Swara
She slaps him again
Lisha : this for making Swara suffer ….
She slaps him again
Lisha : this is trying to kill ur own son
She slaps him again
Lisha : this is for making ur own son guilty …
And the last slap with much powerful
Lisha : this is for breaking my family and ME …
Everyone were suprised and shocked seeing it ..
Swara goes towards arjun …
Swara (tears) : u know what …..I taught u as my role model …..I taught I am most luckiest person to get u as my father ……but no I was wrong …how did u manage to fake in from tof me …..maybe ur love is fake for me ….but my love for u was true …I truly admired and respected u as my father …and still now somewhere my the heart …u r my father whom I adored in my childhood ….I still can’t forget it ….don’t know y …maybe ur fakeness had left an big impact on me …which I couldn’t come out of it ….
(Everyone had tears…….even arjun )
Sanskar comes and holds her …..
Lisha (angrily) : did u listen that arjun ….did u …..even though u r not her real father …..but still she is respecting u …but u ….u cheap ….u don’t even know the meaning relations …..u have played with the feelings and broken all the relations ….and gave a shame to the relations
U failed as an lover , u failed as an husband ,u failed as ji son ji law and u failed as an father
U just wasted ur whole life ….and now no one with u ….and no one will be …..u can never have the feelings ….if u want to know learn from Swara …ur fake daughter ….how could u cheat her …..how can u stoop so low than I thought u would !
Its disgusting seeing ur face …..arjun !
(Arjun felt guilt)
Sanskar comes forward
Sanskar (tears) : what did I do dad …..u used me for ur life and destroyed my life ……from childhood I have taken u as the role model …..
I respected u , I obeyed u …..I gave my whole life to u ……I gave my first love to u …….
(Everyone were shocked)
(Swara holds sanskar hands )
Sanskar : no Swara not today ….this truth is gonna come one day out and let it be this day ! …
Everyone looked at sanskar
Sanskar : yes I loved ragini first …it was love at first sight …..I admired her ….I was her secret admirer (ragini looked on shock)
(Sanskar looked at ragini ) the gifts which came in the name of secret admirer was me …..
(Ragini was double shocked and everyone were shocked )
Sanskar : but my Mr arjuj malhotra was agaisnt it as he want me to marry Swara to take revenge from Dp ……he wanted me to make Swara life hell …..I obeyed him and sacrificed my love ….later on I trapped Swara and married her ……on the marriage day Swara came to know about arjun …and I torched her a lot ….this leg and this hand fracture (pointing Swara) were given by me …I am the one behind it …..
I used to torcher for snatching my love and my revenge …..but being with swara ..her appearence didnt let me to torcher nor think about any other women than her ….she sacrificed her life for me ,she was madly in love with me ….she supported me in times of needed ,she was there in times of sorrow …she was there to console me …..and she changed …. I soon realized that what I have on ragini and Swara was different …..
What I was having on ragini was an infatuation …and what I have on Swara is true love ……love makes people blind which I saw in ragini but when I opened my eyes and saw the reality ….Swara was the one who is there for me , is for me and will be for me …..
(He has tears)
(Arjun was looking at sanskar with tears)(raglak were shocked to hear but later turned into concerned )
Sanskar (towards ragini ) : ragini now I don’t have any feelings for u or any other women …..my life is just for Swara and only Swara ….
(Ragini feels happy for Swara)
Sanskar : sorry if I said any thing wrong …plz forgive me ….
(Everyone felt concerned for sanskar )
(Swara was stating sanskar lovingly)
Dp : its OK sanskar ….now let’s handover arjun to the police …..
Laksh (angrily) : once he will go to jail then only he will know the feelings and meaning of relations .
(Dp and Laksh smiles )
Lisha : yes …call the police …
Dp and laksh were about to call
“NO” a voice came from behind ….
Everyone turned and it was Swara ……
Ap : why Swara ……don’t u want him to repent for his mistake
Swara : why should we send him jail and make him more hate our family …(everyone looks on)
Lisha : Swara ..this man is meant to be in jail and will go jail…..
