Hi Friends,
Archiya here.. I am back with another OS of my lovely shivika…here it goes
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Scene at the pool side
Anika is dreamily staring at her reflection in the water, her expressions soft with a lovely smile on her face, nothing could be even equivalent to this feeling, these emotions which are purely love.
Love for tat tadibaaz billuji, naaa it’s her Shivay
Shivay comes from behind, holds her waist from behind, moves her hair slowly sideways and blows air on her neck… 440V shock passes through anika, she just closes her eyes with a blushing smile on her face to feel the feeing tats Shivay.
She just turns feeling shy and puts her head in his shoulders. And his arms automatically close around her, taking her in his embrace
Just then she hears a loud sound as to someone is calling her name loudly…
Anika: Shivay I am so close to you, why are you screaming
Shivay: it’s not me darling
Anikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa… uthoooooooooooooooooooo
She suddenly opens her eyes and sees Shivay is trying to wake her up, of course in his style as if some earthquake has come
Shivay: what a sleepy head you are, wake up its late and he goes from there
Anika takes her pillow and hugs to herself, smiling dreamily
Ever since she realized that she is In love with Shivay, after that jungle incident, She has been continuously dreaming about him, day and night.
She thinks it’s enough now, I should propose Shivay, I feel that he loves me too.
Night (10 PM)
Anika decorated the pool area to look like a real date, a table was set for 2, anika lighted a candle at the center, it’s glow falling on anika making her look even more beautiful
Shivay walks in and completely forgets everything seeing anika, just drowns in her beauty.
Anika wakes him from his reverie and serves dinner to Shivay, this time she did not burn the paneer
Shivay stares at the paneer, but seeing Anika smilingly expecting him to eat, he tastes it, and it was nice so he starts eating.
Anika is so nervous as today she was going to confess her feelings to Shivay.
Just then Shivay gets a call, and gets tensed seeing the caller, excuses himself an goes out
Till then anika is completely prepared to express her love, as soon as Shivay comes she just blurts out in one breath
“Shivay, I love u so much, you have become my life and I can’t live without you, seeing you die I felt I will die too, I did not understand when I fell in love with you Billuji. Initially you were so rude to me that I hated you, but I still had feelings for you, as hate is also a deep feeling. Slowly the hate started dissolving seeing the way you love your family, your brothers, an finally that feeling became completely the opposite LOVE”
Shivay is too stunned to reply, and to top it all anika is just staring at him waiting for his reply
Anika: Shivay, at least say something.
Shivay ( in a completely angry tone) : Just because I married you to save my family reputation , does not mean you have become my wife, and we are going to get divorced in a few months, so what’s all this rubbish of love, and who the hell are you first of all, who are your parents, what is your origin. You were and you will always be street garbage for me, it was my mistake to bring road trash in my home, little kindness I showed you, you’re dreaming of becoming the mistress of this house
He sees tears flowing through anika eyes, and the deep hurt in them..and something inside him broke at that very moment
Shivay: From when did you start seeing dreams of this mansion, was this your intention all along, to trap me, the heir to Oberoi empire, as my mom was saying, Lots of money right.Once what I said that you are part of our family, you seem to have taken it too seriously, you can never become part of this family.Tia is the mother of my child, and my wife too.. you are no one. Now I feel that you must have tried to kill our child too, just so that u can achieve me
Anika: Stop it Shivay Singh Oberoi! I can understand if you say you don’t love me, but at least don’t blame me of such things, and how do you define what was going on between us from the past few days, were you not flirting with me?
Shivay: you’re not the first gal an you will surely not be the last with whom I have flirted anika.. But you’re the first gal who has taken it to be something else
Now tears were flowing more freely from her eyes. Shivay was just speechless. Something was twisting inside him, the pain was piercing him like knife.
Anika (wiping her tears) : I never loved any of your possessions Shivay , I just loved you as a person, thinking when you love your family an brothers so much, how much will you love me.But now I know. You are not capable of love. I pray to God that when you get your true love she goes away from you…
Anika just walks away from there
Shivay: your prayers are answered anika, My true love is walking away from me, you are walking away from me
Next day morning
Anika tells everyone she is leaving OM forever. Omru and everyone is shocked..
