PART-8
Hello everyone,this is Tanz back with part-8 of my ff. Thank you everyone for all your support . So,let’s start with the next part,…….
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Recap : A small conversation between Annika and Om .Shivaay tells Annika that he will be dropping her home.
Annika and Shivaay reach the parking of OM . Shivaay seats himself in the driver’s seat and Annika is going to sit in the back seat when Shivaay tells her to sit beside him , in the front seat .They leave from Oberoi mansion .On the way , Shivaay plays an English song . For some time Annika remains quiet but she being Annika cannot be like that for long .
Annika :”Billuji can’t you play some other song .”
Shivaay changes the song to another English song .
Annika(irritated) :” Billuji , I meant to say can’t you play another HINDI song” literally shouting the word ‘hindi’.
Shivaay :”I don’t have any hindi song at the moment so you have to listen to this only “
Annika , hearing this gets more irritated.She takes out the pendrive from the USB port and throws it out of the half-open window . Shivaay is confused and is trying to figure out what just happened .
Shivaay :”What did you just do Annika?”
Annika(with a victorious smile):”Didn’t you see what I did ?I threw the pendrive out of the window. I think you should get your Kanji eyes checked by a doctor .”
Shivaay :”And I think you should get your brain checked by a doctor . I can’t even imagine what they would find in it. And why do you always use such strange words Annika? ”
Annika (almost inaudible):”Atleast I’m not a tadibaaz like you….”
Shivaay :”Did you say something Annika?”
Annika : “No Billuji . I said nothing ……By the way I won the challenge.”
Shivaay :”Which Challenge?”
Annika : “OhO , Billuji you are great . First you give a challenge and then forget about it. I’m talking about the challenge you gave me in your office .”
Shivaay :”Oh, you are talking about that challenge . Yes , you won the challenge and you organized everything perfectly today .And I’ll keep my promise . Now, you are the event organizer of OM. We’ll do the paper work tomorrow when you’ll come to the mansion . Reach there at sharp 9 . I don’t like late people . Okay?
Annika :”Okay Billuji , I’ll reach on time . From here I’ll go on my own. Your car can not go any further . Thank you for dropping me . “
Shivaay :”Okay Annika.Take care.”
Annika :”Yes . you too.”
Annika got down from the car and giving a smile to Shivaay. She went towards her house which was in the narrow street . Shivaay too went back to OM .When Annika entered her house, she saw Saahil sitting on the dining table .She went and sat beside him .Both sat like that for some time . Then, Saahil turned towards her and raised his eyebrows .
Annika :”What?”
Saahil : “Annika didi you forgot about the promise…”
Annika :”What promise Saahil?”
Saahil :”You promised to tell me something…..when you called in the evening….Remember ?”
Annika :”Yes , Saahil I remember it but first tell me Did you eat anything ?”
Saahil’s silence gave Annika her answer .
Annika :”Saahil how many times I have told you .Whenever I get late , eat food on your own but you don’t understand .”
Saahil :”But I don’t like to eat without you…”
Annika :”Ok leave it. Come, We both will have our dinner in your room . Then, I’ll tell you everything .Did Maa have her dinner ?”
Saahil :”She had her dinner 2 hrs before and now she is sleeping .Why do you care so much about that lady?”
Annika :”Because she is your mother Saahil . You should also care for her .”
After this, they both went to Saahil’s room .They both had their dinner and after that they started chatting . Saahil told her about his day at school and Annika told him about the great ‘SSO’. There was nothing that was not known to either of the two . They shared everything with each other, the joys and the sorrows . When Saahil was fast asleep , Annika carefully placed a blanket on him and came to her own room. She changed to her night clothes and lies down on her bed .Annika is thinking something,
Annika : “ Billuji is really a good person by heart . I know he shows tadi but still he is a nice person. He could have rejected me for that job after what I had said the last night , but he didn’t . And his family members are so nice .
Pinky aunty took so much care of me as if I were her own daughter . All of them had so much love among one another .Billuji is so lucky to have such a family . But Annika tomorrow you have to talk about the money for Saahil’s operation. You cannot waste so much time . I don’t know how will Billuji react. I just hope he agrees for it .”
She soon falls asleep being tired of the day’s work.
Here , in OM Shivaay is also lying on his bed and thinking something .
Shivaay :”I knew Annika would win the challenge . But it was necessary because she would not have accepted this job without any reason . Tomorrow morning I’ll give her the money for her brother’s operation.
She called me Billu but I wasn’t irritated much by it . How is that possible ? Shivaay you have to find out the reason for this change in you.”
