Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
While Jhanvi was about to reveal the truth of Anika……. the news channel announced breaking news
THE NEWS
‘’We have got the latest updates that all the passengers are safe and the sleeper cells are found to be dead……unfortunately one passenger who showed extreme bravery, gave her life to save the rest of the passengers…her name was identified to be Mrs. ANIKA…….as per the eyewitness …Mrs Anika was the first to fight with the sleeper cells in the bus and in order to save other passengers she drove the bus towards the cliff and the bus fell down into the sea and got blasted…there is no chance of bodies to be identified said the police and Navy, as a bomb blast took place and recovering the entire body pieces from sea is merely possible….…the eyewitness also said that before driving off the cliff Mrs.Anika threw a bracelet and shouted SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROIS name ….please have a look at the bracelet that Mrs.Anika has thrown on your screens (the moon and stars bracelet was shown)
To the viewers let us inform that today evening we have telecasted under our special segment news about Mrs Anika and business tycoon Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi marriage hitting rocks …..as Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi has announced divorce with Ms.Anika infront of the media…….. and later after sometime this unfortunate incident of Mrs.Anika death took place……we are still intrigued as to whether Ms.Anika boarding the same bus is just a coincidence or was something preplanned…….. our deepest condolences to her family ……
Very soon CM of Maharastra will hold a press conference regarding the emergency situation at Ratnagiri…stay tuned with us for further updates’’
Shivaay fell down holding his heart and
Shivaay screamed ‘’NAHI ANIKA………NAHI……….. Tum mujhe aise chod ke nahi ja sakti… Mujhe tumse badla lena hain ……tumhe vapas aana hoga.. YOU CAN’T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS…‘’ and fainted….while the blast scenes were running in TV behind………
OmRu , Pinky, Jhanvi, Dadi, Shakthi, Gauri, Bhavya had come to still seeing the news and then him……….
OmRu ran to him and Pinky too neared him
Om ‘’Choti maa …please go away…all this is because of you…only because of you…….go away…for God sake go away……..’’
Pinky ‘’What the hell are you speaking ? how dare you ask me to move away from my son’’
Rudra ‘’which son ? this Shivaay bhayya? Do you think you really feel and accept him as your son?’’
Jhanvi ‘’Om it’s not right time to fight or argue…call doctor first…while I try to reach the police officials to get any info about Anika….’’
OmRu took Shivaay to his room and doctor asked them to keep Shivaay out of any stress as his heart is already weak and anymore stress in near future will make his condition only worse…..OF members obliged and thanked the doctor……….
Pinky ‘’now you all may leave…I will be beside my son’’
Rudra ‘’No we cannot trust you…….we will not leave our brother…it’s better you go away’’
Pinky ‘’not a word more else no one can be worse than me’’
Jhanvi ‘’true …no one can really be worse than you….’’
Jhanvi turned towards Rudra and Om and said
Jhanvi ‘’OmRu I need to talk something so come with me’’
Om ‘’yes mom…what is the matter’’
Jhanvi ‘’Shivaay should not know Pinky’s truth anytime soon….his heart condition is known to all of us and if we tell him the truth we might lose him too…so we need to support him at this stage…and we will see Pinky later……we should remain silent’’
Om ‘’Mom…but I cannot keep silent seeing choti maa’’
Rudra ‘’And Mom…I cannot trust Choti maa after what all happened…I cannot leave her like this….’’
Jhanvi ‘’Fine OmRu come we will tell truth to Shivaay and lose him too…why don’t you understand …we have lost Anika we will lose Shivaay too…..’’
OmRu ‘’Mom……..’’
Jhanvi ‘’yes this truth was a secret in our hearts till now and from now on this truth will become a lie forever ……because there is no use of this truth to come out now ‘’
Rudra ‘’but…’’
Om ‘’Mom is right Rudra ……we should become the support of Shivaay……we have lost Anika Bhabhi we cannot lose Shivaay……..so let’s face this ………’’
They cried ……….
