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MMZ – The Modern Krishna (Shot 4)

Thank u so so so much for all ur lovely comments…i am very sorry for this update…honestly i am not getting the plot to write this up and that’s the reason for this delay. I got a plot for the 4th character and here am with the 4th shot.

I am dedicating this chapter to my dear lovey dovey darling friend Gauri…dear i am here with your lovely krishna ji…hope u like this shot. Love you 🙂

Here is the next shot:

MMZ – THE MODERN KRISHNA (Shot 4)

Radha and Naradha started their journey but before that Radha sends the picture of 4th girl to Krishna ji and thinks for a while. Naradha notices this asking, “What happen Devi Radha? Are we not leaving?”

Radha, “We have to leave but before that we have to watch our krishna’s leela with that 4th girl”

Naradha, “Really? I am wonder thinking your trust on our almighty”

Radha smirks, “Afterall Man is a Man right and that too your almight is the best in dealing girls. So i don’t take a chance, infact we watched all the 3 na, then y we have to leave the last one. Will see that also?”

Naradha smirks, “Now i wonder, how krishna handled you here.”

Radha makes face saying, “That’s none of your business Naradha. Better be quiet and sit with me. Should not utter a word”

Naradha keeps pout face and sits quietly with her watching the atrocity of Krishna with the fourth girl.

Our Modern Krishna gets the picture and lost himself in starring the beautiful lady Jessie and gets disturbed hearing the beep sound. He looks at the picture of the 4th girl and says, “Oh my Krishna, being Arjun is far better than being as a Lord Krishna. Hmmmm very lucky Arjun. Fine now i ll show my charms.” he just disappear in a sec and appears infront of a building named as “Rock the Floor”. He just enters inside and hears the music everywhere and finally he reaches the place having a big auditorium and a group of people gathering there looking at someone who is dancing mesmerisingly.

Krishna ji walks towards the stage and stands little far to watch what’s going on and who is dancing. Now he is seeing only her back and everyone there cheers her and encourages her for her dancing. The music starts and she moves her body slowly according to the music and turns towards the people like a storm. Modern krishna is completely stunned seeing the girl infront of him and pinch his hand once to realize the truth.

He then moves his gaze to her and her dance moves, which makes him watch her with open mouth. She gently shakes her body and does the moves on kathak and dance perfectly according to the beats of the song. Everyone claps for her performance and gives her a huge applause at the end of the dance. Even krishna too mesmerized and claps for her performance. All her friends runs to her and appreciates for her performance. She feels so happy getting all the cheerful words from her friends and her master. Ofcourse she is in cloud nine.

Her Master, “So, now only one thing is pending. To find a partner for you and it looks like very tough finding a dancing partner for you”

She smiles saying, “Master, i have hope…i will surely get my partner and we both will win the competition”

Master, “Even i wish the same, but we have very less time now. Only a month is still pending to start the competition. We have so much to do. Find a partner, train him the dance styles and more than you i am very much nervous now.”

She too gets upset thinking about it and all gets surprised hearing a voice behind them saying, “May i join?”

All turns back to look at him, everyone starring him from top to toe and starts murmuring to themselves and to her, “Doesn’t look like he knows the spelling for the dance atleast.” and some peopl murmur, “How much attitude he has?” and few girls already adored him, “He is so handsome yar”.

Overall, so many thoughts are running on everyone’s mind. And he is none other than our Modern Krishna walks towards her without even taking his eyes off from her.

When he is nearing her, the people automatically gives way for him to go to her. She too stares him without blinking her eyes, for a second she feels like her heart skips a beat but why, she doesn’t have the answer for that.

Krishna ji walks to her and just give his signature smile seeing her, suddenly a girl from the group fainted and all are shocked seeing this. They see the girl fainted and krishna ji alternatively with open mouth. Few guys even gets jealous seeing other girls starts admiring him.

Krishna ji turns to the master saying, “May i join in the competition as her dance partner?”

Master, “That’s possible but before that we should know whether you can dance or not?”

Krishna ji with so much of excitement, holds the master’s waist and takes his one hand in his saying, “I will show you my dance now”

All started laughing at them and the master immediately frees him from his grip saying, “Not with me. She is the one who gonna dance and you know what she is the best in this institute” by pointing the girl beside him who is laughing silently.

Krishna ji show his attitude smirk saying, “Then i am ready to dance with her. I don’t have any problem”

All are jaw dropped seeing his attitude and the girl who stares him saying, “For that first, you should win over me in dance and then i will think about dancing with you”

All the poeple claps for her and shouts to start the competition now itself. Krishna ji in his mind, “Without knowing my power, bechari this small girl calls me for the competition. Let me make her dance for my tunes”. Without knowing all this plan, the girl gets ready for the dance. They both stands at the center of the stage and the jugalbandi starts between them. Both are equally performing well and the masters, the students are all so impressed seeing krishna’s dance and they themself decided that he is the one who gonna dance with her. Even while dancing she herself admires his dancing skills and gets happy. The jugalbandi is over and even Krishna ji also impressed on her dance. The whole crowd gives them a huge applause and cheers them for one more dance and shouts, “ONCEMORE, ONCEMORE, ONCEMORE….”

Krishna ji smiles and comes to her asking her hands for a dance together. She simply looks at him and looks other, meanwhile Krishna ji leans little close to her saying, “Will you not give your hand to this Arjun, Miss.Sathya?”