She gets her bags and ready to leave
Omru run to Shivay an tell him Anika is leaving..
Shivay: let her leave.,It’s her wish
Rudra(shocked) : but bhaiya..
Shivay: please go,I have a call to make,Saying he walks out
Omru try to stop anika but she walks out, she keeps moving at each step still hoping that Shivay will call her back, and tell her that he loves her but he does not come an she goes out of OM an out of his life..
Sometime later…
A car comes at a very fast pace and ends at the edge of a cliff
Shivay comes out of it an just stares for a while, And screams
Anikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…
I love you
I love you so much,
And breaks down on his knees, and starts crying uncontrollably
Flashback:
When Shivay was having dinner he goes for the call, it was Mrs.Kapoor, she threatens him that if anika is not out of Oberoi mansion today, she will tell the truth to Omkara
Shivay: Anika you’re the love of my life, but see my misery, I could not even tell you that, in fact I had to insult you so much that you go away from me, I love u so much, but I know you are strong and will bounce back, but om is not strong enough, he will never be able to tolerate that he is illegitimate, an may attempt suicide again.. I can’t lose him… I am so sorry but
WE MET, ONLY TO BE SEPARATED
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Scene at the pool side
Anika is dreamily staring at her reflection in the water, her expressions soft with a lovely smile on her face, nothing could be even equivalent to this feeling, these emotions which are purely love.
Love for tat tadibaaz billuji, naaa it’s her Shivay
Shivay comes from behind, holds her waist from behind, moves her hair slowly sideways and blows air on her neck… 440V shock passes through anika, she just closes her eyes with a blushing smile on her face to feel the feeing tats Shivay.
She just turns feeling shy and puts her head in his shoulders. And his arms automatically close around her, taking her in his embrace
Just then she hears a loud sound as to someone is calling her name loudly…
Anika: Shivay I am so close to you, why are you screaming
Shivay: it’s not me darling
Anikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa… uthoooooooooooooooooooo
She suddenly opens her eyes and sees Shivay is trying to wake her up, of course in his style as if some earthquake has come
Shivay: what a sleepy head you are, wake up its late and he goes from there
Anika takes her pillow and hugs to herself, smiling dreamily
Ever since she realized that she is In love with Shivay, after that jungle incident, She has been continuously dreaming about him, day and night.
She thinks it’s enough now, I should propose Shivay, I feel that he loves me too.
Night (10 PM)
Anika decorated the pool area to look like a real date, a table was set for 2, anika lighted a candle at the center, it’s glow falling on anika making her look even more beautiful
Shivay walks in and completely forgets everything seeing anika, just drowns in her beauty.
Anika wakes him from his reverie and serves dinner to Shivay, this time she did not burn the paneer
Shivay stares at the paneer, but seeing Anika smilingly expecting him to eat, he tastes it, and it was nice so he starts eating.
Anika is so nervous as today she was going to confess her feelings to Shivay.
Just then Shivay gets a call, and gets tensed seeing the caller, excuses himself an goes out
Till then anika is completely prepared to express her love, as soon as Shivay comes she just blurts out in one breath
“Shivay, I love u so much, you have become my life and I can’t live without you, seeing you die I felt I will die too, I did not understand when I fell in love with you Billuji. Initially you were so rude to me that I hated you, but I still had feelings for you, as hate is also a deep feeling. Slowly the hate started dissolving seeing the way you love your family, your brothers, an finally that feeling became completely the opposite LOVE”
Shivay is too stunned to reply, and to top it all anika is just staring at him waiting for his reply
Anika: Shivay, at least say something.