Shivaay was murmuring Anika’s name and Pinky’s anger was growing……
Pinky POV ‘’I don’t know even after death why Anika is not leaving my son…….i did everything but Shivaay is not coming out of her memories……I need to wait and bring another girl in his life..and this time …the girl would be choice of mine…let him get well and let me give him sometime too later …whatever I thought I will make it happen’’
—————–TWO YEARS PASSED ————-
Shivaay recovered from his ailment slowly but he was struck at the same point from his heart…his kicking out Anika and death of Anika on the same day….he had developed a feeling of hate in his heart ……..OmRu and every other Oberoi family member took care that Shivaay was not given any stress…Shivaay couldn’t forget Anika and always felt guilty for what he did ……but he didn’t know the truth till now as the ones who knew the truth never confided …….
Om and Gauri’s relation was also same ……because of Jhanvi and OF conditions Om did allow Gauri to stay in OM……..however the misunderstandings still prevailed……….
Bhavya was still in OM with Rudra , solving Sultan’s case ……Shivaay immersed himself in his business and tried to forget Anika, which was impossible for him……..
Everything was going on a regular basis…..when one day Saumya called Rudra from Australia……….
————-CANBERRA AIRPORT, AUSTRALIA———-
Saumya left OM in pretext of higher education and was residing in Australia……..she was leaving for some project and was in Canberra airport when she saw Anika with a person……..
Sumo was shocked to see Anika and for a couple of Minutes she stood still …….after coming out of shock she tried to meet Anika … but by that time Anika left from there….Sumo started searching here and there and finally found Anika near the security check…….she tried to run to meet her but was unable because the security officials denied her to breach the line ……….she tried to take a pic but the pic couldn’t come clearly as Anika’s face was turned to other side , so a side pose of Anika came in the pic…..
Sumo was disheartened…….but she was confident that she saw her Anika Bhabhi only…….at that very moment she picked up her mobile and dialled Rudra.
Rudra “ Hello Sumo…what a pleasant surprise …after a long time …how did you remember me? You know what I am missing you really badly…please come back Sumo for me for all of us and fill in some colors with your smile……’’
Sumo ‘’Rudra …i…I …’’
Rudra ‘’what happened Sumo? Are you okay?’’ he showed concern through his Voice
Sumo ‘’Rudra I am absolutely fine till few minutes before but now I am not…I have …I have’’
Rudra ‘’Sumo…first relax and tell me you have what?’’
Sumo ‘’Rudra …I have seen Anika Bhabhi just now….she is here in the airport, I mean in canberra airport… and she just did her security check…I donno where she is leaving but I have seen her’’
Rudra stood up infact sprang up and screamed ‘’What? Have you gone mad? Atleast don’t joke on these matters Sumo..you know anything about Anika Bhabhi makes me ….huh…forget it….it must be a mistake’’
Sumo ‘’rudra please…..there is no mistake…even for a moment I thought it’s a mistake…but not anymore…I reconfirmed and walked behind her to confirm she is for sure Anika bhabhi’’
Rudra ‘’stop it Sumo…ANIKA BHABHI IS DEAD…SHE HAS DIED IN THE BOMB BLAST WHILE SAVING MANY PEOPLE AND THIS IS CONFIRMED BY NAVY, AIRFORCE , CRPF & MUMBAI POLICE….eye witnesses were there to confirm the same…and now you are saying you have seen Anika Bhabhi that too in Australia…stop kidding Sumo…I request you’’
Sumo ‘’fine if you don’t want to believe then don’t believe…but the truth is Anika Bhabhi is alive and I saw her….i tried to take the pic but I couldn’t capture properly because while I clicked Bhabhi turned another side…her side pose pic is with me…..i will send it to you…if you want you can believe else I wouldn’t force you’’
Sumo sent Rudra the pic after disconnecting the call…Rudra saw the pic and couldn’t believe what he saw…..though the pic was side posed but he could feel it was his Anika Bhabhi…his Shivaay bhayya’s Anika Bhabhi……..tears rolled out of Rudy’s eyes when he felt a hand on his shoulder…..he turned to look and there his brother was standing with his hairs tied above….Rudra hugged his brother Om and started crying
Om ‘’Rudra …Rudra …what happened ? why are you crying? Look at me…first look at me ‘’
Rudra looked at Om and said about the phone call of Sumo……..Om sat down with a thump……
Om ‘’show me the pic Rudra’’
Rudra showed the pic and Om was also shocked …he then took his mobile where he had some pics of Shivaay and Anika and Anika was in a side pose…he tried to match Anika’s pic in his mobile with Anika’s pic in Rudra’s mobile….though he knew it was a stupid idea but he still did and he felt they were same……..but still both the brothers didn’t understand whether to believe Sumo or not…….they looked at each other and decided to give a try in believing as nothing will give them much happiness than their Anika Bhabhi returning back……..
