Hi this is Sulbi…. Thought of writing a OS….
Ignore my typos and grammatical error….
Lets Start…
A women is shown in kitchen she cooks food and tears were flowing from her eyes… a young lady descending stairs and shouts, “Mom, am getting late… come fast..”
Women came running and handed over her a lunch box…. And said, “Radhika today can you come home at 4’o clock…”
She smiled faintly, “you want me to face the situation again… as we know what will be the answer… no problem mom… I can’t deny you… I will come…”
Mala who controlled her tears till now its difficult for her to control… before she could answer Radhika left the place…
Mala now started to cry vigorously and started to think how her life changed and how her daughter is hurt… tears were flowing heavily as she cannot help her daughter other than crying… she went inside her room and took the family pic… and started caressing the pic… it’s a cute pic… a couple standing together and a man holding a 4 years old girl in his arm and another one arm in the lady’s shoulder covering both of the protectively and safely…
Dilip why you left me… without you I suffered a lot but now our daughter is suffering too… I can able to bear pain… but I cannot see tears in her eyes… she is totally broken Dilip… am helpless… she needs you now… Its getting difficult for me to handle her… why its happening only to me?? What wrong she did?? Why she is facing a lot of problems in this young age??
She was continuously crying until her door bell rang… she wiped her tears and went down and opened the door… she smiled faintly and invited the person in…
She made him sit in sofa and brought juice for him to drink… and asked, “ Raj how is your wife and daughter?”
Raj, “Yeah good… did you informed Radhika to be here in 4’o clock?”
Mala, “Yes Raj… I informed her and she will be here at 4..”
Raj, “Ok… then we will meet you in evening…” with that he left from there…
Mala was thinking how the people and their behavior change according to their status…
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Mala and Dilip loved each other and with the family support they married… Dilip was lovely husband and lovely son to his mother… he worked as Sales marketing person… with his determination hard work he got promotion as Sales Manager… he was transferred to Hyderabad…. He shifted their with his lovely wife… and Mala got pregnant… their happiness was beyond the world… life was so blissful… and they had a daughter… their symbol of love… Dilip was so happy to see his angel… she is the copy of Mala… so chubby and cute… he was so blessed to have her in his arms… Dilip informed to their parents and invited them to Hyderabad as he cannot shift now due to his work pressure and Mala was also weak that she cannot able to travel…
Their family arrived and everyone were so happy… Mala had two brothers and one sister… everyone got married… Mala is the youngest one… she is lovely daughter and sister to everyone… she is so kindhearted…
Dilip had three sister’s and one brother… he is the elder one and so responsible person and loved his family… everyone arrived and started to play with the angel… as soon as Mala discharged everyone left to their respective places except Mala and Dilip mom… both stayed as Mala cannot able to manage the house and kid… as she is so weak… everything was going smoothly… once Mala was perfect both the mom’s moved to their places…
But poor Mala doesn’t know what had happened in her absence… time was flown now their angel started to go for school… she is in KG’s… she is so brilliant like her dad… and so calm, polite and bubbly like her mom… dilip was proud of her daughter…. He adores her and keep pampering as well as strict father… Mala was so lovely mother…
During vacation time Dilip and Mala family arrived to meet and enjoy the vacation with them… Mala’s brother wife’s started manipulating Mala’s sister Devi… Devi too believed like whatever they said was true.. Mala from small she is living a life like a princesses… but she never… every time Mala is the first priority and she is second… even in marriage… Devi was arrange marriage… he is uneducated… but for Mala everything opposite… mala lives in flat but she lives like slum life… now her anger raised to peak and smiled evily… brother’s wife smirked and hugged each other as they were succeeded in their plan…
