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Let’s begin…
San:I LOVE YOU… I WANT TO MARRY YOU….
Rag angrily sees him…
Bt here one was shocked its none other than laksh….
Rag:DOSTH KI DULHAN SE PYAAR… Then her expression change to smile and laugh….. And burst into laughter…
Sanlak looks confused at her…
Rag:wat do you thought only u can make joke not me… at first i thought it would be something serious… Bt you make a good joke…
San:joke???
Rag:don’t tell me… Its serious… She again laughs….
San smiles seeing her laugh….
San:I LOVE YOU & ITS NOT A JOKE…
Rag:wat… Not again..
San then looks around and finds shocked laksh…
He goes to him…
He searches something in laksh’s pocket….
Lak:wat… Sanskar.. Wat r u searching…
San:wait…. Ya i got it.. It was the engagement ring…
He goes to rag…
Rag was looking at him confused
San:now u would believe me…
He takes her hand and slides the ring in her finger….
Rag was shocked….
He was abt to kiss her hand she jerks
Rag:are you out of you mind…
San:ha… From i saw
She nods her head in dis belief
Lak:yeh yahan pe meri shaadi thod ne aaya hai ya apni shaadi rachaane(did he came to break my marriage or to arrange his marriage)
San:i don’t know should i say this to you or not… Actually laksh doesn’t love you… He is love with a girl named swara…. He cant go against his parents… And he couldn’t tell you too… So i came here to help him.. To break this marriage.. Bt when i saw you… Before he could complete she slaps him….
Laksh closes his eyes…. She comes out of the room and sees laksh at the door she goes from there angrily..
Laksh enters and sees sanskar smiling…
Lak:wat was that… San goes
Laksh hits his head…
Raglak were called for an engagement….
Rag was glaring laksh…. While laksh was confused… Bcs of sanskar…
Rag mother gives ring to her to make laksh wear….. Seeing her happiness… Rag takes it…. She was confused whatever sans said is true or not…. She sees sanskar standing next to laksh… She gets confused..
Then she makes him wear… Sans was smiling at her…. She don’t know why bt couldn’t face him…
Lak parents say him
Lak who was in his own world:pehenadi…
All:wat….
San:her engagement already finished pointing towards rag finger.. All sees it…
Ap:cant u wait laksh…
Lak excuses… From there.. While all laughs…..
Night…
Rag was jst remembering sanskar…. San comes…
San:thinkng abt me…
Rag:u again….
He pulls her from waist… There was an inch gap… She was breathing heavily…
San:i came here to complete the ritual…
Rag:wat..??
San:i made u wear ring… U didnt..
Rag:i wont….
San:r u sure…
Rag doesn’t reply… He goes…. She looks on….
He slips and falls… Rag gets worried.. She goes to him…
Rag:r u ok….
San:yes.. She sees his ring finger was bleeding…
She tares her dupatta and ties in his finger….
San smiles:see… Ritual completed… He hugs her…. First she tries to come out of his hug bt couldn’t… Later she lost herself to him
He smiles.. He then goes…..
She gets thinking and she imagines sanskar everywhere… Later she doses off
Next day….
Rag was thinking all night to ask laksh bt couldn’t…. And she was jst imagining sanskar everywhere… She don’t know why….
It was mehendi….
Mehendi designer was keeping mhndi on rag hands… She was jst lost in Sanskar’s world… San gets an idea… He tells something to mehndi designer..she nods….
Rag then looks at him… He winks at her… She finds something suspicious… She then sees her hand in which had sanskar name….. She was shocked…
He smiles….
Later
She then decides talk with laksh abt the matter…. She goes laksh’s room….
She was abt to knock when she listens sanlak conversation…
Lak:sanskar… Watever u done it was wrong….
San:then how can i say to her directly… That u dont love her….
Lak:bt she didn’t do anything… Wat vl i say to swara…
San:don’t worry… Everything vl be fine…..
Lak hugs him:u are making a sacrifice for me….
San:sacrifice??
Lak:no need of making it & all…. I know u said to me that u vl do anything to break marriage…u jst acting yo be in love with rag ryte…
Rag was shocked…. Tears flow from her eyes she goes from there…. She goes from there and locks herself in her room… She cries.. She don’t know why bt she got hurt listening sanskar doesn’t love her….
