Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
Ragini smiled evilly and bit the apple…..
Samar ‘’ I think we must talk…we should get the information before someone else gets hold of it …as this cannot continue for many more days’’
Ragini ‘’you are right…..come let’s go ‘’
Samar and Ragini walked towards the store room when Mrs.Malhotra came and spoke to both of them that she needs to talk to Anjali/Anika for some arrangements…….Samar looked at her and then at Ragini and gave her the mobile …….she dialled Anjali /Anika and said ‘’ Hello WEDDING Designer ‘’ ………Anika/Anjali understood and she asked Mrs.Malhotra to go ahead and speak something…Mrs.Malhotra spoke about some wedding requirements …Anjali /Anika asked to give the mobile to SJM …….
Samar ‘’yes Ms.Anjali ‘’
Anjali / Anika ‘’Sir…I need to meet you at the earliest……I need to discuss something very important….’’
Samar ‘’relax …why can’t we wait till tomorrow…I am busy now’’
Anika /Anjali ‘’Sir please I know you are a busy man…but I also know wedding has been preponed …and this is about your sisters wedding so please sir..i request you to meet me once’’
Samar ‘’Ok fine…in half an hour at daffodils restaurant, Juhu’’
Anjali /Anika ‘’thank you sir…I will be there’’
Samar disconnected the call and turned towards Ragini and said ‘’We will talk tomorrow…right now this wedding has to take place…we can delay the dealing’’
Ragini ‘’Shall I handle alone…I mean I can do that….’’
Samar ‘’No…I can’t put you in risk…I will deal tomorrow’’
Ragini ‘’Have you checked CCTV camera’s after Anjali’s visit…she is trustworthy right?’’
Samar ‘’yes ..as of now it seems she is what she looks like and does…. so nothing to worry…’’
Ragini ‘’she gave something to Mom…could you see what it was?’’
Samar ‘’yes…she gave some designs that she drew here and asked mom to check it…everything is in place…don’t worry…I will leave now and then we will discuss further course of action’’
Ragini ‘’fine then I will check on mom’’
She turned to go and while on her way to room she saw a paper…….she picked it up and was shocked reading it…….
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Anika called up someone and asked to reach Daffodils restaurant Juhu and explained what needs to be done……..the person agreed and Anika started towards the restaurant
Samar also started towards the restaurant and the person to whom Anika called also started towards Restaurant
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Samar went to meet Anika/Anjali in Daffodils restaurant and Anika/Anjali discussed about the arrangements in Malhotra mansion and Oberoi Mansion…..Samar okayed everything….she gave an agreement to sign and asked him to sign it…… so while drinking water he read it carefully and then signed…..she smiled and took the paper and carefully slid it in the file…..he stood up to leave and bid goodbye…she too stood up and without his notice , she signed someone and he nodded……they both left towards their homes……
———–SHIVAAY’s room
Shivaay Gauri and Sumo were trying to know who was Yashi…….Shivaay called Khanna and asked him to find out everything about Arjun’s family …he asked to contact Bhavya and get details of Arjun’s number and gather all possible information ……
Sumo ‘’Bhayya do you think Khanna can find anything about Arjun’s family…it’s impossible Arjun is an RAW agent and when he gave you a letter full of codes how can you think he will let anyone know about his family’’
Shivaay ‘’Do you think I don’t know this fact…but I cannot give up trying…what if Khanna manages to find about his family…you never know sometimes everything is before us and we can’t see…so let us try …if we get the details things will be easy if we don’t get we still are at same place’’
Gauri ‘’right bhayya…we must try’’
While they three were discussing Pinky came and took all three of them for the wedding preparations …Shivaay was lost but he was nodding for everything mechanically
Here Anika asked OmRu to keep Samar and Ragini engaged the day after the next day……..OmRu decided what needs to be done and they promised to help her……..
Everyone rested for the day……..
DAY 1 :
Anika / Anjali went to Malhotra Mansion , but before going there she asked OmRu to always be by side of Shivaay …and not to leave him alone…though asked them to be careful of not letting him know anything about them keeping eye on him…….
