Hi my dear friends…back with the next chappy of my good thief ff…hehe!!mujhe tumse pyaar hai doesn’t reached instead it becomes good thief ff…i loved the name…let’s enjoy the day with our good thief and our sweetie Minijalebi…before that I wish you all a very happy ugadi…we(tamilians) celebrate Tamil new year on April 14…and this year will give you more smiles and it will fill with all the happiness in your life…wish you all again a very happy new year my dears ?
Let’s start the day with more smiles…hehe!!I don’t know when it will get uploaded…may be afternoon or evening…ok ok I heard ur mind voice I will stop it here and here we go….
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RagLak parted their way…Ragini reached her house…
She watches Vikrant (Vikky r mintu)in the garden and murmuring something”this bua bina not at all fulfilling her promise..see she didn’t call me till now…no messages about her arrival…but paapa said she will come here today for sure…”
Ragini admires him for his love towards her…
Ragz(emotional):same like my bhaai..but his chote version…hehe!!
She smiled widely and moves towards him without making noise…
“bhoom!!!bhooooomm!!Mein aagaye…”ragz shouts in his ears from behind…
“aah…who the hell??”vikky rubbed his ears and turned back…
Vikky:areyy bua!!
He was about to hug her and ragz comes forward for the hug by kneeling down…but he stopped and makes pout…
Ragini:kya Hua mera bachcha…come come…chorry(holding ears)please mera pyaara mintu hai na…please come come…
She widens her hands and he ran towards her and hugged her tightly…
Vikky:my pyaari pinky (ragz nickname)aagayi and you didn’t forgot mintu hai na pinky…
\*Vikky would call her as pinky..*\
Ragz:how can I forget my chotu mintu…she pulled his cheeks and starts tickling him…
Vikky:aah…pinky bua stop na…haha!!*cute laugh*
‘pinky bua if you can…catch me bow bow…’vikky shows some funny faces…
Ragz:areyy…mera mintu..statue…statue..
Vikky stopped and blinks his eyes…
Ragini caught him and lift him in her arms and proceeds inside…he didn’t shake a little…
Ragz:what happened..my mintu is so silent…
He sighs something…Ragini shooks her head in what…
Vikky:areyy pinky bua you didn’t say release…
‘ouch’ said he bitting his tongue…
Ragz:haha!!be ready for your punishment my love…
‘aahh…bhaai…leave me na….’ragini holds arjun’s hand who twisted her ears from back side…
“totally forgot your bhaai hai na Ragini…you both started your naughtiness in the morning itself…haan…”Arjun lifts her luggage and called out nikitha…
Ragz:nahi bhaiyya…infact I missed you all…
Ragz hugged Arjun tightly…
Vikky:paapa paapa…pinky bua is lying…haan paapa pinky said that all her enjoyment were lost when she reached Mumbai junction…
‘Junction ‘which reminds her about laksh…
She reminisces her happy moments with laksh like how he saved her from badies…and their first meet…how laksh managed when ticket collector asked him to file a complaint…how he sleeps while opening his mouth….how she played with it…
Her scream of ‘he is a good thief’moment…
“pinky bua…pinky…”vikky shooks her….
She came out from her trance….
“laadoo tum teek tho hai na…”Arjun raises his eyebrows…
“haan bhaiyya…”she nods…
“Ragini…”nikitha comes and hugs her…
Nikitha:why you didn’t call me from yesterday…i am in death angry with you!!
