(previous parts here)
Part-20
Hello everyone, this is Tanz back with Part-20 of my ff. I know I’m terribly late and I’m really sorry for that…ok now without further ado, I’ll start straightaway and if you have some time to spare,do read the author’s note at the end.
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Recap- Annika tells about her feelings to Shivaay but it turns out that Shivaay was talking to his employee over Bluetooth and doesn’t hear her confession. Moreover, he asks her to bring sandwiches to the terrace which further raises her anger.
—Picnic spot—
All the youngsters are busy playing cricket, Saahil has become the umpire after much pleadings of Jaya but on the condition that they’ll again go for a picnic after his recovery from the operation and all readily agree. Jaya and Jhanvi have gone for a walk around the area.Shakti and Tej are standing in a corner, sometimes talking to each other and sometimes watching them play. Daadi and Pinky are sitting on the chair kept nearby and Pinky is continuously looking at her phone as if waiting for a call. Getting agitated, Daadi speaks out,
Daadi:”Stop it now Pinky…how many times will you look at that phone…. what’s so important in that phone than our children?”
Pinky:”I’m really sorry mummy ji for disturbing you…Yes, our children are very important that’s why I was waiting for Shivaay’s call….he said he would….May I call him…”
Daadi:”No need to disturb them Pinky puttar…. Moreover, I don’t think they’ll come (she smiles)”
Pinky(confused):”Huh?….Why won’t they?”
Rudra comes there to drink water and listening to their conversation,interjects in between,
Rudra:”Because Shivaay bhaiya is going to propose Annika Di…..or….maybe Annika Di will propose to bhaiya (Scratching his head)….ummm….. we’ll Exactly know that later….”
Pinky:”What?”
Daadi:”Yes puttar, if God wishes….your wish to see your son getting married will be fulfilled soon..”
Pinky(surprised and delighted):”Oh my Maata….. this is a great news…..I had always loved their pair and deep in my heart,I knew they were meant for each other…. I just can’t express my happiness….”
Rudra:”But choti maa…. your ‘Oh my Maata’ just did….”(saying so he runs away)
Pinky:”Rudra….such a naughty child he is….. I’ll be the Luckiest mother in law to get Annika as my daughter in law…. she’s more like my daughter….See mummy ji now I have both a son and a daughter, just what I had wished for always…. Now I just can’t wait to go home..”
Daadi:”Yeah…..me too”
—-Oberoi Mansion—-
Annika was disappointed and also angry due to the turn of events.What all she had thought! But the one whom had to hear her confession was busy with his phone.Dejected, she decided to propose him some other day because it would be quite impossible for her with such a gloomy face. With the plate of Sandwiches in her hands and with a lot of not-so-good thoughts going on in her mind,she finally reached the entrance of the terrace. To her surprise, she found that all the lights were switched off and there was complete darkness(please note that Oberoi Mansion was more like a penthouse and the terrace was mostly covered.The areas which were not ,were covered by thick curtains which did not allow the sunlight to enter,so it was pretty much dark).
Annika called out ,”Shivaay,are you in there?”” Come inside”came the response. It was Shivaay’s voice. Although she’s afraid of darkness,she mustered up her courage and started entering through the entrance.She knew her Shivaay was nearby and wouldn’t let anything happen to her.But at the same time,she was confused too,”Why on earth would Shivaay be inside this dark place?”she thought to herself.
While she was trying to walk without colliding with anything in the darkness, she could smell lilies, the white ones ,her favourite.But in the darkness she could hardly think of anything good.Suddenly, some fairy lights,white and golden in colour, started twinkling on the side walls. At first, she was a little relieved to get rid of the darkness, although the amount of light which those fairy lights gave were meagre but more than enough to make her feel a little bit comfortable.Then, before she could think more about it,she heard a voice,a voice she knew too well.
Voice:”So the day has finally come…our day…”
Annika knew it was Shivaay’s voice but he could not be seen anywhere.She could not understand what was happening.