While thinking of possible reasons for this change in himself , he too fell asleep . Both of them had an important day tomorrow . Tomorrow would a milestone in both of their lives .
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So, I’m done with this part too .I hope you liked it . I forgot to tell one thing yesterday ,i.e. I don’t want Pinky to be a grey character, Jaya is enough for that role .So that is the reason I portrayed Pinky this way.
Please do comment if you can.
Regards,
Tanz.
48 Comments
ya thanx for givig pinky a good role !!!!!!! 😉
amazing part,//////
post asap…..
tc…..
Thanks a lot Pooja . I’ll update soon
Loved it ?
Thanks Aryaraju
Anyway Tanz actually I luved ur way of portraying Pinky’s character becoz , our Anika didi is already suffering a lot so she deserves this motherly care frm pinky which these cvcs r ruining..
Yes Haridhra,I totally agree with you.Pinky can be a very good character but the CVs…btw thanks for commenting
As usual Shivika! They can’t change… But Shivaay is sweet n good in ur ff.
Epi is very good…. AniHil bond is sooo cute! Waiting for next part.
Yes as usual?Yeah Shivaay in my ff gives up easily…. thanks Gayathri. I’ll update soon
Awesome as always!!
Thank you so much Bhavana
Shivaay ban gaya chauuffer for Anika..cool. Love Shivika scenes…..This Anika likes to breaks things ..haha. I love this different and cute version of Shivaay ..Great. To sum up all fantastic!
Thanks a lot Neha Di.In a moving car she couldn’t do anything else other than throwing it….If the car wasn’t moving, I am sure she would have done something which no one could think of….poor Pendrive??
Lovely update. I thoroughly enjoyed reading all of it. I liked how both Anika and Shivaay were thinking of same things but from their own point of view. And thank God there is only one negative character ?I like it that Pinky is good here, not the bipolar one in real IB.?
Thanks Diyaa di . Even I am fed with Pinky’s character in real IB …but who listens to us fans?
Fabulous dear❤
Thanks Sam
Awsome………
Thanks Banita
It was soo nice tanz. And thanks pinky ko positive rakne kliye,because ib main toh uske dimaag ka oh my mata hogaya hain. Anika ne bht acha kia pendrive ko phek diya.??????. Episode was awesome
And update soon????
Thank you Sanskriti… Don’t worry idhar mai Pinky ke dimaag ki oh my Masta nahi gone dungi??
very nice tanz i was a regular reader of ur ff its tooooooooo gooood keep writing im very excited fr the next art keep writing 😀
Thanks a lot Shab.I’ll keep writing and you keep reading, not only this .?
Awesome….
Loved d Shivika scenes…
waiting fr d nxt… 🙂
Thanks a lot Shivika
It was lovely and I lived everyone today. But it is cheating. How can you write only this much when yiu know I can never get enough of your episode. Post soon.
Oh Archisha, I am really sorry for cheating?…… thanks a lot for your comment …..
Asum part
Thanks Alekhika
Hey tanz , awesome episode, thank God that u made pinky a positive character, shivika were as usual khidki todh ??
Thank you Dhar.
Awesome…..loved it
Thank you so much Niriha
Superb dr waiting for next post do post soon….
Thanks a lot Arthi
It is lovely update dear…
Thank you Nikita
Awesome…waiting for the next…
Thanks zaveesha
Tanz super duper awesome update.
Really made me happy.
Also it acted as a stress buster.
Update soon☺
Thank you Jerry?
Awesome
Thanks Ankita
Tanz it’s me AHSANA .sorry for late comment .Iam not well. That’s why I not read your ff yesterday .Today I read your ff ,its was an awesome episode dear.I like shivika’s conversation during their car journey. And anika started her habit of breaking things when she is angry.I like anika and sahil ‘s bond being an step brother and sister they love each other as real sister and brother. They shared everything with each other their sorrows and joys .After the suffering s from her step MOTHER still she care for her.she was very innocence . And finally anika win the challenge and get the job of event manager of OM. Shivay know that anika don’t accept his offer without any reason.And anika accepted that billuji is really good person by heart and he shows his tadi but he is nice man too. Both anika and shivay knows each other in these short time .anika waiting to tomorrow for asking shivay’s help in her brother’s operation and shivay waiting to tomorrow for helping anika in her brother’s operation. They don’t know about what would happen in their life in future. Iam waiting for your next episode update soon…..
Thanks a lot Ahsana.Please take care of your health dear.and it’s so good that you registered…..I have submitted the next part, I hope it’s posted soon
Tanz it was just amazing waiting for the next post soon please..
Thanks a lot Savera Di?
Superb
Thanks fffan