Brother’s wife never liked their sister’s bonding… as well as they doesn’t like their husband’s as they care Mala a lot… they were jealous of her as she is living like a queen… so they decided to destroy her…
Devi slowly started her act… she started to mind wash Mala… and Mala was little affected with that… once their families left to their respective place… Mala started to think what Devi had said…. But she left it as she believed in her love…
Dilip was so stressed he had a loss in company… with that stress he came home… and Mala was playing with their angel Radhika and helping in studies…. Radhika was insisting her to say some joke… Mala was saying some random jokes and similarly she said one Saas and Bahu joke… Dilip anger went peak as already he was in tension and now he thought she was joking his mom…. So in anger he started to fight and Mala was try to explain but he keeps on shouting… in anger he left a word as, “ITS MY MISTAKE… MY MOM SAID DON’T MAARY YOU… BUT I WAS SO ADAMANT TO MARRY YOU… NOW IT’S MY BIGGEST MISTAKE OF MY LIFE I CREATED WHICH CAN NEVER ERASE IN MY LIFE… SHIT” with these words he left from their… Mala was totally broken… she can’t digest what her love has said… he is her life but he said its his biggest mistake… those words were keep on repeating in her ear and tears were flowing from her eyes continuously… Radhika doesn’t understand what happened between her parents… but she was so scared seeing Dilip anger and her parents fight… she started to cry… she slowly went near her mom and touched her shoulder… Mala saw Radhika immediately hugged her and cried her heart out…. Radhika too cried seeing her mom tears and slept in her shoulder…
Dilip came late at midnight… didn’t utter a word to anyone and slept… Mala who was waiting for him… thinking that he will console her and say sorry to her but she was so disappointed with his act and fresh tears made their way… she kept watching him and slept in sitting position…
Days were passing… they use to talk only if Radhika was their or else they won’t… Mala decided to confront him… as soon as he came… Mala said, “Dilip… I want to talk with you…”
Dilip who heard her chocikng voice felt like someone stabbed him… he halted and turned to see her… but next moment he stood froze after hearing her words…
“Dilip I need your happiness only happiness… if you feel you did a big mistake by marrying me…. If you are repenting for it… then don’t need to worry for it… i have a solution for that… I haven’t think you want to erase my part in your life… I loved you and will always love you… so as I said I need your happiness… lets separate Dilip…. Will divorce…”
With these words she ran inside her room and locked it… Dilip was standing numb… doesn’t know how to react… he hurted his life… his love… his soul to the extent… he came back to sense when Radhika hugged his leg… Dilip lifted her and saw tears in her eyes… immediately hugged her and cries his heart out…. And murmured am sorry angel…
He took radhika in his arm and went to Radhika room and placed her in bed and kept caressing her hair and she slept due to tiredness and he went to Mala who locked the room and knocked the door… two times and he got panicked and knocked again… but this time door has opened… he went inside and saw his life sitting in bed lifelessly with swollen eyes… look so pale… he immediately hugged her and said, “sorry Mala…. I was in office tension…. I showed my anger to you… I cannot able to control my anger at that time… am so sorry… those words are not from my heart…. I just said by mistake in anger… you are my life… without you am nothing…. I can’t imagine my life without you and Radhika… am sorry please” he cried his heart out…
Hearing his words… fresh tears came out… she too cried her heart out and looped her arms around his neck and hugged him tightly… Dilip was so happy after her arms around him… he decided to enjoy with his family… he pecked her forehead with so much of love and care… and said, “I will be back in 15minutes… be ready with angel… will be going out…”
Mala nodded with smile…. And he left from their… after half an ahour Mala received a call… she immediately ran out with Radhika… and she her life lying in the pool of bed with lifeless body… Radhika immediately got down from Mala and ran to Dilip who was lying in the road with the pool of blood… and started to cry… by shaking him she said, “Papa… get up… am so scared to see you like this… please papa..”
