Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….all credits to Nikita for this FF !!!
Here we go with our first part :
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’’Don’t ever dare to come infront of me again …because I will be compelled to do such thing what I never wish to do’’ ….
‘’aap theek keh rahe the shayad hamara ristha yehi tak tha….’’
‘’very funny…..here take this ..your favourite’’
‘’bhudiya ke baal……awe…so sweet of you……….but where did you get this’’
‘’can’t you say cotton candy …what’s that language’’
Maha Arthi of Ganesh ji was going on………Jai Ganesha deva …Jai Ganesha deva was being played…suddenly havoc was created among people…
Firings were taking place and a gun shot was fired………….
‘’’Arjun get up…you can’t leave me and go…wake up…….’’
why were you crying for that Arjun? Who is he to you? ‘’
’’no you have lost it…you are my WIFE’’
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She woke up from the above dream sweating as her Phone was ringing at that wee hours…….
Jwala POV ‘’who might have called…are they again in danger…ohh what …let me pick the phone’’
Jwala ‘’hello’’
Caller ‘’Reach the place where everything started with you otherwise the kid would be killed mercilessly’’
Jwala ‘’which kid?’’
Caller ‘’So you really don’t remember anything…I will give a clue…a handicapped kid…rest who the kid is and where to meet you have to think…I give you exactly three hours fifteen minutes time…reach …else the next breaking news is the death of the kid’’
Jwala was about to ask when she heard the sound of Call disconnected ……..Jwala’s eyes were frowned………….
She immediately dialled Bhavya and informed her ….
Jwala ‘’Bhavya …he said where everything started……and he was talking about a handicapped kid…and I don’t know the place…do you have fairest idea? I don’t want to know who the kid is but I have to save him as he is a small kid and moreover handicapped’’
Bhavya ‘’what?’’ she screamed ……everyone turned towards Bhavya
Om ‘’What happened Bhavya?’’
Bhavya ‘’Sahil’’
Shivaay ‘’Sahil what happened to Sahil? Speak out Bhavya?’’
Bhavya ‘’Sahil is kidnapped’’
Shivaay ‘’what?’’
Jwala on the call listened to their conversation and spoke ‘’S..A..H…I…L’’
Jwala POV ‘’Sahil…I feel like I know him…I feel he is a part of my life, a very important part of my life….why am I not remembering anything…whatever it is… I have to save him’’
She came out of thoughts…..
Jwala ‘’hello Bhavya are you listening?’’
Bhavya ‘’yeah…Mam…I am listening’’
Shivaay ‘’put the call on speaker…now’’ he screamed in tension ………
Bhavya immediately put the call on speaker……..
Jwala ‘’ Bhavya …he said where everything started with me……and I don’t know the place…do you have fairest idea ? ‘’
Bhavya was in thoughts and uttered ‘’where it started’’
Om ‘’where it started ? what’s that Bhavya?’’
Bhavya ‘’Sahil is taken to the place where everything started with Jwala mam…I am trying to know the place’’
Jwala ‘’quick Bhavya…we have approximately 2 hr 45 minutes’’
Everyone was thinking when Shivaay’s mind striked
Shivaay ‘’Cliff near Ratnagiri fort…yes two years before it started there’’
Everyone looked on….
Jwala heard Shivaay’s words in the call………she was again thinking Cliff near Ratnagiri fort…
Bhavya ‘’Mam…I am sure he is going to Ratnagiri …before reaching Ratnagiri you will come across a cliff he might be waiting there for you’’
Jwala ‘’thank you….i will start there right away’’
Bhavya ‘’I will also come there mam…you start I will be right behind you’’
She ended the call and Bhavya looked at Oberois……………
Bhavya ‘’I need to reach there…as soon as possible…Rudra …I know you are annoyed with me but please can I take your car…it’s important…’’
While Rudra was about to say something he saw Shivaay got up from the bed ………
Rudra ‘’Shivaay bhayya why have you got up? You should rest’’
Shivaay ‘’Rudra…I need to go and get my Sahil back safe’’
Pinky ‘’OMM …Will you leave in this state that too for that handicapped who is now no one to you? What’s the need?’’