Anika/Anjali took decorators, electricians and other necessary staff and ordered them all the works to be done…she was going to every room in pretext of making arrangements and was checking without getting suspected…..
She entered Mrs.Malhotra’s room and started arrangements when she got caught of something that attracted her…she quickly took the photo and placed it as it was before…..
Then she moved towards store room and turned to see where were the cctv camera’s were fitted , she remembered the positions…she called the lightmen and flower decorators and asked them to fit the lamps and flowers …giving them directions in such a way that the CCTV camera’s were covered partially by either the lamps or flowers ……
She had less time because she knew once Ragini and SJM will come back they will first check the camera’s and if they are not be able to see anything , they will definitely ask her to move all of them……..
She then ordered everyone to go and have their lunch …she too left from there to have lunch and slipped in pretext of going to washroom……and went near to store room when Mrs.Malhotra dragged her aside and looked here and there……..
Anika/Anjali ‘’Aunty relax…….i have partially covered the camera’s but we have less time……tell me everything what happened 6 months before…in a short way…’’
Mrs.Malhotra ‘’Anjali beta…..please save YASHI….please ….I don’t know where she is …but please save her…today morning I heard Ragini and Samar speaking and I got to know YASHI’s mother has been shot dead…..i beg you please save her …….Ragini will be here any moment….so before she comes promise me that you will save Yashi……’’
Anjali / Anika ‘’Aunty please relax…I promise we will save YASHI…but before that you need to tell me who is YASHI? Because without that information saving her will be difficult…’’
Mrs.Malhotra ‘’YASHI IS ..’’
Ragini ‘’Mommmmmm….what are you doing here ?’’
Anjali /Anika looked at her and then Mrs.Malhotra
Anjali /Anika ‘’She was actually asking me to bring much bright colored flowers as you like bright flowers than these which we placed…am I right aunty ji?’’
Mrs.Malhotra ‘’Yeah..yes…I was just giving the necessary tips to make this beautiful’’
Ragini looked at Anika/Anjali and then at Mrs.Malhotra and smiled ………
Ragini ‘’ok fine….and yeah this looks okay for me …after marriage anyways I am gonna stay in OM so the decoration here can be simple but elegant’’
Anika/Anjali ‘’yeah sure mam’’
Ragini left from there taking Mrs.Malhotra along with her and they both looked at each other ……..After they both left Anika/Anjali heaved a sigh of relief…….and left towards OM
—————–OM
Shivaay got to know nothing about Arjun and his family from Khanna …….he was thinking about the line in the diary……
’’
and believe me you would know YASHI through someone who is trying to be part of your family, but who is not your family !!!
’’
And then he thought about the line in the letter
‘’ Jaan ne sari sacchayi, Lagana hoga daaon mein sab kuch’’
He sat back thinking these two are interconnected ……but how and who is that…….’’
Gauri was going to Shivaay’s room with his Amerikano when she collided with Om who was keeping an eye on Shivaay in pretext of arranging things for wedding …….
Om ‘’why are you in such a hurry…did you burn your fingers or hand?’’ he very concernedly asked her holding her hand…Gauri became nervous ….
Gauri ‘’no…I am sorry…I didn’t see you being in thoughts’’
Om’’is everything alright? I mean these days you seem to be lost somewhere? If there is any problem you can share with me…if possible I can help you’’
Gauri ‘’no thank you…I am fine and I am not in any thoughts or lost somewhere’’
Om ‘’Gauri….i am sorry that day I shouldn’t have asked you the question starting with suspecting you…I had to ‘’
Gauri ‘’omkara ji…it doesn’t matter….i know you still believe I was wrong and even if I try to convince you it’s not gonna work…so it’s better we wouldn’t talk about it…few months
more and then I am out of your life completely and forever….and then I hope we don’t cross each other’s path’s ever’’
They looked at each other and shared an brief eyelock , later she left from there to make another Amerikano ……..
