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So now lets start?
~~MIsconceptions~~
http://www.tellyupdates.com/misconceptions-swasan-ss-episode-1/
The guy took out his bottle and threw water on swara and said
“Don’t think that i am on your list of fans ..i am sanskar and i never give a damn to such cheap people like you ”
Saying this he was about to go
Swara was shocked water droplets were falling from her face but she smiled and shouted
“Hey it was fun playing with mud and haa i must your thoughts are way cheap ”
Saying this both went in opposite directions
One to her grp and second to his lecs
Now lets get an introduction
Swara: 19 yrs old. ..studying arts want to become a psychologist ..fair tall and slim
Perfect combination of beauty with brains
She has a loving family
His daddu mumma and dii
Higher level in middle class (can afford everything)they had their small bungalow
Her gang is too studying arts
Sanskar: studying commerce 20 yrs old
Came to this famous xyz college to complete his graduation (his last year)
Got Mr. Handsome award in his previous clg
His family too is in mumbai(rich but studies with a different identity)
Now lets continue
After the clg lectures got over swara excused herself has she had to discuss about project with her friend in library
As she was walking in the corridor of library she saw sanskar kissing a girl
She went near and said
“Today someone was giving me huge lectures and you don’t have any worries as to teachers may watch you and can expel you haha actually i am really saying these words to a brainless fellow …and haan srry to disturb you mr stud continue your cheap work and give urself character certificate too”
“Wait miss diva just don’t speak so much that you regret it later ..this girl came all of a sudden and kissed me ..just think before you act”
And he left
“As if i care” swara murmured and left
That night
“Shona go safely from that ladder and why do you have to go from that ladder when you ask permission for everything from mom and dad!!”
“Haha ragu di u know na this is my style??and as you know we were apes first so i think its still in my blood haha swara you are intelligence ki shop” swara said
“Miss nataunki pls go before i kick you out”
“Sachi you will kick this innocent creature like me huh there’s no humanity left ohoho”
“Swara ki bachi wait”ragini said and threw a pillow which she caught and raised her eyebrows
“Haha ragu di u wanted to make ur shona hurt chalo its ohk i have a gift for you and mumma daddu too knows”
Ragini was confused
Swra then dialled a number
“Haa my would be jiju di is all set to go on a long drive haha….. i know…. actually what to do i get headache to bear her ..haha she is a ….(she was about to say but ragini kept hand on her mouth and took the phone not letting her to say against her more)
“Haan lucky you cannot call me huh ohk ohk give me five mins i am coming..love u too”
She disconnected the call and gave the phone to swara and hugged her
“Luv u so much shonu”ragini said hugging her
“Acha di u r that much happie than you can get me rasmalai”
“In your dreams” ragini said and went to change but waited to have a look at swara’s expression
Swara was standing with a pout
Ragini shouted “which flavour”
Swara being happie said” kesar rasmalai”
Swara was still waiting in her room nd checking the mobile again waiting for someone’s call
Then someone shouted from down
“Shona . Shona?”
“Coming” swara answered from the window
And got in the ladder and came down
“What yaar dhruti how much time ..you are 10.09 secs late huh”swara said
“Shut up ..and haan why don’t you come to commerce section in college ..i miss aunty’s you yaar ”
“Huh you miss mumma’s morning special breakfast nautanki”
“Acha come we will go to have something i am hungry lets go in food corner “swara continued
“Wait my friend is too joining in.. actually he was coming to return my notes but i insisted him to join us its ohk na? ”
” Way ohk ..Acha mahan tanmay ji is not coming? “swara asked angrily
“No he had to go to priya’s house “(tanmay and dhruti are twins )
Swara dialed tanmay’s no. and said
“Tanmay ji from tomorrow no need to come ro my house for notes” saying this she cut the call
“Ohk here he is “dhruti said
Swara turned her face and saw him” oh god destiny ji did you not find anyone more annoying?”she sarcastically thought saying this
“Swara sanskar … Sanskar this is swara”dhruti said
Swara caught dhruti and whispered
“When did you befriend him ..you just got him only to he your frnd like seriously dhruti !!”