Shivaay (continued):”You remember Annika, the day we first met…it will always be the most memorable day of my life…well not because you were going to give your life ,but because that was the day when we first met each other….The first meet was not really great,infact it was one full of tadi,as you say. Even then, I had a feeling that there was something that connected us, some thing that would again bring us together , that’s why I asked Khanna to know about your condition. I always felt drawn towards you, from the inside, but I could not decipher this feeling. This feeling,such a wonderful feeling, whenever I see you my heart is filled with delight, whenever I talk to you, your sweet and pleasant voice keeps ringing in my ears and it so melodious… Although I keep scolding you for using the language which you use, such Ajeeb words, but now I’ve started enjoying that too.Ok but that doesn’t mean you keep using such words in future too…only sometimes. We fight a lot, don’t we?But you know what, it’s a secret…. don’t tell anyone else…. I love to fight with you because when you’re angry, your face turns red… like a tomato and you look so cute. I continue fighting with you just to see that face…”
Annika (totally confused.In a state of fear, disappointment and anger her brain’s processing has become really slow…so she’s unable to grasp the facts quickly):”but ..why are you….”
Shivaay (continues):”Shhh….just keep listening and give your answer at the end…So yes, I was describing that good vibe I get being around you. But … I’m getting short of words to describe that feeling…. I know you can understand my feelings by just looking at my Kanji eyes….and so I I’ll leave the rest of it to you.Earlier, I wasn’t sure if you felt the same for me but now I am sure and I won’t delay it anymore because from the day I met you,my world truly changed,I changed…So Annika will you please turn back…”
Annika slowly turns back and she’s surprised to see the fairy lights which were now just infront of her. They were arranged in the form of some words and it read,”I LOVE YOU”… while she was admiring it’s beauty she saw that someone was sitting just in front of her,on his knees. Yes, it was Shivaay,her Shivaay…. sitting on one of his knees with some lilies in his hand and a small box in another, smiling sheepishly at Annika…who was trying hard to put two and two together…. and the picture was slowly and gradually becoming clearer in her head…
Annika:”Shivaay,Why…”
Shivaay:”so many why’s….shhh….just listen….ok?(Annika nods her head )So , Miss Annika…. I, Shivaay am in love with you,deeply and madly. I know it’s quite difficult for people to handle us but we can handle each other perfectly.I assure you that I’ll stand with you in every phase of our lives, happy or sad. So,Will you become the wife of this Tadibaaz Baghad Billa ?”
Annika goes in a repeat telecast mode to just confirm whatever she had heard was correct or it was just her wild imagination. When she confirms that whatever she heard was correct,she becomes numb for a moment.She just keeps staring the fairy lights and then Shivaay and so it goes till Shivaay interrupts her thoughts…
Shivaay:”Annika, please do consider that I’m sitting here on my knees and it has started to pain… Please come out of your Dreamland and tell me what’s your answer….”
Annika:”Huh?”
Shivaay:”Answer Annika…. I proposed you just now, remember?”
Annika:”Yes.”
Shivaay:”Yes for?”
Annika (wiping her tears that had made their way through her eyes):”Yes, I’m ready to handle this Tadibaaz Baghad Billa for the rest of my life….I love you too Shivaay, deeply and madly.”
Shivaay jumps on his feet and moves forward to hug her.She reciprocates the hug.
Shivaay:”Thank God you said yes….you know my knees were really paining….”
Annika breaks the hug and hits him on his chest lightly.
Shivaay:”Ouch…Ok Ok.. I’m sorry… I was just joking…by the way I forgot to give you these….(he hands over the lilies to her)”
Annika(after smelling them):”Aahh… wonderful! Lilies…. you’re smart….”
Shivaay:”Why? Did you have any doubt about it earlier?”
Annika:”No.None at all.”
They both start laughing.
Shivaay:”Oh yeah, one more thing… close your eyes…”
Annika:”But why ? what’s left now?”
Shivaay:”Just close your eyes and no cheating ok?”
Annika first closes her eyes partially but then Shivaay makes her close them fully.He then takes her delicate hand into his’ and slides a ring down her ring finger.
Shivaay:”You can open your eyes now…”
Annika opens her eyes and looks at the ring.
Annika:”It’s so beautiful Shivaay…but there was really no need for such a costly ring….”
Shivaay:”While I was selecting it, I didn’t see it’s cost Annika….but it’s design… I was looking for a design which you would like and then it would not have mattered if it cost me 40,000 or 4 lakhs, I would have bought it anyway…So don’t worry about the price just think about the feelings associated with it.”
Annika:”Ofcourse, I value those feelings a lot…. What you have done for me till date is just….. I can’t even describe it in words….Thank you so much for everything…”
Shivaay:”See, you again started crying.You promised me that you’ll not cry anymore….”
