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MMZ – Mr & Mrs. MEHRA (Episode 1)
Prologue link
Present:
A girl is sitting on the shore and stares the sea waves aimlessly, though her face doesn’t show any reaction…her mind is thinking about the incident which happened today morning…she looks so worried and speaks to herself, “Why it is happening only to me? I left everything and came right..then why i have to be caught again..why should i be the prey? Think well Radhika…you cannot lose it again”. She closes her eyes and tears roll on her cheeks expressing her pain.
A day before,
Radhika gets ready for her office and comes down from her room and finds her mom Prerna Malhotra worried looking at Neil Malhotra, her brother. She runs down to her mom and asks, “What happened Maa? You look so worried?” she moves her gaze to Neil and signs him on what.
Neil just nods his head as yes and he too looks worried seeing Prerna. Rads now understand what’s the problem, she turns to Prerna says, “Maa”
Prerna, “Don’t say anything. i know, u also aware of this”
Rads blinks at Neil and he signs her to do something. She turns to Prerna and immediately hugs her saying, “Maa, bhai loves that girl so much. She is his life and even she loves him a lot. Yea i know her long before and she is very good for our family. PLs accept his love Maa.” she moves her away from her and cups her face saying, “I know you can’t see him worried and for his happiness you have to agree for this.”
Prerna glares both of them saying, “Emotional blackmail”
Rads, “May be” and keeps pout face looking at her. Prerna smiles seeing her and Neil let out a sigh relief and hugs his ladies tightly.
Prerna, “Enough Enough…let me first talk to her parents…its not enough to convince me…even they have to accept it right.”
Neil, “Sam told she will talk to them”
Prerna, “Oh…her name is Sam is it?”
Neil gives a sheepish smile saying, “Samaira”
Prerna smiles and hugs him saying, “Give their address, i will go and talk to them”
Rads and Neil gives hi-fi to each and Neil shares Sam’s home address to her and leaves to office with Radhika.
@ Evening,
RaNeil comes home and looks for their mom who is busy in kitchen. Both barges in there and shoots their questions continuously about her meeting with Sam’s parents.
Prerna continues cooking without answering the, finally Rads turn off the gas and drags her to hall and makes her sit forcefully to answer her questions. She couldn’t see her brother Neil sad and forces Prerna to tell them.
Prerna, “OKay..okay. I will tell. What u want to know?”
Rads, “You went to meet them right? What happened there? Is Sam’s parents agreed for it or not?”
Prerna, “You are more interested than your brother”
Rads, “So what? He s my brother and i am very much keen in getting his love for him”
Prerna smiles at her and says, “I met them…her parents..they are so nice people. Actually even they also happy for this proposal…but”
RaNeil face becomes bright when she is saying but it fades away when she stops and looks them worriedly.
Rads, “What happened?”
Prerna, “But looks like Sam’s brother is not interested in this marriage it seems”
Radhika is shocked hearing it and says, “Maa…Sam has no brother”
Neil, “She has…but he is in abroad”
Rads looks at him shockingly, “What? You did not tell me this earlier”
Neil, “Well…he went long back and its been years he came down to india…and i don’t feel it is important to know him. But how come suddenly he interefered”
Prerna, “He came to India two days back and now it looks like his decision is more important for them since he joins with his family after so long years”
Rads gets irritated, “Now what’s this new problem?”
Neil, “Ok let me talk to him once. Hope he can understand”
Rads, “What if, he insults you?”
Prerna, “Neil…there is a chance for this. Because after listening about him from their parents, even i felt that he might insult you if you go and talk to him”
Rads, “How dare he can insult? If he is arrogant means…we should not get scared of him Maa”
Prerna, “Radhika, this is your Neil’s life…so push out your angry away and just think calmly how to sort this out”
Rads, “What Sam said?”
The very next moment Neil gets a call from Sam and he attends it.
Neil, “Yeah Sam”
Sam, “Neil…Maa told everything right?”