“Swara he is sweet don’t wrry “swara laughed at her words loudly
“Hello mr.she is cling you sweet
Haha the most annoying person is called sweet ”
She started to walk fast leaving behind dhruti and sanskar
They got in a table and and were giving their order
Swara had a huge list on which shocked sanskar but dhruti just sighed
They were having their dinner
Swara was concentrating on dinner only but one or two times she mistakenly kicked sanskar’s legs in process if stretching her legs
Swara said srry but
Sanskar felt that she is doing purposely
Sanskar and dhruti were having their talks
Swara was having her dinner when sahil joined smirked seeing swara
He went near swara and said
“How are you swara” and touched her hands as anyone cannot see
Swara felt disgusted and stood up and was going to slap him but sanskar caught her hand and slapped her instead
“Enough is enough what do you think of yourself
U are so cheap miss swara ..so cheap
You can cling to any person and can reject anyone ..i saw earlier too u rejected this guy
Is this a game or what ?you are indeed a characterless girl who wear cheap dresses and cling to your friends…”
Swara was all shattered getting this much hatred
And his words pierced her heart
She tearfully sat back to her place having her dinner but she was coughing as the food choked her throat not able to digest it
“Shona you don’t have to……”dhruti said
Sahil went from there smirking getting that situation turned into something
“Sans….kar you don’t know what that guy did and does still ..
He plays with every girl’s feelings
I just punished him..for the crime he does…and did ..punishing the one who kills girl’s feelings is characterless then
YES MR.MAHESHWARI I AM CHARACTERLESS”SHE SHOUTED CRYINGLY
“She is my good friend ..but he left her on her marriage ..he had made huge promises to her
But he left her and then with words of hatredness from the people like you …she attempted suicide but fortunately she was saved
Its not over yet recently he raped a girl ..BUT THAT CASE WAS CLOSED ..I AM SURPRISED YOU DON’T KNOW HIS SINS. He kills their soul and then this is cheap in your dictionary then let it be
Clinging on boys is not my cup of tea mr. I just spend some time with my FRIENDS WHO ARE BOYS THEN I AM CHARACTERLESS wow mr.you just changed the meaning of our friendship and wearing short dresses is a girl’s choice and its the fault of others who see them in that way .i wera clothes for me not for others ..they should change their sl*tty minds but. .But thank you gentlemen ..thank you much to have praised me so well
Thank you “she says tearfully and was leaving but dhruti caught her hand
“Mr sanskar our friendship is too over .my bestie paid for the sin which she did not do..go sit in a lonely place with your rotten brain and yeah still you do not believe so ask anyone in the college he might say sahil’s history
Thank you for insulting me too ..never meet me again and yeah here is the bill ” she kept the money and left with swara
Sanskar was just cursing himself for doing that
He was trying dhruti’s number continuously but she was ending it
Swara’s side
“Dhru actually i will go from here i want to spend some time alone ..i am fine don’t worry”
“Shona no i am coming to drop you home and its final ”
“Dhru please “she said with teary eyes
Dhruti left sensing the situation if she stays swara will feel suffocated
Swara sat on the ladder down her room and was thinking about past incidents and was crying
“Shonu what are you doing here ! What did you have in dinner ” ragini asked her getting out of the car
“Hi sweetheart” lucky added
Swara quickly wiped her tears but her nose and eyes were red and anyone can know that she has cried
“Hey jiju and ragu di i had a huge list you should not know what i had huh you enjoyed na then whats the problem “swara replied
Ragini sensed that she has cried because her voice was heavy and eyes red
“Shonu what happened just tell me ..you will not tell your di too?”
