I’m fed up with the comments on aur pyar Ho Gaya guys.. so less.. pls tell if you don’t want then I’ll discontinue… and thank you for the comments…
scene 1,
it’s the next day, in the killer ‘s home, the killer came to the sofa… he has done photos…he sat down and looked… it’s the photos of swasan and RagLak… he laughs..
killer : new one!
he then looks at the wall infront and beats the photos down on the table..
killer : did they think, they’ll be safe by doing this?
the photo on his hand falls down..when he looked down her saw Sanskar pic.. he taker it…
killer : Sanskar! let’s see..
he beats his temple by his hand..
killer : oh, sorry… you will not able to see it as you’ll be dead!
he takes a marker and marks the photo X…
scene 2,
it’s morning, Sanskar reached raglak’s home… he presses the calling bell..
girl voice : yes… wait…
Sanskar heard it and waited… the door opens and swara is standing… Sanskar looked at her..
ragini : who’s this, swara?
swara heard it… she said while looking at him still..
swara : it’s Sanskar…
swara back aside…
swara : come inside, Sanskar…
swara calls him in.. sanskar nodded..
Sanskar : yes. thanks..
he came in… ragini closes the stove and come to hall…
ragini : come, Sanskar.. I’ll call Laksh..
Sanskar : (nodding) okay..
ragini : sit…
then, ragini walks up… while swara and Sanskar are alone in the hall… Sanskar looked at swara.. swara is standing on aside and looked s
down… swara felt he’s looking at her… she looks up and Sanskar turned away…
ragini comes to room …laksh is still in sleep… ragini takes the blanket away from on him… Laksh looked at her half sleepy…
ragini : Sanskar is here… get up. .
Laksh clears his eyes by rubbing and came out of sleep…
Laksh : what?
ragini : yes, Sanskar is here..
ragini said and stands there still… Laksh sit on bed..
Laksh : okay, I’ll come…
ragini : okay,
ragini walks away from there to down… Laksh looks on….
scene 3,
while down, Sanskar looked at a drawing on the wall.. he got up and come to it…
Sanskar : it looks beautiful…
swara stare him and smiles… she walked to him…
swara : I painted it…
Sanskar turned and looked at swara…
Sanskar : wow!
he smiled at her and turned to look at the drawing…
Sanskar : you’re good in painting..
he nods ..swara smiles proudly…
swara : thanks…
she said and tucked her hair back and looked down… ragini comes down…
ragini : Sanskar, Laksh is coming… swara, please help me in kitchen..
ragini takes swara along with her to kitchen… Laksh comes down to Sanskar…
Sanskar : were you up just now..
he gave a hug to Laksh and high fived their hands… they smiled at each other…
Ragini prepared 4 cups of coffee and give it to swara..
ragini : give it to all.
swara : okay.
swara comes out of kitchen and gives the tea cup to laksh and Sanskar and a cup for her… she then puts the tea plate down on table…
ragini joins them and takes the tea cup and sat down beside swara…
Sanskar : laksh, I’m here to say something…
Laksh : yes tell…
Laksh takes it casually while swarag takes it a bit serious with Sanskar tone…..
To be Continued….
chapter 5s link…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/murder-revenge-love-raglak-chapter-5/
i hope you’ll like it… let me know by comment… byr…
17 Comments
awesome
no plzz don’t stop air pyar ho gaya its awesome but plzz try to give raglak romance plzz don’t stop
its awesome amazing brilliant outstanding mind blowing no world to describe it plzz see Na swasan ff are so much plzz raglak ff writer try to write more for raglak plzz for raglak write more raglak ff plzz this is a request hope u full fill plzz CVS has done so much partiality to raglak we have to prove that even if that raglak are the best and have equal fandom plzzz give more ff and yaa thanks also that u give so much precious time to raglak but plzz many raglak ff is started and left in the middle but a swasan complete their ff and none ff raglak reach 100 so plzz
hey athira plz update regular or atleast just give a hint who is murderer and what is the purpose of the revenge
Amazing and plz update soon xx
Wow….
It’s so interesting
Who is d murder??
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Hey dear don’t discontinue aur pyaar hogaya
Interesting episode dear and plz don’t stop any of ur ffs. All ur ffs are superb. Please write for those people who always support ur ffs. I think many readers are silent readers. Please don’t discontinue
Please continue dear
Love to read your stories
Intresting
awesome dear…it’s so interesting…who’s that murder??…waiting for nxt one…and don’t discontinue ur aur Pyaar hogaya ff dear…plz continue dear….tkcr dear…
amazing!!
Awesome
Superb di
amazing but continue aur pyaar ho gya too
awesome
Nice.