MERI DRAMEBAAZ BIWI?(KANCHI ONE SHOT OS)
Hello friends……..First of all, WISH U A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR…This New Year, I wish u peace, love & health…Blah, Bhah blah…..screw that!!……I wish u lots of fun, craziness, outings & fulfilment of all ur weird desires which couldn’t befulfilled in the previous year?haha…….
First of all, a big waala thanks to Sanveer, Niyaa, Amnaa, Dhruti, Aafiya, Vrushti, Swetha, Dhruvi, Reihana.Thamiz, Anuradha, Ruwani, Anu, Ishi, Bibechna, Erika, Sanyukta….for commenting on my previous OS & also to my friends who read & liked it….Today, ur silly, buddhu friend cum sis, Priyanka….urff…Riyarocks?, has come once again with another OS…..Hope you all would like it…
So friends, coming to the OS, this one’s a simple one, light, without any major concept…Hope u enjoy reading this…So, without wasting any more time, let’s get started?
Location: Jungle?…hehe…..Jungle mein Mangal, I mean Kanchi…….haha…….
“Plzz shut up Sanchi”…Kabir shouted getting annoyed as Sanchi was continuously blabbering(just like our bak bak gang?…hehe)…in fact, she was scolding Kabir
“Why are you shouting at me when mistake is yours?” she replied angrily
“Let me remind, it was you who asked me to see Google map”…Kabir smirks keeping his point?
“Then, was there any other option??You don’t know how to use map” she frowned crossing her arms
“So u check” he keeps the mobile in her lap
“What’s the use now? we’re already stuck in jungle” saying this, she threw the mobile at him… fortunately he caught it at the right time…
“Nothing can be done of you Sanchi” he signed sadly…
Kanchi were coming from a party…but the way to their house was blocked for maintenance of the road. It was late night, so Sanchi said to Kabir to use Google map to find the other way. But they got confused & ended up in the forest. Now, their car is stuck in mud, so they can’t go anywhere. They’re sitting in their car & fighting(like cats & dogs?) & blaming each other.
“Now will you come out??” Kabir opened her seat door coming out first then moving towards her side.
“It’s too muddy outside” Sanchi made a yukk face looking at the mud near the car
“Sanchi, stop ur drama” Kabir rolled his eyes
“It’s not any drama…My saree is new & heavy, I also can’t handle it” saying this, she settled on her seat comfortably?
“Then who told you to wear this heavy saree??” he shouted getting irritated
“OMG!! You are looking gorgeous” she said while Kabir gave a confused look
“These are the words which u said when we left for the party…That means, ur praise, ur compliment…that was fake” saying this Sanchi turns her face to the other side
Kabir sighed, bend & picked her in his arms?
“Where r u taking me??” Sanchi got shocked as she was in air suddenly
“To clean place” Kabir said sarcastically?
He moved little & there was grass, so he made Sanchi stand there. There were two trees separated by a little distance
“Let’s sit & think what to do” he sat with the support of the tree
“I’ll not sit” said Sanchi stubbornly
“As u wish” Kabir said casually
Sanchi started walking here & there at that place only. She couldn’t go further as it was pitch dark & she was scared
Kabir saw his wife who was pretending to ignore him but he knew, she was stealing his glances?
“Aaj mausam bada beimaan hai” Kabir started singing teasing Sanchi, while stretching his arms on either side…In turn, Sanchi glared at him
“Sanchi sit. For how long u’ll stand??” said Kabir
(Kabir’s pov…She must be already tired coz she’s wearing that heavy saree)
Sanchi went & sat in front of him, leaning to the other tree
“So much attitude…just wait & watch what I’m going to do madam” he thinks & then smirks as something came in his mind?