Annika:”These are the tears of joy Shivaay… I can’t control them…they come on their own….but Ok I’ll wipe them….”
Before Annika could wipe her tears, Shivaay wipes them with his hands.He cups her face in his hand and then kisses her forehead and then again draws her into a hug.She doesn’t hesitate.
Shivaay (after a couple of moments):”By the way, I am hungry… aren’t you too?”
Annika nods her head and then they both look at the sandwiches kept on a table just a feet away from them.
Annika and Shivaay (together):”Sandwiches…. let’s eat….”
Then they take the plate to a table which has chairs kept close to it. Shivaay removes the curtains to let some light enter and then they sit down eating.They talk to each other on various topics and then Shivaay let’s the cat out of the bag.
Shivaay (while eating):”By the way… your proposal was equally good.”
Annika(almost instinctively):”Yeah, I know…but you didn’t lis……(after thinking about it)…wait wait wait… how do you know that I proposed you? That means you listened to all of it and pretended as if you heard nothing….Am I right?”
Shivaay:”Umm…let me explain…”
Annika (in a taunting tone):”Yes….you should…”
Shivaay:”Actually…. when you came, I had no idea that you were going to propose.You asked me not to turn so I decided to play a prank on…..but then as you started speaking out your feelings, I had already taken the act half-way….. and you know,the happiness you got after being dejected was just priceless… your face,it was beaming.”
Annika:”Yeah , that’s kind of true… I wouldn’t have been this much happy if you had accepted my proposal….but you know I could have suffered from high BP , my anger knew no bounds then. Also, I was quite angry on Mishra ji…. when it was not even his fault….”
Shivaay:”I’m really sorry for this… I really didn’t intend to hurt you.”
Annika:”I know Shivaay….but if we see technically… I’m the first one to propose….”
Shivaay:”That you are…..”
Annika(with a concerned look):”But there’s a small problem… ”
Shivaay: “And what’s that?”
Annika: “I haven’t made you wear a ring…as you did……It’s all your fault..you should have told me earlier that you were going to propose to me and I would have been prepared…”
Shivaay (laughing): “You’re worried for such a small thing… Do you think our family would settle for an engagement that they haven’t witnessed… Don’t you worry ,you’ll have ample time to select a ring for me….because this was just a kind of practice engagement….”
Annika: “OK then…we’ll engage within 2 weeks …what say?”
Shivaay: “Your wish,my command…”
Annika: “Ohho ,So Shivaay Singh Oberoi does obey someone else’s commands…that’s quite interesting…”
Shivaay: “Well I do things which profit me…”
Annika: “And what’s the profit in this?”
Shivaay: “Hmm…(going close to her)…what Profit you ask……(He kisses Annika on her cheek)..this is my profit, see you’re blushing and you look so cute…”
Annika: “You….(she pushes him away and runs towards the staircase and then turns towards him)….. Well Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi,you’re not going to get this profit easily.”
Saying so Annika departs from there and Shivaay too follows her. They spend the whole day with each other,sometimes embracing each other,sometimes just staring at each other and sometimes just talking about random topics. It seems that both of them just want to be in each other’s company and why wouldn’t they? All the doubts and second thoughts have vanished now. Now, they are free to express their love for each other. The connection which they share is something divine and blissful.
They didn’t realize when time passed . The rest of the family members returned home an hour before dinner time. The hall was made to look like a conference room, Shivaay and Annika in between and the rest,sitting in a circle around them,carefully listening to their tale of Love,more precisely the proposal part. It was unanimously decided that the engagement would be done a week before Saahil’s operation and the rest of the functions after that. All were equally Happy and excited and it was decided that Annika and her family would spend the night in OM.
Days passed and the day of the wedding finally came. Saahil’s operation had been a success and he was able to walk without any support. The wedding was grand.Finally, Shivaay and Annika’s relationship was given an official green flag.
——–After 8 years——-
Annika is peacefully sleeping on the bed. A girl of around 6 years,comes and sits on the bed near her.
Girl:”Mumma get up now….else you’ll be late…get up na…(she tries to shake her with hands but there was no use)”
Annika (in a sleepy tone):”Vaani ….just 5 more minutes…. I’ll wake up after that…promise.”
Vaani turns to look at her Dad,Shivaay and then they share their usual morning expressions. Then,Shivaay’s lips curve in the form of a smirk. Vaani understands what her Dad is up to and gets down from the bed to watch the show.