San:stop stop…. There itself ok… I came here to break your marriage… Bt after seeing rag…. I fell for her at first sight… Her talks her innocence her care her concern….i love everything in her….. I love her… I wont say that i will die for her.. Bcs i want to live with her in rest of my life…i…
Lak:bas bas… I knew that… I was jst thought to tease you…pagle tum ne tho rula hi diya(you made me cry) he acts as wiping his fake tears…
Sanhits him:here i m talking about my love and you….
Lak:sorry sorry… Bt i m very happy for you… They hugs…
Lak:so… Wat next???
San:u hv to talk to your parents….
Lak:waat.. No…
Rag was crying… :these both friends are playing with my feelings…. Watever he(sanskar) said till now was all drama… Bt why r u hurt rag…. Bcs…. She cries..
She looks at her mhndi and cries bcs I LOVE HIM… bt he was jst playing with my feelings… At the time her mother comes… She cleans her face and opens the door… And goes out.. Her mom feels something bt later thinks that she is feeling bad leave them…
Next day it was haldi…. Sanskar changes the haldi… He gives haldi which he had touched…. At the time a girl comes…
Rag was fully applied with haldi… She goes to her room… Bt she sees sanskar talking with a girl…
The girl is revealed to be swara… She has tears in her eyes… Sanskar side hugs her and goes… Something irked rag by seeing them close…
Rag goes to swara… Swara was abt to go….
Rag:swara..
She turns
Sw:u know me…
Rag smiles weakly…
Night.. It was marriage…
Lak got ready.. :wr is swara.. U informed her ryte…
San:yes.. She will be coming…
Few mins passed bt there was no news of swara…
Sanlak gets worried..
Ap&dp comes and takes laksh with them….
Sanlak planned that swalak would elope and get married… It was sanskar’s plan… Which at first laksh refuse later got convinced…
Laksh comes:sanskar i cant do this with my parents… I vl do this marriage…
San hugs him:i m with u.. We cant go against your parents…..
Lak goes…
Now sanskar got worried… As one side his friend and other side his love… He didn’t know wat to do… He goes out and sees raglak were seated and performing pooja…. Tears fall from his eyes…
Pandith:ghatbandhan ke liye aage aaye…
Rag mother was abt to go…
Voice:can i do this ritual…..
All looks at the direction and was shocked… It was noneother than RAGINI
Shek:ragini… U… Who is the girl who took my daughters place…..
Laksh looks at the girl.. She opens her veil…. She was swara….
Shek was abt to drag swara… Rag holds his hand….
Rag:no dad…..
Swara has tears… Lak hugs her…
Dp:LAKSH….. Leave that girl……
Rag folds her hand:plzz let them marry… They love eachother….
Shar:rag yeh shadi hai koi mazak nahi..
Dp:your marriage will only hpn with ragini
Rag:ha ma… You r ryte.. Yeh koi mazak nahi… Do you want your daughter to stay with a man who doesn’t love her… Bt swara…
She goes to dp:uncle… Your son who can do anything for.. Cant you favour him one thing.. Which is his life… His love his future…. He is your son uncle.. Not a machine that watever you like he should also like it… He has his own likes….
Sanskar was jst looking at her…
Rag:did you asked laksh once that did he liked me…. Ok uncle if you say i vl marry him… Can you guarantee me that he vl love me….
Dp has no answer….
Rag:laksh.. Atleast now fight for your love…..
Lak comes to dp:papa.. Plzz i love swara…i want to marry her…. Plzz..
He falls to his leg…
Rag:uncle see your son is still want your permission…
Dp was guilty… Ap comes and holds dp’s shoulder…
Dp makes laksh stand:i m sorry beta… I didnt understand u…
Lak:no papa… You r my father.. & u hv rytes on me…
Dp:i hv rytes on you ryte.. Go and marry…
Rag looks at him…
Dp:ragini beta dont look at me like that i said him to marry with swara..
All laughs….swara comes to him;thankyou uncle..
Dp:uncle nahi papa…
She smiles through tears.. She was abt take his blessings… He hugs her….
Rag goes to shekar:i m sorry papa.. I didn’t ask you…
Shek:no beta.. I m proud of you
He hugs her… Sharmishta too joins… Sanskar was admirig ragini…
Swalak then sitsin mandap.. Ragini does ghatbandhan… Shekshar does kanyadhaan as swara was an orphan… By this swara got a parents and a sister….