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Shivaay heard their talks and felt sad about both of them
Shivaay POV ‘’my life is in such a mess that I am unable to clear the mess in Om and Gauri’s life…I don’t know when will everything get cleared…but I cannot simply sit in home and do nothing…I need to go and find truth myself …I will start with Jwala’s home ‘’
He walked off towards the main door of OM ……Anjali/Jwala was coming from the opposite direction………
Shivaay was walking towards his car while Anika was talking to someone
Anika/Anjali ‘’I want to know who is YASHI…it’s important and we need to find her……so keep in mind I need every detail about YASHI at the earliest’’
Talking the line about YASHI , she crossed Shivaay without paying attention…………Shivaay was shocked to hear YASHI’s name from Anika/Anjali………he looked at her while she was hurrying to enter into OM……
Shivaay POV ‘’that means Anjali…I mean Anika knows who Yashi …….was Arjun indicating about her in his lines in the diary……
’’
and believe me you would know YASHI through someone who is trying to be part of your family, but who is not your family !!!
’’
Yes Anjali is trying to be a part of my family but she is not my family…even if I say Anjali is Anika then after my divorce with Anika she is no more a part of my family and she came back here may be with the motive to be part of my family again……
And then , the line in the letter
‘’ Jaan ne sari sacchayi, Lagana hoga daaon mein sab kuch’’
Yes Anika is my everything and I have to keep her at stake to find YASHI…….
Everything is exactly fitting in the puzzle …….so I have no option now other than confronting Anika / Anjali……….
‘’
He closed the car door in a rage and went towards OM ……………He stepped in and was searching for Anika /Anjali everywhere……Anjali was going to her room……..Rudra was talking to her……..Shivaay waited till Rudra completed his talks and left her……as soon as Rudra left her Shivaay ran towards her room and dragged her inside and closed the room door……….
—————ANIKA /ANJALI ROOM
Anika /Anjali ‘’what are you doing in my room and why did you drag me inside in such a way?’’
Shivaay ‘’I can’t believe you are doing so much of a drama’’
Anika /Anjali ‘’Drama…what are you saying about?’’
Shivaay ‘’who is YASHI?’’
Anika /Anjali was shocked and stared at him in surprise….her words started fumbling and she was trying to be calm
Anika /Anjali ‘’YASHI who YASHI…I don’t know anyone or anything by such name’’
Shivaay ‘’Don’t……don’t dare to lie…I just heard you taking YASHI’s name while you were entering into OM …you were talking to someone asking them to find and get all details about YASHI…tell me who is YASHI and where is she now?’’
Anika /Anjali ‘’I can’t believe you were spying on me…and sorry Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi I wasn’t taking any such name …you might be mistaken’’
Shivaay ‘’You can’t cheat everytime Anika’’
Anika/Anjali ‘’Anika who Anika…I am Anjali……’’
Shivaay ‘’Stop it Anika………I know and believe you are Anika not any Anjali and I also know who you are and what profession you are in……….so don’t try to act smart’’
Anika now stood still……and looked as if she was questioning how did he know that
Shivaay ‘’I got to know this from your colleague Arjun’’
Anika was still more surprised because Arjun died few days before then how did Arjun tell Shivaay about her profession……
Anika /Anjali POV ‘’I am sure he might be tricking me to make me accept the truth…I cannot come in his trap at this moment…I have to continue to act as if I am Anjali working for SJM’’
Anika / Anjali ‘’Who Arjun what profession did he say that I am doing….I can’t understand anything what you are saying…..i think you are watching lot of detective films these days and are suspecting everyone…….relax Mr.Shivaay …I am Anjali and I came here to work for Malhotra Industries and I work for SJM’’ she said calmly
Shivaay ‘’Fine…you are not Anika I can agree …you are not aware of any Arjun I can agree …but whatever I have heard few minutes before about you taking YASHI’s name is truth and if you still try to fool me I cannot and will not agree……’’
Anika /Anjali ‘’Mr.Shivaay’’
Shivaay ‘’look Ms.Anjali it may not matter to you much but I need to know the truth of my life and my life is Anika …to know everything about her I need to first find YASHI…so probably if you know something about her I REQUEST you to tell me …..’’ he said giving up his ego, his tadi, his anger and to some extent himself too………
Anika couldn’t bear and believe the fact that Shivaay was requesting her……but what was bugging her was how come Shivaay know about YASHI……and why does he want to find YASHI…how is YASHI related to knowing truth about him and her…….