Swara : no chachi ….why are we going in the same path of my dad (arjun) then what is difference between us and him …
Revenge made him blind in nature and made him to do these crazy things ……if wouldn’t be there ….then u all would have leadead a normal life like us …right ….or if wouldn’t have entered in dad (arjun) life ….they would leadead an normal life …..whom could u blame …
U (lisha) or mishti aunty ..I know he is at fault ….but still everyone gets a second chance …why can’t we give him ….when sanskar could get a second Chance in life y can’t him(arjun) ….plz life is all about a second chance ….everyone makes mistake ….but he made a mistake more than that by playing with the feelings ….but still we have humanity and we need to give a chance to rectify a mistake ..this is my point of view and the decision is up to u all ….
(Everyone looks on)(arjun was feeling very bad …..and was stating Swara lovingly)
Sanskar : I will stand with Swara …as when Swara could give me a chance ….and could have a chance to rectify ….why can’t him ….I am with Swara (arjun looks at him )
Dp (angrily) : but the sins which he made is not forgettable …
Laksh (angrily) : yes dad u r right ….if it was small we could have …what is surety that he will not do it in future for money !
Arjun (tears) : dp and Laksh are correct …no u all shouldn’t give me a second chance because I did many sins …..I don’t want to be a black dot in this beautiful family …I really don’t …Swara sanskar a chance should be given to those who can rectify his mistakes ….I am not the right person to be given chance …..u all lead a beautiful life …and I will lead my life in jail to clear my mistakes ….
(Arjun looks down)
Lisha comes forward ….
Lisha : when Swara and his son could forgive him y can’t we ..more than all of us Swara and sanskar suffered a lot …when they itself could forgive him ..y can’t I .and we ….I know arjun did many sins ….but still everyone should get a second chance …..we r not god to punish him nor grant him ….but still we r human who can have some humanity …..we could ….
Ragini : haan ma is right …..even I go with her …
Ap : even me ……
Dp : OK when u r all thinking like that …then what is use of us saying …..we could give him a chance ……
Laksh nods …..
Arjun falls on the feet of Dp and lisha …
Arjun (tears) : I am very sorry …I never taught ….that u all will forgive me for the sins which I have made ….I was blind …I didn’t see the real care or happiness in u all …..I gave a shame name to all relations ….I am very sorry …but I didn’t do it intentionally ……believe me
I am sinister ….if I want to repent and rectify …I will work as a worker in the house ..then only my life will give a meaning !
Swara and sanskar goes and wakes arjun
Swara (tears) : no dad ..u don’t need to do that ……we will lead a beautiful life from now on ….ur son has become a father(Laksh) and u have become a grandfather ….now u have responsibility ..plz don’t say u as a worker …forget the last and move on to present ….no one can change past but if we want we can change the present ….so please ….
Arjun hugs Swara tightly …..
Arjun (tears) : Swara I am very sorry ….as a father without giving u happiness I gave sorrowness but still u forgave me …..I am the most luckiest person to have a daughter like u …..the 18years which u were with me was the most wonderful moments in life Swara ….even though I was fake but the concern and all the happiness I gave u was not fake dear …..believe me
Swara (tears) ; I know dad ….don’t be sorry ….
Arjun (tears) : sanskar ….I never taught that I will destroy ur life …..I never knew ur feelings ..even if would I wouldn’t have addressed it ….
My revenge made me blind sanskar …..for my revenge I was even ready to throw u out and ….kill my own son(Laksh)
I am very sorry sanskar ….I am really sorry ,……..(he cries)
Sanskar hugs him tightly …….
Sanskar (cries) : its OK dad ……forget the past and plz move on …
Arjun goes towards Laksh ….
Arjun (tears) : I never showed the care or happiness to u …..I didn’t even know u …..but still u r forgiving me …..I am very sorry Laksh …..I shouldn’t have done the sins …a family and son like u are very few …but I wasted my relations with u all …I am very sorry ..
Laksh : its OK …….dad !
Arjun hugs him tightly ……….
Arjun : ragini …..I am very sorry ma ….I tried to snatch ur husband and father of this child ….I am very sorry dear …I never thought to do that ..even if u forgive me this child won’t …I am very sorry ..ragini …..
Ragini : its OK papa …..
Ragini takes blessings from arjun ……
Arjun goes to ap and she forgives …..everyone we’re happy ….
Swara and sanskar goes outside …
Swara : media …the information was wrong …..it wasn’t him ….and Laksh is alive so nothing happened ….
The media smiles faded away as they didn’t get any hot news …they leaves ..
Kabir : but we can’t leave him like that ..its an crime …
Sanskar : sir ….as the punishment u taken me form the job ….so as I am not in the built will u given my job back ..