Soon the rituals got end….
Rag then looks at sanskar who was already looking at her… A tear skips from her eyes she wipes… San sees it.. His heart ached…
Later
San takes a dhol and starts play… He then sings.
Dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan …(2)
Ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
He then gives the dhol to someone and dances..
He then hugs both swalak…
Jahan bhi yeh jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
Yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai…(2)
He then dances….. Laksh too dances with him…
Dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan
Ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
Rag was standing next to swara…. Sans pulls her to dance… He dances with her…. She goes…. Laksh smiles
Jahan bhi yeh jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
Yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai…(2)
San then dances with dp & shekar…
Dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan
Ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
He then dances with ap….
Jahan bhi yeh jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
Yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai…(4)
Sanlak dances…
Pyaar mila preet mili mere yaar ko
Badi pyaari jeet mili mere yaar ko
Pyaar mila preet mili mere yaar ko
Badi pyaari jeet mili mere yaar ko
Lak pulls swara to dance
Khush hai jo dil maine mehfil …(2)
Jeeto se saja di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai…(4)
Swara goes to rag stands with.. Her
Laksh sings
Haar nahin jeet nahin yahan pyaar hai
Jis main haar jeet ho woh kahan pyaar hai
Haar nahin jeet nahin yahan pyaar hai
Jis main haar jeet ho woh kahan pyaar hai
Lag ja gaale yaar mere
Lag ja gaale yaar mere maine dil se sada di hai
Sanlak dances and san sings and dances
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai…(3)
Lak hugs dp…. Every one are dancing…. Swara tells rag to sing.. She then pushes her in the middle… Sanskar holds her.. They hv an eyelock…
She then goes to shekshar…. Sharmishta who has tears in her eyes she wipes her tears And sings
Saathi sakhiyaan bachpan ka yeh angna
Gudiya jule koyi bhi to hoga sang na
Chupaungi aasoon kaise bege ge kangna
She has tears she wipes it before anyone can see it..
She then goes to swara and hugs her
Now swara sings..
Saathi sakhiyaan bachpan ka yeh angna
Gudiya jule koyi bhi to hoga sang na
Chupaungi aasoon kaise bege ge kangna
Saathi sakhiyaan re
Swara again hugs her… Then they composes
San goes to swara
Saathi sun le bole jo yeh angna
Yeh mann jeevan pyaar ke hi rang main rang na
Has degi teri chudi khankegi kangna
Saathi sun le re
He then pushes her to laksh.. He holds her
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai…(3)
Everyone dances whole heartedly…. Rag then sadly sees sanskar and goes from.. There….
Soon the ftn gets over
Here san thinks of buying something for Ragini
He then goes to the near by shoping mall…. He goes to a gold shop… He selects a diamond pendant which written LOVE.. he buys it.. Then he goes to buy a saree for her… He selects a black saree…
He remembers rag saying:DOSTH KI DULHAN SE PYAAR… he smiles…
San:i will make u mine… MERI DOSTH KI DULHAN… NO MERI DULHAN…
He smiles dreamily imagining abt ragini…..
He then excitedly goes to meet rag…
He goes to rag bt couldn’t find her… He then goes to swalak room… He asks lak abt rag….
Lak:woh… When u went out.. At that time she…
San:waat… Wr is rag damn
Lak:she went back with her parents…
San was left shocked…
He then goes to his room….
San:it means u dont like me…..
Here shar:ragini why u want to leave us beta…
Rag:ma.. I want to achieve something….i had applied for a job 3 months back… When i got this.. I want to go plz…
Shek:ok.. Bt why today…
Rag:plzzz dad…
Shek nods… :ok we vl also come with u.. And i also hv to check my Canadian company
Shar:ya we vl too come…
Rag smiles:ok…
After few hours they flew to Canada
Here sanskar asks laksh to get ragini’s address.. When he went there it was locked….
San tries to call her… Bt was not connecting….
He then sees his finger which has rag dupatta he remembered the moment..
San:u are engaged to me…. U can’t leave me like this..
Here rag sees her hands which has sanskar’s name written… This will fade in day by day…. Bt in my heart it will only call your name sanskar….
He gets a letter in his room.. He opens it….
