Hii guys lover here…
Firstly happy hug day…
How are you all.. I missed you and still missing your comments.
Khuda salamat rakhna unko,
Jo humse Nafrat karte hai,
Pyaar na sahi Nafrat hi sahi,
Kuch to hai jo woh sirf humse karte hai..
And lets begin my os…
How much you mean to me?
Here you go…
It was raining heavily and no vehicles are running because in city like Mumbai get jammed due to water even when there is just a rain for 2 to 3 hours continuously. So because of that reason I was walking through the breeze when my eyes find someone standing on roof of the breeze wall and is about to jump from there.
She jumped from there when i saved her and due to disbalance the peraon fall on my chest and we both landed to ground. After some time composing myself i waked up.
And I was shocked to see that she is a girl. She looks so cute and beautiful i thought as soon as i saw her face clearly. But I Brushed that thought away and exclaimed loudly having strictness in my voice as soon as i made her stand.
I: Wow. Kitna Aacha karne ka soncha. Famous hone ke liye suicide. Not bad. Kal ke paper mein tumhari hi news aayegi chinta maat karo. Lekin uske dekhne ke liye tum nahi hogi. Aur tumhare family mein se koi khush nahi hoga kyunki wo toh ye sonch rahe ki unki beti ne aisa kyun kiya. Pagal ho gaye hai aaj kal ke log. Famous hona ho toh suicide.
I was doing non stop blabbering when I was suprised to find that girl again trying to ship that wall.
This time I without even waiting a second hugged her. Don’t know what me do that but yes I, the great kunj sarna hugged her.
I hugged her gently and started to rub her back to made her feel comfortable. The hug lasted till half an hour. She was weeping and crying all the time. It looks like she is trying to melt all her pain in my arms.
After sometime I apart her from myself and looked at her eyes which is red because of crying. I can sense that she suffered too much after looking at her eyes. So i just made her sit to near by and asked her to tell.
She:- I am twinkle, twinkle taneja. Jo kuch bhi nahi hai. Sirf aur Sirf ek badnaseeb ladki hai. Jaisa tumne bola ki family. Koi family hogi tab na royegi. Main anath hun. Ek jeene ka sahara tha mera Yuvi, aur aab wo bhi mera nahi raha. Usne mujhe bina sonche aaj bol diya its over. Agar iss duniya mein main akeli hun toh ye duniya main rehna ka kya faida. Jab ye zindagi kisi ke kaam ki nahi toh iss zindagi ka kya faida. Aab tumhe hi dekh lo mere karan tum pareshan hokar yaha khade ho jabki tumhara bhi koi ghar pe wait kar raha hoga.
She was weeping during saying all this and as soon she end she burst out crying.
I felt bad to see her in this condition. I felt like someone pinch needle into my heart while i saw her crying.
And I unknowingly started to tell her the story, the saddest of all story of my life.
I: My parents died in an accident when we were returning from vacations. I was just 5 years old at that time. After that incident choti maa use to take care of me. Lekin Jaisa hum jante hai usse kisi ki khusi bardash nahi hoti toh meri kaisa hoti. I lost my choti maa too when I was 15. She died because of br*ast cancer. After that i got alisha. What to tell about her, she was the most memorable lesson and mistake of my life. I truly loved her but she never did. She just wanted all my money. On our marriage day she ran away leaving me alone. And after that day i never believed in relationships. I never want anyone in my life now.
She looked at me in guilt. When i saw her and continued….
I: Don’t look at me like that. Waise I am kunj, kunj sarna.
She was shocked to hear my name. After all she would be because i am that one only who owe everything just in one year. And the most handsome and leading businessman of India.
I saw till now it stopped raining. I asked her not to be so shocked. And called my driver. I made her sit in the car and took her to my home.
Next scene,
It had been 1 year since we meet. Till now we have become very good friends. We shared the best bonding i have ever had with anyone. She use to understand me without even telling.
We don’t needs words to tell each other what we feels. She had become my necessity. Agar wo ek pal ke liye bhi mere samne nahi hoti toh mujhe bechaini hone lagti thi. Aur inn sab baaton ke beech mujhe ek baat ka ehsaas hua ki mujhe usse pyar ho gaya hai. Haan usko jisko main janta bhi nahi tha. Jisse mera koi lena nahi tha. Aab wo mere liye mere jine ki wajah bann gayi hai.
As i was thinking this I saw her and my glance stopped at her only. This is the first time I saw her wearing saree. Yes I requested her to do so because i want to her what i feel for her.
Firstly i hesitates that if it broke our friendship but then i understood ki jab tak hum apni baat kisi ko bol nahi dete humein kya pata kya hoga.
I came out of my thoughts as soon as she stepped towards me.
I: So are you ready ?
She just make some sarcastic face.
While we moved towards car and i again get losted in my own world I know she wants to hear some compliments from my mouth but she has to wait for a while for that moment.
As we reached there i asked her to go inside and wait for me.
After half hour I went inside to see her who is looking at that perfect set up and is somewhat suprised.
When i stated twinkle.