Anika /Anjali ‘’I am sure there is a misunderstanding ‘’
Shivaay smiled sadly and said
Shivaay ‘’you know what when it is about anything related to you there is always a misunderstanding…I knew you will never reveal anything but may be after I say it is about my life , my Anika hearing that you would disclose…but I failed..fine keep the secret with you…I will find YASHI myself’’
Anika /Anjali couldn’t see him in such a position
Anika/Anjali ‘’I really don’t know about YASHI…but like you I am also finding about her…’’
Shivaay ‘’why are you finding about her?’’
Anika/Anjali ‘’sorry Mr.Shivaay I cannot divulge any details now…but it’s true I am finding her …if I get any details about her I will definitely let you know…and I promise you this…but I will definitely want to know why are you searching for Yashi…how is the truth about you and Anika related to Yashi ?’’
Shivaay smiled and said
Shivaay ‘’I too cannot divulge any information that you asked me Ms.ANJALI as this is not only related to my personal life but also related to National Security …I hope you will keep up your promise and I will waiting to get some information from you ’’
Anjali /Anika ‘’as soon as I get to know anything about her I will immediately let you know……’’
Shivaay smiled and left the room……….After he left ………
Anika / Anjali POV ‘’ did Arjun say everything to Shivaay…I am sure Shivaay wouldn’t lie…but how did Arjun let him know about me and our profession……why was Shivaay saying YASHI is related to Oberoi and National Security……that means both our aim is to find YASHI first and then probably our tracks will get separated again…..but whatever it is …I have to wait till tomorrow so that SJM and Ragini are away from Malhotra mansion for sometime……’’
——————–Malhotra Mansion
Ragini and SJM were seeing the paper that Ragini got from the floor while going to her room…….
SJM ‘’Don’t worry…in fact we both should be happy and relaxed’’
Ragini ‘’have you gone mad? I mean how can we be relaxed when our threat has already made their move…..’’
SJM ‘’trust me …till date whatever we are trying to find keeping alive, our threat would find it …we just need to wait for the truth and thing to be found out and then we will just snatch
everything and fly from here’’
Ragini ‘’what do you mean? ‘’
SJM smiled ‘’Just wait and watch…..tomorrow we are going to OM …..we need to enjoy your wedding …don’t be stressed …nothing will go away from our hands’’
Ragini too smiled and she knew what he was upto…………
SJM entered the store room…………..
————————SHIVAAY ‘S ROOM , OM
Sumo ‘’bhayya …any lead about who is YASHI?’’
Shivaay ‘’no…not yet…but someone promised me to get me the details of her’’
Gauri ‘’who?’’
Shivaay ‘’Anjali’’
Sumo and Gauri together ‘’Whaaat?’’
Shivaay explained what he heard and how he confronted……and what was Anjali/Anika’s response
Gauri ‘’But why does she want to get yashi? What’s her motive to be here as Anjali? Are you both finding the same thing ?’’
Shivaay ‘’don’t know…this is getting complicated …but as they say the more the knot of thread gets tight the easily the knot breaks…so I am sure we have to wait to get it tightened and complicated’’
Sumo ‘’but your marriage is in two days …then how will you’’
Shivaay ‘’this marriage will never happen…I will find a reason to stop this…but now let the things happen as they are proceeding’’
Sumo ‘’did you think about anything next’’
Shivaay ‘’yes…I am thinking of following Anjali…I am sure she will be going to find the truth of Yashi’’
Gauri and Sumo smiled………..
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Anika/Anjali went to the main gate of OM and waited for someone………Shivaay saw her going to the main gate and followed her and hid himself without getting noticed……..