Neil, “Hmmm…but y u didn’t tell me that your brother came two days before itself”
Sam, “Even i don’t know Neil…he is in India from past two days but he came home last night only and i couldn’t find time to tell u about this”
Neil, “Now what to do?”
Sam, “Neil…Mom & Dad are like …after seeing their son they are so much happy and want to do my marriage with his full consent. But he is little adamant of not agreeing for this marriage”
Neil, “Ok but what’s the reason of not accepting it”
Sam, “He hates the word LOVE and that’s the main theme here for his refusal”
Neil, “Wat the hell Sammy?”
Sam, “Neil..pls do something na. We have to make him accept at any cost”
Neil, “Sam..i ll discuss with maa and radhika then let u know. ok…don’t worry”
Sam, “Ok..bye. Love you”
Neil, “Love u too…” he stops and looks at Prerna and Rads glaring him..and continues, “Bye”
Rads immediately jump on him asking, “What she said?”
Neil told her everything what Sam said and Rads confused saying, “Why he hates Love so much that he is refusing for his sister’s happiness”
Neil, “God only knows”
Prerna, “fine…let me talk to him once”
Rads immediately, “No Maa…what if he treats you badly? Seems like he is ruthless person who spoils his own sister’s love for his wish”
Prerna, “Then what do we do? U r not allowing Neil and Me..then who will go and talk to him”
After a long silence, “I will go and talk to him Maa”
Prerna and Neil stares her and Prerna says, “Same question to you also? Or do u think he will treat you nicely?”
Rads goes to Neil and hugs him saying, “I will bear anything for my brother. It doesn’t matter for me. My only target is to make him accept this marriage and i am sure i will succeed in it”
Neil too hugs her saying, “I am so lucky to have you as my little sister” he kisses on her forehead. Prerna adores their sibling bonding and hopes for the good.
Later Radhika speak to Sam and gets her brother’s office Address to meet him directly.
Next day, She gets ready and goes to Mehra Premises to meet Sam’s brother. She meets the receptionist and tells her, “Excuse me, i need to meet Mr.Mehra and discuss something very important.”
Receptionist, “Sorry Madam…without appointment i cannot allow you”
Rads rolls her eyes, “Listen…its very important..well u can just inform him once right about me…probably he might allow me inside”
Receptionist, “I am very well sure he won’t allow you mam…becoz our boss is so strict in meeting the people…without appointme…” before she finishes the statement, she gets a call and responds, “Yes Sir”
Her reaction gets changed listening her boss and in low voice, “but sir..she has no appointment”
Her face becomes pale and responds, “ok sir”. She cuts the call and tells her, “Mam…Sir wants you to meet him”
Rads face becomes bright and says, “Thank you so much” she walks towards his room without knowing the impact.
She comes infront of the room & looks the Nameboard “Mr. MEHRA”. She reads the name and rolls her eyes seeing it. She knocks the door, no response and again she knocks
it…still there is no response. She pushes the door and peeps inside the room.
The room looks pleasingly rich and very neat. She looks around it and finds a wooden table at the center and behind there is a leather seat upper class throne head chair showing its back to her. She looks around the room and slowly walks further and stands infront of the table. She bites her lower lip to control her tension and gathers courage, “Hi Mr. Mehra, I am Radhika..Neil’s sister”
She did not get any response from him and she curses him in her mind and continues her talk, “I know you are angry and did not like this proposal. But you know what…Neil & Sam are in love for the past two years and they are so serious in it. I heard that even your parents are happy with it but you are not. I don’t know why u refused it…all i want to say is My brother is a great human and a very sensible and responsible person. Sam is his life and i want him to get all the happiness in life. I promise you that Neil will keep her happy more than what she had in your home”
She waits for him to response but again there is no response..she gets irritated and makes faces looking at the back of the chair but somehow controls her anger saying, “What i can assume if you keep quiet like this? Okay..atleast pls tell me what i need to do to get ur acceptance for this marriage? I wil do anything and will go to any extent for my brother’s happiness”
To her shock, he replies, “Marry me”
Rads legs rooted there in shock and she couldn’t believe what she heard now…she stares the back of the chair without blinking her eyes and soon her trance gets broken and she says in cold tone, “What nonsense are you saying?”