Shivaay goes towards Annika and shakes her vigorously leading her to get up with a jolt.
Annika(without realising where she is): “Earthquake….. It’s an earthquake… Vaani…Shivaay…. Move out of of the house fast,I’ll inform the rest…”
Vaani:”There was no earthquake Mumma…”
Annika (wide awake now):”No….Vaani there was…”
Shivaay: “Not an earthquake….. It was the work done to wake up a KumbhKaran….”
Annika: “Oh…so it was you Shivaay…. You both father and daughter will make me go mad someday……”
Shivaay: “Annika do you have any idea what time is it?”
Annika: “What?”
Vaani:”It’s already 8am Mumma….we have to reach the school for the interview by 9 and then you have to go for your work….”
Annika: “Oh Bete ki!I’m so late….I’ll just get ready….”
Saying so she moves towards the bathroom with the speed of light.Seeing this,both Vaani and Shivaay laugh.Shivaay then picks up Vaani in his hands and takes her to have breakfast. Vaani had the eyes of her father,kanji eyes, and her temperament was just like her mother,bubbly and lively.She was in fact a combination of the best of the traits of her parents and with a lot of Tadi .
Once,Annika was ready,the three of them left for the school. The principal interviewed Vaani and she was quite impressed by Vaani. Vaani was selected for being admitted in the school. While returning, Vaani fell asleep in the car.
Annika: “She looks so cute while sleeping, doesn’t she?”
Shivaay: “Yes,and the same is true for her mother too…”
Annika: “Come on Shivaay…. (After a couple of minutes)….Shivaay, do you remember I told you that we were going to be great parents….”
Shivaay: “Yes,I do..”
Annika: “I think today we have proved that…”
Shivaay: “This is just the beginning Mrs.Oberoi…..there’s a long road ahead….”
They look at each other and then at Vaani and smile. There might be a long road ahead but as long as they are together, it won’t seem to be long.
******THE END******
Pheww(sigh of relief)… So here it ends. These 20 parts of my ff were a great journey for me….with all of you. I am greatly thankful to all my readers, silent as well as those who comment. By the end of it, I’ve found some really great friends,sisters and a bro-yaar too..
I express my heartfelt gratitude to all those mentioned bellow and also to the the silent readers whom I don’t know–
Diyaa Di,Pooja,Anagha,Savera Di, Sam(AMkiDeewani),Vedika(Jerry),Shivani(Sanskriti aka my bro-yaar),Gayathri,Seth,Sara,Sofiya,Pari, AryaRaju,Ahsana Di,Bhavna,Shabana,Arpita,Niriha,Arthi,Haridhra, Alekhika,Nikita,Shivika,Zaveesha,Ankita, Neha Di(Neha-17),dwet,Sumitha Di,Lisaaa,Ahlada,Banita,Madhuani,Manya,Sagithya,Dhar,Archisha,Kanfi Di,Yvonne Codner,Nita D,Sairan,Aashi,fffan,Ashlyn.G,Ishita,SMC,Naina,Madhu.r,Rusky,Lilly,Qwertt,Vivikhta,Amayaa,Akshaya,Naira,Ahaana,Shuklarashi,Satyam,Simrat,Vincy,Aradana and last but not least Astha Di(Astha_Reddy).I’m really sorry if I forgot someone.
I would love if you all would comment,even the silent readers, and let me know about your views for my ff. If you want to ask me anything, related to the ff or related to me,feel free to ask. I’m going to reply to each and every comment.
Loads of Love for all of you❤
Regards,
Tanz.
48 Comments
hayyeee!!!!!!!! adorable shivika 😉 😉
proposal is great one 😉
lovely……..
beautifylly written,……
gonna miss ff !!!!!!!
do come soon with another ff !!!!!
bubuye ……..
Thank you so much Pooja ?????I’m really happy that you have been one of my consistent readers…. I’m glad that you liked the proposal… I’m also going to miss you ❤
I’ll try to come back but not sure if I would…take care ?
It was just fab,superb and awesome.do comeback with a bang
This ff was amazing
I have read it from the starting but not commented, sorry for that
Take care and do your studies well
Lots of love
Mona
Thank you so much Mona…. Your comment really means a lot.No need to say sorry, I really appreciate it that you decided to comment today…. Thanks for I’ll try my level best to study well…
Lots of love for you as well ❤
Tanz dear, it was really a very beautiful Ff…without vilians it was sooo sweet….i really love this…and i am glad ki you remember me….hipe you will back with another work..til then byy….
