Hi guys!? This is Otakustuff. It would be my first fanfic on this site. Please review! Suggestions and constructive criticism are always welcome.
I wanna first share my basic idea about the story, test the waters and see if it would be worth writing complete story. If it is received well enough I will definitely write the story. So please give me your honest feedback and also any suggestions you might have. Constructive criticism is also welcome anytime. Though I wont be revealing the whole plot so as to keep some suspense.?
Another thing I would like to tell you is that though this a kaanchi story , it wont be focused on just two of them all the time. Other characters will also make comebacks through chapters to give clues about the main plot.
So the bottom line is it wont be just Kaanchi romance story but also of suspense genre.
Mrs.Khadoos v/s Mrs.Malhotra :
Kaanchi get married because Jaya doesnt want her to get recognised. Also she fears that some people might recognise her being sunil’s daughter and take revenge on her by destroying her careet. Jaya and Kusum know each other. Veer will play cupid sometimes and is like Mr.Khadoos’s younger brother and loves Kusum like his own mother. Kusum doesnt like annad but tolerates him for sake of Riya Veer and Priya. Riya is not that bad just a bit foolish. Though she still dreams of being Kusum’s daughter in law.
So what do you think?
If you are interested in the story please read further:
Also i need you guys’ opinion about something. Should kaanchi’s marriage remain a secret to people in hospital or be known by everyone? And why?( If u have any particular reasons or ideas about it ) In case of jeeping marriage a secret it will be still known by Malhotra family( or maybe some members of Malhotras ). The updates might not be regular ones since i have exams coming up in mid august( I couldnt wait till then to share this idea??) and also i don’t wanna update just for the sake of it and compromise the quality of the story…rest assured i will try my best to update asap.