This time, her all strength gets broken seeing the person behind the chair when he turns and says, “MARRY ME…I WILL ACCEPT FOR THIS MARRIAGE”.
She is in lack of air now..feels so much suffocating and her view just stuck on the person who stands infront of her with a cool smile on his face. She whispers, “Arjun”.
She is still in shock and he breaks it saying, “Good…i am so happy that you still remember my name” by saying this he gets up from his chair and walks to her and stands beside her. She is still looking at the way he was sitting.
He leans so close to her and whispers, “I MISSED YOU SO BADLY RADHIKA”
Radhika gets jerked off and is in the effort of moving back, she gets hit in the chair beside her and is about to fall down, but he catches her through her waist and pulls her to him.
She gets pushes to him so easily and hits his chest…her breathe is getting higher and higher having him so close to her. She did not lift her face to look at him and tries to move back from the position..but she couldn’t. Slowly she raises her eyes to look at him and witness his winning smile looking at her tensed face.
She groaned in her low voice, “LEAVE ME”
Arjun, “Once i did…but not now”
Rads just trying to get release from his grip and he continues saying, “I am not here to leave you Radhika”
He feels her restlessness and loosens his grip on her…immediately she moves away from his clutch and runs towards the door. But she couldn’t find a way to open it and pulling the handle on the door impatiently.
Arjun, “You cannot go out untill i allow you to go. This room’s control is in my hands now. It’s a remote door radhika…no use of pulling it”
She did not turn to look at him and prays all the god names she remembered to let her run away from this ghost.
Suddenly she feels her heart beat..beats faster and her inhale & exhale are also not proper. She knows that he is standing just behind her so close and hears his whisper near her ear lobe, “I AM BACK IN YOUR LIFE & WON’T LET U GO EASILY THIS TIME”
She closes her eyes tightly without even moving and opens her eyes when she hears the door clutch noise. She hears him saying, “Think well and tell me ur decision. You have two days time to tell ur decision. Now the ball is in your court.”
That’s it..the next moment…radhika is walking…no running on the corridor to go out. The receptionist who allows her…looks at her shockingly the way she runs.
FB ends….
Present,
Radhika opens her eyes remembering the incident happened today …. she murmurs, “What i should do now? And what i am gonna tell to Neil?”
Before she thinks more, she gets a call from Neil asking her whereabouts and she replies, “I am coming now” and she cuts the call & looks at the sea again with lot of confusion in her face.
She goes to her home and says, “Will get to know in two days” and immediately she runs to her room and locks it. She falls on her bed clutching the pillow tightly and buries her face in it saying, “I just hate you Arjun…for everything”
Precap: Thinking….
That’s it guys…how is the first chappy. Just started off and i am not sure how u find it. Pls pour your comments and share ur views.
PS: Silent readers..pls pls do comment on it…unless u comment we do not know whether u like it or not. After all we are putting so much of effort to impress u guys and expecting some appreciation …just a word from you all. I am saying this on behalf of all the writers Gauri, shree, jessie, sv, meen, manha, ritu, sree, sammy, myra and so many…we all are expecting atleast a word from you all. Hope you will make it this time. And many thanks for reading it.
78 Comments
Superb… dnt no hw to exprs my flngs… fabulous…. awsme episode… nw am thinking wat hapnd in thr past life… eagerly waiting for nxt episode….
Thank u so much Humera dear 🙂 aww..m flying. will update next soon.
Awesome…. Waiting 4 next …. And enemity 2 love… Tc…
Thank u so much Saran…will update soon both
sati akka
tis is mind blowing
hw can write sumone write stories like u
i shld say u shld start directing serials nw or atleast a movie .