Kabir : absolutely Mr sanskar maheshwari ….
Sanskar : sorry sanskar malhotra …
Swara smiles …
Sanskar : then the problem is solved I will send another presentation u just mail it to them and rectify the problem …
Kabir : OK idea ..OK then I am leaving …u r back on set …
Sanskar : thanks ….
Kabir and others leave …..
Swasan come inside ….
Swasan : everything is solved …now let’s head back home …….
All smile …
Swara : one second ..let’s take a family selfie here ….
Ap : good idea ….
Swara takes her phone .
Laksh : everyone smile ….
All smile and selfie was beautifully taken ….
Precap : swasan hot intense romance by Alia …..
Hope unall like the episode ,.next one will be updates by Alia ..as I don’t know about the romance things ….
Alia will write about the romance moments …..and the family things will be mine ….hope u all support me ….
Thanks for the comments and now shoot ur comments below …I am waiting ….
Love u all loads and thanks for the time
With love ,
Dolly
39 Comments
Waiting for the romance…..
Even I am waiting ! Thanks for the comment dear
dolly dear it was awesome i have posted my second episode of hatred turned into love it is in 9th page please read that one and i have posted my new ff introduction spoilt sanskar cute swara it is in 7th please read it and tell me how was it
Thanks dear …yep I have read ur both ff”s …and I have commented on it …
Thanks for the comment dear
Awesome
Thanks dear
after all this bring some new twists don’t end it so soon plz
Tanu there is a big twist coming up ….no worries but ff will end soon …not soon just in two episodes …sorry but I don’t like dragging the story ..sorry ….dear ..
Thanks for the comment
Hi Dolly I am new at tu
And I liked ur ff so much dat I read all the previous parts
I have request pls show someone from ragini’s family too may be her bro or sis Plz… So dat she can also be happy
Welcome to telly updates alisha. ..I am really happy that u liked this ff …
Hmm about ragini family ….actually I can’t show …but I will try …
Thanks for the comment
Tysm for accepting my request..
Suprb yar…u know am waiting for ur ff eagerly…plzz updt nxt prt asap 🙂
Thanks dear ….I will update next tomorrow
Awesome. ….mind blowing.. .
Thanks dear !
Dolly di .,.. I am glad that you are back….. I am eagerly waiting for swasan romance in next epi…….. Dolly di this epi was mind blowing…..you just nailed it…love you ….mmmuuuaahhh….
Thanks dear ……I am glad that u liked it and is waiting for next …thank for the kisses too …love u loads !
nyc
Thanks dear !
its awesome…..very emotional i loved it a lot…..
Thanks shan …is it emotional ! Maybe
awesome.. post soon i cant wait now
Thanks dear ….I will update next one tomorrow
All fine in family…..
I don’t have words to praise u coz u have nailed everything so perfectly dear…
Yep everyone is fine dear … hope everyone in ur family are fine too …
Thanks for appreciation dear .
Awsworth
Thanks dear
emotional n heart touching episode…. waiting for d hot romance
Thanks dear …I have updates next one ..soon it will be posted …
At last, everything is fine.Superb chapter.You are weak in romance, and alia di master of romance, great.
Ek Asha, aur ek bipasha, super cool.Waiting for nxt.
Thanks uma …hmm ya how can u expect romance from a kiddo like me ..ha ha lol
Alia is queen of romance …
I am smiling seeing ur comment dear…
Thanks for the smile
Nice awsome
Thanks dear
Awesome dolly dear. Love your ff a lot. Waiting for next episode ☺
Thanks dear ….post ur next part soon dear
Dolly don’t even think to end this ff. Add new twist. Make manik as swara’s possesive lover or any track but plzz don’t end it. I luv ur ff.
Thanks for the comment dear …hmm I am sorry dear 25th will the last part …I am very sorry ….
I don’t like dragging it more and more …
Hmm sorry I can’t add the manik thing as he is like a brother now
Dolly dear nice Jo ahh I will miss ur ff as I started reading it recently na par koi Baath nahi wt ever u write I will be ur regular reader ahh sent me ur id dear if possible nd I had replied comments in fb in page too u can find there
HI bhanu dI …thanks for being a regular reader dI ….I very glad that u r reading my ff di…..ya I have got ur fb I’d and sent a friend request too ….I have same profile pic ad telly updates …hope u accept mine
Thanks for everything dI
Love u loads ..update tu meri mannat next episode …plz eagerly waiting