Om picked up the mobile and dialled Sumo
Sumo ‘’Om bhayya…mein sachh bol rahi hoon maine Anika Bhabhi ko dekha hain’’
Om ‘’Sumo …mein jaanta hoon tum kabhi jhoot nahi bolti …ab suno meri baat dhyan se…tum agar wahi ho tho kam se kam ye pata lagane ji koshish karo ki woh kaunsi flight pakadne wali hain…taaki ham uss jagah pahunche jaha woh jaa rahi hain’’
Sumo ‘’Bhayya ye kaam bahut mushkil hain..kyunki iss waqt lagbag 20 deshon ke flights yaha se nikalthe hain…saath mein domestic flights bhi…so it’s very difficult bhayya…we have to think something else….’’
Om ‘’I know what and how to do……just give me sometime I will call you back’’
Om dialled External affairs ministry and spoke to minister and asked the Indian Embassy in Australia to look into the matter…….he informed them that her sister Saumya was in airport and she will help them identifying’’
The officer from department of external affairs Ministry agreed to help them and asked Om to inform his sister to wait in airport for sometime , meanwhile his colleagues in Australia working for Indian embassy would come in person to meet Saumya and help in tracking….
Om dialled Sumo once again and informed her to wait in Aiport while few persons from Indian embassy will come to her and help her……Sumo agreed and stayed back in airport……
—————-After security Check Up in Canberra Airport
Jwala was searching for him anxiously…she knew he would play mischiefs with her……playing peek abo was his favourite pastime …irrespective of the age…..but when it comes to duty none was more better than him….she was eagerly waiting and was thinking about him ..Making herself comfortable on a chair……..
Seeing her state he came near her and placed his hands on her head……..she lifted her head to look towards him………
So this is the third episode of the FF…………please let me know how you felt after reading this …any comments good or bad is welcome…I will reply as soon as possible…all credits to Nikita
65 Comments
amazing
who the hell is HE
loved the flashback scene
do update soon
Hey Aashi…thank you so much dear…..yeah i will be uploading the next one in few minutes
amaazzing epi ….enjoyed every bit of it ..poor shivaay and pinky.??just hate her… one ques..is bhavya opposite to rudra or saumya ?? anyways keep writing so.. and plzz post the next one soon
Hey Sairish….awee your name na…i tell you i can’t get enough of it…..
Thank you so much dear……you will get to hate Pinky more and then will feel ….i am not gonna reveal anything else …else Nikita will kill me……..Bhavya or Sumo who would you prefer ? i will write dear atleast till i give a logical end to this FF……….next episode i will upload in few minutes
aww…thank u so much di…well..i’m not asking do any revelation just wanted to know the love interest of rudra ..well I’ll surely recommend saumya …heyy btw di… i didn’t got the next epi till now …will check once again and then read it ..till then
take care
with lots of love and love
Sairish ?
Hey Sairish……next episode now in the portal …here you go with the link
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-4/
Great episode
Interesting concept
Thank you so much Sairan…thanks a lot…..