“Nothing di ..sachi nothing ”
“Hey sweetheart whats the matter ..you know na you can share anything with us”lucky said
“Shonu say you know na everything will be alright and you are such a sweetheart “hearing the word sweetheart she remembered all again
And just hugged ragini and cried hard
“Di he called me characterless and cheap ..di i am not cheap na
I am not cheap”swara was murmuring
“Sweetu what are this marks? And who is that bastard”
“I am not CHARACTERLESS “she was murmuring
Lucky gave ragini water
“Shonu shh shh you are the most lovely person
Have this water now chalo comeon”ragini rubbed her back
Swara had little water but still was thinking about the incident
“Shonu come we will sit in our room “ragini said being concerned and gestured him to leave ..she will handle the rest
Lucky nodded
Swara and ragini were going ..swara composed and said she would enter through ladder as mom dad would feel her problems
~~room~~
“Shonuu want to have maggi?”
“Di i want to sleep in your lap …can i?
“Why not wait i will come ”
Ragini sat on bed and swara kept her head on her lap and cried again
“Di i want to go america ..i was not sure about my decision but now after this year i want to join in one of the colleges there ..”
“Shonu why to leave the place because of someone?”
“Di i am not that strong ”
“My shonu is very much brave and strong and think of that duffer Tanmay what would he do without you”
“He would manage di ”
“And what about me …i would not manage without you
You want to leave your di for some stranger then go”
Ragini did a pout
Swara got up and holded her ears
Ragini smiled and again got her head in her lap and in no time swara slept
Sensing no movement she understood swara slept and she made her sleep properly
She called dhruti and got to know everything
The conversation between swara and sanskar
“Sanskar who have to pay for it”
“She took his number and called him and said him to meet her now
He agreed
“Hello mr sanskar soo what did you call her characterless ..cheap and slapped her too
Then get this reward “ragini said
She punched him hard such that it pained her hand too
Sanskar gasped in pain has he had done a huge mistake
“Follow me” she said getting from that ladder to her and swara’s room
They entered
“See her ..how innocent she is sanskar she does not know what hatred is .she always gets love and she deserve best things for all the love she spreads
Sanskar if u think she is wrong than all the innocent girls are wrong”
“And this ladder you know she informs mom and dad about her every detail still she choses to go from there ….right now she is wishing to leave us all for your words ..she is not wrong sanskar she is not wrong “she said and went to take an ice bag for sanskar
Sanskar glanced at swara whose tears were dried but her face was glowing in thd moonlight
For thd first time he realised her beauty …he sat near her and said
“I will make up for my mistakes ragini pls give me a chance”he said as ragini came in and handed him the bag
“You have one ..only one to make her out from this trauma”
“Thank you so much ragini”
“Please leave”
Next day
“Shona get up comeon we are going for a walk in the woods”
“Dii you have caught cold or what? And please stop this walk thing i am damn sleepy” She said sleepily
“Are spoilsport come na ”
Finally she woke up rubbing her eyes to see herself in a chocolate world
There were bouquets of chocolate everywhere
She was on bed of chocolates
She pinched herself thinking is she dreaming?
She then jumped on bed realising its reality
She looked towards the person to thank but then her laughing sound got low and she got down of the bed and stood there not knowing how to react
“Shona get them they are all yours”
“Ragu dii”swara shouted
“Please say him to get away from here and this chocolates i don’t want them”she added
“Shona!”the guy said
“Please mr.you already said enough now i don’t want more. .please”swara
“Oye dumbo its me tanmay ..pagal dont recognise me too
Huh dumb
Precap : swara and sanskar moments and maybe something more to the storysw
A/N:friends i have many concepts of one shot in my mind for my yeh hai ashiqui show
You decide which one you want first
Its on your votes do remember
1) My RJ girl
2)Filmy one of someone
3)Break ke baad
4)Royal love story
5)Its COMPLICATED(a ss)
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19 Comments
Awesome
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Wow…helly love your new concept…
Plz post next part soon…
Thank you so much and yeah the part is on the the way maybe i will post today night or tomorrow morning
Thanks for ur love??
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Post next part soon
Thank you so much for ur love??
Hey guys please comment the name of os you want me to write …
And yeah tanmay and dhruti are 20yrs old but tanmay did a course so he had to leave a year of his graduation
Thats why hes studying with swara and dhruti with sanskar(both 20 yrs old)
nice..royal love story..
Thank you so much??
And will try to post royal love story too
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