As soon as she heard her name from my mouth she hugged me. I feel that hug to be the same as our first hug but differences are there. This hug shows me how much she trust me and what she feels for me. While that one showed her pain. I wrapped her eyes with a velvet cloth and again took her to some place.
I opened her eyes when looking here and there to find me she asked why we cam…….
She is about to continue when she saw me doing the same stunt from which i saved her that day.
She just got mad at me after that and asked me to come down.
But I being the great didn’t listened to her and told….
Uss dinn hum yahi mile the. Yadd hai?
She nodded her head in yes but was still worried.
And I continued Tumhe pata uss dinn tumhare aane se sab kuch badal gaya. Mujhe ek support mila jiski mujhe jarurat thi. Uss dinn tumhe hug kiya tha toh ek ajeeb si feeling hui thi. Aaj pata chala ki kya thi wo…
Actually I want to tell directly and saying this i came to her, sat on my knees and…..
Twinkle Every time I see you, I think I’m out of control. I do not know why I am feeling this way, but it’s like nothing I’ve ever experienced before. I’d like to touch your face to see if it’s real. How could I not notice until now that your face could launch a thousand ships?
I’d like you to know that I love you so much, more than I have ever loved anyone. I just want to stay with you while I can for as long as you’ll let me. Do you love me? I asked to her having a ring in my hand.
She readily gave her hand to me. While i made her wear the ring and she told….
I fell for you on the you saved me. Kunj. I never wanted you to think it in a wrong way. So I never confessed and thought to live my whole life as your friend. I never thought one day you will feel the same for me. I love you too Kunj….
And we hugged showing our love that we hold for each other.
THE END…
Dur chale gaye hamare chahne wale,
ruth gaye hume manane wale,
ab to hichkiya bhi humse puchti hai,
ki kaha gaye tujhko roj yaad karne wale….
Do I able to reach upto your expectations? Do you find it boring?
Hope u liked it? Thanks for lending ur valuable time n reading my OS. Sorry if it bored u. Do drop ur cmt below?
Love you a lots..
SiyappaQUEEN, Lover, Aarohi..
34 Comments
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Tumhe marne ki supari lungi toh phir comment kaun karega meri jaan. I love you so much..?? Thank you.
Loved it 🙂
So sweet and beautifully written 🙂
Each Os of yours makes me your fan 🙂
Love you 🙂 Keep writing 🙂
Mili fan nahi friend hun teri main…meri jaan..
Love you too..??
Hayyeee meri Survi,
Maar dala with this amazing piece of writing..! U nailed it dear..!
It was too good.. or teri shayari per toh me fida hogayi hun ..!
Or ye os bilkul bhi boring nahi tha…! It was splendid.
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Waiting for ur next os..!
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Thank you dear. Love you to the core….???
Shukriya for this lovely comment meri jaan
Areeehhh..!!!!!!!!
Tune theka laga rakkha hai kya muje mardlane ka to leh karle man ki puri,,???? to le marhidal mujhe tu apni writing se yarr,,???? Teri yeh katilana shyeri toh mujhe katil hi kardete hai,,???? This is justtttt no words to describe ur writing,,??? I love it,,????? suna tune,,?? and this is soooooo much beautifully written,,????????? ki tujhse mai puchungi bhi nai ??? kyuki tuje sirf yehi lagta hai ki hum sab sirf boring he sochenge toh tujhe bolke koi fayda nai hai yarr,,????? ab jaldhi se next post karde,, coz……
UR LOVER IS WAITING IMPATIENTLY,, 4 ur next writing,,???
Love you so much,,❤❤❤
My shyeri queen,,??
Tu meri friend hai darling nah ki meri fan. I love you so much. Shukriya cuteness ki dukaan for this sweet comment. Love you????????
Kab kaise ka pata nahi
Sirf itna janti hun ki tujhse ye dil pyar kar baitha hai sweetness ki dukaan…❤
It was nice and keep writing on twinj.
Thank you dear..?
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Thank you dear. Love you..??
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Hey Aarohi
I really loved it
Loads of Love
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Survi this was amazing….loved it
Hurry mein hoon sorry for chotu comment
Love u
No prblm dear. Love you..??
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Thank you dear..?☺
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loved it queen……………
lods of love to aarohi urf lover urf priyu urf survi urf siyappa queen………..☺
Babydoll tujhe maar dungi toh inti cute si friend aur comment kaise milegi. Aur phir Babydoll kisko bolungi meri sweetie.
Thank you. I am really happy tujhe pasand aaya. Love you to the infinity. ????
Be happy.
Aur ideas toh tum sab ke pyar se aate hai tujhe nahi pata tha kya…
Happy Slap day..☺
Hey queen
Awesome amazing Superb
N I loved
Starting n ending lines
Love u keep smiling
Thank you dear.
Love you??
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Love you lots ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ??????????????????????
Oye hoye kuch jyada tareef ho gayi. Yaar main behosh hone wali hun..??
Love you too yaar and love you more ?
It was jut too good dear!!!
Thank you dear