Hey, this is Pavithra. I am back with my teaser. This is the teaser for my coming ff – it was a mistake to love you. You can find the character sketch and about the story by checking out the intro and intro revised respectively. Hope you guyz like this
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* Teaser 1*
Keerthi’s mother was pleating her hair in front of the mirror
Keerthi: Ma, are all boys like this?
Ma: like what?
Keerthi: I mean always fighting and arguing with girls.
Ma: It is the problem of the age, Keerthi… It will be OK when you reach higher classes.
Keerthi(in her mind): No, ma.. It won’t be like that. We can never be friends.
On the other side….
Madhav: Girls are always sentimental na?
Friend 1: ya! They are only sometimes.
Madhav: But Keerthi na, she is not like that. Maybe I am saying this because I don’t know about her as I haven’t even talked to her in calm voice. But I say this, she is always bold and brave and maybe a bit proud too.
Friend 2: so you want to be friends with her?
Madhav: ya! Just friends.
Friend 1: is this love my dear Madhav? ( with a kidding smile)
Madhav: no, not at all ( laughing)
Friend 2: ok !!!! this time we are believing you..
Everyone smiles..
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*Teaser 2*
One day,
Keerthi comes walking through the corridor with her followers following her. And Madhav and his followers comes walking in the opposite direction of Keerthi, making Keerthi and Madhav come face to face.. They were standing in front of their class..
Keerthi: Today is the class quiz competition. This day we will show you who we girls are. And I will make you apologise for your doings ( with a confident expression and tone)
Madhav: I will wait!!! You wait and watch how you are gonna loose.. I repeat just wait and watch.. (with an arrogant smile and shows his hand inside to the class in order to give sign to them to enter the class)
After entering their class and to their respective seats.
Keerthi(in her mind): Sorry for those rudness Madhav. I know we both are going to win. There should be an end to this rudness and enemity. I know we can never be good friends and maybe,as my wish, we would not never ever become a relationship partners. It has been years that I have been waiting for you to be mine. I can’t say that I love you in front of you because of my ego and the thought of you saying a no is a heartbreaking thing for me. My love for you has been a pass time for me for years. And I say this Madhav, it was a mistake to love you. But still I love you and can’t leave this desire of being yours.
Madhav( in his mind) : sorry, Keerthi all I need is us to be friends or maybe more than that. But I can’t do that as generally we are enemies. One day, I will make you mine. But first I have to be friends with you. So your hatred towards me will be changed. Soon, I will make you mine, Keerthi. I can’t never forget you as you re my first love… Keerthi, I love you but we are enemies.. Hope you will soon understand my feelings towards you.
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Wait for my first chapter.. This was a long teaser!!!??
This was my teaser for my ff – it was a mistake to love you. Hope you liked and enjoyed this. This is a non – serial related Iove story which has no happy ending. But I m trying to make a happy ending. Please ignore all the grammatical and spellings mistake. Hope this teaser brought excitement in you. I will be soon back with my first chapter. And guyz this is my first ff and also writing something for the very first time.
Let me know about want you think about this story by dropping a comment.
If you liked this, do let me know..??
18 Comments
Wow ………. amazing ..???
Wow ………. amazing ..? kèep it up …. ? next part soon ..
Thank u dii. That was very kind of you.. I will update the next part as soon as possible..
hehe …. DI ….. dont call me di dear m not elder to you … ???
Amazing………looking interesting my lil sis. Awesome , Superb darling .Loved it completely . Update your ff soon.Sorry for not commenting from my account .Good night & sweet dreamz sissy . Loveu dear .Keep writing & entertaining like this.
Your Niyu di
Thanks dii… But di, what has happened to your account?? No need to say sorry… I will update it soon as possible.. Oh you really loved it completely?? I was a bit nervous after knowing that it is published… Thank god!! You like it.. Love you sooooooo much dii…??????? good night dii and sweet dreams.. You were the one who gave me inspiration to write something. I was only thinking about writing but you always said to write soon.. Thank u.. I know our rule is not to say thank u and sorry.. But both of us are breaking the rule. I said thank u and you said sorry.. Just kidding di. Gn??
Gm dear & have a sweet day . Yesterday my account is not working proprly . So , i didn’t comment from that . Continue your ff . I don’t believe that is ur first ff . You writing skills is awesome darling . About rules ,we both are same . Luv u sissy.
Superb Pavi.I can’t trust that you are making your first ff.Its tooo good.The way Keerthi & Madhav love eachother & hiding feelings.I just love it.Its amazing.Also different.Go ahead.Just rock all the episodes.All the best for my Sis.
Thank u thank u and thanks a lot chechi.. Its really means a lot to me.. U really don’t think that it is my first ff?? Thank u so much for that???
Hello pavithra, I m a new commenter… This ff is really very very good… I liked it or u can say loved it …..it’s ravishing, mind-blowing etc n etc…
Hellooo dii .. Thanks for commenting dii and thank u for those kind words.. They is no new or old commenter here!!! Do read and comment my coming first chapter of this ff.. It will be published soon..
OK sweetie I will definitely comment… No need to say thank you… Your story is awesome.. I’m eagerly waiting for the next part dear sister… Love u a lot
Hey,Pavi its me Aadila. Amazing story,I can’t believe that u r writing this
All the best!!!!!!
Hey my dear aadila.. you dont really think that it is written by me?? Thankz for commenting aadu.. i didnt ever think that you will coment.. thankz so much.. ummaa
Looking forward to the first chapter…
Thankz bhai for reading this…
Oh Jesus!!!! I’m legit speechless, this is amazing dear! You need to continue this
Thank you sooooo much Niki…. It is really a lot to me…. Thankzz for commenting..??