Hi guys iam Ashnita. Thank you for ur lovely comments. It really really really means means a lot.
I think it’s getting boring day by day so I have decided to end it soon but if you want me to continue so give ur comments.
Let’s start
Savitri heard someone foot steps. She went out while Kabir was sleeping. Sanchi came .
She sat beside Kabir and holds his hands. Kabir woke up and saw sanchi. He quickly gets ups.
Kabir -sanchi u here
Sanchi – kabir how did that happen
Kabir -r u my mom to ask Lot of questions
Sanchi -ok I’m not ur mom but ur wi..
Kabir looks at her
Sanchi -i mean I’m ur friend.
Kabir -sanchi
Sanchi -yes
Kabir -nthing
Sanchi -ok
Kabir – if something will happen to me i mean if I die
Just then sanchi puts finger on his lips
Sanchi -shhhh shub shub bolo
Kabir smiles at her. Savitri and kusum looking at them at distance.
Savitri -thank you kusum for taking care for my son i mean ur son
Kusum -Kabir always be ur son first
Savitri – he is lucky to get mom like u
They hugged eachother and someone is looking at them fuming.
After sometime
Veer went to Kabir cabin. His tears flows from his eyes .
Kabir -veer wat happened
Veer -dnt know Y i am crying. I think we have some relation in last birth
Kabir -not in last birth but in this life u r my bro
Veer -wat
Kabir -i mean ur like my bro.
Veer -u can call me bro I like it.
Kabir smiles seeing him. Kabir touches his head.
Veer – r u ok
Just then Kabir faints. Veer called dr Malhotra and all cums running.
They again took Kabir to o.t they make him wear oxygen mask. Malhotra gets shocked to see something.
Malhotra – how’s this possible
Awasti -wat happened sir
Malhotra -nthing sift Kabir to his ward.
After sometime
All waiting for Kabir to get councious. Kabir gets conscious and all r relieved .Kabir looks at everyone clueless.
Kabir – who r u guys
Sanchi – kabir dnt play prank
Kabir – behenji Kon ho tum
Sanchi – I’m not ur behen.
Kabir -so who r u
Kusum – Kabir she is ur wife
Kabir -wat my wife really this behenji is my wife.
Sanchi looks on shocked as well as others. Ria smirks. She go a idea.
Ria -dr Kabir r u ok
Kabir -whose this chipkali
Veer burts out laughing. Ria glared a him
Malhotra – kabir u take rest.
Outside
Kusum -Malhotra ji wat happened to my Kabir
Malhotra -actually he has blood clot . When blood can’t reach is mind he will not rember anything.
Kusum – When will hell be fine
Malhotra – can’t say
Sanchi was listening stealty and someone also was listening.
Malhotra called someone
Malhotra – did u remember I sold my son ARYAN to u. I want my son back.
Man – no u can’t get him
Malhotra -ok so give his pick to me
Man -ok I will courier it
Malhotra -thanks
He disconnected the call.
Malhotra – y iam always attached to Kabir. Y can’t I harm him. Pic will cum and I will clear my doubt if Kabir is my Aryan or not. Today I saw that
Savitri -anand wat happened
Malhotra -I wish our Aryan was with us.
Savitri – Aryan Kon
Malhotra – no one u go home.
Savitri pov – no Anand u can’t reach my son.
Malhotra -savitri go home
Savitri -ok
In Kabirs ward
Sanchi again cums to Kabir.
Kabir -sanchi kya hua
Sanchi – kuch nhi dr Kabir can u pliz free me from record room duty
Kabir -no
Sanchi pouts
Kabir -i hate that first go and learn manners.
Sanchi was going just Kabir holds her hands and pulls her close
Bg plays
Bol do zara
Sanchi realised how close she was with him. She runs out. Kabir smiles
Kabir – wat happened to u Kabir sanchi loves veer not u.
He sleeps.
Savitri – i can’t risk my son life again I have to stop Anand
Other side
Malhotra – i will get to know Kabir is Aryan or not. No one can stop me.
Ria – kabir is only mine
Lady – no I have to do something.
Scene sifted to their faces.
Precap : courier boys cums and gives some envelope to malhotra.
– savitri runs and while Malhotra opens the envelope
Will savitri able to stop Malhotra to see envelope.
Will Malhotra able to knw Kabir is Aryan
Stay tuned with me till than have a break.
Bye take care
Keep smiling
Regards
Ashnita
12 Comments
Hey,,ashnita dn’t stop it dear.. Ur all ff,os everything i lv very much.. Epsd was awsm as alwys.. ..
Aha!!! I knew it!!! Kabir lost his memory. Awesome epi dear ???
Ossssmmmm ashu dear
How u get this much ideas
And also tym that u post ur every ff regularly im surprized
U r free all the tym yar im jealous (hehehe jzt kidding)
i hvnt tym to think but
Hardly i got tym to write a os for Diwali
I didnt get tym to write full epi but half is done i ll post that one on diwali
But look at u yar
U always post ur all ff on tym
Anyways enough of my bak bak
And plz post nxt part asap
T.c
superb, mind blowing ff dear specially this was my favorite part :
“Kabir – who r u guys
Sanchi – kabir dnt play prank
Kabir – behenji Kon ho tum
Sanchi – I’m not ur behen.
Kabir -so who r u
Kusum – Kabir she is ur wife
Kabir -wat my wife really this behenji is my wife.
Sanchi looks on shocked as well as others. Ria smirks. She go a idea.
Ria -dr Kabir r u ok
Kabir -whose this chipkali
Veer burts out laughing. Ria glared a him”
i can’t control myself to laugh …………… he he…………..update next one soon……………love toy dear………….tc………………………………..
Awesome super But I have doubt that kabir lost his memory then when saanchi told kabir to free her from record room that kabir her so how he remember her . And Riya as chipkali was awesome super mind blowing fantastic update soon can’t wait
Amazing….. Awesome
Ashu yaar kya ho tum???matlab, ek hi din mein 4 episodes back to back….maan na padega yaar……..it was really hilarious when kabir called sanchi as behenji & ria as chipkali…haha…. so hilarious……mind blowing yaar……luv u loads….
Awsome ashi nd real sdch me agar kabir ka dil tute to m chauhungi ki kabir usse aise hi sunaye…hehehe.. I know m thodi selfish hun per kya karu kabir k kamla ho to thoda possessive ho jati hun hehehe… Ab sab hogayi meri bak bak band per tum yuhi ff likhti rahogi samjhi aisa vaisa sochna bhi mat bye lov u tc
And last mujhe laga kabir ki memory loss ho gayi per suddenly usne sanchi ko punishment k liye bola kahin usse gajini wali bimari to nahi hui naa…hehehe.. Post nxt asap warna meri bakwas chalti rahegi
Superbbbbb
Speechless… it was beyond outstanding!! Just loved it so much!! And so much dramatic buildup cant wait to read the next update
Outstanding… Amazing… Loved it Ashiii… Out was kind blowing…