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Pari went to Rohit’s room.
Rohit was stunned:Pari,why are you here at this time?
Pari:Rohit..I am straight forward.So I am telling you directly that I saw everything.
Rohit:What did you see?
Pari:I know that there is something between you and Sona di.
Rohit was shocked.
Rohit:Nothing like that Pari.
Pari:Even though Sona di did not tell anything I can read her heart.She loves you.I don’t know why you are ignoring her love.But please don’t hurt my Sona di.She is too good Rohit.
Pari went out painfully.
Rohit’s eyes were full of tears.
Rohit:Yes Pari..Your Sona di is too good.
Raima came to Sonakshi’s room.
Sonakshi wiped her tears.
Raima:You were crying.Right?
Sonakshi faked a smile holding her hand:No.Why should I cry on this happy occasion?
Raima:Even if your hide your tears I can see it as I am your best friend.
Sona’s tears rolled down her cheeks.
Raima:Is Rohit the reason behind your tears?
Sonakshi was silent.
Raima:You love Rohit.Right?
Ronakshi was silent.
Raima:I know that something is wrong between you both.You talk to him and sort it out.Before marrying Sumit you should need clarification from Rohit.You atleast deserve to know what’s in his mind.
Sona:I think Rohit is too good for me and that’s why he is avoiding me.
Sonakshi hugged her crying.Raima caressed her emotionally:Nothing like that Sona.You both are perfect for each other.Rohit will realize that.
They all returned to their house.
Veena came there.Rohit and Suman were really happy.
Sonakshi entered Rohit’s room.
Rohit:Why are you here Sona?
Sona:As you know within few days my wedding is going to take place.Before that I want to know one thing.
Rohit:What do you want to know?
Sona:I just want to know whether you have at least one drop of love for me in your heart.
Rohit was stunned.
Sona:I will not pressurize you to marry me.If you say that you love me I will live the whole life with that sweet memory.If you say that you don’t love me I will not disturb you anymore.I will marry Sumit.
Sona’s eyes were full of tears.
Sona:But please say something.
Rohit became upset.
Rohit:I have nothing to say Sona.You just leave.
Sona:Rohit!
Rohit:Please Sona..please leave.
Sonakshi ran out crying.Veena was over hearing everything.She was shocked.
She entered the room.Rohit hid his tears seeing her.
Veena:I heard everything.
Rohit was shocked.
Rohit:She is mad Maa.
Veena:You did not tell her that you love her,at the same time you did not tell her that you don’t love her.What does it mean Rohit?
Rohit became upset:Nothing Maa.
Veena:Rohit..I am your mother.You tell me the truth.Do you love Sonakshi?
Rohit hugged her bursting into tears.
Rohit:Now it’s too late Maa.
Veena caressed him tearfully.
Sumit and his dad visited Suman.
Sumit’s dad Rajender:We heard that a boy is staying in this house.
Suman:Yes,he is my friend’s son.
Rajender:There are rumours that your daughter and he are having an affair.
Suman was shocked:What are you saying?He is our family friend.That’s it?
Sumit:But that’s not outside world is saying.There are many people who saw them together.
Suman:They attended some function together.
Sumit:A boy and a girl are staying under one roof.They are roaming about and you are saying that they have no affair?Unbelievable.
Rajender:Sorry to say that we don’t want a characterless girl for our son.
Suman was shocked.She lost her control too.
Suman:How dare you call my daughter characterless?Good that you don’t want to marry her Sumit.You don’t deserve my daughter.She deserves someone better.So get out.
Rajender:So arrogant.
Suman:Get out.
They went out.
Suman turned back.Sonakshi was standing there with a shocked face.Pari was also standing there.She was upset.
Suman:Don’t worry Sona.Those gossip believers can stay away.I will find the best person for you.
Sona:Mumma….They are right.I love Rohit.
Suman was shocked:What?
Sona:But trust me mumma..there is nothing more than that.There is no affair.Rohit rejected my love.That’s why that day he decided to leave our house.
Suman was shocked.
Pari went to Rohit’s room.
Pari:Rohit…Sumit and his dad left.They said Sona di is having an affair with you,so Sumit does’nt want her.
Rohit and Veena were shocked.Both of them ran out to follow Sumit and his father.
Sumit and Rajender had reached the air port.
Rohit went near them.
Sumit:How dare you come before me Rohit?You snatched my fiancee from me.
Rohit:You are misunderstanding us Sumit.Sona is pure like Gold.You will be the most luckiest person to get a wife like Sona.
Pari came there with Suman.
Rohit:Please Sumit…I beg of you.Please don’t cancel the wedding in the last moment.It will affect Sona’s future.
Pari and Suman became emotional seeing Rohit begging Sumit for Sonakshi.
Sumit:I don’t want a characterless loose girl like Sonakshi.
Rohit could not bear anymore and slapped Sumit:How dare you call Sona characterless?If you insult her again I will not leave you.
Suman called him:Rohit!
Rohit looked at Suman.Rohit and Veena were shocked to see Suman.
13 Comments
It was really nice. I want to know Suman’s reaction on Rohit after he slapped Sumit, it made me curious because how at last Suman shouted on Rohit. It was great.
I feel you are a good author and request you to write a FF on Yeh Rishtey Hai Pyaar Key (YRHPK) because I like YRHPK and YHC a lot. As you have already writing on YHC so I suggested on YRHPK. I hope you will keep my request and there is no pressure you can take your time to decide it.
It was really nice. I want to know Suman’s reaction on Rohit after he slapped Sumit, it made me curious because how at last Suman shouted on Rohit. It was great.
I feel you are a good author and request you to write a FF on Yeh Rishtey Hai Pyaar Key (YRHPK) because I like YRHPK and YHC a lot. As you are already writing on YHC so I suggested on YRHPK. I hope you will keep my request and there is no pressure you can take your time to decide it.
thanks a lot.After i complete one of these ffs I will try to write misbir ff
Very nice ff…I really like it.. Keep it up
thanks
I liked it a lot. Ur a good author of possible plz write an FF on yjhjk coz I am a huge fan of yjhjk.
Hi Jasmine, aleyamma suggested me to you. I was asking if you can please make an FF about Zain aaliya of Beinteha (Zaya). Pretty Please. I’m not going to force you do it only if you ar happy to write it.
Can you tell me on which couple or serials do write ff on?
And again if you do it I will be forever greatful.
I had written a multi star FF called Vivah which had ZaYa too.
https://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=vivah+Haya+FF
If u can plz read it.
Currently I am writing ffs on RuSha,Ronakshi,Abhigya,preeran,rishta,,ishra,mayra,roshan,rikara.
Do you know anybuddy whu rites about aliya and zain?
Very interesting epi. Getting impatient with rohit’s denial. Eagerly waiting 4 sumans reply. 4 sure she wil support rohit bcuz sumit hurted sona
thank you very much
Wow. It is interesting. Suman and Veena accepting Rona is really good. I like the twist that Sumit rejected Sona. You have ended this part in a Interesting manner. Excited for next part. Don’t know how I missed this part.
thanks a lot