Sanchi was staring around. She had a little fear in her heart as they’re in the jungle, while trying to hide her fear from Kabir
“Sanchi, are u sleeping??” Kabir asked looking at her
“Since when I started sleeping by opening my eyes??” her eyes were wide open, still he asked that silly question
“Okay…then I want to say something…May I??”(They both were facing each other & there is little distance between them)
“If I’ll deny, then u’ll not say??” she asked
“Yeah…point…I’ve a secret which I never told u” he made a puppy face
“What?? U started keeping secrets & hiding things from me…very bad” she forgot the previous reason of anger as she got new one?
“I’m telling now…u want to listen??” he said mischievously
“Yes” Sanchi said sternly
“When I was 20yrs old, on one dark night I was going alone on a road” his words came huskily making Sanchi gulp her saliva, pehle ye jungle & now his talks…
“There was pin drop silence as it’s now”…..he was cut off as Sanchi shouted…
“I don’t want to listen to ur secret” said Sanchi
“But I’ll tell…I’m good husband…So I won’t hide anything from my wife” Kabir acted innocently?
“I said na, I don’t want to listen” she again shouted
“Are you scared??” his lips form a smirk
“No I’m not” her ego was very big……..haha
“Then listen….I was going alone. Suddenly one girl in white saree came in front of me” he continued while Sanchi was on the verge of sweating
“Wait wait” she instantly got up & ran to him. She sat beside him in a side hugging position. Kabir smiles as his plan works?
“Then??” she whispers clinging to him. Sanchi though scared wanted to know further…After all, it comes the matter of a girl now. What she must have said to her Kabir?
“She wanted to kill me” Kabir said while tightening his grip around her?
“Why??” she got tensed
“Bcoz she was a female ghost” he whispered in her ears
“You are cooking ur own story??” Sanchi narrowed her eyes at him as she felt his words unrealistic
“No no, it’s true” he tried to convince her
“Then why she didn’t killed u??” she asked suspiciously
“She said I’m handsome, so she’ll not kill me” he praised himself
“Do u think I’m fool? Idiot” Sanchi hit his shoulder for speaking rubbish
“I accept, if was fake but atleast u came close to me” he winks? at her
“For a second my breathe got stuck” she told how much scared she was
“Sorry” he mumbled kissing her forehead
“Kabir, we can’t sit here for whole night” she said in a tensed tone
“Let’s walk till road, then maybe we’ll get some conveyance” he suggested
“I can’t walk” she said making a puppy face
“I can pick u in my arms” he said
“You’ll also get tired, ok, we’ll walk”…she said this as she didn’t want to trouble him much
They got up & started walking through broken & uneven road. After walking for little distance, signal came on mobile. So Kabir called Veer for help to which he agreed, without waiting for a second & later he came with his car & both went with Veer.
After two days
Kabir was working on laptop sitting on bed & Sanchi is lying beside him on his shoulder
“Kabir, why u married me??” she asked out of no where
“Bcoz I love u” he looked at her & smiled?
“Why u luv me only??” she again interrogated
“What kind of question is this? I fell for u……that’s it” he said
“You were so popular, so many girls were after u & they were even more beautiful than me, then why u chose me??” she asked
Kabir signed at his wife who alwz asks stupid questions
“They may be beautiful t the world, but u make my world beautiful” his each word means a lot to Sanchi
Sanchi got speechless with his answer. She wrapped her hand around his waist
“Sanchi” he called bcoz she didn’t speak anything….& that was….really strange!!
“I love you” she was just able to say these words?
“& why you luv me??” he chuckles repeating her question?
“I don’t love u for any reason” she said twitching her nose
“Yeah, luv isn’t something which have reasons or conditions…when these things arise, it’s compromise” Kabir said?
“Kabir!!!” suddenly Sanchi exclaimed
“What??” he was confused with her action
“Plz can u change ur hairstyle for me??” she said while running her hands through his hairs
“Why??” he back hugged her keeping his laptop on the table
“Before our marriage, the way u set ur hairs naa……omg!!…..u were looking so handsome & breath-taking” she said smiling shyly at him?
