I can’t say how happy I’m after reading all your comments. Thanku so much guys. And as promised, here is the next shot.
Previously : Sanchi Mishra and Sanchi agarwal are close friends. Kabir is Sanchi Mishra s childhood friend. They meet after a long gap and kabir fails to recognise his friend. He mistakes SA for SM.
It’s an important day for both our sanchis. Starting today, they’ll be interns at the most prestigious hospital in India. Both reach SDCH. SM forgets something in the car and asks SA to go forward. She returns a little late. She asks for directions and walks towards the class. And guess who comes from the other side. Yes, the most handsome and hottest doctor of SDCH. She panics seeing him and hides beside a trolly. She bends on the floor and slowly crawls along with the trolly to escape being spotted by kabir. She reaches dead end when her path is blocked by a pair of legs. She looks up and sees a pair of naughty eyes staring at her with a creepy smile on his face. He slowly bends down and that becomes her first meeting with our mischievous doctor veer
Veer: are we playing hide and seek. Can I join
Sanchi: ….
She looks if kabir is gone.
She rises up and runs of towards her class.
Veer: interesting. Seems like this year won’t be boring.
Meanwhile in the class, the senior doctor calls out the names of the interns. He calls out sanchi’s name. Sanchi comes in panting. “Yes sir”
The doctor looks up and it is kabir. He turns around hoping to see his Sanchi. But is disappointed to find SM instead.
Kabir gets angry
Sanchi is also shocked
Kabir: your late on your first day dr Sanchi. How irresponsible of you. Is this how you are going to treat your patients. One week record room.
He continues insulting her. Sanchi’s eyes are filled with tears. She never expected her kabir to behave so harshly with her.
After the class she spots SA in the canteen. She hushes her to a corner
SM : problem hogayi
SA: ab kya
SM: kabir works here
SA: beer?
SM: kabir. He is a doctor here
SA spits out her juice
SA: kya. Now what will we do.
SM: I don’t know. In the morning I was trying to avoid him and ended up in his class
SA: what. Did he recognise you
SM: no. In fact he punished me for being late.
SA: thank God I’m assigned to dr aswathi. What if he sees me. I need to avoid him
SM leaves for her record room duty
SA is walking down the corridor and kabir spots her
Kabir: sanchi?
Sanchi: oh no, how did he see me. I should just keep walking
But kabir just holds her and takes her to his cabin
SA: what are you doing kabir. What if someone sees
He surprises her with a hug. Sanchi is taken back . She slowly hugs him back.
Kabir: thanku for keeping our promise. As we had dreamt , we both are together working at SDCH. I knew you wouldn’t forget me or our time together. Yesterday you were just putting on a show, right.
SA: I have to report for duty.
Kabir : ok, I’ll meet you in the evening. Let’s have dinner together.
SA leaves the cabin. She holds her heart, “ what’s wrong with me. Why I felt good when he hugged me. No, this is wrong. I shouldn’t have any feelings for him. He is sanchi’s love. “
Someone was watching her from the corner. It was Riya, who had a crush on kabir.
Riya’s pov: what is she doing outside my kabirs cabin. Do they know each other. I should keep an eye on her.
SM is all sad sorting out the files. She pulls out a file from the top of the rack. A bunch of files falls down, but someone grabs her away just in time. Sanchi falls in his arms. She looks up to see Veer.
Veer: nice to meet you again.
SM: what are you doing here. Are you also punished
Veer: looks like first day first punishment from dr kabir
SM: thank you for saving me
Veer: then buy me food
SM: huh?
Veer: treat me to food to show your gratitude
SM: it was not that big
Veer: oh.. the girls these days. They don’t even appreciate others help.
SM: ok, enough. I’ll treat you
Veer: ok come let’s go.
SM: now? I need to finish my duty
Veer: we can do it later. He is not going to find out
SM: but….
Veer pulls her away. They end up outside the hospital. Sanchi takes him to a golgappa stall
Sanchi: bhaiyya extra teekha.
Sanchi starts gulping the golgappas one by one. He finds hard to eat the extra hot golgappa
Veer: who is treating whom. If you are treating me, you should allow me to choose
Sanchi: whenever I’m upset, eating golgappas lights up my mood.
Veer just stares at her with a smile.
Just then kabir passes by and spots Sanchi with veer.
Sanchi feels a bit relaxed after spending time with veer. She returns to the record room.
