Hellooo sweeties!!!! This is Savanshi back as promised…
I’m really glad that u all liked the concept…
So here presenting the first chapter…
Hope u all like it??….
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I was all ready for my college… but my stupid friend… Oh sorry I didn’t introduce her.. she is my jaan… my PIC (partner in crime).. my saviour… my tough tym strength… my crying pillow when I m upset… well tis much praise for my Nikku… I just luv her?
Oh I forget what I was telling… ya.. she had already left as she had classes early….
And now I left with no option… is going alone… huh quite boring isn’t it???
And here is where d tragedy begins… as I was passing through d convent school admiring d best and d most cute creation of God… Oh!! U dirty minds I m talking about sweet children…??
I saw a lil cutie pie crossing d road alone and a car racing towards her… I was shocked… I just ran to save her at d nick of d tym… I rolled over but hush!!! D cutie was safe…
And now…. wat else the sinner to b punished… but to my surprise he started shouting at me… nd I was lyk… WAT D HELL!!!
It was enough for me to lose my temper(oh!! Sorry I forgot to mention tat I m quite short tempered)…
I took a look at d cutie… asked if she is fun… to which she cutely replied… YES!! and kissed my cheek… I handed her to her teacher who by now has reached there…
Now I turned to… yes off course… MR. ARROGANTLY STUPID… (nyc name na!!!???)
But I think by now he understood who was at mistake… so now…. wat????
Sorry tym!!! He just murmured a SORRY.. in such a inaudible voice that for once I got doubt on him??? (hehe my dirty mind)
But I just said, “It’s Ohk… Be careful next tym.. while driving and while yelling at others b4 inquiring”….
Now
Wat Now… we went our ways…????
Do u want to know my succchhh a long love story in one day….
Have patience dear….
Keep reading to know about… MY MR. WHATEVER….
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Hmmm… so how was tis… quite boring… Oh I know tat!!! any more comment making me realise how bad tis was will b heartily welcomed…
Till then b happy and keep smiling??????
A hearty promise that the next update will be a long one???
31 Comments
Hahaha
Thank you dear!!!
woh…so soon next chapter is there???loved it..and what u said???paitence to readers?it is impossible?continue so soon..and want soooo big long chapters?
p.s-pls update in wattpad too and ofcourse want ur wattpad id?
Hehe!!! Okkk sweetheart the 3rd segment will also soon be on display.. I have already replied to your query about watt pad on my 2nd segment…
And hearty thanks for ur appreciation
Awesome
Thank you soo much dear!!!
Nice one..continue soon..
I’m blessed…. thanks a lot
nice
update soon
thank you Anu dear!!!!
Loved it
Thank you dear!!!
nyc
Thanks sweetheart!!!
Very nice
Thanks dear!!!
loved it..but very short updates
Thanks dear.. upcoming updates will be long one….
Nice
Thank you Maryam!!!
Hey savanshii ?
Ur back….
Superb ? do post nxt part soon..
Yup sweetheart!!! It feels great to be back here.. Thanks and yaa next part is already up for u all.. do let me know how it is??
Loved it
Thank you dear
nice
Thanks dear!!!
Nyc
Thanks dear was eagerly waiting for Ur comment…
this epidode was indeed a good one…love u
Thanks a lot dear!!!
I’m blessed to have a reader like u
nice