Shivaay ‘’enough mom…I have broken relation with Anika not with Sahil……..so not a word against the kid and I have every relation with him…so don’t you ever say a word against him’’
Pinky ‘’OMM…This brother –sister are not going to leave my Shivaay after so much happened…it’s high time I have to make my next move …else all the game I played is gonna spoil’’
Shivaay looked at Bhavya
Shivaay ‘’I am also coming with you……’’
Bhavya ‘’but bhayya you are not in ….’’
Shivaay ‘’I know what you are trying to say…but it’s matter of Sahil and I can give my life for him to protect him’’
OmRu ‘’Shivaay / Bhayya we are also coming with you’’
Gauri ‘’I am also coming’’
Om ‘’This is not a tour or picnic Gauri’’
Gauri ‘’I know but I will come’’
Jhanvi ‘’stop it both of you….Gauri you go …Om you will not speak a word more…and one more thing please keep me updated’’
Shivaay called Khanna
Khanna ‘’Sir’’
Shivaay ‘’call the chopper …we need to go to cliff near Ratnagiri fort’’
Khanna called the chopper guy who inturn informed Khanna that the landing of chopper is not possible at the cliff due to narrow roads and if they want to use chopper the nearest landing is around 140 km away from the point………
Khanna informed the same to Shivaay….Shivaay 140 km in that narrow roads will take around one and half hrs and above all getting a taxi at this hours from there is impossible……….so we go by our car………
OmRu , Bhavya , Gauri agreed and rushed towards their car and Rudra started driving……..
Here Jwala also started driving the car towards cliff near Ratnagiri fort……….
Bhavya called Jwala and asked her to keep her updated if she receives a call…jwala informed her that she will keep her in conference call ….Bhavya agreed………….
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Very soon Shivaay and family reached the cliff point and saw Fauzi with Sahil…….
Fauzi ‘’You all here? Where is she?’’
Shivaay ‘’leave Sahil…now…else you can’t imagine what will I do to you?’’
Fauzi ‘’No I absolutely don’t want to imagine what you can do because… you can’t do anything as Sahil is with me and one wrong step he will be down and his dead body will also be not available for you to hold and cry’’ he smiled evilly while speaking those lines
Shivaay ‘’no…no…you will not do any such thing…tell me what do you want? I will give you so much money that you can just sit back and relax for your life time’’
Fauzi smiled and said ‘’what do you think I don’t have money…I need her …she killed my brother and now I will kill her brother infront of her’’
Shivaay ‘’whaaat?’’
Fauzi ‘’yes…bring her to me else you know what I can do’’
Shivaay was in extreme tough position one side his wife and love Anika and other side his Sahil who was his only best friend , his responsibility……
Shivaay thought for a while and said
Shivaay ‘’but the one you are asking is already dead two years back…..so why do you think she will surrender to you….she is Jwala ……not Anika the sister of this kid….’’
Listening Shivaay’s words OF members were shocked and the very next moment Jwala car break sound was heard………She got down the car as soon as possible and ran towards Fauzi……….
Every step she was taking towards Fauzi were making her feel that she came there earlier……she neared Fauzi and spoke
Jwala ‘’Leave the kid…see I came…you have enmity with me…so why drag a kid between all this’’
Fauzi ‘’because he is the same as the one you killed few days before was to me ‘’
Jwala ‘’But you and him are threat and I don’t leave any threats …not now and never in near future’’
Fauzi ‘’shut up……now see how I kill this kid…your brother in front of you’’
Jwala ‘’but where is the kid…he is not seen anywhere’’
Fauzi ‘’fine I can fulfil this wish of you’’ saying this he pulled the rope from down the cliff and there he was…….. Sahil tied to the other end of the rope and one end held by
Fauzi……
Shivaay ‘’S…a…h…i….l’’ he screamed
Om ‘’Shivaay…relax we need to be very careful’’
Bhavya ‘’yes bhayya…please relax… Jwala is trained in this…and I am sure she might be by now thinking of a way to save sahil’’
Shivaay looked at Bhavya and saw Jwala
Jwala was shocked to see Sahil in such position …her heart was crumping in pain………
Sahil was for the first time smiling heartily in two years
Sahil ‘’Anika didi…you are alive….please save me Anika didi…please…’’
Jwala ‘’Sahil…please don’t worry…I have come…I will save you…no matter what….please trust me…your didi will save you’’ she said in a flow…….
