Hello guys!!!! I’m Smiley back with a new story and I promise that I will continue my old story My Lovestory SWASAN RAGLAK but it will take a little delay!!! But for now enjoy this new story and after reading please do comment and My story is based n movie Mr. Perfect!!! Lets go
Plot and Intro:
This story revolves around Swara and Sanskar who are rivals from childhood. Their parents were close friends and due to some reasons Sanskar’s father shift to Australia. But again Sanskar’s sister, Kavita’s Marriage will be fixed and the childhood rivals are going to meet after several yrs and what happens to their love story is my ff .
In India,
In Kolkatta,
Swara Gadodia: A cute bubbly mature girl who lives her life very happily. She was an expert dancer. She had 2 cute puppies which she named as Chotu, Mintu. Also runs an old age home+Anad Ashram.
Shekhar Gadodia and Sumi Gadodia: Parents of Swara.
Ayush Gadodia: Bro of swara. Very bald and fat.
In Australia,
Sanskar Maheshwari: A fun loving flirt who works in a game company. A childish natured. He doesn’t want to adjust with someone. Moreover he is selfish in love and thinks about himself in some matters.
Rahul, Usha, Yash, Yuhi, Maddy: Sanky’s friends.
Kavita Maheshwari: Sis of Sanky. Her marriage is fixed.
Durga prasad maheshwari and Annapurna Maheshwari: Parents of Sanky and Kavitha.
Ram Malhotra: Father of Ragini.
Ragini Malhotra: Same xerox copy of Sanky.
Kunal Sengupta: Friend of Ram.
Isha Malhotra: Sis of Ragz.
Sahil Gadodia: Bro of Shona and Ayush.Lives in Australia.
Prologue:
A boy of around 8 yrs is seen batting. He wants to win the match. He hits a 6. His parents are also present there.
After sometime,
A girl of around 6 yrs was crying. She was Swara.
A man comes and asks
Man: Swara beti kya hua
Swara: Dp uncle, Sanky is not giving me the ball for bowling.(Yeah you are, Right??? The Boy is Sanky and Man is Durga Prasad)
Dp: Come, I will ask me and see he won’t say no to me.
Tthey both go to Sanskar.
S: What happened papa?
D: Why are you not giving a chance for Swara?
S: But papa, we will loose the match.
Dp takes sanskar near a wash basin and pours some water on sanskar’s hand.
D: See Sanky remember one thing in life. If you adjust in life, you will have lots and lots of goodpeople, like now you have plenty of water in your hands.
Dp folds sanky’s hands, so that the water flows down
D: So see, if you don’t adjust in your life and keep rules like now, there will be no one in your life.
S: So now what papa??? Now I should give bowling to Swara. Thats it na. Ohay.\
Sanskar goes to Swara and give the ball.
Swara bowls the ball and the batsman hit a 6. Even next time Swara bowls and he hits another 6. And the opposite team wins.
Sanskar was fuming in Anger and left the ground.
Sanskar in mind: No papa you were wrong. If we adjust in life we will loose every thing like ur happiness and also anger becomes more. So , my policy is never adjust and never make anyone adjust for me.
This is only my life and I have right on it.
So how’s the story??? Is it interesting??? Plz do show ur response by comments!!! I also had a request!!!! I may or may not give regular updates but plz understand me!!!!
22 Comments
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nice..
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Hai smiley your story was nice but smll change sorry sorry a big change that is swaragini charecter swara is suitable in thapsi charecter and ragini suitable in kajal charecter
Exactly even I feel the same….
Nice. But this story concept already pavani di write the ff name is “meaning of love”
sanskar(phrabas),ragini(kajal),swara(tapsee) anyways nice
Nice but this story concept already written by pavani di the name of ff is “meaning of love”
sanskar(phrabas),ragini(kajal),swara(tapsee).
anyways nice
Oh I don’t know that there was another story!!! But that is her version and this is my version!!! And ha I am sorry if any one are hurt by characters but you all never saw Ragini in Tapsee and Swara in Kajal roles na!!! So………………………………
hmm….sorry Smiley… i dunno about other story.. did you and pavani took this concept from a novel or something ?
if only you both took this concept from other, it’s better to tell us the source dear…
if only you took it from pavani, you need to ask her permission..
then if only you took it from other source not pavani, continue it..
there is no chance that Swara suitable for A or B character…
maybe Pavani and you have different pairs to write, rite ?
No Readers should advice you A or B character just because they already read from other author in perform of other pairs…
sorry if only i hurt everyone….
sorry but i also feel swara is suitable as maggie , i mean taapsi and ragu as priya (kajal)
well dear.. if you took from other source, not pavani.. then continue it…
Of course you all had an experience of pavani’s ragsan and now have experience of my Swasan!! Anyways the choice is urs
not all…as me i have no experience to read….. that sibling in law ff…
so, continue it…
HEY mica!!!!! If I hurt you I’m sorry!!!!! But seriously I don’t knew that there was another story regarding this plot!!!!! But reading the same plot with different pairs is ur choice!
naaa…. Smiley.. as i told you.. if only you took it from another source i.e a movie or a novel or something, for a betterment you can put the source dear,,…but i wish you continue it..
Sorry if somehow i got wrong message by some readers comments that you copied pavani’s story.. by their complain about the characters, huh!!!! but then after reread.. you both only took the concept from other source..
that why i said..
NO READERS SHOULD ADVICE YOU REGARDING THE CHARACTERS…. it’s your choice to write them on your favorite pairs..
and yeah i DIDN’T read rag——————————san story as i only LOVE SWASAN.. so go a head dear….
Awesome dear..I didn’t see the film.so don’t know anything.. I think pavani right this as rag -San ff .. So many want character change.. But as a Swasan fan I love to read it with my swasan ..a new version
Hi guys i am sry if i am created any problem in this ff. I didnt mean to hurt anyone. i just give u the information because u give ur new version na thats y and once again sryyyyyyyy .
All the best for ur ff keep going post next part soon.
Naa.. avika.. don’t feel bad.. you just gave information, not suggestion or any advice regarding the character…it has different meaning,…. 🙂 🙂
Interesting..
Yeah its telugu story but i like this ff