Shivay ( in a completely angry tone) : Just because I married you to save my family reputation , does not mean you have become my wife, and we are going to get divorced in a few months, so what’s all this rubbish of love, and who the hell are you first of all, who are your parents, what is your origin. You were and you will always be street garbage for me, it was my mistake to bring road trash in my home, little kindness I showed you, you’re dreaming of becoming the mistress of this house
He sees tears flowing through anika eyes, and the deep hurt in them..and something inside him broke at that very moment
Shivay: From when did you start seeing dreams of this mansion, was this your intention all along, to trap me, the heir to Oberoi empire, as my mom was saying, Lots of money right.Once what I said that you are part of our family, you seem to have taken it too seriously, you can never become part of this family.Tia is the mother of my child, and my wife too.. you are no one. Now I feel that you must have tried to kill our child too, just so that u can achieve me
Anika: Stop it Shivay Singh Oberoi! I can understand if you say you don’t love me, but at least don’t blame me of such things, and how do you define what was going on between us from the past few days, were you not flirting with me?
Shivay: you’re not the first gal an you will surely not be the last with whom I have flirted anika.. But you’re the first gal who has taken it to be something else
Now tears were flowing more freely from her eyes. Shivay was just speechless. Something was twisting inside him, the pain was piercing him like knife.
Anika (wiping her tears) : I never loved any of your possessions Shivay , I just loved you as a person, thinking when you love your family an brothers so much, how much will you love me.But now I know. You are not capable of love. I pray to God that when you get your true love she goes away from you…
Anika just walks away from there
Shivay: your prayers are answered anika, My true love is walking away from me, you are walking away from me
Next day morning
Anika tells everyone she is leaving OM forever. Omru and everyone is shocked..
She gets her bags and ready to leave
Omru run to Shivay an tell him Anika is leaving..
Shivay: let her leave.,It’s her wish
Rudra(shocked) : but bhaiya..
Shivay: please go,I have a call to make,Saying he walks out
Omru try to stop anika but she walks out, she keeps moving at each step still hoping that Shivay will call her back, and tell her that he loves her but he does not come an she goes out of OM an out of his life..
Sometime later…
A car comes at a very fast pace and ends at the edge of a cliff
Shivay comes out of it an just stares for a while, And screams
Anikaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…
I love you
I love you so much,
And breaks down on his knees, and starts crying uncontrollabl
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Flashback:
When Shivay was having dinner he goes for the call, it was Mrs.Kapoor, she threatens him that if anika is not out of Oberoi mansion today, she will tell the truth to Omkara
Shivay: Anika you’re the love of my life, but see my misery, I could not even tell you that, in fact I had to insult you so much that you go away from me, I love u so much, but I know you are strong and will bounce back, but om is not strong enough, he will never be able to tolerate that he is illegitimate, an may attempt suicide again.. I can’t lose him… I am so sorry but
WE MET, ONLY TO BE SEPARATED
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Hope you guys liked it.. Please leave your comments,positive and negative both are welcome
55 Comments
Can u plc write a second part of this ppllzzzz just don’t end it I WANT TO SEE A HAPPY ENDING PLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
hi Pearl,
SO many times plz was not required.. i will surely write a 2nd part:)
Awesome…..very emotionally expressed. ….but pls write an epilogue
hi Safa,
Thanks a lot, i will come up with a 2nd part of this OS.. sooon
Lovely !!
Thanks Mansi 🙂
U made me cry dear…
HI Vincy,
Actually that was the intention of the OS, to understand the feelings and pain of shivika if and when they separate.. an sorry to make you cry, but its bcoz u felt their pain which i tried to express in words
Just can’t express how i felt……i don’t a word to say….tears are flowing continuously…..i got a big jerk within…. u nailed it dear……loved it……
HI Shivika,
Thanks a lot for such kind words.
Actually that was the intention of the OS, to understand the feelings and pain of shivika if and when they separate.. an sorry to make you cry, but its bcoz u felt their pain which i tried to express in words
Hi Shivika
I love bth, your n mine shivika 🙂
An I smiled seein ur joke, so keep jokin 🙂
Thank u so much fr ur lovely words.. writing is successful wen it touches the readers heart, n m glad it touched urs
Will come up with the sequel fr this asap
Love u tooo..
BTW loved ur dp .. shivika are awesome.. love them
U love that shivika or this shivika too……..haha….just kidding dear never mind my silly jokes…..and u no need to be sry for my tears as i m a bit sensitive and even i have my own world of imagine and able to imagine each and every situation…which make place in my heart……
Plzz do write more of that sort i just loved the os…..dear u srsly made it……and thnxx for the compliment on my dp…..
