Hey guys ..I am back …..thanks for the beautiful comments u gave last episode …I am glad u all like the naming part ….
So here is the episode ,
@afternoon
Elders all went to shopping and will come night only
Now only raglak , swasan and manik are at home ..
All were witting on the sofa and talking …
Swara : I feel so hungry
Ragini : oh oh …but we didn’t prepare anything nor the workers went with them …or
Swaragini both looks at sanlak and manik
Sanskar : hmmm ,..I have an important to attend …I will join u all later …
Saying this sanskar rushes outside with his blazer ….
Swaragini looks at Laksh
Laksh : just now I remembered that ….I …I have to look at sanskar meeting too …bye
He also runs outside following sanskar ..
Now bechara manik is only left !
Manik : OK I accept …..I will try to cook ….but not sure OK !
Swaragini nods …
Manik : but u both should help me
Swaragini again nods …
Swara : uttara is so lucky to get u manik
Manik blushes ; really !
Ragini : hmm ya…..very very lucky .
Manik : bhabhi’s enough …..
Swaragini smiles seeing him blushing .
@kitchen
Swaragini were standing and chopping vegetables .
Manik was wearing apron and putting all kind of masals’s in the vessel ….
Swara : add some salt …
Ragini : no no sugar …
swaragini both look at each other (swaragini don’t know to cook)
Manik : what to put . Say me clearly bhabhi …
Swara : accha put both !
Manik : OK ….
He Adds both of them and was mixing some type of kichadi .
After an hour …..
They look at the kitchen ….its full of flour , salt , sugar , vegetable peels …yuck !!!!
Ragini : we will clean it later ….
Swara : no ….this will be the punishment for sanlak …..
Manik laughs !
Ragini : nice punishment …..let them come and clean ..
Manik : OK bhabhi ..now who is gonna taste this first !
Swaragini looks at each other then into the bowl ….
Swaragini : why don’t u try manik …
Manik : I don’t want to get stomach upset !
Swaragini both laughs ….
Swara : we need testers !
At that time sanlak comes …
Sanlak : hello ladies and gentlemen
Manik winks at swaragini ….they show thumbs up
Swara : sanskar u know what we ordered curry from hotel ..try it na
Sanlak both looks into the bowl ….
Laksh in mind : if it is from hotel why aren’t they tasting …
Sanskar in mind : are they planing a trap !
Laksh : why don’t u try rago ma ….u like hotel foods right
Ragini in mind : lucky Bucky …..if its from hotel why would I give u .
Ragini : no Laksh we ordered for our beloved husbands .
Ragini gives a fake smile !
Sanskar takes a spoon and was about to eat ….but
Sanskar : Swara I have chocolates …
Swara : really !
Sanskar : but I will only feed OK ….
Swara innocently nods
Sanskar instead of giving Chocolate …inserts spoon …..
The screen froze !
Manik and ragini were having hand on their forehead !
Swara spits out …..
Swara : yuck …….it taste ….oh god ……I want water ….its so chilly …god no its so sweet
Swara goes to kitchen ….
Sanlak were laughing …..
Laksh : oh oh rago ma ….it was ur trap to us huh ….so bad ..see the plan backfired ….
Sanskar : ha ha (he was laughing )
Manik : stupid brothers ..pregnant ladies should not eat chilies and all
Sanlak stops laughing ….ragini goes to washroom and finds Swara vomitting .
Ragini : are u alright Swara !
Swara : ya I am …..but I ma tired …
Ragini : OK come and take rest OK …..
Swara nods ….
Sanskar comes …
Sanskar : Swara r u alright ?
Swara : haan ya I am fine (dowrsy )
Sanskar takes Swara to his room slowly !
@downstairs
Ragini : u idiot …see because if u both …
Sanlak : we r sorry ?
Ragini : its OK …but don’t these stupid stunts OK !
Manik : today is mehandi for girls and
Sanlak : bachelor party …..yayyyyy !
Ragini gives an impossible sign !
@evening
All elders comes …
Ap : come on get ready fast ..all of u !
Everyone nods ….
Lisha : where is Swara
Raglak : she is sleeping …..she felt drowsy so !