Kabir angrily paces in his cabin. Someone knocks and he asks the person to come in
Kabir: dr Sanchi, have you finished the job assigned to you
SM: no sir, I’ll finish it by lunch time.
Kabir: do you think you are here for picnic. If you think you can hang around making boyfriends you should have joined an arts college. When do you think you’ll do your medical duty if you are going to idle all your time in the record room. Is this fun for you.
He continues and Sanchi can’t hold back her tears.
Kabir: report to station numb 2 now and continue with your punishment during breaks and also two hour in the evening, after your shift is over.
Its lunch break and Sanchi is starving. She holds her stomach while sorting out files.
Veer appears with sandwiches but she ignores him.
Veer: I thought someone was starving
SM: this is all because of you. Just leave me alone
Veer: these sandwiches look yummy. There is also lots of cheese in it
SM: then eat it yourself
She tries hard not to look at the food
Veer: bit there is too many. I’ll throw away the rest.
He starts munching the sandwiches and starts making noise and comments on the taste
Sanchi gulps her pride and grabs a sandwich
Sanchi: I don’t like wasting food. That’s it. Don’t get wrong ideas
Veer just smiles at her.
Veer: accha sumo, there is a welcome party in the night. You should come
SM: I don’t go to parties
Veer adjusts her glasses
Veer: come on miss golgappa, have some fun in life. You should be there on time, else I’ll tell your secret to all
SM: what secret
Veer: (whispers) that you have a secret crush on our senior doctor.
Sanchi’s eyes go wide
SM: what nonsense. It’s not true. You are just saying anything
Veer: ok then, I’ll check with doctor kabir.
Sanchi grabs his phone.
SM: ok, I’ll come.
Veer: that’s my good girl
SM: why do you always trouble me.
Veer: see you at the party
He waves as he leaves the record room.
Kabir is out on his rounds. He hears a fuss at the children’s ward and goes towards it. He finds Riya trying to examine a little boy. The boy is not ready to cooperate with her. She looses her cool and threatens him with injection. Just then SM comes there. Kabir looks on
Sanchi gives the child a lollipop
SM: hi, I’m Sanchi
Kid: are you a doctor
SM: (she secretly whispers) well I want to be. But I’m not good enough. Because I’m very poor with my studies
Kid: same here. I don’t know why everyone wants us to study
Sanchi: even I used to think the same. But then I realised that we need to stand on our feet to be able to do whatever we like. Wow, you have a good body. Do you exercise regularly
Kid: no, but I have milk everyday
Sanchi: can I see your muscles.
The kid shows her his biceps (actually a cute little bump) Sanchi acts to be amazed and slowly diagnosed his problem.
Sanchi: you must be really strong that you are not even afraid of injections.
The kid looks at Riya
Kid: yes, don’t scare me with the name of injections. I can even take ten of them in one go
Sanchi: but who will believe us if we just say. Let’s show them
Kid: yes.
And Sanchi slowly injects him. The kid is surprised as it didn’t hurt
Kid: ho gaya?
Sanchi: see what did I tell you all, he is so brave and strong. Keep it up.
They do hi five.k kabir leaves from there.
It’s party time. SM arrives at the venue given by veer. SA also waits outside the hospital to be picked up by kabir.
Sanchi feels a bit uncomfortable at the party. She accidentally gets drunk and veer has to drag her out. Sanchi starts dancing in the street. Veer makes her sit down at a bench and goes to get her some water.
Meanwhile kabir takes SA to a lovely restaurant. He seats her and puts around a lovely pendant around her neck. SA is happy to see his care. He talks a lot about their old times. SA excuses herself to the washroom. She looks at her reflection and caresses her chain. Her smile fades when she finds her imaginary part beside her
SA 2: are you happy. How can you be so selfish
SA 1 : kabir gave this himself. I didn’t ask for anything
SA 2: you didn’t deny it either. You are doing wrong with your friend and also kabir. Kabir loves Sanchi Mishra. And you are Sanchi agarwal
SA 1: kabir himself came to me. We both were there. But he chose me over her because he was attracted to me. I never lied to him
SA 2: and you didn’t tell him the truth also. You should be ashamed to call yourself her friend. What will happen when everyone finds out the truth. They will hate you.
SA 1: no. I will tell him the truth myself. I know he will understand me and accept me. Because he loves ME. What was between them was just friendship. He loves me.