Love u
Nice
Thanks Aisha:)
This is not fare… Aj kal sab itna emotional stories kyu likh re h…. U people always make me cry… I think ye sari sab stories winter ki side effect h… Anyways it was awsm yr…??☺
hi Janvi,
my first OS was cmpletely dreamy, so i tght to go for an emotional in my 2nd OS.. just tryin diff flavors.. and thks 🙂
Fantastic…
Loved d emotions portrayed..
Thanks Tamanna 🙂
Wow…its damn good…plss continue…next one asap plss…❤
hi Sabhya,
Thanks 🙂 will try to come up with the next one ASAP
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Hi Ruksy,
Your emoji’s spoke a lot.. thks 🙂
Lovely
Thanks Lily:)
Superb…yaar ..justified the name…
Thanks Adhya:) i kept the title inline with the story
plz write and epilogue
plz reply that u will write epilouge or not????
hi Safaq,
I will come up with the 2nd part of tis OS asap
I am so sorry guys, i had typed it on word an copy pasted it from there.. did not realize it got pasted twice.. next time i post will make sure this mistake does not happen
If this OS made you cry then please do read my first OS , i m sure it will make u smile, below is the Link ,
http://www.tellyupdates.com/panikawill-mine-shivika-os/
An emotional one.. but beautiful one.
Thanks Manu:)
Plzzzzzz…..write the 2nd part….plzzzzz..it soooo emotional… U made me cry….i am still crying..
Hi Sneha,
Will surely come up with the 2nd part, an sorry to make you cry, but its bcoz u felt shivika pain if an when they get separated…which i tried to express in words
Archu
Show mein drama Kam tha kya..!! But no doubt, u did complete justice.
Thanks Lax, show ka thoda drama yaha le aayi:)
Beautiful one dr..so emotional.I loved the last one dr anika leaving and shivaay says ur wshes r answrd..too good dr..omg this kk and cc mom came here also..pls write the next one dr..dnt want any sad endng fr shivika..
Hi Sumi,
Thanks dear, will come up with a 2nd part of this.. an give a happy ending to shivika.. even i like only happy endings:)
It was so emotional. I literally cried yaar. Pls pls give it a happy ending. I know every ending is not happy. But shivika are attached to my heart. So it was very emotional for me.
Thanks Shalini,
Actually that was the intention of the OS, to understand the feelings and pain of shivika if and when they separate.. an sorry to make you cry, but its bcoz u felt their pain which i tried to express in words
And i will surely come with a 2nd part of this OS, n give a hppy ending to shivika as they are very close to my heart as well:)
nyz dr. so emotional..next os mein chudale ki mom ko include math karna archu its ma repuest.show mein be shivika ka beech mei aatha hai idhar be.
Thanks Priya:) next OS no villians.. pinky promise
Awesome…
Thanks Ankita 🙂
Nice
Thanks SSO:)
Its superbbb….write an epilogue…..
Thanks Bhavana,
i will come up with a 2nd part of this OS
Awsome….sorry 4 late comment
hi San,
why sorry dear,.. thks for commentin:)
archu anika wala pinky promise hena… You are very nice i really enjoy ur comments and os .
Yes dear Anika n sahil n now Shivay wala pinky promise.. No villains in next episode.. An thanks a lot for the compliment ❤
hey I’m very sorry for being late..
and i know i don’t have to tell u that how big late latif I’m..??
coming to the os this was mind blowing…
at short of words…
u know u penned it down with delicacy..
i hope u must have submitted next episode..
as i read in comments that u r gonna continue it..
I’m looking forward for that..
bcoz personally i hate sad ending..
but as i said earlier u have surprised me with ur writing skill…
so i hate sad end but i love ur work..
& i love u too my sweet archu…??
No need of sorry dear.. Thank you so much for ur lovely words.. Next part I m yet to start.. Will let u know once I submit it
I hate sad endings too.. So will give a happy ending
Love u too my dear lots?❤❤?