MUJE TUMSE MOHABBAT HAIN ONE SHOT (SWASAN + RAGLAK)
Hi guys I gave my one shot introduction and after receiving a lot of comments I am writing!!!!!!
Hope you all like it.. you will feel its lengthy because I am putting songs too….
Scene starts from KavSan and KavLak engagement….. sankaar and laksh are continuously staring at swaragini even they…..
Sujata – come on choro (boys) start the engagement ceremony
All of them seem angry but sujata doesn’t notice..
Sanlak – yes mom/chachi
Kavita – OMG sanky I was waiting since collage days
Kavya – yes kavita me to now finally me and lucky are becoming one
After all this swaragini are broken…. Sanlak give a fake smile..
Kavita and kavya – guys before our engagement our lovely fiancé will sing for us
Sanlak (didn’t like but sang) inderctly for swaragini – okfine..
SANSKAR SONG (MANCHALA)
Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor
Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor
Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor
Kheenche teri dor…
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
LAKSH (GALLIYAN)
O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena… x2
Teri galiyan… galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan
Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan…
Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka
Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan… galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..
Everyone clap for their singing and leaves sad swaragini and sanlak with all family member…..
Sujata – ok enough of all this lets start the ceremony
Kavya – yes
Just then one boy enters and says STOP with gun
Boy – stop this nonsense
Kavya – sid bhai you
Kavita – bhai what are you doing
Sid – saving my sisters from them
Kavita – we love them
Kavya – yes we love them
Sid – I am giving time come here or else pay for it
1…. 2….. 3……. BOOM
The trigger was for sanlak but swara in front of sanskar and ragini in front of laksh
SWASAN :
Swara – aowwwwwwww
Sankar – swaraaaaaaaaa
Swara faints and sanskar holds her and pats her with love which shocks kavita…
Kavita – sankar you…
Sankar – just shut up kavita its all because of you if your bhai didn’t agree why are you marrying me and because of you MY SWARA has to repent
Kavita is shocked to hear MY SWARA and is broken
RAGLAK :
Ragini – ahhhhhhhh
Laksh – raginiiiiiiiiiiiii
He keeps her in his lap and tells her to get up kavya comes forward
Kavya – sweetie you okay
Laksh – shut up no sweetie how dare you just because of you my ragini got it if your bro was not ready why did you come I thought you and your sis said that you don’t have anyone alive
kavya – yes we lied for u
kavta – yes becoz we love you
sanskar – love my foot true love was by them swaragini
laksh – yes lets rush to hospital and you both don’t even come there
ALL FAMILY MEMBERS ARE HAPPY EXCEPT SUJATA AS SUJATA THOUGHT THAT SANLAK LVE KAVI AND KAVYA….
HOSPITAL
SWASAN:
Sanskar lifts swara and brings her in the hospital
Sanskar to doc – please do anything but save her
Doc – I’ll tey my best
Sanky – please doc
RAGLAK :
Laksh – sav her please
Doc – don’t worry I ‘ll try my best
Laksh – thanks
Doc comes out
Doc – it’s a risky operations
San – doctor please don’t sat this
Laksh – yes please save them
Doc- I’ll try my best Mr maheshwari
Sanlak – yes doc please
Doc -nurse come in
Nurse – yes (she takes some tools and goes)
SWASAN :
Sanskar is standing out of swara’s ICU ad is weeping thinking of their moments!!!
Pal bhar thahar jaao
Dil ye sambhal jaaye
Kaise tumhe roka karun
Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karun
‘gar tum saath ho..
Agar tum saath ho
HE REMEMBERS HER CONFESSION AND THEIR WEEDING HE NOT TRUSTING HER LOVE
Teri nazron mein hai tere sapne
Tere sapno mein hai naraazi
Mujhe lagta hai ke baatein dil ki
Hoti lafzon ki dhokebaazi
Tum saath ho ya na ho kya fark hai
Bedard thi zindagi bedard hai
Agar tum saath ho
Agar tum saath ho
HE REMEMBERS HER GETTING SHO FOR HIM (HE WEEPS)
RAGLAK:
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
HE REMEMBERS THEIR ENGAGEMENT, HER CONFESSION,HER LOVE AND THEIR FRIENDSHIP
Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera
Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha
Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain
Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan.
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni
HE REMEMBERS HIM BETRAYING HER AND SHE GETS SHOT FOR HIM (HE CRIES)
TEMPLE:
Sanlak go there and pray
Sanskar : god please save swara
Laksh : do anything don’t take ragini away from me
Priest comes (sanlak are in different temples)
He say – (to san) hey you boy if you want to your wish to be fulfilled you should try this its difficult but if you finish this all your wishes come true
San shocked to hear this but says yes fr swara
Priest – ok you have to walk on these coal with a diya on your hands and reach the goddess and yes your diya fire should not go …..