Amazing akka superb pls….update next one soon……
Thank you so much talli….thanks a lot…….next episode i will upload in few minutes from now
Diii, now who’s this HE , omg sooooo much of mysteries, plzz plzz plzz do post the next update ASAP
Thank you so much Dhar…..ha ha ha ha …don’t scold me dear…i have to build up mysteries to reveal it ……next episode i will upload in few minutes from now
Loved this update totally… But the last part is making me anxious as who this final person is. Do break the ice very soon di…. Post the nxt part very soon di.
Thank you so much Priya…hope you are doing good….answer is in the teaser for your question…….yeah in few episodes i will upload next episode
Awesome di….waiting 4 next update soon
Thank you so much Niriha..thanks a lot……next episode i will upload in few minutes from now
Wonderful dear.eager to know who is he?And sry for not commenting previously I opened tu just now and saw it
Thank you so much Kajol…thanks a lot….who is he…he is in the teaser..well in few minutes i will upload the next episode and very soon you will get to know…….and no worries dear…everyone here have their own busy schedules so i can understand your perspective….
Awesome di…. Ur giving a new suspense and opening a suspense in every part I love it…I thought you will expose pinky but it’s okay… But u expose her soon… He s Arjun right ???… Excited for the next part… post it soon..
Awee …so sweet of you dear…thanks a lot…hopefully i don’t build any more mysteries for sometime until current ones get settled……Pinky’s exposing will take place ..when yet i have not yet developed but you will enjoy something related to her after few episodes…..next episode i will upload it in few minutes from now
Amazing update… loved it.. finally sumo is back.. ?? Eagerly waiting for the next episode.. plz post asap…
Thank you so much Ankita…thanks a lot…Sumo is back and will come back later …….next episode will be updated in few minutes from now…..
amazing
Thank you so much Daljit…..thanks a lot…….
Awesom epiosd
Thank you so much Arfa…thanks a lot
Wow amazing episode….
awesome story Nikitajai and very well written VHM…
KEEP WRITING LIKE THIS…
Thank you so much Maahi…thanks a lot…i haven’t interacted much with you but i know you write poetry very well…i read it in TU written updates page of IB….very happy to see such a talented person posting opinion on this FF…it’s so overwhelming…….thank you once again
AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC OUT STANDING SUPERB??????
Thank you so much UF …i am sure you are happy to read Sumo presence in the FF in an mportant role…for sometime she will disappear again and then she will be back…thank you once again
Nice episode…
In each episode one part of the teaser is explained…
Waiting for all the Revelation…
Good going Harika di nd Nikita…,??
Thank you so much Zaveesha…..yeah after i wrote these episodes i prepared the teaser so you will definitely find the match of teaser in the episodes……very soon revelations curtain will fall down completely…thank you once again dear
awesome
here comes saumya back, good job, i just read in a comment that one of the saumya’s fan missing her and u fulfilled his wish
Hey Pritika…….thanks a lot dear….yes Sumo gave a special appearance …how can i deny readers wish ..thanks a lot once again dear…….
Nikita di , why the hell did you give this idea to vhm di, ????.
I don’t know what you have told her about this plot. See what all are coming. This is like somewhat reading a thriller story. Don’t know what happens when . But seriously tough for someone ( obviously not for vhm ) to write such a story??. Every time I read it dimaag ka dahi banjaata hai.??. But still love to read it through. Love you both loads.?????
PS; this is for my VHM akka;.
I know that by the time you have read it you would have definitely thought that “this girl is crazy ??” never mind ??
And akka sorry if I have written too much over here. And Ofcourse waiting for the next one ???
Hey Ashwinee…ha ha ha ha…thank you so much dear for appreciating Nikita for the plot and me for writing……and after reading the opinion i was laughing …you haven’t crossed any limit dear and i enjoyed your opinion …do post such witty opinions more and more …it’s pleasure to read them…..
aur aur dimaag ka dahi mat banaoo…..kyunki mein waise hi sab raaz khol doongi na……love you too loads dear
Awesome amazing part. Hopefully Bhavya will solve the case soon and Saumya will come to oberoi’s soon.
Was feeling bad and sad that Pinky is still not punished as her truth is still hidden from Shivaay. Really looking forward to her punishment.