Good luck my frnd .
Thank you so much Arpita ? Yes, there’s not always a villain to spoil things… sometimes we ourselves are enough…I just wanted to it be more realistic… Thanks again for your well wishes ? I’ll try to come back….
Take care ?
heyy di…
I’m sooooo happy after reading this
you wrote it that much beautifully
like I’m…I’m having no words to praise you
I truly loveddd it
well…i know I’m too late but can I have the link to all your parts ..i have read a few quite early but that time I was a silent reader and then the track was out …
I wanna read further so pls if you can provide me with the links
LOTS of love
SAIRISH
Hey Sairish….Thank you so much dear? All this really means a lot to me…. It’s actually the source of my motivation to write….
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/11159/?profiletab=posts
Here you go…all the parts will be in here…
Thanks again ?
And love you too ❤
I’m happy to see your ff drrr……
It was beyond words …….
The love confession was khidkitod yaar
I do think that shivaay hear anika’s confession ????
From the 1 st to last part it was an interesting story of shivika……
I like kumbhkaran anika and the way shivaay and vani make her wake up it like a funny part…..
I love it to the core drrr……
Come with new ff dr and that too soonnnn……
Love u drrr…….
Thank you so much Sumitha Di for being a consistent reader of my ff… I’m so glad that you found my story interesting…Yeah you guessed it right! Shivaay did hear her confession ?
Kumbhkaran Annika is definitely a treat to watch…
Thanks again for all your support ?
I’ll try to come back soon…
Take care Di ?
Amazing Update!
Lovely Ending ❤
Such a cute proposal & beautifully written ?
Loved the convo at the end with their daughter
Keep Writing!
Lots of love?
Thank you so so much Shivika for being a constant support ?… Your every comment was really valuable for me…. I’m glad you liked the ending.
Thanks again ?
Lots of love from my side too ❤
Lovely Ending Dear ❤
Such an amazing proposal ?
They are so adorable ?
Had been a silent reader but read all your chappies!
Keep Writing !
Thanks a lot Aparna ? I’m glad that you liked my ff… I’ll definitely try to keep writing….
Take care ?
It is awesome dear… So lovely… Love you dear… Come soon…
Thank you sooo much Nikita? for being one of my regular readers….and also a very happy birthday to you ??…
I’m glad I’m replying late…. atleast I could wish you ??
Take care ?
Loved it
Thanks a lot Lisaaa ?…. You too have been one of my regular readers and I really appreciate it…. I’m glad you liked it ?
Take care dear ?
Awesome fabulous no words to say dear loved it to the core ????….shivay proposal was so cute?lovely ending come back soon with ur another ff..
Love you ????Take care
Thank you so so much Niriha ? I’m really grateful that you have supported me throughout this journey…. I’m glad you liked the ending and the proposal ???
I’ll try to come back with another one…
Take care ?
And Love you too ❤
Hey tanz?…
That was such a cute update ??….
Awwwww …my lovely shivika ???…
Their proposal was so adorable…..
I m really sad that this is the last chapter…
I would really miss this ff as it is one of my favorite ❤…..
You are a great writer tanz, and I want you to come back with an Awesome Blockbuster Shivika ff , Will you???…
Stay blessed ??…
Come soon ?…
Hey Sofiya ☺☺…. Thanks for such a lovely comment dear….and I’ll really miss you and your comments…. It’s really great that my ff is one of your favorites….??
I’m not very sure about my comeback… because there’s a lot of study pressure building up….. Nevertheless I’ll try my level best ?
Thanks again ?
Love you ❤
Osammmm Tanz sissy.
I loved it.
Proposal was great.
Tadibaaz Shivika:*:*:*
totally loved it.
Thanks a lot Fenil Bhaiya ? I’m really happy that you commented and more that you liked it ?
Love you ❤
awesome
Will miss you
Please be back soon
Oh Thanks a lot Aashi ?? for always being there and for always supporting me… I’ll miss you too ❤ and I’ll definitely try to be back soon ?
Take care ?
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
lovelyy
blisful
fantastic
wounderful
amazing
mind-blowing
no words
cant express
come back soon
What do I say Shabana…. reading your comment again just made my terrible day a little better…..Thank you soooooo much dear ?
I’ll try to be back soon ?
