Mohabbatein:Love stories Part3
This is the ending of this TS which was based on the movie Mohabbatein.Though the movie was very long my Mohabbatein is very short,so there may be lots of flaws.Still thanks to each n everyone 4 reading it.I request u to give a detailed comment on this part.Also plz answer the following questions.
Your favourite character(Why you liked it?)
Your favourite scene(Why you liked it?)
Your favourite jodi(The reason why u liked this jodi)
Mohabbatein Part 3
Dedicated to
RAOne, aisha, Aam2000 who want Vividha alive.
Atharv:Where are you all taking me to?
Somendra:Atharv Sir,you helped us to get our love.So in return we have decided to give you a gift.
ARJUN:It’s Maya’s house.She has arranged a surprise gift for you.
Atharv:The best gift is you guys’ love.That’s enough for me.
The door of the house was opened.Atharv was shocked to see Kailesh.He was weeping.
Maya came.
Maya:He is my father.
Atharv was shocked.
Kailesh:After retirement I was not knowing anything which was happening in college.Even though Maya joined the same college I was least interested to know anything related to it.Because I lost myself after what happened to Vividha.But now from Maya I came to know that you have joined our college.Happy to know that. I did a big mistake by separating you and Vividha.God punished me.
But please let me correct my mistake.
Atharv:How can you correct your mistake?It’s too late.
Kailesh:If you allow me I can correct my mistake to some extent.Please let me conduct yours and Vividha’s wedding.
Atharv:What?
Maya:Vividha di is alive.
Atharv was surprised.
Maya:Vividha di was saved.She was in coma.She recovered from coma.But she doesn’t recognize anyone.She is living as a lifeless body.
Atharv was shocked.
They took him to Vividha.She was sitting there motionless.
Atharv was stunned to see her.He could’nt believe his eyes.
Tumse bichadke aisa laga choota sapna koi
Kaanton se raste bhare manzile milti nahi…
He touched all over her face to feel her.
Dil se nikali har dua ho gayi beasar
Har pal rone ki saga zindagi ban gayi
He held her hand and cried.
Atharv:Vividha…your Atharv has come.
Ab toh mere silsile hain aansuon ke sang
Ho gayi hai subah shaam bhi berang
Vividha didn’t react.She just kept staring at him.
Jaane kyun kho gaya pyaar ka woh suroor
Jana na dil se door
Atharv cried embracing her.
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Everyone became sad.
Somendra-Indira,Dev-Sonakshi,ARJUN-Maya and Atharv-Vividha got married.
Atharv did grahpravesh carrying Vividha in his arms.Not knowing anything the numb Vividha kept looking at him.
Wedding night was beautiful for the young couples.
Somendra removed Indira’s accessories and filled her skin with his love.
Sonakshi looked so stylish in the simple night gown that Dev melted in her and they both forgot in each other.
ARJUN decorated their bedroom with romantic hearts.Maya came wearing an attractive saree and sleeveless blouse.ARJUN lost his control seeing his seductive wife and claimed her passionately.
While the other couples had suhaagraat Atharv simply placed Vividha on her bed and she kept blinking her eyes at him.
Months passed.
Holi…
Atharv went near Vividha.
A:Happy Holi Vividha.
He put colour on her cheeks.She put it back on his face.Atharv looked at her surprisingly.
A:Vividha…
VIVIDHA:Happy Holi Atharv.
Atharv became surprised and emotional:You are fine now?
Vividha smiled tearfully.
VIVIDHA:Atharv…is it a dream?Are we really together?
Atharv:Yes Vividha.We are together and no one can separate us.
They shared an emotional eye lock.
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Jana na dil se door
Kailesh,Maya and other couples came.Seeing Kailesh,Vividha got scared.
Kailesh came and kept her hand on Atharv’s hand.
K:You both are made for each other.Atharv taught me that however hatred there in this world always love will win.
Vividha was surprised.
All were very happy.
Duniya Mein Kitni Hain Nafratein,
Phir Bi Dilo Mein Hai Chahtein
Mar Bi Jaye Pyaar Wale,
Mit Bi Jaayen Yaar Wale
Zinda Rehtin Hain Unki Mohabbatein
Zinda Rehtin Hain Unki Mohabbatein
Mar Bi Jayen Pyaar Wale,
Mit Bi Jayen Yaar Wale
Zinda Rehtin Hain Unki Mohabbatein
Zinda Rehtin Hain Unki Mohabbatein (Mohabbatein).