Am worried about the last scene. Looking forward to next part…
Hey Asmi….thank you so much …..hopefully it happens as such….please don’t feel sad dear…we have a saying no one will be punished until their crimes reach peaks…i think pinky’s crime level has to reach a bit more to get punished,………
don’t worry everything is going to be fine……trust me and next part i will upload in few minutes from now
Dii…??? u cheated me..u said that shivay got to know d truth!! But noo..he dont know anything.
Soo..got see some points from promo/teaser.
Story was unfolding in a very interesting way….but i dont want another guy in Anika or jwalas life..it shld be only shivaay.
Happy to see sumos character.??..small rumya convo…he was asking her to come back to bring smiles on their faces?????.
Waiting for next part dii…and thanku for messaging d links everyday..tqsm dii…luv u lots
Awee when did i cheat you…..no dear i said glad your doubt is cleared …..i didn;t reveal anything…so sorry chotiii…but truth will take it’s own time to get revealed though i promise i will not drag and make you all bored…..
I ALSO LOVE Shivika jodi is what i can say …so keep trust on me….
Thank you so much Chotii for all those beautiful lines……next episode i will upload in few minutes from now
Haa.sry di….i was mistaken by seeing that reply.
Accept my sorry now……….cholly for blaming u..haha..cholly.
Chotii…….no sorry’s anymore…you are my cutiepie so i don’t feel bad for whatever you say okay…so relax and enjoy your day…love you loads chotiii…keep smiling
It is lovely dii… Love you..
Awee thank you Nikita for asking me to write this and for the trust you kept on me…….love you too
Amazing di… I feel like I am watching some thriller movie while reading your ff… Now to di i have no words for your ff di?…aab kitni baar AMAZING SUPERB MIND BLOWING likhun?… I think now I have to read dictionary to compliment your writing skill and nikki Di’s concept… And mai aapko ‘plz post asap’ nahi likhungi bcoz I know aap apne ff ko leke kitni regular ho…????
By di loads of love to you and akki?… ??????
Hey sweety…thank you so much….awee so sweet of you to say those lines……..OMG itne saare compliments …mein itna jhel nahi sakti……aur thank you meri punctuality ke baare mmein likhne keliye…aaj mein tumhe niraash nahi karoongi kyunki mein bas thodi der mein next episode upload karnewali hoon…aur ab tumhe kuch yaad aaya hoga?
Yes all these compliments must actually go to Nikita !!!
Loads of love to you tooo…..
Amazinggggg dii… superb… splendid….. mind blowing… no words to express… post nxt soooooooon
Thank you so much Lauren……..thanks a lot…awee so many compliments …thank you once again…will post next episode in few minutes from now
Awesome….Loved it….❤
So Shivaay, Omru,Jahnvi miss Anika?
Pinky is ridiculous?
Soumya is back, I really miss Rumya….
Again a cliff hanger….
Waiting fr d nxt…?
Thank you so much Shivika…thanks a lot……yeah those group miss Anika and Pinky doesn’t …sumo will again make an entry in the FF very soon as pf now it’s a cameo…but her return will be most unexpected one……..next episode in few minutes from now
Hey Harika Di !
Di, this update was a treat, and not to mention I enjoyed it very much?
So full of suspense. Truth was just going to reveal when this all happened.
I am happy that Shivaay got to know about Anika’s bravery, but why do he hate her still. I mean it was written that Shivaay got to know that Anika did this under someone’s pressure, so after knowing this why he hates Anika..?
But coming back to the chapter you nailed it again. Thanku for bringing Our Sumo !! Waiting for some Rumya moments, if you can?
Love you. And I am waiting for the next few minutes for your next chappy?❤
hey Vedika…….thank you so much dear……
q > I am happy that Shivaay got to know about Anika’s bravery, but why do he hate her still :
A > yes Shivaay got to know about Anika’s bravery when she lost her life saving many people but he hated her because she left him and died alone attaining peace…..and he was suffering all alone living……..
