Hey guys ……its dolly back all dull and pale , guys r u not happy with this season ….I guess yes
Even though last episode I got comments …..but I missed many regular readers …..maybe u all r not happy , anyway …don’t worry I will try to end in next 4 or 5 episodes…..
Sorry for torturing u all ……and thanks for bearing me all the way of the journey !
Here is the link for the previous episode ,
episode-12
So here is the story ,
THE NEXT DAY !
Tara wakes up and sits ….
Tara : awww ….my small brain is spining like hell
Mishti (happy) : at last u woke …..u made me go into depression again ….haa
Tara : what happened ma …how I came here
Mishti : don’t u remember anything ….
Tara innocently nods no …..
Mishti : array ur friend sanskar and Alia ….dropped u
Tara was shocked …
Tara : s.a.n.s.k.a.r
Mishti : haa ….he is a very good bye …..he went without having dinner also ….make sure u invite him one day OK …
Tara : OK OK (happily)
Mishti : now get ready fast …..collage is there na ….
Tara smiles and gets ready!
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Shona was in her room lost in her own world …
Shona in mind : did I do wrong by hurting varun ….no I guess ….anyway who wants to live with that cheapster …..now I am Shona Laksh malik …why am I thinking of him ….
But , varun challeneged ….will he get a girl like that …I know I am the most beautiful girl ….no one can be more than me …that’s impossible too
But what if !
Namish comes
Namish : baby sis …what r u thinking !
Shona : hmm, nothing ….just about Laksh ….
Namish : oh….u stopped thinking about ur cute bro haa (pouts)
Shona (smiles) : nope …..infinite I am thinking about u ….and one Milli percent about Laksh
Namish : smart haa
Shona : after whose sis …..
Both gives HiFi ….
Namish : I have ordered a beautician …and I will get ur dress by today evening OK ….
Shona nods and hugs him …
Shona : love u , u r the world best bro ….
Namish smiles and hugs back …
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@varun house ..
It is an apartment , which has modern interior …..it is simple but beautiful enough…
Varun was sitting on the sofa
Leela : here is ur coffee varun ….
Varun didn’t respond
Leela : varun , varun
Varun : haa ma ……
Leela : where r u lost ?
Varun : vo kuch nahi …..I was thinking about office matter …
Leela : OK here take this coffee ….
Varun smiles ….
Varun : mom can I ask u something
Leela : sure
Varun : am I a unlucky boy for u …
Leela was shocked and tears started to come
Varun wipes Leela tears ….
Leela (angry) : don’t ever say that varun ….because of u we r living this life !
Varun : but mom still we r not having a big house or a luxurious life right !
Leela (concerned) : varun ….big house luxurious life doesn’t matter , this house this life style its all ur own savings and u have achieved this height dear …
Varun looks on …..
Varun : OK mom ….now tell me what u want from me
Leela : this is enough for us ….bas I need a daughter who can care for me , its very tiring doing work alone …..maybe that’s what u can give me
Varun thinks ….
Varun : I am ready mom …..ur wish ..
Leela was looking at him with a shock ..
Leela : will u be happy……can I start searching
Varun : haaa ma …(he smiles)
Leela also becomes very happy ….
Varun sleeps on Leela lap ……..a tear passes from his eyes
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@collage
Alia : array tara , how r u feeling now ?
Tara : I am all fine ….actually yesterday ….
Alia : don’t talk about that moron …manik Tara ….plz ..leave that topic
Tara : OK OK ….anyways I need to thank sanskar
Alia (teasing) : why is that so ?
Tara : hmm he helped me ….I really need to
Alia (pouts) : what about me !
Tara pulls her cheeks….
Tara : even u …..thanks a lot Alia
Alia feels happy …..
Tara : OK now I will call him and in for him OK .
Alia (teasing) : oh oh !
Tara : shut up ……he is just a good friend of mine
Alia : OK OK ….
Tara calls sanskar number …
Sanskar : hello its sanskar maheshwari here
Tara : hi (cutely)
Sanskar was shocked as well as happy
Sanskar : hmm Tara ….is that u
Tara was also shocked ….
Alia : jiju u found her huh …..
Santan were shocked …
Tara : chup Karo Alia …….(but sanskar smiles)
Tara (embaressed) : sorry sanskar …she is
Sanskar : its OK , tell me what happened …..y did u call me
Tara : vo , actually I want to say thank u …….thanks a lot sanskar for helping me yesterday
Sanskar (smiles) : its my pleasure dear
Tara smiles …..