“Bhabhi…you know na my friends won’t leave me so easily and yesterday was our last day together…so we roam over the city and don’t have time to call you…please maaf karo…”said Ragini by holding her ears…
Nikitha(pout):but you have time to inform your bhaai hai na…
“Bhabhi…that’s not me who informed bhaiyya it’s Nikhil who informed…because of my mobile issues…”Ragini pats her shoulder…
“ok I will leave you just for your mobile…”nikhitha makes puppy face…
Arjun phone rings…
“find out all the chain snatchers and thiefs who escaped from the prison within a week orelse you will regret for your deeds…”Arjun bursts out on his phone…
‘thief’ again remembers her about laksh…
“Ragu maa…where you lost it…”nikitha waves her hand infront of her face…
‘wo..’ragini stammers…
“any love story…”nikitha drags her in excitement…
“nahi Bhabhi…not like that”said she and smiles a little…
“don’t lie…am an assistant commissioner’s wife..your smile itself saying something is there!!”nikitha teases her…
Ragini explained everything about laksh…
“so he is your Romeo right…hai na…hai na..”nikitha lifts ragini’s face who is bending her head down due to shyness…
Suddenly her facial expressions changes when she sees Arjun through the window…
“but Bhabhi…he is a thief….”Ragini makes a sad face…
“what!!”nikitha gives ‘no way’ expression…
Ragini blinks…
“but a good thief..”she chuckles…
“anyway he saved you…circumstances might have pushed him to do bad stuffs…do you like him…”nikitha asked to get a clear idea…
“who is that good thief…”Arjun comes in between and he asked just like that…
But nikitha can’t able to control her blabbering busts it out…
“I appreciate him…but still he is a thief…keep it on your mind and Ragini you would understand what I mean hai na…”Arjun pats her shoulder…
Ragini nods and he leaves back to work…
Nikitha:areyy laadoo don’t worry about your bhaai…trust me if you love him means then I will convince him…
“Bhabhi not like that…he just helped me nothing more than that…leave this issue…”said she and left from there immediately…
“pinky…where are you…”vikky comes and called her name…
Ragini says “Mintu please bua needs some rest da…”
Ragini goes to her room and she unpacks her stuffs…she falls on her bed holding her pillow by looking the ceiling…
Laksh holding her from falling down and how people teases them flashes in her mind…
She closed her eyes tightly and pats her cheeks hard…
Time passes…it’s evening…Ragini doesn’t speaks with anyone from the morning…
“pinky bua..”Vikky pats her shoulders…
Ragini wakes up from her deep sleep…
“haan mintu…”Ragini rolls out and sleeps again…
“pinky bua…”vikky opens her eyes with his little fingers…
“mintu…please…”Ragini covers her face with her palms…
“paapa…see bua is in love…i told you na…”vikky shouts…
“nahi bhaiyya….not like that…i swear…”Ragini wake up with a sudden jerk but couldn’t not found Arjun…
“hey pinky…april fool…”vikky make funny actions and run away…
“you…i won’t leave you…”Ragini chases him…
“you can’t catch me…bow bow…”said vikky and jumps over the sofa and then he climbed over the table and starts showing stunts…
“Bhabhi…your son is vanar…”Ragini pats her forehead…
“why not he…like father like son..”niktha grinned…
Ragini glares her…
“ting tong…”door bell rings…
“go and see who has come…please Ragini…”nikitha makes a pout while Ragini nods…
Ragini opens the door and gets shocked…
“MiniJalebi…”laksh was surprised…
“tum…”Ragini freezes…
Both lost in each other’s eyes…
“you guys have met…”Arjun comes inbetween…Ragini comes back to normal when she hears arjun’s voice…
Laksh still lost in her…she stamps her foot on his…
Instead of screaming he says”MiniJalebii…”
“haiyo…Ragu do you know how to make that sweet…he is saying the same all the way…”Arjun asked her..
Ragini nods in no…
Arjun shooks laksh’s shoulder and he comes back to normal…
“hello Ragini…”laksh forwards his hand…
“hai…”Ragini uttered in cracking voice…
“do you know my sister before…”Arjun gets surprised…
“so he is her doctor bro…i thought of meeting you again but my fate makes way for that…i don’t know why but I want to see you again..”laksh says to himself…
“Wo bhaiyya…he came along with me in the train…we just know each other’s name…that’s it…”Ragini brings the situation in the right path…
“just know each other…i thought you would introduce me to your family about my actions and all…but you said we just know each other…ok you don’t have anything here laksh…let’s move on…”he lost in his thoughts and says “sir..am leaving…have some important works…bye!!”
“areyy…i won’t leave you so easily…come on my boy…”Arjun drags him inside…
“train that good thief…”nikitha comes out thinking something else…
Arjun glares her…
“good thief…so you said everything to your family…then why you’re acting like this…”laksh gives a weird look…
Ragini gives a fake smile and sighs nikitha to shut up….