Shiv Om Ru Bhavya Gauri were shocked listening to jwala saying ‘’YOUR DIDI WILL SAVE YOU’’
Jwala too recollected what she spoke but that situation demanded her to be careful in saving the kid and capturing Fauzi……
Fauzi ‘’fine if your milna –milap is done then you can say good bye to this kid forever’’
Saying this he slowly untied the knot to his hand and slowly Sahil was slipping down the cliff………
Sahil ‘’Anika Didi…Shivaay jiju…please save me’’ he was crying, while Fauzi was smiling…….Jwala was looking at Fauzi and Sahil and was waiting for the right moment…her sharp looks were assessing the next steps of Fauzi and her mind was planning to counter Fauzi’s next step of attacking her…….
While she was assessing all this……..Shivaay couldn’t bear Sahil’s life to be risked and shouted Sahil and ran towards the end………
Jwala at once looked at Shivaay and Shouted Nooooooooooo…………..she was quick enough to kick Fauzi and hold the rope ………by then Shivaay also slipped at the end of cliff and held the rope with one hand and Sahil with other hand………
OmRu Bhavya Gauri ‘’Shivaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay / bhayyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa’’ they shouted……….
Jwala was holding the rope and was unable to sustain it because she couldn’t handle the weight of Shivaay and Sahil both…….
The rope was slipping out of her hands……..she fell down and was also moving to the edge of the cliff , saw down the cliff and closed her eyes as she knew she is slipping along with Shivaay and Sahil and there is not much time left for all three of them………..
So this was the first part ………please let me know how you felt after reading this….any comments positive or negative are welcome…I will respond as early as possible….all credits to Nikita
78 Comments
Awesome one di!! Post the next one soon 🙂 and Jwala is a good name ??
Thank you so much Archisha…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload very soon
Thank you so much Archisha…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload very soon…JWALA name was suggested by Nikita
omg….what is happening. first i got a little confused. and pls don’t tell me that the trio will fall from the cliff ??
Hey Sairish…awee so cute name…thank you so much for posting your opinion…your answers will be found in next episode……and your confusion will end in coming episodes regarding Jwala’s dream……..
aww…i can never suppress my smile on your attraction towards my name di…will surely be waiting for the next part
Fabbbbbbbb ? ?
Thank you so much Sairan…thanks a lot
Awesome di…interesting too eagerly waiting for next part update soon
Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…next episode i will upload very soon
awesome
nyc to hav u back
update soon
thank you so much Aashi for the compliments on episode and for welcoming me back, where i belong to…thanks a lot dear….next update i will upload very soon
Dii , u just nailed it , I’m waiting for the mystery to unfold itself ???? , I hope there’s more to come from u
Awee…thank you so much Dhar…thanks a lot…yes mystery will soon reveal by itself as retaining the suspense in this case is not possible ..revelations will start probably from second or third episode …and i hope you will like it………
This is so Intresting dear..Awesome
Thank you so much Kajol…thanks a lot
Hii dii…awesome…i have a question for u..why did omru gauri and bhavya come there?? Too witness all the drama!! Poor jwala trying hard to hold both shivay and sahil..they can help them noo..just felt soo when i was reading the last para.
The story has soo much suspense in it…waiting for next part dii.
Bye dii.
Hey Chotii….your questions answer will be in second episode… but your concern is correct too…so as of now enjoy the suspense and in next episode enjoy the revelation….
just to clarify you :
see when a person sees or experiences something unexpected they go blank for sometime before reacting…this is truth or to say reality….well this sort of situation happened with me when i was 9 months pregnant and i was about to fall down …my mom and my husband could not react and stood still for sometime…i luckily held curtain and controlled … when i asked them why didn’t they react immediately…my mom said that she didn’t understand how to react and she thought i fell down and was hurt…….so out of this experience i wrote the scene as to why they stood still……….
love you loads chotiii…keep smiling and keep rocking
Dii….really did it happen like that with u…sry..at that time i just felt like that and commented…yaa sometimes it happens.
yes Chotii…it did happen to me…but luckily i and Akki was safe then…thankfully my instinct worked and held curtain to balance out…..and why sorry…it’s good you asked ..as i don’t want any questions except for the mystery to be in your brain…
It is awesome dii…. Love you….
all credits to you Nikita…your idea and your FF so thank you for this…….i hope i make your vision into reality as per your expectation…all the appreciation is only for you……
Thanks for comment dear ishqies and keep commenting and supporting us….