Love you ❤
Amazing ff
Gonna miss it
plsssssssss come up with a new one soon
luv u
Thanks a lot Shanaya… I’ll try to be back soon ?
Take care dear ?
Hey Tanz ❣
Such a khidkhithod ending. I loved it
. Your ff have many cute elements..IAM going to miss it. Do come back with another one.
Accept my well wishes to you as you climb such mind-blowing artistic works.
Will miss this ff.
Love ya❤
Hey Anagha ? Thanks a lot dear? I’m glad you liked it ? and I’m going to miss you….Yeah sure,well wishes are always welcome ?
Love you too ❤
Fantabulous I will miss this one❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thanks a lot my dear Sam ? nd I’ll miss your comments….
Take care ?
Love you ❤
Beautiful ending
Thank you so much Alekhika ? and also a big thanks for being a regular readers of my ff..
Take care ?
Tanzeela, now what should I say ? Tell me yaar. I mean you have done your job and made me speechless, but now how would I write about the Incredibly awesome chapter that you have written. I know you are in tenth and I still did not called you Di, because Tanz word looked kind of cute to me and adding the world Di, would have lost its charm. I hope you forgive me Tanzeela Di. The chapter, uff what to say about that its so beautiful, awesomely written and portrayed and just spectacular. Words are lacking and I don’t know what to type. You always give me long, alluring kinda comments and I am not used to that but still I will try my best to. Everything was beyond pretty. I loved the small cute cute se elements that you included. Shivaay is such a dusht one no, he made a serious pappu of Anika. There she was trying her level best by mustering all the courage and Shivaay ji toh…well the proposal was unique in its own way. Shivaay ki knees, awww that was such a cheesy line he gave. The best part was the profit one. And yeah as Shivaay Singh Oberoi is the great business man how could be make a deal without a profit ! Shivaay is just jaan <3 And yeah let me tell ya, you have inspired me a lot to write. Every time you post a chapter, I never expect one to pop, because its just like a surprise. Through this story you have also earned the title of being the late lateef in posting the updates, but nevertheless they are worth wait dear. Thank you so much for sparing your time and writing this story with so much cuteness and making us dissolve in the same. This story had turned millions of frowns into a smiling beaming face. You are an INSIPIRATION. I love you so much that I cannot even tell you. Do come back with more of your works. One more suggestion if you will write on Wattpad, it may help you to improve more as a writer, I was recommend by Sana for this and indeed it has been a boon. You too try, if you have time. Love ya…will be waiting for you with another story. P.S.: Try to ignore the grammatical mistakes❤
Finally!! So miss late lateef(me) is again late to reply… I’m sorry… studies you know ?
Thank you so much Vedu(is it ok if I call you Vedu?) For such an amazing comment…. Everytime I read it, I am just in my awwww mode…. Well I’m in 11th(actually half-way through 11th)….yaar ek Baar board exam kaafi tha?…. and my brother is almost just the same age as you, he has never ever in his life called me Di…..so I’m kind of okay with that….
And yeah I kept my username as Tanz because I too found it cute and unique and it’s kind of a nickname for my real name….so the gist is you can call me whatever you want…. totally upto you ?
I’m glad that you liked this part… Those comments come right from my heart and your comment has also touched my heart?
I kept the proposal part quite simple coz I couldn’t think of something better and I was quite amazed to see that in IB too Shivaay proposed on his knees….. great coincidence ?
I feel it to be an achievement that I’m an inspiration for someone…..though here the surprising thing is I inspire you to write when I’m not much of a writer myself…. Nevertheless I’ll take the compliment???
It’s said that actions speak louder than words but in our case, your words speak louder enough to let me know how much you love me and I love you too ❤
I’m already on wattpad…. one day I was whiling away my time and then I made an I’d on wattpad to see what’s in that….but since then I’ve checked it twice…. I don’t get any time…. moreover I don’t even remember my password now… I only remember the username…..
I never tried writing something when I had time….. now it’s quite impossible for me to devote time to that….. Maybe I’ll start writing again once I’m through with 12th…..but yeah I’ll try to write some one shots till the end of September…
Bye for now ? and yeah keep sending me links for your works… I’ll love to read them…
Take care ?
And loads of love from my side ❤
Fantastic ff dr….
Perfect ending…. Totally luv d ff….
Waiting 4 ur nxt work cme back with another khidkitode ff….
Till then bye… Tc…
Thank you so much Banita ?