“But u didn’t said me at that time” he pouts
“Bcoz, we were more or less strangers…but now I can say” she reasoned
“Alright, I’ll try to change” he smiled at her
“Kabir, don’t u get fed up of my demands & drama??” she asked little worried
“Never…In fact, when u don’t fight with me or don’t say anything stupid, I feel weird & miss ur bak bak” he said?
“Huh!! I don’t understand, u are praising me or insulting” she makes faces
“No need to understand, just sleep” he laughs at her expressions
Soon both slept.
Next morning
Sanchi came down while searching for Kabir. She hasn’t seen him since she got up
“Sanchi, where is Kabir??” Kusum asked coming near Sanchi
“Don’t know Maa……I didn’t see him” Sanchi was confused at where Kabir went.
“I’m here” Kabir said while he stood at the door.
Sanchi’s eyes widen as Kabir had changed his hairstyle as she had asked.
“Come & have breakfast” Kusum said & left
Kabir smiled at Sanchi’s open mouth expression?
“How’s it??” he flipped his fingers in front of her
“You went out early morning for this??” Sanchi was still shocked
“Yeah…u asked something…then how I’ll not do” Kabir winks at her?
Sanchi turned to Kusum, who was busy in arranging the breakfast. She quickly turned, kissed Kabir’s cheeks & ran from there.
Kabir was shocked & stood there placing hand on his cheek?
“Kabir, u r still here….go, freshen up & come for the breakfast”….Kabir came out of his dreamland? He smiled sheepishly & went.
Timeskip
Kanchi’s room
“Kabir, go & change this hairstyle” Sanchi said crossing her hands.
“Now what happened??” he had no idea what new drama his wife is doing now?
“You look Greek God in this…other girls will stare at u & I don’t want that” she shouted
“But I care for you only” he said giving her an unbelievable look
“Really!! Then you don’t look at them” she pouts cutely
“I never do that” saying this, he pulled Sanchi on his lap?
“Then no need to change” she hugged him
“Thank God!!” he sighed in relief.
“Bye Kabir….I’ve so much of work to do & you’re wasting my time” she hurriedly got up & went
Kabir was……like seriously……she herself dragged him to the room & now saying he’s wasting her time?
“No one can understand girls!!”?……haha
The End?
Friends, 2017 was really amazing for me……..In this year, I became a part of this TU family…….& I’m really thankful for this, from the bottom of my heart……I never felt that I was capable of writing anything……but friends, ur constant support & motivation, made me to continue my writing…….I’m so lucky to have you all in my life…..I just hope that you all will keep showering your luv on ur silly, dumbo friend in 2018….just like the way you supported me in 2017……Luv u a lot?
So friends, I just hope it was worth reading. I’m really thankful to those who read my story, thanks a lot friends….WISHING YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR??
With lots & lots of LOVE,
Priyanka?
57 Comments
Too cute….such mein Sanchi Bohot dramebaaz Hain bechara Kabir…Bohot Bohot achha Hain yeh os..and story in the jungle wala part was awesome…pls keep giving us these sweet treats and Happy New Year ..have a blessed year and stay safe
thanku soooooooooooooo much Srija dear for commenting on this…….actually, thoda sa confused thi ki kya likhoon, kis topic pe likhoon…….kuch dimaag mein aaya nhi so isko humour waala bana diya…….I’m glad that u liked this……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeee & a very HAPPY NEW YEAR to u………bye………tc
awesome mind blowing and ha no one can understand girls hahaha
love u dear tc
haan……….ladkiyon ko aaj tak bhagwaanjee bhi nhi samajh paye……..toh ye kabir bechaara kaise samjhega………haha………jokes apart, I’m really glad dear that u liked this………thnx a lot for being such a sweet regular reader………I’m really lucky to have frnds like u in my life………luv u sweety……….bye & a very very HAPPY NEW YEAR to u & ur family…….tc
Wah maza aa gya…… or ye kya tumsab ne likh diya or ek mai nikkami hoon jo nhi likhi ??? chal dekhti hoon kabtak hota h but ab to mujhe pasine aa rhe h tumlog ka itna mast h khi mera padh ke mujhe maarne na lage sab. Or to or saanchi ka melodrama dekh ke maza aa gya. Luv u loads meri brahmu ☺???