Those who are surrounded around them have tears in their eyes seeing the child plead… and Mala was standing numb after listening to Radhika she cried a lot and hugged her tightly…
Mala life has totally changed after Dilip passed away… she lived with her love only for 5years… but those 5years will be the best part in her life and the symbol of their love was with her… her family members those who have treated her like queen now started to treat her like slave and consider her as bad omen… even Radhika they started to treat her like maid daughter… with the plead of Mala they agreed to educate Radhika… but never miss the chance to hurt them… Mala was deeply hurt when her daughter was treated bad… they use to call her fatherless child… even if she play with other children…. Their parents will say her bad luck will affect you people… so don’t play with ther…. Radhika will be crying but she never show to her mom… but Mala who understand her child gave her privacy… both of them thinking not to hurt each other by showing their sadness…
When Radhika joined her job immediately she brought her mom from those hell… and lived alone with her mom and peace… but its not so long… once they came to good level again their relatives came… and they started to talk about Radhika marriage…
Radhika respected elders a lot and she won’t deny her mom… so as everyone said she too agreed… thinking atleast now she will lead a happy life… but when the groom side came to meet her… Mala’s brother’s wife started to say bad about Radhika… because of her bad luck only Mala was in this state… she is a bad omen…
Like this many proposals were denied without seeing Radhika… Some may deny with her physical appearance… Radhika is a bubbly and chubby girl… so they denied her with these two matters… one will be bad omen and another one is she is fat…
Radhika never showed her weakness infront of her mom… but she is getting hurt continuously which is too much bear in her age… till now 16 proposal has been rejected her…
Mala came out from her trance when Radhika called her… “Mom, am home”
Evening 4’o clock
Everyone were seated in hall… and Radhika was ready as usual… because she already knew the answer that she is gonna reject this time too… she get use to it… so she is not like other girls who were so excited to see the groom nor imagining her future with him… she is totally different from all the girls… she faced her life only with hurt…
Her trance broke out when her mom called her… “Come Radhika… lets move…”
She brought down…. And served coffee to everyone…. And stood in corner…
Raj, “She is Radhika… and she is her mom Mala… and Radhika he is Arjun Mehra… a great business man… he is his father Aadhi Mehra and his mother Nandhini Mehra….”
Radhika lifted her gaze from ground and looked Arjun…. A spark went through her eyes when she met his eyes but immediately she shifted her gaze to ground and brushed off her thoughts as she know what will be the answer…
They discussed sometime and later they left by saying we will discuss with our family and will make a call to you… once they left family members were chit chatting and Mala’s brother’s wife never left a chance to humiliate Radhika… later they all left to the place… Radhika and Mala had their dinner and went to respective rooms…
Mala was crying silently thinking of her daughter fate… and slowly prays to god that, “she needs all the happiness in her life and she deserve that… please don’t hurt her more… if you want to punish then punish me… am all ready to accept it… but please keep my daughter happy forever..”
Radhika locked her room and went inside her bathroom and opened the shower and tears are started to pouring out from her eyes… this is her daily routine…. She never cry in front of anyone… she always maintain a plain face… and in front of her mom she shows that she is stronger and she is happy… but poor girl doesn’t knows her mom knows everything because her eyes reflect her heart and her mom reads her eyes…
Radhika cried her heart out and took hot shower and came to bed and slept…
Radhika as usual went to her job… their she saw a young boy crying in road and people were crowded among them… she went near the crowd and got panicked… her breath was caught… she feel difficult to breath… a man was lying in the pool of blood and a young boy was crying and saying, “Papa… papa…”
She remembered how she cried in front of her dad body… immediately she rushed to the boy and hugged him and checked that man whether he is breathing or not… he is breathing… immediately she called the ambulance and in next 5 minutes ambulance arrived… she picked that boy along with her and got in ambulance… she did all the formalities and paid the bill and in application she entered the relation as brother…
After 2 hours doctor came from operation theatre and said, “he is fine… needs some rest… he is weak due to heavy blood loss… take care of him…”
Radhika got relief and felt like she saved her dad and saw the little boy who was sleeping in her arms due to continuous crying… the person has shifted normal ward… Radhika was sitting in chair along with little boy… waiting for the patient to gain consciousness…. After some time the person opened his eyes and saw a girl holding his son…. Radhika noticed him and said, “Sir… are you alright… how are you feeling sir?”
Person (in weak voice), “I am fine… Is Vinay is alright?”