Interesting concept Nikita(hope u don’t mind). All the best!
GOOD NICE
Dear VHM
Sorry to hurt you and disturb you.but bhavya ko main show main handle nahi kartha iss liye show dekhna stop kiya hai.aur iss ff main agar bhavya ki saath soumya bhi hotha main zaroor enjoy kartha.iss liye main bhavya ki part nahi pad rahi hai.sorry but soumya ki bina aur bhavya ki saath aapki ye ff main full enjoy nahi karunga.iss liye please jaldhi se soumya ko laavo aur RUMYA ko ek karo.aap ne ye ff continue karne ko bola iss liye main comment kiya hai.but please aap bathavo aakhir iss main RUVYA ki story hai ya RUMYA ki story.agar RUMYA iss main pakka hai tho main aage comment bhi karunga aur support bhi karunga.jab thak bhavya and RUVYA iss main hai thab thak main ye continue nahi kar paunga.
IAM REALLY VERY SORRY VHM? bye? and take car of your self???
Hey UF …..That’s okay …you have put your opinion crystal clear…and i am so happy and appreciate you for that…so you need not say me or Nikita Sorry……
As of now i haven’t developed the future story…but onething. i can for sure let you know…i too don’t like Rudra-Bhavya pair…..but since this is an suspense thriller FF and in real IB Bhavya is a cop i need to use the character and profession of Bhavya for sometime…and i am helpless to change the story line as few episodes of the FF are already developed….
Coming to pairing ….Sumo will definitely appear in this FF and she will play an very important role….however as i said i haven’t developed any future story line besides solving the teaser mystery i cannot divulge any information at-least for now….
Last but not the least…i will try my level best to cater the expectations of readers ……hope to see you back in the next episode …..
Thank you once again for the lines as it shows you always wish for the best for me…..
That was so awesome. What a cliff-hanger… Literally!!! Hope Shivaay, Sahil and Jwala are alright!!!
Loved the update. Waiting to read more!!!
Hey Fffan1234…..thank you so much dear…i am happy you liked it….literally shivaay -sahil ahnging at the end of cliff and Jwala ready to hang…lol….let’s see …what will second episode unfold for all of you……..
will update the next episode at the earliest………
This is awesome di.
Thank you so much Arfa…thanks a lot….
BTW this is such a wonderful birthday gift that you have given me. I love love love it and thank you for this from bottom of my heart!!! ??
WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY Fffan1234/Asmi/Dipti……..I didn’t know else i would have included this line in the Episode before uploading…….once again A VERY VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU…KEEP SMILING and STAY BLESSED
Thank you dear.
Awesome di…. Starting was little confused but after that it was amazing… Excited for the next part… post it soon
Jwala name s different…
Thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…starting few lines meaning you will understand only after few episodes…i had to write it that way only to let readers have a hold of what they are going to witness in upcoming episodes….but everything will clear out in a weeks time…
Jwala name was completely thought by Nikita…i have no hand in it….
Will upload next episode very soon
Ohhhhh wowwww di… You are too good… This is Awesome???… Concept is just fab nikki di….?? And writing skill ke bare mai koi lines hi nahi bcoz it’s u hari diii u are just superb… U both are doing too gooddd… Best ff by best pair… HARI DI AND NIKKI DI… LOVE YOU…?????
Thank you so much Sweety….all credits to Nikita…thanks a lot…yes concept when she said i loved it and had no second thoughts to write it…love you loads Sweety…keep smiling and you know where we meet further :-p
Amazing update
Thank you so much Alekhika..again i will wait for your multiple line comment ….thanks a lot dear
Hiiii di.
