Hi everyone.I am Sakash.How are you all?I missed you all a lot…I know that you all are waiting for my update…I am so sorry for posting it lately…Actually my study schedule is tight…So i am not getting time to write story…I may not be regular.But i will try to post once or twice in a week…Once again i am sorry to everyone who reads my updates…… And i am thankful to the ones who stayed patient for me I truly appreciate…
BELATED HAPPY RAKSHA BANDHAN…
ALWAYS STAY HAPPY AND MAY GOD BLESS YOU ALL…
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The story starts :
Saanchi’s Pov :
A smile appeared on my face recalling last night…Now we are one…This word “One” is giving me lot of happiness…Today I am so happy…Because i fulfilled my responsibility as wife…Being a doctor, knowing everything.I felt uncomfortable.One day this must be happen. Not only me this is the beautiful moment to every married couple to take their relationship to next level.I am only his and He is only mine…
Saanchi : Hello Mr.Kapoor…Do you have any plans?
Kabir (Rubbing his eyes) : Mr.s Kapoor… You wake up so early?
Saanchi : Early?Good joke…
Kabir laughs…
Saanchi : I want to spend some time with you…Now…Go get freshen up…
Kabir pulls Saanchi closer.
Kabir : Sure…Shall we start again?
Saanchi blushes…
Saanchi : Ji nahi…
Kabir laughs…
Kabir : Ok 5 minutes…
Saanchi smiles…Kabir kisses Saanchi on forehead.Saanchi kisses Kabir on cheek…
Kabir’s POV :
Till now we are “One” by heart but now we are “One” in all senses…I love her from the second i saw her…Something like LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT…I don’t know all this…But I love Saanchi so much…
@Hall area
After having brunch,they sat in hall area.
Saanchi : I thought you only know how to give life to patient…But…
Kabir with smile asks her,”But?”
Saanchi : But i am wrong…You very well know how to love a person…
Kabir : It’s you who changed a boring doctor into a romantic one…
Saanchi laughs…
Kabir takes Saanchi’s hands into his hands and said,
Kabir : I Love U…Saanchi…
Saanchi : I Love U tooooo…Kabir…
Kabir smiles…
Kabir : Oh my God!This much love?
Saanchi : Yesssss…
Kabir : You know what,i missed this?
Saanchi : What?
Kabir : Your beautiful smile…
Saanchi : Not fair Kabir…You missed only my smile not me?
Kabir : Nautanki haan?
Saanchi laughs and hugs him tightly…He hugs her back…
Saanchi : I am very happy Kabir…I can’t express my happiness in words…
Kabir :
एक पल के लिए जब तू पास आता है,
मेरा हर लम्हा ख़ास बन जाता है,
सँवरने सी लगती है ये ज़िन्दगी अपनी,
जब भी तू मेरी बाहों में मुस्कुराता है।
Saanchi claps…
Saanchi : It’s beautiful Kabir…
Kabir : Thank you Mam…
Saanchi laughs…
Saanchi :
आप खुद नही जानती आप कितनी प्यारी हो,
जान तो हमारी पर जान से प्यारी हो,
दूरियों के होने से कोई फ़र्क नहीं पड़ता,
आप कल भी हमारी थी आज भी हमारी हो!!
Kabir hugs her.Saanchi hugs him back.
Kabir breaks the hug.
Kabir : It’s beautiful Saanchi.
Saanchi : Thank you Sir.
Kabir laughs…
To be continued…
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I hope u all liked it…I know this is short one… Sorry for that…I will try to post long one next time…Please give your valuable comments and likes if you like my update…I will update soon…If i get response from all of you quickly then i will post next part after 2 days…
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27 Comments
Wowwww!!!! Sakash it’s really beautiful lines….. tum ne khud likhii hain?? anyways yeah it was very very short updates next time I want really long Okay?? haha dear don’t worry I’m just trying to tease you… it’s really up to you whether you post short or long…. I loved each n every updates from you…. u know what after so long time I enjoyed TU updates. bye tc.
Hi Anee…Thank you so much dear…Meine nahi likha…I know dear but i will give long update next time…Okay???Long one???done…It’s okay…It means a lot to me…Oh i am glad dear…Bye…TC
Hey Sakash,
Your back
Really happy to read your episode it was awesome
Post the next one soon
But a long one
Beautiful lines dear
Take care
Lots of love
Hey!Hi Tanvi…Yes i am back dear…Thank you so much…I will post soon…Okay???Long one???Done….I’m glad that you liked lines dear…Bye…TC???