Radhika understood he is asking about his son… and said, “you mean this little boy… yeah he is fine… but scared and cried a lot… sir may I get your family information to inform about you…”
Person nodded and said, “please inform my wife… she will be worried about me and Vinay… and told her number…”
Radhika called and informed… his wife came and rushed to him… and cried seeing his condition and hugged him emotionally… and Vinay woke up from sleep and rushed to his mom…
Vinay, “Mumma… am so scared… Papa got hit by Van and blood was coming from his head… am so scared and cried… so many people came and stand around us… but this aunty only came and hugged me and called ambulance… and gave money here…”
The lady saw Radhika and hugged her and said, “thank you so much… thanks is not enough… but I don’t know what to say… you saved my life… you gave my family back… am so thankful to you…”
Radhika hugged her and rubbed her back to sooth her pain… and said, “it’s ok… he is fine… relax…”
The lady smiled… and introduce herself as, “I am Samira Malhotra… he is my husband Neil Malhotra… he is our son Vinay Malhotra…”
Radhika smiled and said, “I am Radhika Mishra”
Both of them were chatting like they were friends from long ago… and they shared some time and radhika left from there…
These all were watched by Arjun… he was on the accident spot… he rushed towards them… but stopped abruptly by watching Radhika helping them… and he silently followed her and saw what and all she was doing… he was impressed by her caring act… and smiled appeared on his lips…
Next day, Radhika came to check Neil in hospital… and she build a strong bonding between Sam and Vinay… and Neil too admired her as a sister… Sam shared her personal life how she met Neil and Radhika shared her pain for the first time in her life to others… because she never had a friends… she liked this new feeling and Vinay he never left her… so she shared her heart to Sam… Neil also heard this… and she also explained how she felt when she saw Neil in pool of blood… everyone were having tears… Sam hugged her and consoled her…
Sam, “Radhika… don’t hurt yourself… people have different thoughts… those who humiliate you they were blind by heart… they haven’t saw your soul…. Which is so pure and clean… everyone doesn’t have same heart like you… the whole world was watching my husband in road none have helped him… but you… you are so fragile Radhika… leave them… don’t take those words to your heart… just ignore them… think of your mom and live for her… her happiness lies in your happiness… and one more thing don’t think you have none… You have me and Neil… He is like your brother and I am like your bhaabi…”
Radhika was overwhelmed by Sam and cried happily for the first time and hugged her tightly… Neil watched them and said, “Radhika…. You are not my sister…” he paused and Sam and Radhika were watching him with tears and sad look… he continued, “You are my first daughter and my second son is Vinay”
Radhika couldn’t able to control her tears… she cried happily and hugged Sam more by tightening her grip on her and Sam also reciprocated same…
Radhika left home with happy face… Arjun who just came to check his friend in hospital saw Radhika happy face for the first time… he too felt happy for her…
Arjun mind was fully occupied by Radhika… he couldn’t able to stop thinking about her… he decided to say his decision to his parent’s and informed them that he is ready to marry Radhika…
Nandhini was on cloud nine… because she heard a lot about Radhika…. And she liked her when she met first time in orphanage helping children’s and playing with them… she collected her details and informed Aadhi Mehra…. He too accepted…
Nandini called Mala… and informed that they were ready for this marriage… Mala was having happy tears and rushed to puja room and thanked god… Radhika who came happy face to home… surprised to see her mother happiness… and asked her, “Mom, what happened?? Look someone were so happy..”