Arjun : its OK let her sleep ,sanskar don’t wake her OK
Sanskar nods
Ap : haan and she should not apply mehandi also …..
Everyone nods …and leaves to get dressed !
@swasan room
Swara was sleeping peacefully cuddling her pillow
Sanskar was smiling seeing her princess sleeping .
He sits beside her and caresses her hair !
Swara smiles while sleeping …..
Swara (sleeping) : sankar !
Sanskar smiles …….
Swara wakes up ….
Swara runs her eyes slowly and smiles seeing sanskar
Swara : oh god …sanskar its time …u should have woke me up right
Sanskar : what can I do ..when my princess is taking her beauty sleep how can I disturb
Swara smiles …
Swara : OK now I will get ready in five minutes .,OK
Sanskar : no no don’t hurry …by the way pregnant ladies should not apply
Swara : I know Mr maheshwari …at least let me see ….
Sanskar : OK come …..
Swara : wait I will get ready and come ….u wait outside ….
Sanskar : nope …saying this sanskar lies on bed ….
Swara eyes widen
Swara : how can I change in front of u ….
Sanskar : Swara I am ur husband …..so I have the rights ….
Swara : shameless …now go out ….or else …
Sanskar : or else
Swara : I will play with water …
With an jerk sanskar stands up and goes out …..
Swara laughs !
@raglak room
Ragini : Laksh ma is calling I have work ..so u change the diaper for baby OK ….bye
Saying this she leaves …
Laksh : how to change diaper …alisha say me …I will do like
Alisha msiles (1 year baby yaar lol)
Laksh : Alisha speak na …help dad …..
Alisha makes baby sounds ….
Laksh : y r u making sound …I said help me na …..
Alisha cries ….
Laksh : aww mera baccha ….papa didn’t scold u but I am asking help from u …won’t u help me
Alisha smiles again …
Laksh : aww ..u look so cute while smiling ..not like that devil at least …
Alisha makes sounds
Laksh : even u r saying same na ….
Laksh gives HiFi to Alisha ….slowly …..
Laksh : that’s like my doll …..
He kisses her …
Laksh : but now who will help me to change diaper …..idea ! YouTube
@hall
Uttara was sitting ….swaragini joins her
Uttara : hi bhabhi’s …
Swaragini : hey uttara show ur mehandi ….
Uttara : here …
Swara : wow …its so beautiful dear …
Uttara : u also apply na bhabhi …
Swara : no year strict order ..
Uttara : oh OK OK
Ragini : uttara …today they are having bachelor party so they are very eager see ….
Uttara : what do to bhabhi …..they are enjoying in it …we can’t restrict ….
Ragini : truly said !
Swara feels vomiting …..
Swara : I will be back .
Swara goes to washroom
@hall
Laksh : manik …why r blushing so much then the bride …..
Manik : bhai ..
Laksh : I guess u saw ki and ka movie na ….
Manik : haan I saw
Laksh : so like that y don’t u also change ur roles ….
Manik gets angry now
Manik : bhaiiiiiiiii !
Laksh laughs ….sanskar comes ….
Sanskar : why r teasing him yaar …
Manik winks at Laksh
Manik : see my saviour came
Sanskar : array Laksh …have some words in the bank …so that we can tease him more today night ….ha ha ha
Laksh and sanskar gives hifi
Manik : so bad u both ….
Sanlak : u r our only brother ..so we can tease u only right
Manik smiles ….sanlak hugs him ….
Ragini comes …
Ragini : if u would excuse ur sweet brother …can i take him
Laksh : for what
Ragini : uttara mehandi is finished and he needs di find his name in her hand ..Bucky
Laksh : oh , wait u said Bucky ….how dare u rebel
Ragini : how dare u say me rebel ….u Bucky
Laksh : rebel
Ragini : Bucky …..
Sanskar and manik shouts : “shut up u both”
Raglak both stops ..
Sanskar : ragini where is Swara ?
