Hi guys! This is Otakustuff. It is my first fanfic on this site. Please review! Suggestions and constructive criticism are always welcome. Negative feedback is also welcome. Please tell me which parts parts you liked, did not like and what would you like to read in further chapters. I will try my best to incorporate those ideas into my plot but they may not necessarily appear in the next immediate chapter.
Also I am so happy to see so many people liked my idea. Thank you everyone! So here we go with the first chapter.
“Saanchi” will be dialogues
‘Saanchi’ will be thoughts
Italics will be flashbacks or emphasis on specific words
———-Episode 1———-
Gayatri called nurse and told her to give the list of new interns coming in this year. She fumes after seeing the first name on the list.
“I wont let his daughter study in Savitri devi college and hospital. I can’t let anyone ruin my plan. I would have had this hospital under control by now if not for her.
Savitri devi….alive or not…she still proves to be an obstacle in my path one that i can’t seem to get rid of no matter what.”
Gritting her teeth in anger, she realizes too late that she crumpled the interns’ list in her hand. But then she gets an idea.
She cuts the topper Sanchi Mishra’s name from the list and asks the nurse to get the correction done and make a new list and send it to her husband.
‘I just knew it when I saw the name Mishra. After marrying Anand I had enough money in my hands for hiring someone to find out about her. I have been keeping watch on that Mishra’s wife Jaya and their children for years now.
The son seems harmless but the daughter proved to be a problem even more so since she too followed in her father’s footsteps of becoming a doctor. Of course I knew that Jaya won’t stay quiet, she would send her daughter in this hospital and make her study right under my nose so as to mock me. But you don’t know me Jaya.
I won’t let you live in peace or my name won’t be Mrs.Gayatri Anand Malhotra.’
———- PRECAP ———-
Jaya meets her old friend Kusum. Both talk about their children.
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To find out more stay tuned for next episode!