Mala, “Ha.. Chashini.. am so happy… I got call from Nandhini ji… they have accepted this marriage… am so happy for you… tomorrow they all are coming to fix your engagement and marriage date…”
Radhika was standing shock… doesn’t know how to react whether she should be happy or sad… just now she was so happy that she got some one like her own family… again she is getting another shocking news…. A drop of tear fell from her right eye… Mala wiped her tear and cupped her cheek.. and said, “no more tears… its enough… only happiness in your life hereafter…”
Next day morning,
Arjun family arrived Radhika’s home… all were happily talking and discussing about their engagement and marriage ceremony… Radhika was so scared and crushing her dupata… Arjun was watching her antics… and smiled silently…
Radhika’s aunty were jealous of Radhika… so they again decided to ruin her life… they were planning to talk to Arjun and stop this marriage… they called Arjun and said about her luck… she is bad omen for their whole family… and started to curse and humiliate her…
Arjun couldn’t control more and shouted at them, “enough… not more than a word against her… she is not a bad omen… its you… you people are bad omen for this whole world… she is such a pure soul… one week before only I met her… still I haven’t know about her anything nor we had a conversation… but I can read her eyes… she is hiding some pain… that are visible in her eyes… her eyes reflect how pure she is… but you people… its waste of time to talk about her to you people…” he left from there leaving shock… but he stopped in his way in the middle seeing Radhika with tears…
Watching Radhika with tears he felt pain in his heart… he slowly moved to her and wiped her tears… Radhika hold his hand which he kept in her cheek and said, “I came here to talk with you… whether you accepted this marriage with your wish or..” she choked and Arjun watched her without blinking his eyes… if he blink tears will roll down to his cheek so he controlled and watched her… Radhika continued, “or with your parent’s force you accepted… but after I heard your conversation with aunties am so happy… you know I got rejected by 16 proposal… at that time I felt hurt but now am feeling happy… because of those rejection only I got you… am so happy… thank you so much for accepting me…”
Arjun couldn’t able to control more he closed his eyes and let tears made their way and opened his eyes to watch his love in front of him… he cupped her both cheeks and said, “I am lucky to have you Radhika… I have to thank for those 16 proposal… because I got you because of them… Rejecting a people with physical and luck its foolishness… I got attracted with you in the first sight… but I felt you were compelled for this marriage because I saw some pain in your eyes… and second time when I met you in road helping for that little boy I was totally impressed and fell in love with you… yes Radhika… I love you… I love your soul.. your heart… your chubbiness… I want to be a better half of yours… I will give all the happiness to you… I love you the way you are… I love this bubbly Radhika… will you marry me?”
Radhika was having happy tears… she wished a person like him… and she got it… she feel so blissful… she hugged him tightly and said, “Yes Arjun… I Love You… and am ready for this mariiage…”
Arjun hugged her tightly… and whispered in her ear… “I Love You too Radhika”
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So guys… how was it… I wanna show how a girl feel if they reject her with some nonsense reason… I don’t know whether you all got my point but after I finished it I felt so relaxed… even I cried while writing some parts of it… let me know your review… drop your comments guys… tc and love you all…
42 Comments
its….tough to handle rejection… but this story..inspire…whatever bad happened in any phase of life…but at the end…there’s something… good..kept for u…wow…lovely…
Thank you so much Reeva… am so happy you got my point… stay blessed dear tc 🙂
Very nice story
Thank you Girija… stay blessed tc 🙂
Thank u for giving such a kind of os It’s really true hw ppl will treat if the girl rejected they say it’s her father’s or mothers deeds or she is bad omen by this u r helping ppl to motivate for a girls whoever rejected once again a big thanks with lol… may god bless u
Thank you so so much Sayanthi… am so glad you got my exact point… stay blessed dear… once again thank you so much… tc 🙂
Sulbi loved this one shot…. Awesome…. Its happening on some life… Sad about that…. Pls continue write ur ffs on this page……
Thank you Saran dear… will post my ff soon dear… stay blessed… tc 🙂
Sulbi darling superb,excellent,marvelous,nice,good,awesome, fantastic,fabulous,outstanding episode….i loved it to the core…..i liked all the scenes…. But i felt rejections of a girl is so bad you know… I am so lucky to have my husband ganesh…. He too
liked my nature and i too liked his
calmness…. I get angry if someone
any girls like in this story… I first felt so bad for mala and radhika…. Tc loads of love to u from me and teddy hug to u…..
Arti darling… thanks a ton dear… glad you felt what i thought… am so happy… and am tooo happy for your lovely life… stay always happy dear and keep smiling… love you aloads and bear hugs too…. muuuaaahhh… tc darling 🙂
awesome. Loved it. Such a nice OS.
Thank you so much Moni dear… am so glad you loved it… stay blessed dear… tc 🙂
Outstanding, love it to the core, you nail it, well done. 🙂
Thank you so much sissy… glad to see your comment… love you sissy… tc 🙂
Loved it
Thank you Kavina dear… glad to see your comment… tc 🙂
Sulbi dear.it was an emotional one.I myself witnessed many girl’s life after their rejection.I loved it.love you take care
Chashu darling… thank you so much… yes it was emotional while i wrote i was so emotional… am so happy you loved it… love you more… tc dear stay happy 🙂
It was so emotional I had tears while reading about Radhika and Mala but it was pretty awesome as well..