Ragini : vo ..she said …she …I don’t know yaar …she said she will come
Sanskar calls Swara ….but she is not responding
Sanskar : what …how can u be so careless …yaar …
Laksh : its OK she maybe here only ….u go check up ..I will check down OK ragini u be with manik and uttara
Ragini nods
Manik : even I will search with u all
Sanskar : buddhu u r the groom ….what will people think
Ragini : he is correct come
Ragini takes manik with him …..Laksh searches downstairs and sanskar goes upstairs ….
@ outside
Swara : hello …I came as u said …..now what do u want to do ….
Caller : very good
Swara : I don’t need ur compliment …now say me where should I come .
Caller : oh oh getting angry huh !
Swara gets frustrated ….
Swara : I came here ..because u said u will kill my husband ….do u get that
Caller : trying to be a good wife huh !
Swara rolls her eyes …
Caller : OK OK don’t roll ur eyes …..
Swara was shocked …she started to look around !
Suddenly someone keeps hand on her shoulders …..Swara was idle ….slowly she turned …
Its Laksh …
Swara gives a relief sign …
Laksh : what r u doing here sissy
Swara (sweats) : vo …I was feeling restless inside ….I came outside for air …
Laksh : u should have told us …sanskar is restless there …why ur didn’t u take ur phone …
Swara (sweats) : I ..I ….I ….it ….
Laksh : its OK ….don’t get stressed now come in ….
Swara nods and goes with Laksh …but turns back and looks around ….
@hall
Sanskar comes ..
Sanskar : are u mad …..don’t u know that before going u should tell someone …u know how much worried I became ….Swara y r u doing these things …..are u out of ur mind …..(angrily)
Manik and uttara comes seeing him angry …
Swara was standing numb with tears in her eyes …
Laksh : sanskar control ….its an mistake …
Sanskar : what Laksh ..is she a child that I have to keep on looking at her 24/7 …..its impossible …..
She is not even responding when I call her ….what to think Laksh ….u know my heart stopped for a second …..she itself is a child ..how will she become a mother ….(Swara was shocked hearing the words )
(Sanskar turns away)
Manik : bro ……
Sanskar : no manik not today …..I am exhausted ……I can’t ….
Sanskar looks at Swara ….whose eyes are full of moist with tears …..but he ignores it …
Swara rushes to her room ….
Laksh signals ragini to go .
Ragini runs behind her .
Ragini : Swara listen …
Swara goes to the room and sits on bed and cries …..
Ragini also comes and sits …
Ragini : Swara …
Swara hugs ragini tightly and cries …
Swara : bhabhi ….am I really not capable to become mother …
Ragini hugs her back .
Ragini : no Swara its not like that …..sanskar is angry that’s y he spoke like that ….u know right how he is !
Swara : but what he said is correct right bhabhi …I am being too childish …and he is really exhausted of me !
Ragini : no Swara ..u r misunderstanding ..everyone has a different way to show their care ….sanskar is just …..u know him right how much he loves u and morever this is his first child …and that protectiveness will be there right , at least u should have informed me or anyone …
That’s y he got so angry …..
Swara : I know ..I am the one at fault ….I am just being a burden for him …
Ragini : no Swara ….both are at fault ….u should have informed and sanskar shouldn’t have over reacted ….so plz …u burden ..Swara the baby which is in ur stomach is his …and its his duty di take care …where this burden word came in middle huh !
Ragini : OK Swara now stop crying ..its not good for baby’s health …..now u sleep …take rest …come on .
Ragini makes Swara lay on the bed …she kisses her forehead and leaves ….
Swara gets Call
Caller : today I will excuse him but tomorrow u should obey mine ….
Swara throws the phone and it breaks .
Swara cries and soon dozes off !
@hall ..
The mehandi function finishes ….the guests leaves …
Ap : today too much work na …
Lisha : hmm ya ..I couldn’t concentrate on mehandi …fullly on guest only
Arjun : sanskar why were u shouting at Swara …
All : shouting ?
Sanskar : vo ma ..without informing me she went outside so ..
Everyone laughs ….
Dp : for this u will shout at her ….what sanskar
Ap ; he is I guess over protective ..but u shouldn’t have to …if she cries it will affect ur baby only na …
Arjun : go go and apologize ….to her ….
Sanskar : I will go later (exhausted)
Arjun : OK now ….