Tara : OK then bye …
Sanskar : wait , wait ….only for this u called …
Tara (confused) : ha…..y
Sanskar (fumbles) : vo …I ….u ….I …
Tara : array say fast I am getting late for collage
Sanskar : why don’t u come to my home …..and meet my parents like I met urs ….
Tara thinks for a while …
Sanskar : madam r u there ?
Tara : haa ….OK bug I will ask mom and inform u in evening….OK
Sanskar (smiles) : OK madam …..
Tara smiles and hungs up
Alia : kya chal raha he bhai ….
Tara blushes ..
Tara : actually sanskar invited us to his home .
Alia (teasing) : oh oh ..then go na ….it will be good to meet ur sasural ….
Tara widens her eyes ….Alia bites her tongue ….
Tara (angry) : Alia……
Alia : OK OK leave that what u said ….
Tara : I said I will ask mom and say .
Alia : OK OK good now come we r late after class we will ask mom and say OK …
Tara : OK come ….
They both head to class
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Shona goes to the cliff top …(where swasan died)
Its evening !
Shona in mind : this smell and this sun …..I totally get changed whenever I come here ……I just be in another world ….
But don’t y …..whenever I come here ……my mood smoothens and I take a right decision ! Maybe because of this childhood memories .
Saying this she sits on the sand ……a boy comes ……
Shona back was shown ….
Boy : again this girl …whenever I come ….she is here ……whatever …..
He gives near Shona …and pats her shoulder ….
Shona stands up and looks at the boy ……
Shona (shocked) : sanskar …
(Yes he is sanskar )
Sanskar (shocked) : bhabhi …..so its u whom I am seeing from childhood ….
Shona : and its u whom I am seeing from childhood …what a coincidence na
Sanskar : haan ….bhabhi ….but how do u come here as u r in Delhi …
Shona : array buddhu ….when I was in Delhi …..it used di take me only 5 mins ….
Sanskar was blinking
Shona : I am in the outer border of Delhi …..so its easy for me as this cliff is between the highway
Sanskar : oh ….
Shona : anyways ….its pleasure meeting u
Sanskar : me too bhabhi …..
Shona : why do u come here
Sanskar : I don’t know but I feel connected to this cliff ….
Shona : same pinch …..ha ha ha
Sanskar also laughs
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Leela : ram sanskar has agreed for marriage so …u finalize with mishti …
Ram : r u sure ..
Leela : haan …I am damm sure ….
Ram : OK then I will call her and ask…
Ram calls ….mishti
Mishti : haan ram bhai …how r u ?
Ram ; all fine ma ….how r u and Tara ….
Mishti : all fine bhai …so what special u have called me !
Ram : vo ….varun is getting older and is marriage age now , so
Mishti : I understood …even Tara is at marriage age ! , we discussed this already ….a positive sign from my side ..
Ram (happy) : thanks a lot mishti …
Mishti (smiles) : come on bhai …this is a small help from my side ….it is no big than ur help to me …
Ram : I am really happy …come on ….no sorry and thank u in relations ….
Miahti smiles ….
Ram : then we will come tomorrow and finalize OK …
Mishti : sure bhai …
Ram : OK I will call u later bye ….
Mishti : haan OK ….
Ram : she said OK …
Leela : god bless them …
Both smile ….
Precap : Tara meeting sanskar parents , varun and Tara marriage talk , Shona jealous …..Laksh attitude and ragini intro ….
Sorry for troubling u all ….I will finish this season asap …..as I am getting low comments from u all ….
Maybe the spark as gone off now ……
I shouldn’t have made season 3 ….I know its my fault ….but still many if sisters are supporting me …thanks for the that sisters …love u all loads ..
With love ,
Esha (dolly)
40 Comments
No dolly this ff was good dont think like that Iove your ff
mera cute sa brain bhot confused he …mughe kuch smgh nahi aa raha kuch epi se ..
no…not at alll…continue it…..we want old dolly back……………
NO NOT SO SOON…I LOVE THIS FF PLEASE……..DOLLY DI I REALLY AM EAGER
No dear ap is ko track per la sakti ho so plz continue and how are you now
Dolly plz continue dear we love ur ff a lot I literally beg u plz don’t stop this ff i love ur ff a lot anyways sorry for not commenting in between
Love u loads
Keep smiling always
Di plz don’t end it this much soon?…… Di you are not torturing us…… In fact we are enjoying it…. Di what about shona power????? When will it work….