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Nitu kutty…awwww am sooooooo happy ur comments after a long time. I m just jumping girl..thank u so much my cute little sister. Me directing serials ah…eeee 😛 ha ha ha u r making me stay in cloud 9…i am so overwhelmed now dear 🙂 love you sooooooo much and yes a bigggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg teddy bear huggggggggggggggggggggggggggg to u too..no need of emojis…all ur words expressed it already
Awesome… Waiting 4 next and enemity to love… Tc
Thank u saran 🙂
awesome. Superb.
Thank u so much Moni 🙂
Outstanding episode, love it to the core, Arjun wants to marry Radhika, I’m so excited its so very interesting, ooohhh I can’t wait to read the next update. 🙂
Thank u so much Brin….yep by hook or crook he will get her. will update the next soon
Way to go..very well start..on next one..thank u??
Thank u so much KK dear 🙂
Sathya just WOW …you nailed it the moment between AArju and Radhika was written splendid ????? his stubbornness to have her in his life was just too well depicted he is mad possessive stubborn and a no. Khadoos…loved it to the core..waiting for the story to unfold …stay blessed darling what a rocking start ???? hum to flat ho gaye love u
Thanks a lotttttt gauri dear :). Aww am so relaxed now seeing ur comment. He he he ….yep he is no1. khadoos. awww my showing my all teeths now looking at ur comments 😛
Nice one satzz I luv it……. 🙂
Thank u so much Gayathri 🙂
It’s awesome I have no words to describe it and please post your others stories too especially enemity to love ?
Thank u so much Sofia dear :). Sure dear i will update soon
I have always been a silent reader. So this first time I will say …very interesting story hope to see more twist and turn as the the story unfolds. Love it so far
Thanks jessie for commenting. It is a great feeling to know the views from the silent readers. Pls keep suppporting and commenting
Impatiently waiting for ur next chapter… I am a silent reader and started commenting recently… Reading all ur updates in wattsy too… These updates are stress busters for me away from my thesis… Thanks all for ur awesome updates…
Thanks a lot shankari dear 🙂 Awww…am soooo happy reading ur comments and glad that a silent reader is commenting now. Yep i just postd a prologue in Watty and thanks for that too 🙂 You are always welcome dear 🙂 even it is a stress buster for us to write and read ur comments
Sathya…this is superb…. Raneil bond arjun’s attitude every thing so nice. What happened btwn ardhika in past?? I am very curious to know what happened?? Eagerly waiting for next chapter
Thank u so much Jewel 🙂 The past will be unfold parallely with the current story . U will know it in each and every episode. Will post soon the next chapter
Hi sathya….awesome start…..I read ur enemity to love ff….can I know ur another ff titles??…waiting for next chapter…
Thank u so much Swedha dear 🙂
well my another ff is
My Second Love
A Painful Revenge
ETL
Those three are in progress now and i have completed few other ffs. Pls ping me seperately..i will send u the titles,
And yeah i forgot..my fav one..
The Modern Krishna…pls do read this also and hope u will enjoy this one for sure
Awesome , plz update soon, plz plz plz plz plz,
Thank u so much Sasha dear 🙂 Will update the next soon.
Wow … it’s really interesting … I know yoy are going to nail this ff for sure .. does ardhika know each other .. I really like raneil’s bond … they are too cool … arjun is soo bad .. how can he ask such a request from radhika .. what he think about relationship huh .. it’s not a business deal .. exchange radhika’s future for her brother’s happiness .. I know radhika will agree for arjun deal because she loves her brother a lot … after hearing arjun’s deal I want to punch him for that nasty deal … how could he .. anyway waiting for the next update so eagerly .. stay blessed and update soon .. also plz update your modern krishna next update too .. ♥♡♥♡♥♡♥
Thanks a lot Nayan. Awww….u made my day dear 🙂 Yes Ardhika knows each othr and that’s y rads gets shocked seeing him.He he he Yar don’t scold him pls….Arjun is born to be khadoos and arrogant…lol he is fit for that na 🙂 don’t worry whatever he did…his only aim is to get radhika that’s it..keep reading dear 🙂 love you …
Today i will update Modern Krishna for sure 🙂
Awesome chp di… Radhika Arjun know each other…. Arjun hates love…. what’s their past…eager to know… update fast di….
