Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB….. please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
The whole FF’s idea and concept was given by our friend Nikita_jai29….i am just developing the story based on her inputs…so all credits go to Nikita………
Here we go with the TEASER ………..
Without any knowledge of driving…she started the bus and started driving….only words that were ringing in her ears were of Shivaay’s…
She remembered Shivaay’s words saying ‘’Mera tumhare koi rishta nahi koi vasta nahi…. Dur ho jao meri Nazaro se.. Hamara rista khatam ho chuka hain… Tumne sab kuch khatam Kar diya’’
While tears rolling out of her eyes …she removed her bracelet and threw away her bracelet outside to a passenger and shouted ‘’Shivaay Singh Oberoi …aap theek keh rahe the shayad hamara ristha yehi tak tha’’ !!!
It took no time for the bus to fall from a cliff , a blast and everything into ashes , drowning then and there in sea..………..
She was Anika and this was the ADHURI DAASTAAN ANIKA KI !!!
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He fell down holding his chest and
He screamed ‘’NAHI ANIKA………NAHI……….. Tum mujhe aise chod ke nahi ja sakti… Mujhe tumse badla lena hain ……tumhe vapas aana hoga.. YOU CAN’T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS…‘’ and fainted….while the blast scenes were running in TV behind………
OmRu , Pinky, Jhanvi, Dadi, Shakthi, Gauri, Bhavya had come to still seeing the news and then him……….
He was Shivaay and this was the ADHURI DAASTAAN SHIVAAY KI !!!
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’’Rudra …I have seen Anika Bhabhi just now….she is here in the airport and she just did her security check…I donno where she is leaving but I have seen her’’
‘’I am sure there is some misunderstanding…….the lady you have identified and the name you took completely mismatches….Her name is Anjali……here are her details……for you to believe I bought her all details…the passport , the fingerprints, her stay here and so on…….have a look’’ said the officer
Shivaay ‘’I didn’t expect this from you…you both started to hide things from me? What did you think …I am so weak not to take harsh truths……’’
Om ‘’everyone falls weak for their dear ones Shivaay and you are not any exception…..it’s true if I got to know before you that she was mistaken I would have never said it to you ……..because if the point of discussion is Anika Bhabhi then you cannot bear anything …you go weak and the reason is you still love her….YOU LOVE ANIKA BHABHI EVEN TODAY SHIVAAY…and you cannot deny this fact’’
Shivaay ‘’trust….i am losing trust on myself what will I trust someone else……you both have hurt me OmRu…you have deeply hurt me’’
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‘’ A lady and a man are having some sweet moments ….the man kisses on ladies cheeks …and she is shocked……a beautiful mandap is shown and the man and lady are standing in front of it.. the man asked did you like it.. lady was annoyed…
Lady was Jwala but man’s face was unclear…
Jwala ‘’Arjun get up…you can’t leave me and go…wake up…….we have many more things to solve…get up Arjun …for God sake get up ‘’’ she cried miserably………
The scene of Jwala crying for Arjun made Shivaay even more distorted…he looked at Jwala and then at Om and Rudra and closed his eyes while falling down……..
OmRu shouted ‘’S….H……..I………V……….A…….Y’’
Shivaay opened his eyes and was shocked to see Jwala holding the gun pointing towards him
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What happened after Anika was thrown out of OM….how did the blast take place…Did Anika really die? if Anika died then who is Anjali / Jwala ? who is Arjun? Why did Shivaay feel distorted seeing jwala with Arjun? Why was Jwala pointing gun towards Shivaay?
To know all the answers please read the FF ‘’MUKAMMAL MOHABBAT KI ADHURI DASTAAN’’ an off track IB FF which will clear all the above questions and merge into the present track of IB !!! Especially for all the mystery series lovers and more importantly IB lovers… a small attempt from my end….
IDEA CONCEPTED AND SHARED BY : NIKITA_Jai29
I Really hope and wish that you all will give Nikita and me the same sort of support you gave me for my previous FF….Thank you !!!
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Awesome please post 1 part asap
Thank you so much Shreya…will post the first episode very soon…
And yes finally u made a come back….Was eagerly waiting for it. Super excited about the concept……..really looking forward to it. All the very best Di ?
Thank you so much Komal…Had to come back …was missing all of you so badly and then i have completed my classes too…so it’s a vacation time for me….
Thank you for the support dear and i hope i don’t disappoint all the readers as well as Nikita
Dii… You are so sweet… Love you…
And…. Writing and developing the story so beautifully and effectively…. Is credit goes to you dii…. Thank you so much dii… For your this efforts…..
Take care and lots of love dii… And happy ib anniversary……
Love you too Nikita…this FF is your baby ..i am just raising it but you will always be the backbone……..you too take care and loads of love dear……yeah HAPPY IB ANNIVERSARY
Nikita please check your mail and respond me at the earliest
Hello dii..a very different idea ..seems mysterious..interesting.
Story and ur way of putting up emotions will surely make this ff an enjoyable and interesting one.
Excited to read the first part of this one.
Note: i said i will be d last to comment..but see before u messaged me…i am here with a comment.?..hahah.