“who is this Arjun…”niktha uttered in confusion…
“wo..he is lakshman…my saviour..if he is not there today then you couldn’t see me alive now…my rivals arranged goons and they planned to kill me..i fought with them but one man tried to stab me…fortunately lakshman came on right time…orelse..”Arjun got interrupted by nikitha…
“don’t say like that Arjun..god have sent him for us…thank you so much lakshman…just like you a good thief matlab a good man saved our girl in train yesterday from some cheap persons…”said nikitha by folding her hands…
“hands up…”vikky points gun at laksh’s head…
Laksh jerks in fear but others starts laughing…
“that was a fake one…vikky go inside and play..”Arjun pats his shoulder…
“I thought Ragini alone pagal…but entire family comes from mental hospital I think…”laksh murmurs…
“kya…”Arjun shooks him…
“kuch nahi…”laksh nods in no…
“go and get change…see your shirts gets nasty…Ragu take him to washroom…”Arjun points towards the direction…
She nods and sighs him to come…
Laksh goes with Ragini…
“so mobile trouble…what you’re upto…did you missed me..”laksh winks…
“shut up Laksh…how dare you called me MiniJalebi infront of my bhaai…haan…”Ragini glares him…
“you too…not weaker than I compared…why did you said good thief to all the members of your family..matlab about me…”said he and pinned her with the wall…
Ragini gets nervous….
“leave me…”Ragini starts panting…
“no way…”said he but shocked seeing something…
Ragini’s gaze turns towards that direction and shocked…
“shit…he found out about bhaai…Ragini do something…”Ragini panicks inside…
She turned his face towards her and kissed his cheeks…he freezes for a moment…
To be continued •••
So done with this chappy…tmrw will update my other ff’s…and am gonna take a break for a week bcz of family get together and bhaai’s engagement ceremony…
Will update whenever gets time..take care and miss you all
~Darshu
32 Comments
Awesome akka…
Tq da shri? glad that you liked it…
Awesome
Tq dear ammy? glad that you liked it….
fab and wonder how their love story will work xx
Tq dear sissy? will let u knw n d nxt updte dear..tc…
Awesome sisy.. I miss minijelabi nd good thief very much…!!!! Mintu nd pinky bonding r nice.. Laksh dialogue is superb da..whole family come from mental hospital.. Hehe..!!! Nikitha character is interesting…Na munadiyae solanum nu nenaichn.. Laksh ku lakshman name innum suprb ah suit aakudhu.. Ganga yamuna serial dhn niyapagam varudhu dear..ragz thukathula payandhu yendirika scene sema da…Last la ragz Voda step senjutinga..!!!! Take care dear
Thnks da sissy ? me too missd them da…hehe!!mental hospital…
S da enakkum sr Tamil version daan nyabagam varum…
Aama poor ragz…yemanthutaale…
Thnks da sissy ? me too missd them da…hehe!!mental hospital…
S da enakkum sr Tamil version daan nyabagam varum…
Aama poor ragz…yemanthutaale…hehe!!thanku thanku da…tc too dear ?
Nice akka sema
Tq dear sissy ? glad that you liked it…dear will post our ff soon da…u don’t mind na??
Akka ????
Superb
Tq dear gayu sis? glad that you liked it…
Amazing ?
Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it…if u don’t mind may I know ur nme plze??
awesome
Tq dear dharu ? glad that you liked it…
Wowww semma last ah antha kiss scene superb ???
Hehe!!thnks Vk…
Awesome
Tq dear sara? glad that you liked it…
darshu di the episode was awesome
the minijalebi and good theif convo was awesome too
and di enjoy your get together amd spend a lovely time with your family
waiting for the next part
Aww tq so much da iqu? glad that you liked it…
And thnks for the wishes da…
Will miss u dr?
Superb….
Laksh dialogue “Entire Family comes from Mental Hospital” is funny… Hehe
Hehe!!thnk u so much teito ? glad that you liked it…
a]AWESOME
Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it…
Awesome episode and loved it
Tq dear ammu ? glad that you liked it…
awesome darshu dear…mini jelabe and good theif scenes conversation semma darshu…vicky mintu cho cute…love them darshu….laksh oda mind voice family yae mental pola sema…loved raglak scenes lot..Ella raglak scenes semmmma…last kiss omg….waiting for nxt one darshu…
anna vuku wish panenu sollunga darshu…tkcr…
Aww tq so much da asra?…aama koluppa paren epdi solrantu…
Hehe!!kndippa solren da nxt Sunday daan engagement da..tmrw thambi varan native porom da kovil thiruvizha mvie…neraya plans irukku..kndippa solren nee wish pannantu…tc too dear