Q >I mean it was written that Shivaay got to know that Anika did this under someone’s pressure, so after knowing this why he hates Anika?
A > yes he understood Anika did under some pressure but he felt that Anika didn’t trust her love ”SHIVAAY” to reveal what was bothering her …….she couldn’t confess her problems to Shivaay which implies she felt Shivaay to be weak…….this was a defeat of his love towards her and above all he hated her because what she couldn’t express to him she expressed it to OmRu and Jhanvi ……this hurt him much more ……so he still hated her……..
i hope i clarified your questions /Confusions………sorry i couldn’t write it so elaborately in FF and confused you…i will make sure to write more precisely …….
thank you so much once again and yes sumo as of now is a cameo …soon she will be back with an important role to play which will change the dynamics of this FF once again…then you will get to see RuMya together……
love you loads and i have uploaded the next episode sometime before…….
Hey di !!
You don’t need to write more precisely, I mean you already write awesome. Just was a little confused, soory for that. And thank you helping me to understand !?
But why were you saying sorry Vedika…you call me dii and then say sorry too…not fair haan…i said sorry because when someone starts to write…they should write so that readers don’t get confused and i think i lacked this point….not your fault and good you asked me…..so never say sorry for any unecessary reason…because I love you loads and always want to be my cutie pie sissy
Amazing epi di…. Nd this fb was Superb…. Yeh meri dimag ka gangaram honase rokdia…. But 2 whom u pair with rudra soumya or bhavya???
Thank you so much Banita…thanks a lot…mein kabhi kisike dimaag ka ganagaram nahi hone doongi…majority wants RuMya so may be RuMya …….next episode up in the portal
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-4/
Lovely update di….. Sry for the late reply…..my Wi-Fi connection I tell you ?
Hey Komal THANK YOU SO MUCH …THANKS A LOT ……no worries……you posted your opinion sooner or later na ….that’s important and yeah when Wi-Fi troubles surround you what to say …i understand it ……next episode up in the portal…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-4/
Amazing update
Thank you so much Alekhika …thanks a lot…next episode also up in the portal..will be eagerly waiting for your response
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mukammal-mohabbat-ki-adhuri-dastaan-mmkad-ishqbaaz-ff-episode-4/
Plzz from my side kill this pinky ? I seriously ? hate her .. why why she is back of my MY SHIVAAY.. (ohh sorry I became dramatic) absolutely amazing ?
Hey Nida…he he he he…Pinky will repent for her mistakes…..don’t worry…you need to bear her for somemore time….YOUR SHIVAAY is always amazing isn’t he? thank you…thank you so much dear
Wow di once again an awesome episode….sad to see Shivaay such….I have one question,
Shivaay doesn’t know the truth yet na??
Jhanvi OmRu have not told him because of his heart condition.
Jhanvi was about to reveal the truth but it got cut in that news, so after getting better, didn’t Shivaay have to ask Jhanvi again?? Because we have seen him doing that ‘baal ki khal nikalna’ in every matter.
Other than that, good to see Saumya back….waiting for Rumya scenes….
I guess Anika was waiting for Arjun….
PS-(ur reply to my previous comment)
I love the name Arjun….a big backstory….so I’ll have to thank Nikita for that as well….
Hey Nita…….
Yes Shivaay doesn’t know the truth yet…and yes he didn’t ask the truth as his state after Anika’s death has become don’t care type……..so he stopped asking questions and started living on his own terms and conditions……..
thank you so much dear…thanks a lot……..Rumya scenes will be back but i need time to get back Saumya…….as curret storyline i cannot change as Nikita’s plot is something different….has it been my own plot then i could have deviated to cater everyone’s demand…though Nikita has given enough freedom to take the story forward in my own way…yet my boundaries and principles doesn’t allow me to do so………
will definitely want to know the big backstory …i know not here but may be when you are free in mails…….
Thanks a lot once again and yes all credits to Nikita
Haan di….maybe…..but our thinking is so similar…..in one of the next episodes, Shivaay does think about these things…..I mean u had already written it in next chapter n before reading it I also had the same thought….