I really appreciate your support for my ff and I am glad that you liked it ?
I’ll try my best….
Byee
Take care ?
This is awesome….the proposal was magical…..loved it….it was fun reading the whole ff…..
Come back with another one soon….
Take care…
Thanks a lot Nita ? Its completion wouldn’t have been possible without all of my readers support so the credit for its success goes to you too ?
I’ll try to be back soon ?
Bye for now
Take care ?
Wow very nice…. amazing… awesome…
Do come back soon…
Best wishes
Wow!!! Such a beautiful proposal yaar…Shivaay nailed it. But Anika’s proposal also great one. Loved it. Then Shivika’s life after a leap….awwwww!! Vaani…first time, I read different name other than Shivika, Ansh, Anshi…etc. Good name dear. I m gonna miss this ff!! Come back soon dear.
Take care n keep smiling!!
Beautiful update… loved it… Wonderful preposal… Happy n perfect ending…. take care dear…
Sorry for the late response tanz I was badly suffering from fever
Btw coming to the chapter it was awesome as previous I’m literally begging you that please come soon with the new story please please please until bye bye take care
And yes please come veryyy soooon I really love your work :))♡♥♡♥♡
Scroll karte hue bhagwaan se ek hee prarthana Ji thi Ji comment box phirse time line Ji wajah se gayab na hojaye!
Pheww! Mil gaya comment box! Ya ya ! Late hoon! Mujhe tum ek din punishment do! Tab jaake thodi sudhar paungi!.
And coming to epi!
Yaaarrr! Ek dum fairy tail proposal tha! Matlab kamaal hee hogaya!
Shivaay’s confession was cutessshhhhhtttt seriously I was imagining anika’s face all the while! Seriously I can imagine her face to be- little afraid(due to darkness),little relief(as soon as those fairylights lighted),little innocence(as she wasn’t understanding the situation), ATLAST lhushi ke aasu!……
Ab main kya kahu! Sirf ek hee scene main Itne highlights hain toh! Puuuuuureeeeee epi ko tho tune khidkithod likha hain!
Naam roshan karwadiya yaar apan ka!
And shivaay’s proposal was just! Damn I’m at loss of words!
And the most unexpected reaction was of Pinky’s but you really justified her character not as our gul mata Jisne pinky ko tho ek Pagla aurat ki tarah dikha Rahi hai!.
Shivaaayyyyyyyyy!!!!!!! You made anika’s bp high?????….
You know when ahivaay said “I will explain” and ani was like ” you better do” I was like chal beta Teri toh watt lag gayi! Shaadi sd pehla hee darne lagak bechara??????.
Everything was so sweet tanz!
You are such a beautiful writer! No words yaar!
And let me say “Vaani” is my mom’s name.
Love ya!
At last miss you mera bro-yaar!.
And when you said I found some bro-yaars here! I was like ”hahahahhahahahh………. Beta abhi kha dekhe ho! Bro-yaars main elevations main bhi hai”????????? just kidding! I really like you and always will be your bro yaar
Thank you sooo much! Never thought I will found someone Like this ❤❤. .
And beta khabardaar ff khatam hogaya bolke touch main nhi Rahi toh! Tujhe paaataaal se bhi doondh ke aaungi????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ love
Madam ji….Aap shayad bhul gayi….gayab Mai nahi Aap Hui thi …..itne saaaare dino ke liye…. I’m really angry for this ?
Tumhare liye toh kuch acchi si punishment sochni hi padegi….I’ll need some time for that,till then you are safe….
I toh thought you won’t come now…. but you did… and I’m extremely happy for that???and please PM me your email id so that atleast I can contact you when you disappear like this….
Thank you sooo much….itni taareef toh zindagi me kabhi nahi Mili jitni iss ff ki wajah se mil gayi….Am I that good a writer?I doubt it??….but still I accept all the taareefs(acchi cheezo Ko mana nahi karte na?)
IB waali Pinky Ponkey ki toh baat hi mat kar….pata nahi kya chahti hai Gul….?
I seriously had no idea that it was your mom’s name….great coincidence ?…btw tell aunty that I love her name ? and her daughter too❤
I miss you too my Bro-yaar! I too never thought that I would find someone like you…but I’m glad I did ?
Rehne de…..mera character tujhe pe suit nahi karta….daantna sirf mujhe hi Shobha deta hai???
Love you infinity (and beyond ?)❤❤❤❤❤❤