Sanskar… Its ragini…. Today i m leaving from here…. I jst written this bcs i felt pour my heart out in this.. So that you can know… U proposed me made a engagement… I don’t know why bt i was happy… After getting to know abt laksh also… I didn’t felt hurt… Bt when i listened yours and laksh conversation in that i got to know u were jst acting.. It stabbed my heart sanskar….. Then i realised that I LOVE YOU… bt i don’t want this to be a sacrificed relation…. So i am leaving…. Here i don’t have rights to say yours bt alvida.. Ragini….
San cries holding the letter… Then smiles through tears by this i got to know that u love me…. Then i vl find u and make u mine… If Wherever you are!!
One year passed…
Sans pov..
One year passed…. I didnt got a clue of you… Bt my heart says that u vl to me soon.. That one week is my best days of my life ragini…
Laksh comes:sanskar….
San looks at him…
Lak:good news..
San:is it abt ragini
Lak nods… :she was in canada.. And today she is coming back that too only for 2 days…
San hugs him…
Lak:now we shouldn’t waste our time… Come we should go to airport…
Sanskar runs to the car..
Lak:i m too there sanskar… Dont leave me now.. They both goes to airport..
They search for ragini.. They didn’t get her….
San:i think i lost her here too….
Lak:i think she went to her home… We should go there…
They goes and sees shekshar…
Shek:laksh.. You…
Laksh:uncle.. Is ragini here
Shek:why laksh…
San:actually uncle… I love your daughter and she too loves me… Plzz plzz uncle…. Tell me wr is ragini….
Shar:bt beta… She went to somewhere.. She will again directly go to airport.. As she got urgent work there…..
San was shocked….
Shek:i m happy that u too love her….. So i tell u that don’t miss her….
San smiles:thankyou uncle
Sanlak goes to airport bcs they dont know wr she is…
They waits for her…
Then sanskar listens to voice…
Voice:thankyou aunty you gave me lift till here…
San:ragini…
He turns and sees ragini… He was on cloud nine seeing his ragini…..
Rag was abt to go then she feels something.. Her heart beat gets faster… She turns and sees sanskar….. She turns
Rag has tears:sanskar… I have to go… She was abt to go… He holds her hand…
Rag doesnt turns….
San:will u again leave me and go…..
Rag tries to free her hand…..
San sees the ring in her hand…
San:ok come ragini… I will never let you go from me…
Rag:plzz sanskar.. I told you that.. We dont need to have a sacrificed relation…
San:sacrificed relation? who told you…. This… You love me right…. Tell me rag… You love me ryte…..
Rag:yes.. I love you bt… San makes her turn… There was a small gap between them
San:no buts & ifs… Listen to me…. It was your misunderstanding laksh was jst teasing me…. So that i tell my feelings to him… Lak:yes ragini he is ryte.. She looks at laksh…
San:U heard half and u decided yourself and left me…. I love you… From the day i see you.. I mean love at first sight…..
Rag has tears listening this…. :you love me….
San screams:I LOVE YOU RAGINI….
Rag:sacchi…
San:no
Rag beats his chest….. Continuously
He holds her hands:now why r u beating…
Rag pouts:bcs u didn’t tell me this first…
San:excuse me… Its not me it was you who left me… Keeping a letter for me…
Rag:why didn’t you tell me your feelings…
San looks at her shocked
San:ahhh.. This girl…. I told you bt you took me wrong… Remember slap….
She hugs him tightly:I LOVE YOU TOOOOOOOOOO……
San too hugs her in same passion…
Laksh clicks their photo…
After few days it was RAGSAN MARRIAGE… They gets married…….
Lak sings and dances
Dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan …(2)
Ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
Jahan bhi yeh jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
Yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai…(2)
Swara sings and dances.. She pulls both RAGSAN…
Dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan
Ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
Jahan bhi yeh jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
Yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai..(2)
ALL 4 DANCES….
Dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan
Ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
Jahan bhi yeh jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
Yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai…(4)
Rag:YOU MARRIED YOUR DOSTH KI DULHAN… TOO BAD….
San holds her from het waist:ha… Meine MERI DOSTH KI DULHAN SE SHAADI KARLI… ACTUALLY MERI DULHAN….. Dont forget… You r my bride… And my friend is already married one yr back…
They laughs…..
~End~
Friends… I think i bored you all with a long update….
If you want i vl come up with 2 shoth of MERI DOSTH KI DULHAN SE PYAAR? VOL. 2
Sorry if i bored you…