A person came and gave a packet to Anika/Anjali…she took and turned to go, when she noticed Shivaay …she didn’t react and left from there, kept the packet in her room and left towards Omkara’s room…….
——————-Omkara’s room
Anika explained what needs to be done tomorrow…….
Anika ‘’Om …tomorrow is a crucial day for me to find out all the mysteries…if I am successful tomorrow then everything will be back to normal…..’’
Om ‘’tell me Bhabhi what do you want us to do’’
Anika ‘’tomorrow you will not leave or allow Shivaay to go anywhere outside the house…he has got suspicious over me and if I am not wrong he will try to follow me ….i don’t want him to fall in any risk…so he should be at home’’
She turned towards Rudra
‘’Rudra you will keep Ragini and SJM busy …they also should be present here till I am back……..’’
Om and Rudra nodded ……
Anika gave smart watches with chip inside……..she said that if they want to contact her they should just press the button on Smart watch…this will provide signals to wherever she is and she will contact them immediately…….also if she falls in trouble she would alert them with the smart watch in her hand and they should inform a person immediately…she gave the person’s number to them……OmRu agreed
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While Anika /Anjali was in Omkara’s room, Shivaay went to Anika/Anjali’s room and checked her stuff …he found the packet but it was empty…….he was disappointed but was determined to get to know the truth……
————————– in their respective rooms
Anika POV ‘’Tomorrow will bring new twists to all our lives’’
Shivaay POV ‘’tomorrow will bring me closer to the truth’’
Ragini POV ‘’tomorrow will be the first step of destruction of Oberois’’
SJM POV ‘’tomorrow my enemy will get me what we have thought and planned since a long time’’
So this was the Fifteenth episode of the FF ………..Please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible….all credits to NIKITA !!!
86 Comments
Suspense suspense and more suspense. That was super awesome. But I am worried did Mrs. Malhotra not destroyed the paper properly? I hope Anika and Shivaay will be alright and Ragini and SJM plans fail.
Looking forward to next part…
Thank you so much Dipti…thanks a lot…tomorrows episode will mark the beginning of the revelations of the mysteries…still keeping the thrill intact……..next episode i uploaded just now…..
What i say about this FF its very nicc,winderful di
Thank you so much Arfa…….thanks a lot
Hi….. vhm… this is awesome… I don’t know what to say?. In these fifteen episodes you had engaged us in a thrilling roller coaster ride, which is not ending until now. But I am enjoying it. Waiting for the next best thrilling episode baby……….
Thank you so much Katz…thanks a lot..i am glad you liked the ff…well all mysteries will get revealed at their own pace and we are moving towards the end of FF…..thank you so much once again dear
so nice with full of suspense really waiting for next part
Thank you so much Chaithu…thanks a lot…next episode i uploaded just now
Baaboi dii..ee suspense nenu tattukolenu..intha baaga ela raastunnav..u and nikhita r awesome..actually more than that.
NAVYA POV” tomorrow dii will post next part then i will get to know things.”….hahha……like ur characters i am also waiting for tomorrow dii.
How r u dii.?how is akki?
Thank you so much Chotii…edo rasthunanu chotiii…aina repati episode nunchi ee ff lo revealtions modalavuthayi…tvaralo ee ff end ayipothundi……all credits to Nikita…
I am doing good Chotii and akki is also doing fine…how are you ? love you loads
As everyone else is waiting for tomorrow, I’m also eagerly waiting for tomorrow…To know all the truths and mysteries…
again an episode with full on mysteries and suspense…
wonderful
awesome
fantastic…
awesome work nikita…
waiting for next…
best wishes
take care
Is your DP is your childhood picture right . you are very cute Zaveesha.
Yeah Di…that’s my childhood pic…
Thank u soo much..