Thank you so much Aadya dear… yes its soo emotional even i had tears while writing… am sooo happy its worthy of it… thank you so much once again dear… stay blessed dear… tc 🙂
Superb… just awesome
Thank you so much Lilly dear… glad you liked it… stay blessed dear… tc 🙂
REJECTION… The word itself gives more pain…but when it comes to a it gives a hell…70% of the girls r facing this rejection in their day to day life. And my point is pain of rejection is not only from marriage, it includes in our daily routine life…it vl be from our friends circle, workplace etc….I am so emotional now after reading this.not all will gt a man like arjun. U amazed me meera….a big bow for u…love u keep writing
Thank you so much Sissy… exactly sissy what you said was cent percent right… but atleast i wanna happy ending in ff… 50% gets happy and remaining its tragedy… i wish everyone will get a happy life and will pray for it… am really so happy to see your comment sissy… thank you so much once again sissy… love you aloads tc 🙂
Very nice and emotional story. Loved it.
Thank you so much Naina dear… glad you loved it… stay blessed tc 🙂
sulbi, very nice story, loved it…
Hey Jewel… how are you dear… thank you so much dear… glad you loved it… tc dear 🙂
Oh god sulbhi iam crying. .such a beautiful OS …i am still crying. .you nailed it????
Thank you so much dear… even i too cried while writing… its soo emotional… tc dear 🙂
I loved it
Thank you so much Tejasvi dear… glad you loved it dear… stay blessed… tc 🙂
This one is super….I don’t get time nowadays to read many…here I come today only for served cold,but the very title attract me…like you say it has many emotional scenes….still people has such bad habits ,they need to come out of such stupidities…very nice dear…
Hey Rossy dear… thank you so much… happy to see your comment… you got my exact point dear… thank you… love you and tc 🙂
Superb sulbi. …fantastic. ….good message. …
Thank you so much likii dear… glad you liked it… stay blessed dear…. tc 🙂
Amazing Sulbi.
Thank you so much Nikuds dear… stay blessed… tc 🙂
Sulbhi jaan……Pls gimme me a bone crushing hug…!! Am almost in tears …am nt1 sure…if A Arjun like this is possible for every girl who faces rejection…!! But I just wish…no one shld face rejection in this same way….!! Fatherless child….bad luck…family politics …..envy on own sil…so so realistic…!! And Arjun…wow.!! And the incident where he met Rads…u framed it well dear….!!
His words to her aunties..super….so heart touching Jaan…!! Why do God create such situations..?!! I wonder…the pain…and Rads reaction.! Yes..the prsn gets into a non reactive mode…!! Very well brought out dear…am so happy…!! You turned a wonderful writer ..!! Muaahhhh…God bless u….!!
Loved the title…!! TC..loads of love…
Jazz kutty…. am soo happy to see your comment… hug ofcrz…. tight hug for you…. those words are straight from my heart… and felt so happy that it reached to level what i thought… it really hurts… each and every girl face this problem but in different type of situation… now am in happy tears to see a word wonderful writer… thanks a ton darling… muuuuuaaaahhhh… love you aloads dear and always stay happy… tc 🙂
Sulbi my sweeeeeetheart darling sissyyyy. …you nailed it my honeyyy. …u wrote marvellously flawlessly this very touchy topic. …the rejection is a very hurting word within itself. ..even it’s for anyone. ..but specially for girls on marriage…it’s the very ridiculous thing to reject on the outer physical appearance of someone’s personality. …it’s really very sad….n we should fight for it….the way u showed rads n Mala bonding n pain…their accusations n arjun’s words for her last part…..was very outstanding. ….I loved it to the coreeeee my dear. ..it was really superbbbb. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hugssss ♡♡♡ ;* 😉
My dear darling sissy…. your comment meant alot to me… am smiling wide…. am soooooooooooo happy sissy…. yes its so ridiculous…. and the girls whi face that will be like hell…. we cant express their pain in words… am so glad every one got my point the way i expressed…. thank you sooooooooooooo much darling sissy…. love you more sissy….. teddy bear hugs for you….. muaaaaaaaahhhh…. tc and stay happy darling…. 🙂