oye jinny ki bachhi…….apni kp chod…….jaldi se jaake likh & post kar……..mujhe tera os chahiye……wo bhi aaj hi…….warna tujhe hum sab, phirse naagin bana denge……..phir karti rehna din bhar naagin dance……..haha…….just kidding………I’m really glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya………chal, ab isi baat pe apni os de de……….haha……..luv u meri pyaari jinny……….milte hain ig pe
Ohooo finally tune os post kar hi diya nd sahi kaha bahut hua sincerity ka bhashan thoda pagal panti bhi jaruri h..haha amaz mindblowing os yaar mera to din hi ban gaya..??.. Ek baar laga aaj to kanchi ko tu jungle m le aai??per tune to mera dil tod diya kabir se milaya bhi nhi??????.. Nautanki chalu subah subah??.. Chal bye ab achii bachi ki jaise ff post kar fata fat.. Wrna m kp chalun kar dungi???.. Lovvv u ??.. Good mrng bye milte h ig p??
Haye haye zombu tune nehi dekha kya kanchi ko…maine toh dekha tha…bas rs ke jaise unhe alag nhi karna tha to bina disturb kiye wahaan se chali aayi ???aur haan I hope ki mera 25th post tujhe actual mein achha laga…mera ❤rakhne ko tune tareef nhi ki…luv u meri pyaari zombu….wo bhi dherrrrrrrrr saara ???
mita tu na pagle kar ke chooddegi mujhe…tu kehti hai tujhe likhna nahi aata yarrr yeh kahin se copy krti hai kiya i mean you are rock……and even i’m really happy that i have you in my life…luvv uuuu luvv uu luvv uu dherr saaraaamy mita….Os ki tariff karne keliye shabd nahi hai…samjh jaa…ok
Anee Anee……..tu ye soch naa…..agar tu pagal ho jayegi, tab tujhe mouka mil jayega sdch jaane ka & kabir se milne ka 😉 & haan…….main copy karti hoon…….matlab mera haath, mere chotu se dimaag se ideas copy paste karta hai……phir likhta hai………hehe………..& I’m bohut bohut bohut zyada lucky…..ki tum sab mere life ke part ho……….luv u my Anee……..bohuuuuuuuuuuut saara……..milte hain ig pe
great dear u r one of my favorite writer here to gud hope in 2018 u will come up with new and amazing stories of kanchi as u always do…. Coming back to epi. amazing and sanchi’s demand and poor kabir… U rocked it yaar ??
thanku so so much sweety…..I’m really glad to get cmmnts from my silent reader….thnx for breaking ur silence & commenting…….& sweety, ur cmmnts bought a big smile on my face…….abt kanchi…….I’m one of their die hard fans……..I’m going to write on them alwz as long as I’m there on TU……..Wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR sweetie(with a big teddy hug)……..bye…..tc……..luv u a lot
o7m os dea….it waz unique 4m all n i luved it 4m d core of my hrt …keep posting such os n post nxt part of ua ff soon n dis tym come vid a long chap. dea…luv u loads n dheer sara
SANA
thanku sana dear…….I’m really glad that u liked it……..as far as length is concerned, I’m a bit confused…..coz I usually post my updates, with wordings betwn 1500-2000 words……which is pretty lenghty…..so, long chapter!?………but still, since u’re saying, I’ll surely try for a long one….but not sure….thnx dear for ur suggestion…..luv u a lot sweetieeeeee & wishing u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR……..bye……….tc
awesome
cute
thnku so much cherry dear……..I’m really glad that u liked it…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee & wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR(with a big teddy hug)…….bye…….tc
Amazing one outstanding and the dramas of saanchi were very funny happy new year to u
hehe……..haan……..bechara kabir………everytime gets trapped in sanchi’s weird demands…….haha……. I’m really glad that u liked this………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee & wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR(with a jaadu ki jhappi)……..bye tc
Nice dear
thnku so much Risu dear…….I’m really pleased to know that u liked this os…….luv u a lot sweety(with a teddy hug)……..Wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR………bye………tc
Tu sach mein brahmu hai. Kya likhti HaI out of the world os. Yesa mujhe hazar chahiya thousands samajhi brahmu iss chudail ka order hai .Mein toh ab nhi likh paungi .Tera chahat fs Ka Kya Hua. Mujhe woh bhi chaiye .And all of ur writing is beyond everything. ..love you alot mile hai ig pe.