Hey Tanzeela….thank you so much dear…and your DP is very nice …so cute little Tanzeela…touch wood keep smiling like this and love you loads…i have uploaded next episode just now
It is awesome dii… Super excited….. Love you
Thanks to you Nikita…thanks a lot…love you loads
Di as soon as shivika ko mila doo.pls bohot chara suspens hai.
it nicc,
Hey Arfa thank you so much for posting your opinion….thanks a lot…we are moving towards the end and as we started this ff as suspense thriller i need to maintain that essence while letting Shivaay know the truth….so please bear with me for some more time and Shivika’s union will be before you
Awesome di…fabulous part I’m so excited for next part update soon di
Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot…next episode i have just uploaded
Wow yaar! Caught up with last few updates just now.. it’s is just running so fast n interesting!! How many more chapters before the revelations??
And y can’t u both be in the panel of CVs yaar!
Thank you so much Anu…thanks a lot…next episode will mark the first step of revelations…everything will start to get clear….so please do bear with me
Amazing di…. It was a awesome mind blowing part…. Lovely too…
I think u will disclose all the suspense in next few episodes….
Eagerly waiting for the next part…. post it as soon as possible… Take care di..
Hey Sagithya…thank you so much sissy…thanks a lot…yes next episode will mark the first revelation and then on we will have everything known at their own pace….next episode i just uploaded…you too take care dear,,,,love you loads
It is just awesome Di and sorry not commenting earlier. Suspense is very interesting
Hey Mona…good to see you …and no worries…sooner or later you posted your opinion and that’s more important…thank you so much dear….thanks a lot
Like all episodes it’s was an awesome, fantastic episode. Both Shivika are trying to find out who is Yashi is ?Both Ragini and Samar are waiting for destroying their enemy ,oberios .Both are thread for Oberios and Nations . I am waiting for tomorrow’episode Di .
Di I was Gus’s Yashi is none other than Riyanshi. riYAnSHI.Is it right Di? And I am sure the letter that ragini saw that was not the letter write by anika for Mrs.Malhotra. I am very excited Di for knowing complete truth and and knowing Samar and ragini’s rivalary towards Oberios . So many twists are awaiting. You are mentioned that your ff was going to end . every story should end one day .so if you end this ff then please come back with a super duper ff.And Anujonson is right ,do you remember her comment on your past &present ff. I know that you have so many ability’s, but writing is your passion, so you shouldwrite novel Di . If you write novel then please send to me a copy of your work.
All the best Di .and please update next part.iam waiting for that.
Hey Ahsaana…your every guess and every thought will get cleared in tomorrows episode…yes you are right dear…all twists and turns will end from tomorrow….i will definitely send you my writings if at all i am successful in doing so…..thanks a lot dear…thank you so much….
next episode i have uploaded sometime before…love you laods
No words to describe what you have written…level 100 la suspense hI kuch samjh nahi aaya
BT awsomeeee and indulging
Hey Sairan…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…kal se sab kuch samajh mein aane lagega…ek ke baad ek sab kuch clear ho jayega
Suspense suspense suspense thriller and too much more …. ufff great ? going.. quickly update the next part … plzz don’t give tension to my shivaay any more ?????? .. and once again thank you ? fot making my birthday ? memorable
Happy birthday again dear??????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????????????????
Hey Nida…my bestie…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…Because of your Shivaay all this happened…well it will be a happy ending so don’t worry…and please don’t say thanks…had i known you personally i would have doen some thing much more special on your birthday…but this was what i can do to maximum at this stage…..next update i uploaded sometime before
Superb the suspense is eating me???
Hey dear …thank you so much …thanks a lot for posting your opinion…all suspense will be revealed from next episode onwards
Awsome update…Harika di and Nikita…titally khidkitod…..You always nailed it guys…
Di if you can pls read my new works too…I have updated two epis today of my ongoing ff
Here’s the link-http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/11688/?profiletab=posts
Take care always…love u di….
i don’t know why link is is not working properly…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/lonely-without-shivika-ff-part-3/
And
http://www.tellyupdates.com/lonely-without-shivika-ff-part-3/
Hey Ashlyn …thank you so much…thanks a lot…hey dear i will definitely read your work…thank you for sharing your links…i will read them at the earliest and will post my opinion too…love you loads dear…
Amazing update, suspense and lots of suspense, really eagerly waiting for further updates, keep going
Hey Prajkta …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i have uploaded sometime back….
