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Muquamal mohabbat ki adhuri dastan ab hogi puri!! Episode 1

Thank you for liking this!! And sorry I forget to mention ages of sanskar ragini and laksh …they all r 28. Now lets start-
In MD hospital,mumbai
Ragini- swara u have achieved what u want now ts time to thinkof ur life….uncle and aunt are already tensed about it.
Swara- ragini plz..i don’t want to marry and leave mine tell urs….u r still waiting for him the person who almost killed u mentally
Ragini- I cant foget him ..yaa he did really bad but he loves me and he will come
Swara- I wish that this time too ur trust wins but cant forgive him …he gave only tears to u…….leave this u check ur cabiin
Ragini- yaa sure!!!
In border-
Head- laksh u hadnt take a single off in these 7 years ..dont u miss ur famil.
Laksh – sir family is which cares us and understand us but mine has snatched my everythng.
Head- still u r having 6 month holidyas …where will u go?
Laksh- to my life…someone who is waiting for me…..i had done many mistakes now its time to correct them
I m coming Ragu !!!
Laksh packed his things and set for mumbai
In bangalore
Chief- sanskar u r transferred to our mumbai office so get ready for this……..u r given a huge responsibility so prepare for it
Sanskar- sure sir!
He called his parents-
Rp- hello so u remember us
Sanskar- what dad …I miss u both a lot and I m coming to stay withu
Sujatha -really my son is coming ….ok I will prepare ur fv food….ahhhhhhh…..my heart
Sanskar – mom what happened..dad tell me
Rp- suju what happened …..oh no its her 2nd heart attack…sanskar she had aaheart attack I will talk u later
Sanskar-dad take mom to best hospital I m coming
After some hours
Sanskar called rp –
Sanky- dad how is mom
Rp -beta I took her to d sinha….he told that a bypass sugery is needed …..we r taking her to md hospital as dr said that dr mathur is best cardioogist of mumbai
Sanky – ok dad I m coming there only…just send me address.
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Laksh pov – I knw its difficult to forgive me but my love was not a lie it was dad’s promise which stopped me but now I will give all happiness.
At md hospital
Ragini pov- why I m feeling restless …looks today my life wll change
Nurse- mam mr verma’s appointment is today’…..may I send him
Ragu-yaa send him and prepare for suurgery of mrs gupta

In ot
Dr – dr swara this is most compliccated case till now …r u sure for it
Swara – I havnt learnt to lose …..nothing is complicated ….
After some hours-
Dr swara u did it again ur 25th successful transplantation
Family of patient- bending to her feet…mam thank you u don’t knw what u have given us
Swara- no mam don’t do that it was my duty and I m not god .
Saying this she moved to her cabin-
Swara pov-
It wasn’t easy for me but u didn’t understand me…….u really think that I betrayed u…..was ur love this much…I wont forgive u.
Sanskar pov- why I m feeling such connection with this hospital……like she is here …..maybe I have achieved so much but I lose the most precious gift due to my misunderstanding……hope I could say sorry to u …..hope I didn’t misunderstand u
He called rp – dad I have reached here
In hospital
Nurse- Mam someone is shouting in reception maybe some great scientist or what he is calling u
Swara-tell him that I will meet after few hours
Nurse – mam he is not listening
Swara- ok I m coming
There on reception sanskr-whats this listen I have vip card and need a vip room for my mom …..where is ur dr mathur call her…is this way to manage patient
Swara shoutd-and s this way to talk someone—this is a hospital and all patients are equal nnone is treated on basis of status and whosoever u r…….u r like others too me
He turned too see her and both got shocked to see each other ….their world was stopped……………………………………Agar tu hota song plays from baaghi
In ragini’s cabin
Wardboy- mam someone is calling u on terrace
Ragu- who??
Wb- mam I don’t knw he is callng ur name
He reached on terrace-
She spoked laksh!!!
Laksh- ragu …..he went to hug her but she moved backward
Ragu- why have u come here …to check whether I m alive or dead
Laksh- plz rgu give me a chance
Ragu-what chance …..u didn’t check even that how I was
Laksh- but papa give me promise
Ragini – and me……I was preganent laksh at that age where my carrier studies were on stake
Laksh – whatttt?????
Ragu- u heard it ry8
Laksh – but aunty said me that u r only unwell
Ragu- whatt??/…………………..but u didn’t see backward
Laksh- I have left my family……………….they snatched u from me………..plz give me a chance
Ragini- u need a chance ok then prove ur love
Laksh- how??/ will do what u want
Ragu- kill me
Laksh- what ????r u out of ur mind….i cant do this
Ragini- that’s ur love?
Laksh u want to see my love ry8……(he went to boundary of terrace and was jumping just then ragu hold her)
Ragni- what is this……r u a born idiot
Laksh yaaafor sure thatwhy I left u naa
Ragini – u want me to accept ur love?
Lakssh- yaa
Ragu- then accept ur parents and make them ready for our marriage
Laksh- donee
Ragu- that’s not much my parents too
Laksh- done
Ragu- most difficult part……make swara forgive u
Laksh – oh no!! my shona ……I wil try…
Ragini – and one thing more prove ur love to me
Laksh moving closer to her- how
Ragini- u will not even touch me till our mariage.
Laksh- this is not fair
Ragini – somany times u have proved me wrong that now I fear t trust u
Laksh realised that she hasn’t forgive him
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Swara holding her tears – ya what u want?
Sanky- my mom needs a bypass surgey.
Swara- ok we need to do some test ……u do formalites
After some time in swara’s cabin
Sanky- may I comein?
Swara- yaa ……………ur mom’s reports have come…she needs surgery urently
Sanky- yaa do it as u want
Swara- ok today evening 5 pm
Sanky- ok
Swara – u may leave now
He begins to leave but then called – swara I want to say
Swara stopped her- not now sanskar it was past and now u r only my patients
sanky- but atleast listen me
swara I alwas listened u………….now I havent that much power to listen u again
jo sunna tha wo us din sun liya ta
sankar left from there in pain in his heart……….thinking- swara till when
Raglak entered swara’s cabin
Laksh fall on swara’s feet- swara devi ki jai ho…mate plz give ur siister to me I wont hurt her anymore
Ragini was surprised and controlling her laugh
Swara- laksh u…
Laksh cut him -shona I knw u r a dangerous angry bird but plz forgive me
Swara- laksh atleast listen me
Laksh- no swara u r doc of heart so plz don’t break mine
Swara put a scissor directing toward laksh-enough…….shut up!!!…….speaking like chatter box…..i forgive u that day when I saw ragu missing u badly and eeing her trust on u…so stop ur drama or….
Laksh crying fake- thanks shona and pulled her cheeks
Swara- don’t do that I m not that swara
Laksh – ok and where is ur boring bf sanky
Swaragini’s smile fades away
Swara- everything has finished..leave it!!! Saying this she leaves

So that’s it
Now what happened in their past
It will be revealed in next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abhilasha

I m a crazy person...wants to become a doctor ...love my parents My hobby writing!! My love Kanchi!!! Swaragini.......and the diva Shraddha Kapoor!!

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