Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….all credits to Nikita for this FF !!!
Here we go with our first part :
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’’Don’t ever dare to come infront of me again …because I will be compelled to do such thing what I never wish to do’’ ….
‘’aap theek keh rahe the shayad hamara ristha yehi tak tha….’’
‘’very funny…..here take this ..your favourite’’
‘’bhudiya ke baal……awe…so sweet of you……….but where did you get this’’
‘’can’t you say cotton candy …what’s that language’’
Maha Arthi of Ganesh ji was going on………Jai Ganesha deva …Jai Ganesha deva was being played…suddenly havoc was created among people…
Firings were taking place and a gun shot was fired………….
‘’’Arjun get up…you can’t leave me and go…wake up…….’’
why were you crying for that Arjun? Who is he to you? ‘’
’’no you have lost it…you are my WIFE’’
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She woke up from the above dream sweating as her Phone was ringing at that wee hours…….
Jwala POV ‘’who might have called…are they again in danger…ohh what …let me pick the phone’’
Jwala ‘’hello’’
Caller ‘’Reach the place where everything started with you otherwise the kid would be killed mercilessly’’
Jwala ‘’which kid?’’
Caller ‘’So you really don’t remember anything…I will give a clue…a handicapped kid…rest who the kid is and where to meet you have to think…I give you exactly three hours fifteen minutes time…reach …else the next breaking news is the death of the kid’’
Jwala was about to ask when she heard the sound of Call disconnected ……..Jwala’s eyes were frowned………….
She immediately dialled Bhavya and informed her ….
Jwala ‘’Bhavya …he said where everything started……and he was talking about a handicapped kid…and I don’t know the place…do you have fairest idea? I don’t want to know who the kid is but I have to save him as he is a small kid and moreover handicapped’’
Bhavya ‘’what?’’ she screamed ……everyone turned towards Bhavya
Om ‘’What happened Bhavya?’’
Bhavya ‘’Sahil’’
Shivaay ‘’Sahil what happened to Sahil? Speak out Bhavya?’’
Bhavya ‘’Sahil is kidnapped’’
Shivaay ‘’what?’’
Jwala on the call listened to their conversation and spoke ‘’S..A..H…I…L’’
Jwala POV ‘’Sahil…I feel like I know him…I feel he is a part of my life, a very important part of my life….why am I not remembering anything…whatever it is… I have to save him’’
She came out of thoughts…..
Jwala ‘’hello Bhavya are you listening?’’
Bhavya ‘’yeah…Mam…I am listening’’
Shivaay ‘’put the call on speaker…now’’ he screamed in tension ………
Bhavya immediately put the call on speaker……..
Jwala ‘’ Bhavya …he said where everything started with me……and I don’t know the place…do you have fairest idea ? ‘’
Bhavya was in thoughts and uttered ‘’where it started’’
Om ‘’where it started ? what’s that Bhavya?’’
Bhavya ‘’Sahil is taken to the place where everything started with Jwala mam…I am trying to know the place’’
Jwala ‘’quick Bhavya…we have approximately 2 hr 45 minutes’’
Everyone was thinking when Shivaay’s mind striked
Shivaay ‘’Cliff near Ratnagiri fort…yes two years before it started there’’
Everyone looked on….
Jwala heard Shivaay’s words in the call………she was again thinking Cliff near Ratnagiri fort…
Bhavya ‘’Mam…I am sure he is going to Ratnagiri …before reaching Ratnagiri you will come across a cliff he might be waiting there for you’’
Jwala ‘’thank you….i will start there right away’’
Bhavya ‘’I will also come there mam…you start I will be right behind you’’
She ended the call and Bhavya looked at Oberois……………
Bhavya ‘’I need to reach there…as soon as possible…Rudra …I know you are annoyed with me but please can I take your car…it’s important…’’
While Rudra was about to say something he saw Shivaay got up from the bed ………
Rudra ‘’Shivaay bhayya why have you got up? You should rest’’
Shivaay ‘’Rudra…I need to go and get my Sahil back safe’’
Pinky ‘’OMM …Will you leave in this state that too for that handicapped who is now no one to you? What’s the need?’’
Shivaay ‘’enough mom…I have broken relation with Anika not with Sahil……..so not a word against the kid and I have every relation with him…so don’t you ever say a word against him’’
Pinky ‘’OMM…This brother –sister are not going to leave my Shivaay after so much happened…it’s high time I have to make my next move …else all the game I played is gonna spoil’’
Shivaay looked at Bhavya
Shivaay ‘’I am also coming with you……’’
Bhavya ‘’but bhayya you are not in ….’’