Dp and arjun together shouts : bachelor party
Ap and lisha look at them angrily …
Lisha : is this the age ?
Arjun : what yaar …after this age when we will enjoy ..
Everyone laughs …
Laksh : dad is correct ma ….plz let them na …
Ap : no way .,ur dad is already sugar patient and drinks no …
Dp : ok OK I won’t drink but simply sit and watch …now OK ..
Ap gives green signal so as lisha ….
Sanlak : be ready to pay the bill manik …
Manik gulps …
Everyone laughs …
Boys heads out …
Ragini : ma what we will do
Ap : we will also party …
Lisha : jiji at this age …
Ragini : ma ….badi ma is correct we will also party and shsow them ,..
Ap : then we will arrange in garden what say ….
Lisha : Swara …
Ap : she is sleeping let us not disturb her .
Ragini : OK …but time is 1 ma ….
Lisha : its OK ..who cares
All girls heads out ……the garden is bit away from the mansion …so no one can hear anything
@night 1 : 30 am
Swara wakes in a jerk and sits on the bed …..sweating all over ..
Suddenly ….she gets a pain (this is common pain guys)
Swara : ahhhh ….ahhhhh ……
She tries not shout …..bit couldn’t control ..
Swara : ma …..ma ……maaaaaa !!!!!!! Ahhhhhh …….(she shouts )
(But no one could hear ..as all are in garden )
Swara thinks to call but her phone was broken ….
Swara : shit ….ahhhhhhh ….ma …..ma ….
She slowly slowly walks to the staircase …..
Swara : ahhhhh ….(she cries) …..ahhhh …ma …..ma …..
She slowlly catches the handle and slowly starts to walk
Swara was shouting very much
@garden
Ragini : ma ..I am getting some around from house ,…
Lisha : is it …
Ap : come let’s check !
Trio rushes inside …..ragini gets to know its Swara …as they were nearing the mansion
@mansion
Ragini switches on the light …..
Swara jerks and slips …
Swara : maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Swara rolls from the stairs and falls down ….
Blood was everywhere ….trio were astonished !
They rushed there and try to wake Swara …
Ap : Swara ,….Swara …wake ma …(she cries)
Ragini : Swara , Swara ……(she cries)
Lisha also cries ………………..
To be continued
Precap : TWIST & BIG SUPRISE WITH A BOMB
Hope u all like the episode and plz comment …sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes …..
Thanks for the liking this ff …its an honour …..next episode will have a major twist and a big surprise …..
Hope this episode was average …
Thanks for the precious time
With love ,
Dolly
24 Comments
Dolly amazing sis again u left with a suspense hope it will not be sad ending.
Love u loads sis
Keep smiling
No abortion pls…….
Awesome ep
Don’t call it as average
starting its happy ending u made shock not fair ah
finally its awazing ur skills are awesome dear
the last part … Sad 🙁
Awesome dear…. Don’t say dt you r going to end this ff ….as a big surprise
Shoking
plz swasan ko alag or abortion mat karna plzzzzzz
Awesome… What happen to our swara?
Mind blowing.Aww, poor laksh usse baby ki diaper change karne pari.Waiting for nxt.
awesome…..i know sanskar s overprotective but he should think before he speaks….k leave it but pls dnt make that swara lost their child…..
Nice
Hii dolly dear. It’s amazing as usual. How could you manage to keep so many twists. Seriously you are an awesome writer.
Plz update fast nd awsome epi
omg again twist awesome dolly eagerly wating for next episode
AWSM.. BUT TWIST PLZZ UPLOAD SOON
Dont want anything serious.. Plss dear.. No abortions as usual serial dramas… Make it light
it was more den awesome…. loved it to d core….
very excited for next update soon
Hope swara does not lose her baby……di it was not average…. It was windblowing…….
Oh god. Plz nothing should happen to swara n her baby. Plz plz plZ.
Its amazing…waiting for next part eagerly…
awesome… hope nothing happend to swara and baby.. who is trying to harm sanskar…
Loved it!
Well. U left with suspense!
If u r free, plz try to post today yr!
Sanskar in today’s epi??
Swara in today’s epi ???
awesome dolly……….waiting for the twist….update fast