Atharv introduced all the other couples to Vividha.
All of them celebrated holi dancing.
Soni Soni Akhiyon Vaali, Dil Deja Ya Deja Re Humko Tu Gaali.
Hum Tere Deewane Hain, Hum Aashiq Mastane Hain.
Hum Tere Deewane Hain, Hum Aashiq Mastane Hain
Jhooti Jhooti Batiyon Vaale,
Bholi Soorat, Dil Ke Ye Kaale.
Jhooti Jhooti Batiyon Vaale,
Bholi Soorat, Dil Ke Hai, Dil Ke Ye Kaale.
Ye Aashiq Lut Jaane Hain, Dil Sab De Tut Jaane Hain.
Ye Aashiq Lut Jaane Hain, Dil Sab De Tut Jaane Hain.
Jaa Kudiye, Jo Kar Le.
Gora Badan Tera Rang Diya.
Oye Mundiya, Vaada Raha,
Suli Pe Jo Na Tujhe Tang Diya.
Main Suli Pe Chad Jaanva,
Tu Bol Abhi Mar Jaanva.
Main Tujhse Agar Dar Jaanva,
Dil Naam Tere Kar Jaanva.
Yaad Rakhna Mera Kehna,
Ye Dil Ek Din Mil Jaane Hain.
Hum Tere Deewane Hain, Hum Aashiq Mastane Hain.
Ye Aashiq Lut Jaane Hain, Dil Sab De Tut Jaane Hain.
Kyon Mujhse Door Khadi Hai,
Badi Masti Tujhe Chadi Hai.
Kyon Mujhse Door Khadi Hai, Dil Ke Nazdeek Badi Hai,
Aa Lag Ja Gale Tu Kisi Bahane Se…
Bahane Se… Bahane Se…
Badi Masti Tujhe Chadi Hai, Har Ladki Door Khadi Hai,
Main Aagayi Phir Bhi Tere Bulane Se…
Bulane Se… Bulane Se…
Soch Kar Tha Tujhe Aana,
Aakar Vaapas Ne Jaana.
Hum Tere Deewane Hain, Hum Aashiq Mastane Hain.
Ye Aashiq Lut Jaane Hain, Dil Sab De Tut Jaane Hain.
Gam Ho Ya Koi Khushi,
Purva Ka Jhonka Hai.
Ek Aaye Ek Jaayega,
Kyon Dil Ko Roka Hai.
Is Dil Ko Humne Nahin,
Hame Dil Ne Roka Hai.
Koi Bata De Zara,
Kya Sach Kya Dhoka Hai?
Ye Duniya Saari,
Badi Hai Pyari,
Yahi Ek Sach Hai,
Ye Sab Rang Bade Suhaane Hain.
Hum Tere Deewane Hain, Hum Aashiq Mastane Hain.
Ye Aashiq Lut Jaane Hain, Dil Sab De Tut Jaane Hain.
Soni Soni Akhiyon Vaali,
Dil Deja Ya Deja Tu Gaali.
Jhooti Jhooti Batiyon Vaale,
Bholi Soorat, Dil Ke Ye Kaale.
Hum Tere Deewane Hain, Hum Aashiq Mastane Hain.
Ye Aashiq Lut Jaane Hain, Dil Sab De Tut Jaane Hain.
Hum Tere Deewane Hain, Hum Aashiq Mastane Hain.
Ye Aashiq Lut Jaane Hain, Dil Sab De Tut Jaane Hain.(Mohabbatein).
Maya,Indira and Sonakshi dressed up Vividha for Suhaagraat.Vividha was shy to enter the decorated room.Atharv was lost in his beauty.Vividha blushed.Their suppressed emotions burst and they expressed their love to each other passionately.
Days passed…
Maya:We all have decided to send Vividha di and Atharv jeeju for honeymoon.
Vividha blushed.
Atharv:We will go.But you all should join us.
Somendra:We too?
Vividha:Yes.You all should come with us.We all will go together.
They all smiled.
They all went for honeymoon together.They enjoyed a lot romancing.
Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo.
Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo.