haye haye chudail………tu apni cp se kabhi bahar nhi aayegi naa……..kitni kp karti hai……..aur, tu nhi likhegi ka kya matlab hai…….tujhe likhna hi padega…….warna teri khair nhi……..ig pe teri band bajegi……..so alag……..luv u meri pyaari ashu chudail………milte hain ig pe………..(tera band bhi toh bajana hai ;))
Amazing.. Superb… Awesome.. Wonderful.. We will definitely support you , being a good friend… Love you a lot… Take care.. Baye…
first of all, a big waala thanku from the bottom of my heart for being my regular reader & commentor……..wish u & ur family, a very HAPPY NEW YEAR………as alwz, reading ur cmmnts, I was on cloud9……….luv u a lot dear…….tc
Amazing.. Superb… Awesome.. Wonderful.. We will definitely support you , being a good friend… Love you a lot… Take care.. Baye… Happy New Year.. My wishes to you and your family…
HAPPY NEW YEAR to u too sweetieeeeeee(with a big teddy hug)………luv u……..bye…….tc
that was lovely mast zabardast
loved it do write more
thanku soooooooooo much vanu dear, I’m really glad that u liked this……..wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR……..luv u a lot sweety…….a big teddy hug for u……..bye…….tc
So so amazing and outstanding and superb yaar…………this is most beautiful new year gift to us given by you sweety……….I know what type of comment is suitable for this gorgeous story………… I am speechless reading this story………..love u dear so so much…….tc prinku…….
One mistake yaar i don’t know what type of comment is suitable for this gorgeous story hoga
Anu….tune toh meri bolti band kardi itne amazingly sweet comments se…yaar pehle ye bataa tu din mein kitniiiiiii sweets khaati hai…jo khud ek khidkitod writer hai wo meri tareef kar rahi hai…I’m really honoured…luv u a lot sweetie…wishing you a very Happy New year…tc
I love sweet yaar…..but I am not that better writer like you and all ff writer………tum logo se inspire hoke mae story likna start kiya hu re prinku darling…….you are all my energy yaar……. thanks once again lot sweety for this wonderful story……..
One request prinku please yaar write next part of this story with some more drama,kabir understanding and their romance,their family bonding with prashaveer……..
Anu…ye ek one shot os tha…tere saare wants karne ke liye, meri ff hai naa?actually, family bonding ko bas ek os mein limit kar paana mere liye thoda difficult hoga…but phir bhi…agar kabhi likhoongi wo sirf tujhe dedicate karoongi?luv u sweetie…bye…tc
Acha…..I mean jhakkas….love you riyu?
Ale waah…meli golu ko ye pasand aayaa…main bohut zyaada happy hoon…luv u meli golu..bohut bohut bohut saara…milte hain ig pe????
Its so amazing…. Kaanchi ki bonding was so awesome….. Pata nahi kahan se ate hain itne ideas…… Loved it….. Happy new year
Arey Amnaa tujhe pata nehi hai…tere jaise amazing readers ke comments aur motivation se aate hain ideas…luv u a lot sweetie for being my regular reader throughout my writing journey…wish u a very Happy New year..with a big teddy hug…luv u a lot sweetie…tc?
Omg this is amazing ur Kasam se !!! I swear !!! The best fighting os I ever came across !!