Interesting part di but I can’t understand something. I want to read another time di then I will give my comment. If u don’t have any problem can I give my full comment for this part on fb or TU’s PM di? Tell me di…..
thank you so much Gayu ……Off course Yes Gayu…why are you asking…you can anytime ping me and let me know your thoughts……
Welcome Back Dear!!!!!
Awesome…..Mysterious Update….
The last part such a cliff-hanger….Hope that they all r fine….
Waiting fr d mysteries to unfold….. 🙂
Thank you so much Shivika…thanks you for welcoming me back…and thank you for such awesome lines…i am so happy to be back with all of you reading all the awesome opinions from you…..literal cliff hanger…ha ha ha ….wantedly ended there…sorry don’t scold me for that…yes from next episode on wards revelations and mysteries will unfold……
Thank you once again and next episode very soon
Welcome back akka chala chal waiting nee ff kosam dry I could read our teaser as my net is slow by the way the episode is awesome akka
Hey Vishnu talli…how are you ? thank you so much dear..neeku nacchindiga…nenu happy….thanks a lot once again dear…it’s okay don’t worry …teaser miss ayyindi kani episode miss avvaledhu kada…so no worries….keep smiling
Amazing…. Loved it
Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot dear…..
Di it`s fantastic
Thank you so much dear….thanks a lot……
Jwala nice ? name ..❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Couldn’t say more about this ff … but please please don’t let them die i can’t see my shivaay ??? dying…
hey Nida….thanks a lot for posting your opinion…you know i cannot post next episode until i find your opinion…and get to know your thoughts….so ow i am happy and contended…….will they all die..may be may be not…revelation in next episode for sure…till then don’t scold me…….YOUR SHIVAAY..ahaaa…yes YOUR SHIVAAY i know…. ???…..
JWALA name credit to Nikita completely
Who’s Arjun nd d kid????? It’s soo cofusing di….. Nd u stop it in a cliff hanger….. Luv this thriller epi…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt….
Hey Banita…thank you so much …who is Arjun ..you will know in coming episodes but who is kid answer is in the same episode…kid is SAHIL…….all confusions will slowly fade away in coming episodes …so please keep trust on me and enjoy reading
Ohh sry di there is a confision while reading now i understood it…
Fabulous superb..amazing loved it… Waiting for the next one
Thank you so much Tahura…thanks a lot
Fabulous superb..amazing loved it… Waiting for the next one plzz post ASAP
Thanks again Tahura…i have just uploaded the next episode in sometime it will appear in portal
Amm still loads of confusion left di…. Remove the confusions di… Waiting for the nxt and this part was as usual great and awesome.
Thank you so much Priya….yeah just uploaded the second part so all the confusion regarding this episode will clear away….
Amazing update.. loved it…
Thank you so much Ankita27….thanks a lot…….
It’s really interesting 2 read, nikki darling and VHM…..I feel sad 4 saahil…….But haa….sso will make everything fine……So many suspense in first episode itself keeps my eye on this ff….Want 2 know how the story will be progressing…….Good job nikita and Vhm…..And i just loved the title…it reminded me saraswatichandra serial’s promo…….Special appreciation 4 the title…..Thanks nikita 4 informing abt this ff….Dear, my stitches will be removed by july second week only, so i can’t assure u that i wil be able 2 read this one in time and comment in time…but will read whenever i feel better….luv u both ……bye..
Thank you so much Renimarenju…thank you for posting your opinion and wishing both of us good luck…i am not aware of your medical condition but i pray you get back to good health very soon….the title , concept and characters are all the brain child of Nikita…..so all kudos to her…only the words are mine………and please don’t worry about reading this and posting your opinion…you can do it anytime when you are free and in good health …..as i said we know your best wishes will be with both of us that’s the most important thing …….thank you for the wishes and love you too…take care and bye
Haarika..Nikitajai shared the link and I got this emotional dark tale of Love. Nice effort to make us emotional lol.
Ok Ok…enough of jocking. Really nice story.
Ha ha ha…welcome back Astha…very nice to see your opinion posted on this…thank your for the lines ….hope to see you back in full form in upcoming episodes and in IB written updates along with IB TU pages……..i have missed you a lot