Hey Chotii….thank you dear …mystery will be for few episodes and then i am gonna merge this into the current track of IB …in short it begins with the recent past track of IB …goes off track and then merges into upcoming track of IB……hope i don’t disappoint you …..and please do support me in this journey…….
very soon i will upload the next part……
Ha ha ha ha…i am happy because you posted it early ….
Nice
Thank you so much Suganya…thanks a lot
Woah Woah Woah, a start with suspense??. This is the best thing I saw in the morning itself??. Lucky to have two masterminds behind this ff , and welcome back akka with this wonderful collaboration of you and nikita di??. Now that you have started it how can I miss reading this??. So eagerly waiting for the next one ??. Post it ASAP.
Hey Ashwinee…thanks a lot dear…not two masterminds dear…only one NIKITA……i am sooo happy to read that line of yours ”Now that you have started it how can I miss reading this??.”…..so sweet of you to write such beautiful lines…..will post the first episode very soon dear
Awesome
Thank you so much Niriha…thanks a lot
Awesome di…. It’s so interesting and thr r too many suspense Loving it … All the best di…. Excited for the next part…pls post it as soon as possible…
thank you so much Sagithya…thanks a lot…mystery , emotion will take front seat for few episodes…while it will be predictable……first episode i will post it very soon
NICE
Dear VHM
Iam happy that you are back.but please change BHAVYA as SOUMYA please.???.thaaki main aapki ye story aage continue kar sake.aaj kal main sirf uss ff padthi hu jisme RUMYA ho.ye ff aapka hai iss liye main aapse request kar rahi hu.please change bhavya as soumya and make RUMYA pair.please it’s a sweet request????
Hey UF,
Thank you so much for welcoming me…and i totally understand your frustration to see Bhavya and Rudra pair….i am not gonna reveal much …but just keep trust on me as i will not disappoint you……..as you start reading episodes you will understand why Bhavya is there…and then how the story takes a turn to make you contended……….
Hope to see your khidkitodh opinion on the upcoming episodes
Dii…I also want say d same point….u know my love for rumya…so plzz think abt this request.
After ur comment..I am feeling like bhavyas story may lead to rumya patchup and rumyas journey will restart.hope it goes like that.
hi
nyc to hav u bak VHM di
lovely & intersting promo
update soon
Thank you so much Aashi …will upload the first episode very soon
Awesome
Thank you so much Archisha…thanks a lot
Diiiiii u r back with a bang, different story , u just started building up suspense right from the teaser plzzzzzz do post the next update ASAP
Hey Dhar…thank you for the wishes …what to do …i have to convince all of you to read the FF na …so i built up this teaser…well this teaser idea is also of Nikita…so all credits to her rather than me….next episode i will upload very soon
so back with the super bang, welcome di and will support u always
Thank you so much Pritika….thank you for extending your support as it really means a lot …
Omgggg dii finally you post it….????
WELCOME BACKKKKKKK….. I am eagerly waiting for your ff…. And so sorryyyy di my phone was broken? and so my whatsapp is stopped so sorry can’t able to reply to yours msges…. I will definitely msg u after I got my phone back….
Hey Sweety…yes i finally posted it and i am eagerly waiting for your response on all the episodes….no worries …i will wait till you get back your mobile…we will keep in touch though……
That was so interesting. Super awesome start and lovely concept Nikita_jai
Hey Asmi…thank you so much…yes all credits to Nikita………..she deserves the accolades…and am gonna keep up my promise to you of writing what you expected me to…i hope you got to know what i mean…else check your TU messages
Awesomely beautiful….
Looking like a suspense romantic thriller….
Thank u di, for coming back….
May this ff go a long way…..
Thanks for pm??
Thank you so much Shraddha-DBO ………suspense will be underlying and romance in first few episodes is gonna be missing…but i will make sure that readers will not lose interest in reading this ……..i hope i succeed…and thank you so much for the love dear,….i am also happy to come back after a not so but a long time…
i am waiting for the next shots of your coloured canvas….in fact very eagerly waiting…..
My pleasure dear….thanks again …thanks a lot
Wow di this is fab…..so many questions to be answered and so many complications…abhi toh kuch samaj nahi aa raha, but I m damn excited for the story….post soon…..
N only Rumya di, not Ruvya…..
Hey Nita…….thank you so much dear…i promise i am not gonna retain the suspense for a very long time……..the mystery will for sure get revealed from the second episode itself…and only suspense is whether Ruvya or Rumya…..well i am not gonna disappoint anyone of you
Oh ho…second episode se hi…..that’s really fast….N I know u di….U always come up with something more better than what I (or we all ) think….ur mystery n suspense revelation is always worth the wait….
Hey Nita thanks…hopefully i live up to your expectations…as of now from second episode revelations will start but let’s see if in future modification may take place…nothing as of now decided………
Wow!!! di finally u cme back with ur new ff…. I miss u sooo much…. It’s really an AWESOME concept Nikita…. Hope both of ur fusion work going 2 be a fab ff…. Gud luck 4 this…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi di….