Hum akele, kho na jaayen,
Door tumse, ho na jaayen,
Paas aao gale se laga lo
Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo.
Hum akele, kho na jaayen,
Door tumse, ho na jaayen,
Paas aao gale se laga lo.
Humko humise chura lo
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo.
Ye dil dhadka do, zulfein bikhra do,
Sharma ke apna aanchal lehra do.
Hum zulfein to bikhra dein, din mein raat na ho jaaye,
Hum aanchal to lehra dein, par barsaat na ho jaaye
Hone do barsaatein, karni hain kuch baatein.
Paas aao gale se laga lo.
Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo
Hum akele, kho na jaayen,
Door tumse, ho na jaayen,
Paas aao gale se laga lo
Humko humise chura lo
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo
Tumpe marte hain, hum mar jayenge,
Ye sab kahte hain, hum kar jayenge.
Chutki bhar sindoor se tum ab ye maang zara bhar do,
Kal kya ho kisne dekha sab kuch aaj abhi kar do.
Ho na ho sab raazi, dil raazi rab raazi
Paas aao gale se laga lo.
Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo.
Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo.
Hum akele, kho na jaayen,
Door tumse, ho na jaayen,
Paas aao gale se laga lo.
Paas aao gale se laga lo.
The End
16 Comments
yr……..Shivani entry was like twHornh entry match she came and match got end……. continue it….. because I saw her in pain…….. now I want to be happy….and want her killing smile to be shown………..
the best was When I read Shivani was alive in your Mohabbatien…. fav Jodi as u know………
I love Shivani character most, thought it was small but still good you should have continued……it…..
Best moment when you made Shivani smile Thank u…..
thank you very much
wow thanks a lot I am very happy thanks thanks thanks I don’t have words how much I liked your ff but why ended so early but the episode was hust amazing and of course the amswer if your question my fav jodi is obviously vividha atharva and I like this I can’t express you will laugh but I personally don’t know why I like them so much I am mad before them just totally mad and you are just amazing to write this ff just superb a big thanks to you to write this ff I request god to give this talent to me too and plsssss if you write another ff on vividha atharva I am just asking if you wish plsss do it I am very happy super happy after reading your ff and today in this ff also I will write inly only only and only
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thank you do much.this story is based on the movie mohabbatein which got over with the union of all couples and amitabh bachan realising his mistake.that is why I ended this story after uniting all the couples
and yes my fav scene was when vividha atharva were playing holi and atharva happiness by seeing vividha alright I am very happy today again thanks a lot for giving your efforts to write a ff for us thanks
i will add even more…
then vividha gave birth to a boy named anirudh
maya gave birth to a girl named armay
sonakshi gave birth to a girl name sruthi
and indra gave birth to a boy named naren
they all lived happily…
and my answer for ur question
favourite character – atharv for encouraging his students positively
favourite scene – everybody confessing their love to their patners because it is heart touching
favourite couple – adharv and vividha because they are selfless and dedicated
thank you so much.loved your imagination about their kids
Favourite character – dev (i don’t the reason)
Favourite sence confessing their love
Favourite couple- devakshi i mean dev ans sonakshi
thank you so much
Amazing!! such a happy ending
Sad cx it ended,.. This was a super duper ff
My favorite character is atharv n vivi in this ff..
My favorite scenes are vitharv scenes..
N favourite jodi is of course my lovely vitharv 🙂 🙂 🙂
thanks a lot.i feel very happy
Why don’t u start a ff again on vitharv?? Plxxxxxx
Wow…what a lovely update and ending…will going to miss it a lot. It has become my favourite ff of somendra and Indira.
Sorry, I don’t like “character”, I liked “Characters”, and that’s Somendra and Indira. Yippee! My favourite scene…. If it is one then say…all are my favourite scenes. And of course favourite jodi…of course Somendra and Indira. And reason, I’ve not watched Them once, I’ve watched them twice…. So of course… This is reason. Love you di. Take care. Waiting for your reply.
thanku.you have watched them twice means u watched them in both QH n Sarojini?
Awesome….sorry for commenting late..thank u so much for uniting ViTharv…pls come up with new FF on ViTharv…u have amazing writing skills
thanks a lot.i’m happy that vitharv fans supported me.Without vitharv fans’ support this TS wud’ve been incomplete