Love uh loads dear keep rocking Riya rocks
Trishu dear…kasam se…u made my morning beautiful with ur amazing comments…u r my inspiration & tujhse tareef milna, it’s just feels like exam mein 90% se zyaada score aa gaye ho??wish you a very Happy new year…luv u a lot cutie pie…tc?
Hi I’m nitu one of the silent readers,
Ur update was really awesome. Superb .
Nitu dear, thnx a lot for breaking ur silence and commenting…this really means a lot for me…I’m on 9th cloud after reading your comments??…wish u a very Happy new year…with a big teddy hug…luv u a lot sweetie…tc?
Riya riya riya! Kya kamal ka likha hai, it’s too good dear… I loved that part where kabir was making a fake story of ghost..amazing yaar..
Anuuuuuuuu………finally mere Eid ke chand ne darshan de di……..ab jaake poori hui meri new year ki wish……..tujhe wapas yahaan dekhke………hehe…….& ye os specially tum sab ke liye likha hai………koi topic mila nhi, toh aise hi kanchi moments imagine karke likh daali…………& haan, ab aa hi gayi ho, toh ek os bhi likh do………dekh, ff ki demand nhi kar rahi……..bas ek os…………luv u meri Shona……….bye………..tc
I’m late again, I know ??? you can throw me anything and I won’t complain at all ??? (Why? Coz before they reach me, they’ll fall in to the sea – my country is surrounded by the sea ??????) First, happy new year and secondly about the OS, Tu ne dimaag mein aag laga diya (New year na, trying to comment in Hindi with SWAG ???) really sweetie, if I saw one scene like this in the serial, main toh khushi se marjawan ???. It was so cute at the same time sooooo entertaining. My smile never left me face even after reading it. Even my mom gave me a suspicious look coz I was smiling looking at the phone ??? love you sweetie ???
waah Ru……….mind blowing………meri Dinu ne toh bouncer ball pe hi sixer maar di…….swag se Hindi……..hehe………yaar, if u liked this, I’m pretty sure, that this must be somewhat worthy reading……..& don’t worry abt aunty, I’ll personally call her to say that aapki Ru bigad gayi hai……..she’s having a bf in India named Vikram Sakhalkar………& she keeps on smiling while reading his texts on her mobile………haha……….just kidding………luv u a lot Dinu………milte hain ig pe
Yeah right ??? like VS would text me ???
Of course ???
Aww….So cute OS di…..Poor Sanchi….& Naughty Kabir….He make fake story….it is incredible….loved it….lots of love to u ? ?
Choti………..missed u a lot dear…………tu toh ek dum se hi gayab ho gayi…….Mr.India ki tarah………..plz waapas aajaa…………tujhe aur tere articles ko hum sab bohut miss karte hain……….&&&……….thanku soooooooooooo much, isko pasand karne ke liye………..ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi ke saath, luv u dherrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr saara my sweety pie……….bye……..tc
Aww…I miss u too di & I am back di….My article is posted di….whenever u get time, take a look…lots of love to u ? ?
wow……..that’s really amazing……….luv u my sweety pie
Love u too ? ?
Really amazing sissy the way sanchi irritating our poor kabir. Tremendous writing skills you have. You are a rockstar
Awww….that’s so sweet of you dear…I’m really glad to have such a sweet reader & commentor…luv u a lot shreya dear…& wish u a very Happy new year sweetie…luv u…bye…tc
So mje pta h ki mein sbse last mein comment krri hu….but abhi shortage of tym h isliye …….but 1 dum faadu os h ye …….agr award 4 best os hota toh winner ye os hota…abhi tata and bye and gn
mujhe nhi pata tha ki daayab ko buttering aati hogi……….but yaar, tune toh matlab, meri bolti band kardi………..best os……….oye…….itna bhi achhi nhi bani, but yaar, tujhe pasand aayi, main ussi se hi bohut zyaada khush hoon………..luv u meri pyaari daayan