Thank you so much Banita…i missed you all too dear …a lotttt…so i came back…..will post the next episdoe at the earliest
Finally u r back with a mysterious love story…i loved the teaser… nd m eagerly waiting for the story…nd I’m damn sure that you’ll again show ur amazing writing skills…
Thank you so much Zaveesha….thanks a lot…yeah will upload the first episode very soon…and i hope i live upto your expectations
Awesome update
Nice to see you back Alekhika…thank you so much for the opinion
Wow!!! Mysteries….. That too sooooo many mysteries di. REALLY INTERESTING! And thanks to Nikita too.. But this time I can’t able to read ur mind di.. Bcz Nikita is there for u na, how can I read her mind? Will be waiting for 1st part di….
Take care!
Thank you so much Gayathri…not so much of surprises ……but will make it interesting though as much as possible……ha ha ha ..but you are genius Gayu i know you will predict
Just like de previous one
Once again u r ready with all ur awesome words nd amazing creativity to set up fire on stage nd this time with de idea of Niki di which is really a mindblowing one
I appreciate her equally as u
All de readers of MMKAD get ready to taste de flavours of ur favourite
Ice cream whatever it is VHM DI get known to it like before
I may not present here to give my speechless comments but links should much be continuously forwaded
Whenever i got free time I’ll read it
U once made it possible in all ur busy schedule u never missed to send links nd I want that favour once again
Nd de presentation of de promo is once again making us fall in love with ur writing skills di
Okay bye time ended ?????
Hey My Chirpy Amayaa….
After a lot of time seeing you here in the Promo ….yes Nikita deserves a huge round of applause…i will for sure send you the links as i did previously…..thank you for all the compliments dear…do take good care of yourselves and i know you are concentrating much on your career which is right now the right thing to do…so all the very best dear…
this was awesome especially for My kinda mystery lovers???..plzzz post the next one soon.
Thank you so much Sairish…your name is very nice and a new one to me…….i liked it very much…thank you so much for those lines dear…first episode very soon in TU portal
thanks for complementing ??
Outstandingly written promo by you .. who ever idea ? it was it will become super hit after it is written by you
Thank you so much Nida…feeling relaxed seeing your opinion on the promo …the much needed boost after getting confidence from other readers is definitely something i ,… infact me and Nikita need at this time…and i know you will always be there to support me / us…waiting to see and read your response on my every write up of this FF …….
Do again you ate back with a bang and this one is very beautifully written with so much question to be yet answered. Waiting for the next post. Loved this to the core
Hey Priya..thank you so much dear…all the answers will be starting from episode 2 of this FF…waiting to see all your responses …and next update very soon in TU portal…my fingers crossed on the verdic tfrom you all
Well you don’t need to cross your fingers di. Bcoz we all know that whatever you write just touches our heart to the core. And yes this time I will never forget to comment on your work. And waiting for the suspense to open up.
Hey Priya…now i am getting excited nervous and tensed too…so much of expectation …fingers crossed …well i have uploaded the first episode …i hope it appears soon in portal and then i will wait for the response…and because i know you so take your time in posting comments, because your health and taking rest is much more important for me…….take care dear
Heyoo Harika Di !
So sorry for commenting this late, hope you understand. First of all the title is great and I am really excited for the story.
Thank you so much Harika di and Nikki di for bringing this story to the readers. Excited as hell !
Couldn’t understand little things but very eager for the next chapter. Great job.
Love you loads❤
Hey Jerry……..all credits to Nikita…i am just penning down her views…thank you so much dear ..it’s always a pleasure to wait for your opinion and then read it taking my own sweet time as your opinion brings in a beautiful curve of lips of anyone reading it…….title was also given by Nikita …i too loved the title when she suggested it….yeah teaser right everything will start getting clear from the first episode itself………
love you too dear…keep smiling and keep rocking
Great start.. Amazing update dear..
Thank you so much Ankita…thanks a lot…i hope i live upto your expectation
Woah…..
I’m so excited by seeing ur name as author…
Bang on comeback dear…
And the reason for being happy is that now I’m free so I’ll surely get time to appreciate u for ur amazing work.
I’m damn sure this ff will be rocking like the past one’s…
Welcome back dear?
Hi Di. I know I’m late. You say that you will give all of a surprise in next week, ie June 26th . But I didn’t read your ff Di. Sorry for that. I read the your and Nikita ‘s ff teaser today. You are coming back with an super duper ff Di. Please inform my thank you to Nikita. It’s was super duper idea????????? and super duper title???????. I like it . Idea was Nikita but it’s was written by you only na Di. So it’s was super duper like your all other works . I’m very excited Di. Thank you Di and Nikita for this
surprise . You both combo work is fantastic. I says na I wants to read your works. I’m happy that you come back with current track of IB. After reading the teaser I’m very excited Di. I always love thriller and suspense stories. So many questions and so many twists and turns are awaiting. Now I going to read first part of your and Nikita ‘s ff Di. I promise you ,I will surely read further parts of your ff today,
Hey harika di,you kept your promise n came back with a bang on one.??
Really feeling excited to read it n I didn’t knew it was yours ?as my bookmarks were removed by my stupid sis? anyways now I’ll read them in one go if possible n then will comment on current update.?
Xtra happy to see you.
Love you????