Saying this she runs out of the washroom. Kabir feels she is disturbed
SA: I’m suddenly not feeling. Can we go back.
Kabir : yes
Sanchi: I’m sorry kabir. I ruined your dinner
Kabir: please don’t say like that. Nothing is more important for me than you.
Veer returns with a bottle of water.
Sanchi: are ye do do kaha se agaya. Ek hi mushkil tha. Ab do se mein kya karoon
Veer makes her drink the water forcibly. She spits it on him.
Veer: how will I take her back to the hostel like this
SM: I don’t want to go back to the hospital. That khadoos kapoor will eat me alive
Veer: you mean dr kabir
SM: no. He is dr khadoos kapoor
Veer: if he heard you calling him names, you’ll have to spend one whole month in record room
SM: I’m not afraid of him. Call him here. I’ll take his class. My golu was so cute and sweet spoken. How did he become so rude and arrogant. I should not have let him go away. It’s all these foreign people’s effect. If he stayed by my side, he wouldn’t be like this
Veer: if you both are friends, then why does he hate you
SM: because he doesnt know I’m his Mishri. I waited all these years for him. And when we finally meet he just walks past me. He couldn’t recognise me. I knew he was my golu. But he didn’t see me standing in front of him. He just walked towards her. Why?
Veer: why?
Sanchi pouts, “ because I’m so ugly. And he is ashamed to have me as his friend.”
Veer strokes her hair
Veer: miss golgappa, listen. You are the prettiest person I have ever met.
SM: mmhh???
Veer: mmhh!!!
She smiles at him and he smiles back. She passes out on his chest.
Precap: Sanchi keeps falling in trouble before kabir
21 Comments
I love this episode but pls don’t separate child hood love pls clear misunderstanding of kabir soon it’s a request
Well it too early to say anything, let’s wait and see…?
It was awsmm…superr duperrr…aaye haaye…..though i missed ishagya but khadoos kabir ko dekh k mazaa aa gya…luvv uu
Thanks dear. You can take kabir out of khadoos, but you cant take khadoos out of Kabir?
Mind blowing Ziya ??? at least veer knows the truth. SA is really being selfish. According to the precap if Sanchi keeps falling in trouble before Kabir, maybe he’ll understand she is mishri ??? waiting for the next part eagerly ???
Thanks Ruch, between, this is nothing compared to your writing. Love you lot…?
Awesome.. Interesting…
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awesome but plz at the end make the childhood love succeed plzz
atleast veer is there who now knows sanchi’s secret and waiting for the next part eagerly
hope kabir will realize soon
You’ll have to wait a little bit more. Thanks for your lovely comment?
So so amazing and outstanding episode yaar……..please yaar united kanchi……….
Please wait for two more episodes and you will know….?
Amaz epi dear.. But phir se sanveer kanchi ka confusion?????… But yaa m eagerly waitting for nxt part..again hope for kanchi????..posg nxt asap.. Bye tc
I really like to drive you mad in confusion..?
Kidding?it’s just I like to keep it a suspense till the end. But don’t worry, you won’t have to wait for long☺
Amaging…just loved it to the core????
Keep writing dear.Eagerly waiting for next part.??
Thanks dear. Hope this becomes your favourite as you said earlier?
Of course dear.
keeping the show apart, if I’ll have a look at the proceedings till now, I feel veer deserves SM………yes dear, even if I’m a diehard kanchi fan, I’m compelled to say this……….kabir just focuses on external beauty while veer doesn’t…….he loves her the way she’s……….& as far as kabir is concerned, if he’s doing all this knowingly, then I don’t hv any prob with kanchi………..luv u Ziyu dear, for such a beautiful plot
Thanks dear, for a wonderful comment. It feels really good when you connect with me and get to the heart of my stories. Love you lots and keep commenting??
Oopss…..u r backkkk…Ballle balle balle balle
Coming to the shot…I am confused..whom should I support Sanveer or Kanchi(though I know it’s the same in both cases but hope u understand what I mean here)I feel Kabir is not at fault here.He knew SM would be talking on phone and he saw SA there instead then his mindset has been made up accordingly.But Veer too deserves someone good.At least I can hope that Kabir gets to know the inner beauty of SM and falls in love with her true self so the pairing makes childhood adult love!!!Waiting desperately for ur next shot.
So amazing