San – ok
Sans starts and he is in pain but could do anything for swara and finally he reached and the priest gave him the mouli to tie on him and his love
San – ok and goes
ANOTHER TEMPLE:
Priest – hey what happen
Laksh- my love I want to save her
Priest – ok I have an idea but its difficult
Laksh – no please tell I can do anything for my love
Priest – ok
He tells him that the waterfall will fall from up and he has a stone attached to his leg he has walk up till durga ma and take holy thread
Laksh – ok
Laksh completes and thanks the priests
BOTH PRIEST (DIFFERENT PLACES) -I wish happiness always stays in their life and they always get love…
BOTH WEEP AND REACH A SPOT (CHURCH)
San – lucky what are you doing here
Lak – no bro I am come to pray here
San – oh ok lets go in
CHRUCH
They sit in front of jesus and pray
BG TUNE
Hai suna ye poori dharti tu chalata hai
Meri bhi sun le araj mujhe ghar bulata hai
Bhagwan hai kahan re tu
Hey Khuda hai kahan re tu
Hai suna tu bhatke mann ko raah dikhata hai
Main bhi khoya hun mujhe ghar bulata hai
Bhagwan hai kahan re tu
Hey Khuda hai kahan re tu
THEY PRAY AND LIT CANDLE…
HOSPITAL
Sujata – boys why did u break relation with kavi and kavya… and why you broke for this Bengali
San – shut up mom don’t you dare accuse swara I LOVE HER
Lak – yes he is right
THEY GO LEAVING SUJATA SHOCK AND RAM HAPPY
Ram – see sujata swaragini are so good I will be proud if they marry sanlak
Sujata – ok (frowns)
WARD 1
Lak – please my rag get up I love you please
I LOVE YOU AND YU TOLD ME TO LOVE KAVYA THAT’S WHY PLEASE GET UP…..
Ragini hands move but lak doesn’t notice
WARD 2
San – please swa get up I love you and I fogive you
You know I fogave you long time ago but I just realized that you really love me first I left you and now you no you cant leave me.. get up DAMN IT
SWARA HANDS MOVE AND SAN NOTICES AND CALLS THE DOC….
Doc – Mr Sanskar she survived you all go out and can meet her in 5 minutes
San – ok doc
He goes out and tells everyone and they all bless him
WARD 1
Doc comes and checks ragini and and says that – OMG this is a miracle like she was at a critical stage and now she so good….
Laksh gets happy and goes out and tells everyone..
UTTRA AND PARI GET A PLAN
Pari -everyone lets go you all are tired sanlak will stay here
Utt -ya bhabi
Everyone understand and leave with a smile leaving sanlak with a embrassment and blushy face…..
SWARA WARD
She gains conscious and sees san besides her
Swara – San I am sorry because of my you and ka..
BEFOR SHE COULD COMPLETE PLACED HIS FINGER ON HER LIPS AND SAUD “SHHHHH”
San – swara I could not understand your before but knowe I understood that you are my soul,life and evthing I just want to say “MUJHE TUMSE MOHABBAT HAAIN”
Swara is really happy and says YES I LOVE YOU TOO
SAN IS HAPPY AND HUGS SWARA AND SHE HUGS HIM BACK
RAGINI WARD
Ragini – laksh thanks what you did for me it a favor
Laksh – no ragini I did this because I..I… LO…
Ragini is happy and wants to hear
Laksh – ragini I love you from the core of my heart I know I betrayed you and you will not believe but I giving you time please accept me “MUJHE TUMSE MOHHABAT HAIN AUR I WANT TO MAARY YOU”
He was about to leave when ragini holds his hands and says I love you too and yes
LAKSH BEING HAPPY HUGS HER
AFTER SOME DAYS OF RECOVERY THEY GET MARRIED AND KAVYA AND KAVITA GET ARRESTED (It was their plan of killing swaragini)
SWASAN ROOM:
Swara – finally sanskar we got married
Sankar – I am so happy today
Swara – mee to
San – so
Swara – so
San -so lets start
Swara – blushes and hides her face in him
Sanskar first kisses he fore head then her nose the lips they then put a blanket and consummate their marriage..
RAGLSK ROOM
Rag – I am so happy
Lak – me to
Rag – finally
Laksh – yes and he starts moving towards her
She hits the wall and brathers he carries her to bed and consummate…
AFTER SOME YEARS SWARA GIVE BIRTH TO TWO TWIN BOY AND GIRL – SANSKRIT AND SANKRITI
RAGINI GIVES BITH TO A GIRL – RAGYA
The one shot ends in their smiling face!!!!
I know its not good but I tried my level best and don’t mind of the romance I am not good at it.. please comment over this one shot and I am planning to make ne more one shot..
MY ANOTHER ONE SHOT STORY “MY LOVE LIFE” it’s a swasan but even raglak are included
2 ROCKSTRS 2 NORMAL GIRL AND 2 LOVER FAN
Its similar to yeh hai aashiqui’s “DIDI SE DHOKA” so please tell should I write or not!!!!
THANK YOU AND SORRY IF ITS SHORT…..