Thank u so much Aastha dear :). Why Arjun hates love now? What about in Past? All will be answered soon. Love you dear 🙂
Sathya awesome yaar. I liked all the scenes….
Thank u so much Arti dear 🙂 i am so glad that u liked it
Satzzzzz wowwww what a plot yarrrr…. Behen k badale behen.. Hahahahha… No seriously this sooooo. Awsome concept i just loved this.. N m. Shocked tht aradhika knew each other already.. So they to have some past story.. God m. So excited.. Post soon… Satz u forgot my name in. List of writer.. Ohhh. M hurt yarrr.. It’s okay.. Love u lots ?
Dipu darling…yayayaya….i am so happy reading ur words. U have many more shock awaiting between Ardhika. Yep they have a past. I am really sorry dear…i am holding my ears now to get ur forgive …:(
OMG Satz 1st chappye ippadi adhuri budhri irukkudhey, aduthu aduthu varpora chappys nee yeppadi manage panna pora, yennakku unnala panna mudiyum, un mela unnakku nambikkai irukkutho illayo theriala, ana yennakku un mela romba periya nambikkai vaithrken, so dont worry. All the Very Best.
And indha update, radhu arjun officekku vara varaikkum naa updatey relax aga thaan padichen, arjun_ receptionist idam raduva ulla varacholu sollumpodhu kojam yosijen, But Marry me nnu sollum podhu yen kutti kannu perisa aiduchu & the best Shock yennukku idhu. Flash back yennava irukkum…….
Precap, nalla yosi nalla yosi but seekrama next one update pannu.
Satz Thank u sooo much oru beautiful storya present panninadhukku & pannapordhukku.
Naaga dear…aww…i m jumping yipppeeee…..aduri budhiri ya..he he he 🙂 thanks a lot dear 🙂
Adutha chappies ellame…u will have two stories parallely…Present and past…so no need to wait for past revelation. u will get to read parallely. En mela ivlo nambikkaiyaama unaku…ennalaaye namba mudiyaliye ….achacho un kutti kannu perusanatha paakama vitutene..:P
Its really a great start sathya akka..keep on doing the good work…
Thank u so much Kavya dear 🙂 Pls keep supporting
Loved it
Thank u so much dear 🙂
amazing….interesting… waiting for next..
Thank u so much Jabbo dear 🙂
Omg…omg…so arjun and radhika know each other from the past …this is getting interested….yayyayya!!!
Di, update soon…i am seriously desperate…this ch kinda made me restless..
Love you loads ?
Myra sweeto….am so happy tht u love it. I will update soon…dnt worry
Hey it was superb loved it!!
Thank u so much Chaithra dear 🙂
kya bath hai yaar kya bath hai so ardhika had a past illa super dear supero super i love all shades of arjun and this is one top class yooo woooo lovely i am totally impressed so will she say s to him to save her brother or no to save herself gosh super linela ?? lol self flattering. Love u so much my arjun muhhhhaaaa
Thank u so much SV dear 🙂 ithu enna kelvi..solluvaala maatala nu…lol namma rendu perum than self flattering la per ponavangala….love u too dear 🙂
Woooooow……wow girl……Arjun …..what a character u gave…..damn good….he is determined to get radhika…..well I’m totally in love with this Arjun…….he is arrogant,determined, confident,stubborn & what not…..this will surely be ur next blockbuster dear…..muuuuuuuuha
Thank u so much Meen 🙂 i am smiling widely seeing ur comments. Thanks for ur amazing words…love u lot 🙂
post rehnuma pls u stopped with 9th part
waaa..waaa..waa….. nice shoot Arjun…Radhikaaaaa!!!! please say YESS….
Thank u so much Micu dearv 🙂 Result will be positive only 😛
Awesome
Interesting
Thank u so much Sravya dear 🙂
superb…..sis
Thank u Ruthra 🙂