That’s it, and that’s more than enough for her, she stuns hearing him and stares him without blinking her eyes. And whatever he said was audible to others also, even they get shocked listening his name as Arjun and the moment he said his name as Arjun, the whole group turns their gaze to look at the girl’s face with a shocking surprise. They are suprised and equally happy, because they all know how this girl is crazy on the name Arjun. Sathya is like daydreaming and faints immediately hearing his name as Arjun. They group around her knows her craziness, they all laugh seeing her and wakes her up. Now they think this guy is handsome and more than that his is name is Arjun and looks at her with their open mouth and murmurs as group chant, “Give your hand”.

Sathya’s eye balls are stuck at one place and it’s on his face which is not at all moving anywhere. Krishna ji smiles and extends his hands again and this time she herself gives her hand to him and he gently pulls her to him.

She is breathing heavily seeing him so close and Krishna ji smirks at her saying, “Before dancing only you fainted? What will happen if you dance with me?”

Facepalm for her…she is shocked and raise her eyebrows and tells her friends, “Start the music”

The music starts and it is famous Illaiyaraja’s one of the best bgm in the movie Punnagai Mannan.

(It’s my fav one and i danced for this in my college…so i added it. Below is the link for that…Non-Tamilians pls hear this once and i am sure you will definitely love this bgm.)

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RmIKq7tB-Q4)

Once the music starts both stares each other and starts moving their bodies according to the music. She completely enjoys dancing with him and even krishna ji enjoys this new entertainment which he did not get it in heaven. At the end, he takes the control and gives a non-stop twirl for sometime, which Sathya did not expect it and when he stops the twirl, she is like wobbling side to side holding her head on her both hands, her eyes are also not steady and when she is about to fall, her friends helps her stand straight. It takes some time for her to be steady and in shock seeing him. They all enjoyed their dance and his naughtiness too. The dance is over and all are satisfied to have him as her dance partner and now they all more confident of winning the title of the dance competition.

Master, “So Mr.Arjun, we have to start our practice from day after tomorrow, pls be punctual for the practice and we are happy to have you in our dance school”

Arjun too smiles and agrees for it, and goes to Sathya, “It’s just a trailer, still the main picture is pending. C u later, Bye”, before going he pulls her cheeks making her blush and jaw dropped. Sathya is now definitely on cloud nine and with a blush on her face starring him going.

@ Heaven,

All this are watching by Radha and Naradha, he looks at Radha saying, “Looks like, this is little over for her”

Radha, “Let her enjoy for sometime. After this no one can snatch my Krishna from me”

Naradha smirks, “Narayana Narayana, then are we ready now to step out from Heaven”

Radha gets up and looks at him with an attitude saying, “It’s time to Step into THE EARTH”

Naradha smiles widely, “Narayana…Narayana…”

Both Radha and Narayana steps out from Heaven and reaching the earth. Within a few mins, they are in earth in their usual attire and they forget to get into their new get ups.

Radha and Naradha walks into the busy streets looking at the people starring at them wierdly.

Some guys comments them asking, “What Naradha, any new TV program or what? All over, your bun is so cute” they all laughed seeing his bun on his head, where in Radha also laughed seeing sad Naradha’s face.

While walking further, few girls gang walks towards them, in that a girl smiles seeing Naradha and touches his bun saying, “How much time you took to put this bun? Is it original or Wig?” she tried to pull his hair and he starts screaming and shouting at that girl, they all are laughing badly.

Radha pulls him to a little lonely place and tells him, “Naradha, we forget our getup, first we will change into our new face”

In a few seconds, both gets their new face and get up. Radha as Radhika now and Naradha as Neil now.

(Now will call Radha as Radhika and Naradha as Neil)

They come to the public and Neil is walking by spreading his legs widely, he is not comfortable in his jeans he is wearing. Radhika notices this asking, “What are you doing?”

Neil, “Devi Radha, this…” and he stops by her asking him, “I am Radhika now”

Neil makes faces, “Devi Radhika…” again she stops him, “Cut that Devi and call me Radhika. Keep it in your dumbo mind. I will not repeat”

Neil is almost in crying state, “Radhika, i am not comfortable in this dress. How this people are wearing all this stupid dress. It’s so hot inside” (LOL)

Radhika, “Adjust it Neil”

Neil shouts, “No..it’s hot. I can’t walk with this”

Radhika stares him angrily and looks at the nearby shop having a Water in a glass kept outside. She takes the water and pours inside his pockets saying, “Now it is chill na. Just walk”

Neil smiles enjoying the chillness, his jeans becomes wet and he walks smilingly, but the people comes in front seeing him from top to toe and bangs their forehead scolding him in bad words. But both Radhika and Neil did not understand the meaning of the words, so ignored them and walks past to look for their Modern Krishna.

Precap: Modern Krishna meets Radhika and this time he really fall in love with her thinking, “I will talk to Radha and make a place for this girl in heaven”

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How is today’s chappy girls. Hope you had a nice time. And i am just blushing badly thinking about the dance with Krishna..sorry sorry with Arjun. LOL. NO offense girls…Dipu, SV and Jessie & Sathya …we are the girls gonna get our version of Arjun soon with the help of our modern krishna.

From next episode, we will have 5 heores and 5 heroines in this story. Didn’t understand?

Dipu – Arjun
SV – Arjun
Jessie – Arjun
Sathya – Arjun

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Finally Radhika – Arjun (yep, our krishna ji becomes Arjun again for Radhika, you know why, now he himself becomes crazy for this name Arjun and he gets to know that Arjun has some magic to get the girls drool over him. Isn’t it?)

More funny scenes are awaiting guys. Keep reading and enjoying. Pls don’t forget to pour your comments and i got very less comments for last episode 🙁

Sathya

EVERYONE WANTS HAPPINESS NONE WANTS PAIN BUT YOU CAN'T HAVE A RAINBOW WITHOUT A LITTLE RAIN !!!

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