Kiddo! don’t be sad… u write so well dr..
But its also confusing at the same time with names of couples.. but still i trust ur writing.. and give a happy ending in this season for us plzzz… i couldn’t comment last time as i had my exams sorry for that!!! take care kiddo!!!!
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I m sorry to tell u dear but yaa I guess u shouldnt have right season 3 and Yarr we r all confused about pair Yarr u said that u reveal it when the story proceed but its getting more confusing day by day n their is lots of confusion about pairs Yarr plz don’t be upsate and try to clear it plzzzz
No no it’s nice pls continue..
Omg I’m not understanding who r pairs.it’s becoming mysterious .dayby day it is making me crazy .post next part asap. Will be waiting. Plz don’t stop it.u have so many mysteries to solve na
awesome episode. when will you upload swalak ff forever Mine.Please upload soon.
dear da main prblm in ur stry is d more charactrs yaar…ita really confusing…..sanky shona varun swara tara namish laksh ragini etc….its rrally confusing…nd u didnt clear dese confusion evn in dese chptrs……sooo sorry if i hurt u….i said bcz its really confusng…nd i didnt like shona’s dis chrctr…pls dnt make her like dis……..bt i likd to read ur stories…hope u clear all d confusions soon….
Awesome…… Continue soon…..
Hello Dolly aka Esha. How are u and How’s ur health. It’s really felling good to see u back. And the episode u uploaded now was really awesome. The suspense which ur keeping is confusing but even interesting. Keep going on updating when ur fine because HEALTH SHOULD BE OUR FIRST PREFERENCE. Take care of ur health. BYE.
very confusing…please give us clarity… so many ppllllll….. its become an ekta kapoor serial… suspense mein suspense…
Hey wait wait!!!! U r not ending it!!!! At any cost. ….This ff is being so close to me from the very first season ….loads of memory are attached to it……
….Plzzzz don’t limit or restrain u r ideas and writing with the mere number of comments. …even though we may not comment but it doesn’t stop us from loving u and u r ff. ….soo Plzzzz don’t stop it!!!!
ff is good yaar….don’t end in hurry
hey dolly dont think about comments yr just continue and ya dont say that this ff lost its charm this ff is one of my fav. ff so dont say like this and about comment i hardly get time to comment on ffs for this please exuse me ab se hamesha comment karungi pakka wala promise and atlast this chapter was soo nice bus thoda sa lat m confusion tha and take care of urself
Hi dolly di I know you don’t know me I am a silent reader of three seasons. Please don’t end so soon it’s a little confusing but double intresting. . Please don’t end so soon for this silent reader.
continue but please Reval suspence
Dolly don’t worry dear.. I love your story.. I love this one more than the other 2 seasons. . Because I love mysteries. . But please tell who are playing characters. . At least tell me helly is playing which character?
Am silent reader… Ur writing skill is super duper.. Can’t able to describe in single word.. Keep writing dr… But characters of s3 is little bit confusing… I hope soon u will clear it. Thanks for ur wonderful ff .. . ??
Hai dolly. Dnt finish it. I hav a suggessin plz concentrate oly on real swasan nd raglak. Make tem remember abt their past. And dev dismis. Im sure automaticaly it wil get to path. May b becouse of confusin kuch samaj ni ata. 2 swara 2 sanskar 2 laksh oh god. Think abt it. Its just a sugesn tata
dolly pls dont end this…..y r u punishing us for the one who dint comment???so u give importance to them but not us right????this s not fair…..so u dint consider us…..k then finish it…..if i m rude then i m sry…..i love dis ff nd u but u dont consider d readers like me….feeling sad….
Arre, my kiddo, my cutie pie, my sweetu plz don’t end it.I am addicted to your ff,you know that.So,think about it…..About chappy, awsm.Love you loads.
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Hello Dolly di…. how r u???I hope u r fine now…..
Ur ff is awesome…. but I can’t find ur previous ff I only read the last part of ur season 2 ff…. I tried a lot but. can’t… so I read this ff from first only… it’s awesome….. dnt end it
Awesome
Sorry di .. i couldnt comment in all the episodes….because my school started and i am coming back home only at 8 pm….so i couldnt comment regularly but i will read the epi for sure…and moreover if u feel so sad then i will surely comment
Pls. Continue di…dont stop…and moreover ur ff has something some magic or something which makes it so much interesting….
Nice..please don’t end it so soon.