Awsome awsome n minblowing ????
Thank you so much Riana…thanks a lot
heyy di ….
Sairish here…
suspenseful epi ….like every chappy
how much suspense will you create and me…my chotu sa brain is going out of control……welll…plzz post the next one asap I’m hell desperate to read the next one …….and If you have time …then you can read my ff …AN ISHQBAAZ FF~BY SAIRISH…I’LL give u the link if you have no problem in that …i would have never asked you to read but since you are an amazing writer and i want to know my status of writing ????……..and plzzz post thenext one asap or else I’ll die out of suspense …and ya plzz don’t mind if an late in commenting or reading as I’m having my school….hope u’ll understand
loads and loads of love
Sairish ???
Hey Saiiiiiiiriiiiiiiishhhhhhhhhhh….first of all sorry for creating so much of mystery and suspense…but this was needed …now from next episode everything will start to get cleared…i promise that…thank you …thanks a lot for the support and appreciation…then you should demand me to read your ff not ask me…please do send me the links and i will be extremely happy to read your ff….not because i am an awesome or good writer (actually i am not even a writer dear, so awesome and good sort of adjectives are far away from me) ….but because i know you are an awesome individual and have lot of creativity……..also i will try to post my opinion without fail….next episode i have uploaded sometime back…so please worry it will appear on time as ever….and then no worries whenever you have time read the FF …and if you are busy then you can always read later and i will not mind if you don;t post your opinions…school and studies must be your first priority and so you are in right path……..
loads of love and best wishes to you…take care and keep smiling
Di, ur ff reminds me ‘Martin mystery’ cartoon series…. That series is one of my favourite forever. Sooooo many twists, suspenses n mysteries just like Martin mystery!!!!
I m damn sure that paper is not Anika’s paper which naagini(ragini) got in her house! Is Malhotras are murdered Riyanshi’s mother?
Excellent didi….wonderful! Nikita……wow!!!
Very excited for next part di. Even I m also waiting for tomorrow to read next part……ha ha ha!
I m fine di… What about u n ur LIFE???
Take care……keep smiling di.
Good night!
Hey Gayu, thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i have never read that cartoon mystery series…so i don’t know much about that…but i am happy you are liking this FF…all credits to Nikita….next episode i have uploaded next episode sometime before…and your telepathy worked this time too…way to go dear
i am also doing good dear..and my life is moving on as same ..nothing much special….
love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Superb update
Thank you so much Alekhika….
Awesome….Loved it….
So much of Suspense…An Intriguing Update….
So, Samar & Ragini want to destroy the Oberois….
I just loved the understanding between AniOmRu, they r my fav….
Shivika confrontation shows how much broken Shivaay is….
I guess Riyanshi is Yashi, she plays such an important role….
Hope that the mysteries start unfolding soon….
Waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂
Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot…yeah Samar and Ragini want to destroy Oberois …why? you will have to wait for that…awwee so sweet of you to let me know what you are liking…,yeah dear. Riyanshi plays a important role…that’s why i said Saumya’s entry will change the dynamics of this FF because she was the one to bring Riyanshi to OM……..yes from tomorrows episodes mysteries will start getting revealed ….i have uploaded the next episode sometime back…love you loads …take care and keep smiling
wow incredible one di… the way u are connecting the dots is fantastic…so shivika will save the family n the nation… now lets see how does the mystery unflods… the suspense has got me hooked up nd I cant wait… waiting eagerly for next…
Thank you so much Anu…thanks a lot…from tomorrow you will get to know how the mystery unfolds…
Even I’m eagerly waiting for tomorrow ?……loved the episode
Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot…next episode i have uploaded it already …so some more time and then your wait is over
Akka meri tho bolti back bandh hogayi . Seriously awwwwweeeeeeesssssssoooooooommmmmmeeeee.?????