Amazing n now plz don’t become mr india bcoz the original show si worst plz cm back soon
Hi Pia…Thank you so much dear…Okay i don’t become Mr.India???…I know dear…I will try to give quick updates…Bye…TC…
It was short. But I understand how less time we get when we have a hectic study schedule. Eli was nice but unfortunately I can’t read Hindi letters so I didn’t understand it. So if you can, please reply to me with the translation. Pretty please with a cherry on top!!!
Ru lines was that…
Kabir:
” Ek pal jab tu paas aata hai
Mera har lamha khaas ban jaata hai
sanverne sii lagtii hai yeh zingadii apnii
jab bhi tu meri bahun main muskrata hai.
Saanchi:
“ap khud nahii jante ap kitni pyari ho
jaan to humari par jaan se pyari ho
durion ke hone se koi farq nahii padta
ap kal bhi humari thii aj bhi humari ho”.
I hope Ru you will get it…
n sorry Sakash I tell her the lines… Hope u don’t mind.
Arrey!You no need to say sorry dear…It’s ok…
Okay Anee ??? got it. Thanks! And it is beautiful Sakash ???
Hi Ruch…Thank you so much for commenting dear…Yes dear,my study schedule is tight…So it became difficult to continue story…This is the main problem many authors are facing… But i will try to give quick updates…Bye…TC…
Here i am giving you..,
ENGLISH TRANSLATION…
(Credit goes to my sister Vennie for English Translation…)
Kabir :
For a minute u come closer to me,
Every second of mine becomes special,
It feels as if my life is getting better,
When you smile in my arms!!!
Saanchi :
You urself don’t know how lovely you are,
Life is mine but u r more lovely than my life,
Distance doesn’t affect me,
You were mine yesterday and today as well!!!
Superb?? episode next part little long TC and post soon
Hi Poori…Glad to meet you dear…Thank you so much…I will post long one next time???…I will post soon dear…Bye…TC…
Happy raksha bandhan sakash bhai ……………….. We miss u so so much………………how are you ………you came here with amazing and dhamaka dar episode but it’s really to short yaar………we didn’t expect it from you sakash because you always give us big story to read………so jaldi se ak long episode post karo………. it’s our order(bhai bare behan hue request thori na karungi order karungi srief)………..so post next part soon soon soon soon very soon……… can’t wait for the next part………………tc dear bro………….
Hi Anu…How are you?Thank you so much dear and wish you the same…Awww….I too missed you all a lot…I am fine dear…Oh sorry dear…I will give long one next time???Ok i am accepting your order my dear sweet sister(Of course meri behen order hi karna chahiya not request???)…I will post next one very sooon…Bye…TC Sissy…???
That’s like our bro yaar
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Happy raksha bandhan bhai ? so so so happy to see u back.. few days before I was reading your old updates just coz u became Mr. India?? but u came back I’m so happy.. and this chotu sa update was awesome atleast u gave your little sister satisfaction that you will keep writing? so whenever you get time do write and I just want to know whether you read TU as a silent reader or not at all?? anyway bohot hua mera bakwas tata n good night?? post soon. Take care☺
Hi Priya…How are you?Thank you so much dear and wish you the same…I am so sorry dear…Awww…That’s so sweet of u…You are reading my old updates…But don’t worry i will give quick updates…Thanks dear…I am glad that my chotu sa sister got some what satisfaction after reading update…It means a lot to me…No dear…If i read anything i will comment???…Okay tata…Bye…TC???
Hi sakash…..finally you back….Episode was superb and that Hindi wala lines (sorry is it call sayari or gazal I don’t know so wrote here as Hindi wala line ) are super ?but the short one post next one very long update….tc….byeee….
Hi Dhruti…How are you?Yes i am back dear???…Thank you so much…You no need to say sorry sorry dear…It’s Shayari…I am glad that you liked it…I will give long update next time…Bye…TC…
I’m good…
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It’s beautiful, Post next part soon
Hi Samidha…Thank you so much dear…I will post next part soon…
Happy Raksha Bandhan Sakash Bhaiya.. Although the story was short but beautifully written. Can’t wait to read it further..
Hi KanchiaN…Thank you so much dear and wish you the same…Thanks dear…It means a lot to me???…I will post long one soon… Bye…TC…