Shivaay ‘’I know what you are trying to say…but it’s matter of Sahil and I can give my life for him to protect him’’
OmRu ‘’Shivaay / Bhayya we are also coming with you’’
Gauri ‘’I am also coming’’
Om ‘’This is not a tour or picnic Gauri’’
Gauri ‘’I know but I will come’’
Jhanvi ‘’stop it both of you….Gauri you go …Om you will not speak a word more…and one more thing please keep me updated’’
Shivaay called Khanna
Khanna ‘’Sir’’
Shivaay ‘’call the chopper …we need to go to cliff near Ratnagiri fort’’
Khanna called the chopper guy who inturn informed Khanna that the landing of chopper is not possible at the cliff due to narrow roads and if they want to use chopper the nearest landing is around 140 km away from the point………
Khanna informed the same to Shivaay….Shivaay 140 km in that narrow roads will take around one and half hrs and above all getting a taxi at this hours from there is impossible……….so we go by our car………
OmRu , Bhavya , Gauri agreed and rushed towards their car and Rudra started driving……..
Here Jwala also started driving the car towards cliff near Ratnagiri fort……….
Bhavya called Jwala and asked her to keep her updated if she receives a call…jwala informed her that she will keep her in conference call ….Bhavya agreed………….
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Very soon Shivaay and family reached the cliff point and saw Fauzi with Sahil…….
Fauzi ‘’You all here? Where is she?’’
Shivaay ‘’leave Sahil…now…else you can’t imagine what will I do to you?’’
Fauzi ‘’No I absolutely don’t want to imagine what you can do because… you can’t do anything as Sahil is with me and one wrong step he will be down and his dead body will also be not available for you to hold and cry’’ he smiled evilly while speaking those lines
Shivaay ‘’no…no…you will not do any such thing…tell me what do you want? I will give you so much money that you can just sit back and relax for your life time’’
Fauzi smiled and said ‘’what do you think I don’t have money…I need her …she killed my brother and now I will kill her brother infront of her’’
Shivaay ‘’whaaat?’’
Fauzi ‘’yes…bring her to me else you know what I can do’’
Shivaay was in extreme tough position one side his wife and love Anika and other side his Sahil who was his only best friend , his responsibility……
Shivaay thought for a while and said
Shivaay ‘’but the one you are asking is already dead two years back…..so why do you think she will surrender to you….she is Jwala ……not Anika the sister of this kid….’’
Listening Shivaay’s words OF members were shocked and the very next moment Jwala car break sound was heard………She got down the car as soon as possible and ran towards Fauzi……….
Every step she was taking towards Fauzi were making her feel that she came there earlier……she neared Fauzi and spoke
Jwala ‘’Leave the kid…see I came…you have enmity with me…so why drag a kid between all this’’
Fauzi ‘’because he is the same as the one you killed few days before was to me ‘’
Jwala ‘’But you and him are threat and I don’t leave any threats …not now and never in near future’’
Fauzi ‘’shut up……now see how I kill this kid…your brother in front of you’’
Jwala ‘’but where is the kid…he is not seen anywhere’’
Fauzi ‘’fine I can fulfil this wish of you’’ saying this he pulled the rope from down the cliff and there he was…….. Sahil tied to the other end of the rope and one end held by
Fauzi……
Shivaay ‘’S…a…h…i….l’’ he screamed
Om ‘’Shivaay…relax we need to be very careful’’
Bhavya ‘’yes bhayya…please relax… Jwala is trained in this…and I am sure she might be by now thinking of a way to save sahil’’
Shivaay looked at Bhavya and saw Jwala
Jwala was shocked to see Sahil in such position …her heart was crumping in pain………
Sahil was for the first time smiling heartily in two years
Sahil ‘’Anika didi…you are alive….please save me Anika didi…please…’’
Jwala ‘’Sahil…please don’t worry…I have come…I will save you…no matter what….please trust me…your didi will save you’’ she said in a flow…….
Shiv Om Ru Bhavya Gauri were shocked listening to jwala saying ‘’YOUR DIDI WILL SAVE YOU’’
Jwala too recollected what she spoke but that situation demanded her to be careful in saving the kid and capturing Fauzi……
Fauzi ‘’fine if your milna –milap is done then you can say good bye to this kid forever’’
Saying this he slowly untied the knot to his hand and slowly Sahil was slipping down the cliff………
Sahil ‘’Anika Didi…Shivaay jiju…please save me’’ he was crying, while Fauzi was smiling…….Jwala was looking at Fauzi and Sahil and was waiting for the right moment…her sharp looks were assessing the next steps of Fauzi and her mind was planning to counter Fauzi’s next step of attacking her…….