Hey Ashwinee…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…hope tum sab ff end hone ke baad meri bolti naa band kardo…i am praying i write something very convincing….
love you loads
Awesome and waiting for the next part pls..post soon
Thank you so much Talli…next episode already upload chesesanu…repatiki hopefully publish avuthundi
Thank God and TU.. That MMKAD 15 is seen on ib FF page…. Today… From morning I am so restless that update is not showing…. Which causes less comments…. But you guys proved me wrong…
Thanks for your time and commenting on MMKAD to all my friends and silent readers….. Love you all…
Ur story is really awesome nikita… i am lovin it to the core. Do come up with more stories.
This is just out of the world, nikki darling……So many mixed emotions, suspenses and a beautiful presentation of characters….I enjoyed it a lot yaar…..
ZINDAGI KE KARWATEIN MOD LETI HEIN KUCH KHAAS PALON MEIN
USS SAFAR KE SHURUWAT AUR AAKHIR PADAV SE ANJAAN HEIN
HUM SIRF LADTE HEIN USS ZINDAGI SE, SHAYAD YEH LADAYI HI SAB KUCH HEIN
This is what i felt after reading this episode……It’s simply out standing nikki….
Hats off 2 u and vhm and thanks for giving links…..
Thats OUSUM di… AMAZING MIND BLOWING… ???
So now anika and shivay’s mission is actually same… TO FIND YASHI… But who is YASHI???… Omg So much mystery…
Aesa lag raha hai jese mai koi hollywood movie dekh rahi hoon full of mission and mystery… Ritika ne aaj sare episodes ek sath padhe and in last she was like… YAAR YEH FF PADHNE KE BAD REAL IB KA CURRENT TRACK HI BHUL GAYI???…
superb di… Love your ff from the core of my heart and so sorry di for this much delay for comments but yeh 2 weeks to bahot zyada adventurous hai ?… Kya batau aapko…????… So sorry di but yeah bhale hi mai late comment karti hoon but aapka ff to mai roz morning mai uthne ke saath hi padh leti hoon but morning bahot zyada jaldi jaldi hoti hai isliye morning mai comments nahi kar pati aur abhi is wakt itni raat ko karni padti hai so sorry di… PlZz aap naraz mat hona…
Waise mai janti hoon aap naraz nahi ho sakte apni sweety se but phir bhi maine keh hi diya??… Bye di love you??????
Hey Sweety…thank you so much …thanks a lot….i am so happy that you are liking this FF though this is offbeat from the regular IB….nikita ko credit miltha hain …awee so sweet of you for those amazing words for me…and koi baat nahi mujhe pata hain tum busy ho aur mujhe tumhe koi explanations dene ki jaroorat nahi…tumhe jab waqt mile tum apan opinion post karna…aur agar waqt nahi mile tho nahi karna…woh bhi chalega mujhe…bas apna dhyan rakhna …….naraaz mein tumse kabhi ho hi nahi sakti…naraaz hona mere dictionary mein faded roop se likha hain…lol….
RIKITA this is for you :
Thank you so much for the opinion you are giving through sweety..i mean Jhanvi…kabhi waqt mile tho mujhse baat bhi kar lena…Jhanvi ke paas mera contact number hain…aur woh line tumne jo kaha ”ye ff padh ke original ib ka track bhool gayi” mujhe bahut accha laga…ha ha ha ha…GUL KHAN ko mat batana ..meri OMM kar degi…lol just kidding…sara credit Nikita ko jaata hain jisne iss ff ki shuruat kii…aur thank you so much once again…aise hi jab bhi tumhe time mile mujhe apna opinion bhethe rehna
Jhanvi thank you for giving me Rikita’s opinion too……loveyou both loads…keep smiling and take care…all the best for the upcoming days of college…
Whoa suspense…Amazinggggg Di..loved to d core as always…. I hope everything get sorted out faster.. m really very desperate to read d nxt one …. I think ragini n sjm got to know abt d letter… let’s hope for d best… post nxt soon di….
Luv uhh dii…??
Thank you so much Lauren…thanks a lot…yes from tomorrow’s episode everything will start getting sorted in a distorted way…next episode i uploaded already…love you too loads dear