While she was assessing all this……..Shivaay couldn’t bear Sahil’s life to be risked and shouted Sahil and ran towards the end………
Jwala at once looked at Shivaay and Shouted Nooooooooooo…………..she was quick enough to kick Fauzi and hold the rope ………by then Shivaay also slipped at the end of cliff and held the rope with one hand and Sahil with other hand………
OmRu Bhavya Gauri ‘’Shivaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay / bhayyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa’’ they shouted……….
Jwala was holding the rope and was unable to sustain it because she couldn’t handle the weight of Shivaay and Sahil both…….
The rope was slipping out of her hands……..she fell down and was also moving to the edge of the cliff , saw down the cliff and closed her eyes as she knew she is slipping along with Shivaay and Sahil and there is not much time left for all three of them………..
So this was the first part ………please let me know how you felt after reading this….any comments positive or negative are welcome…I will respond as early as possible….all credits to Nikita
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Thanks a lot Nikita for giving me the link….. I am grateful to you and VHM Di you have done a brilliant job. It’s that type of plot which I like the most, mystery and suspense and I just loved it. At the start, it was a bit confusing but as I read further I got a clearer picture…but still a huge doubt, how did Anika lose her memory and I’m quite sure you will unfold this mystery soon. Anika’s new name (Jwala) was just an embodiment of her fierce and bold character…. Just loved it.
Post the next one soon and if possible please send me a link, please (coz I don’t want to miss this one)
Hey Tanz …all credits to Nikita for this plot…and i am writing as she is directing …so not much of a work by me…thank you for the compliments and the awesome lines…it really boosts up the morale…i am so happy to read the opinion by you and feeling relaxed that effort is being appreciated though it’s just an episode old….next episode is already in portal…….
Here is the link :
https://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-1/
Hello Harika Di !
See I am extremely sorry for commenting so late and i know that I don’t deserve forgiveness but still nowadays I am getting net for only half an hour !! So I was late, but I saved this already and now commenting.
You are an awesome writer dear. A very good job Harika and Nikku di for giving us this. Really scared for the next part..but portrayed awesomely !
Love you ❤
Hey Jerry…no need to say Sorry as i know your schedules and time and again i have said this …so no more sorry’s further…thank you so much for the wonderful encouraging lines…all credits to Nikita for this………and take your time to read an post your comments as i very well understand education at this age is priority…and you have to manage quite a few things at this age…….
thank you once again and i have messaged you the next episode link
Hi Harika di…so sorry for the super late comment…
The episode is and will be very amazing throughout the whole story…very excited for all the mysteries to be reveaved nd want the mukammal MOHABBAT of our very own Shivika…
Nd thanks for sending me the links as I am not going to IB TU page for fews day…
Hey Tanzeela…no worries dear…i know your busy schedules right so why do want to tell sorry ….they will reach their mukammal mohabbat…even if they don’t i will make them reach…thanks a lot dear once again …all credits to Nikita for this
Its awesome dear…. Waiting for next part
Thank you so much dear…next two parts are already in the portal….
https://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-2/
https://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-3/
Awesome episode di….but still lots of confusion….what I have understood till now is that Anika has lost her memory n is now Jwala who is a police officer….but still many things r unclear…..
But the beginning few lines (Anika’s dream), it reminded me of so many scenes….. but again yeh Arjun kon hai….?
Finally you are here dear….4 episodes have been posted and once you go through them then i am sure you would know the entire plot…as i know your CID skills…..am i saying right Nita……
Thank you so much for the compliments and yeah all credits to Nikita for this…………
Are I forgot to type…yeh jwala naam kahan se suja…? Naam hi itna khunkhar hai….
Oh ya I’ll have to thank Nikita for this….
N once again sorry for again vanishing(I know I keep doing that every time) n I read your PM n I m dropping u a mail 2moro evening with the full story at any cost….
Hey Nita…i know about your schedule…so i have no complaints with you…you are free to post your opinion whenever you get time…
JWALA name was completely the choice of Nikita, even Arjun’s name also…..
Yes even i need to thak Nikita because she showed so much confidence on me and asked me to write the FF…i donno how much i am living to her expectation but i am trying my level best…….
take your time dear…no hurries and no worries….though i miss you these days but it’s okay