My Saviour- Riansh OS
Hello, I had said that I will bring the other OS but that will take a bit of time so I thought of bringing a short one. I hope you like this OS and please do let me know how you found it in the comments section.
Riddhima’s Point of View
I am Riddhima, a physiotherapist. I don’t have a surname because my parents threw me out when I was 10 years old. My father thought that I was a burden on him, my studies and other expenses was a burden on him. So he decided to throw me out, and my mum, whether it was out of helplessness or the same reason didn’t defend me. Why are girls regarded as a burden? Times are changing, there’s no difference between a girl and boy now. If I were a boy then maybe I would have been with my family but I don’t regret, I don’t want to be a boy. I’m fine as a girl, I got my best family that night.
I remember how I was all alone. I wished for an angel like in my fairy tale books to come, but deep down me I knew nothing of that existed. God showed me that angels do exist, Vansh, one of them. A small boy had approached me when I was sitting near a light post. He forwarded his hand for a handshake and I reciprocated. He sat near me and we talked a little, introducing each other when his parents arrived.
Vansh: Riddhima this is my mom and dad (pointing) Dad and mom this is Riddhima.
Ajay (dad): hi Riddhima dear, why are you crying and why are you on the streets right now? It’s late night.
Uma (mom): Yea Riddhima. (she went and hugged her)
Riddhima: (felt a mother’s touch and started crying heavily while Uma consoled her) My family threw me out of the house.
Ajay: What? Why
Riddhima: Because I’m a girl (crying)
Uma: How insensitive of them! The times of girls and boys being differentiated have gone. How can they simply oust you and that too in the middle of the night! (hugging) Please stop crying dear.
Ajay: I’m going to report them!
Vansh: Mom please tell her to stop crying, she will fall sick. (Uma nodded)
Uma: Ajay, can we take her home with us?
Ajay: Is there anything you have to ask in it…. Of course. Come dear, come to our place.
Mom, dad took me to their place along with Vansh. I didn’t know where my destiny would lead me. They regarded me as their daughter, I was acknowledged there, I was given respect, I was given my rights of being a girl unlike my real family who had kept on pampering my elder brother after all he was the SON of the house, the real HEIR. Mom dad educated me and I got the best family I ever needed, they accepted me so easily and I’m always thankful to them for that.
Eventually Vansh and I became friends then to best friends. He always stayed with me when I felt low, he comforted me, and he did everything to make me smile. It was as if without him, I’m incomplete and without me he’s incomplete. We did schooling and college together. We studied together, we went for trips together, and we did everything together just like how normal best friends did. He was a master in pranks, what a naughty boy he was. He used to include me in every prank, I was his partner in crime!
In college, I faced one of the worst days, I was almost about to lose my dignity in front if those raggers! I wasn’t brave enough to face them, but my saviour was always there. He saved me at all times, protected me from such hooligans and the bad problems. I don’t understand the society, if a girl is about to get raped- it’s the girl’s fault, no one will blame the man…. I wonder why so? Why can’t girls behave the way they want to, why do they have to follow rules? Why are rules only meant for girls and not boys? Vansh taught me how to fight back, how to be courageous and how to answer someone back.
I was and I am grateful to have him in my life, not only as my best friend but also as my husband. Yes, he became my husband, my love. Gradually in college, I became closer to him, we became closer to each other. I couldn’t understand my feelings but he did. Mom helped me to realize that we were meant for each other. I guess that’s why we met when we were 10 years old, God wanted to keep us together, forever. The day we confessed was the most beautiful day of my life! We became one, united.
I gladly thank God for letting my real family abandon me to get such an amazing family, who gave me everything I deserved, and more than what I deserved. They gave me a new life, Vansh was my saviour, is my saviour and will remain my saviour.
My daughter will never face what I faced, she will be treated equally amongst everyone. Gender doesn’t matter.
Vansh: Riddhima, princess is waiting! Let’s go now.
Riddhima: Coming!
The End
Guys so this was it. I didn’t mean to offend anyone but I just wanted to try to pass a simple message that girls can do everything that boys can do. Girls are no less than boys and now are regarded equal. I know times are changing and that’s the main reason I wanted to just share this. I’m not trying to be a feminist either but just trying to say that girls are not a burden, and can be independent on their own.
Pls let me know how you liked it in the comments section and pls continue supporting me. And if you would want me to write one from your choice do write it down in the comments section.
❤Parita❤
73 Comments
Excellent Sister
Abc bro this is first time I’m seeing your comment on OS
Thank you @ABC bro, glad to see you commenting❤❤
Lovely episode dear.
Yeah I’m the 2nd.
Party time.
Thank you di❤❤ Yess pawri time🥳🥳🥳
Amazing Parita dear..You rocked…No words…Parita maam what you wrote was something unique and which is the bitter truth of the society…
Thank you ❤❤ Yes true, people need to change their mentality and give rights to girls.
4th ,will comeback after reading
amazing parita, I am speechless after reading it. harsh truth of the society. hope this thinking changes soon. post more os soon
🥳😂😂 sure
Thank you di❤❤ I hope so too, it has to change
I will
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Thank you❤❤
I am coming back after reading..how can I disrespect you..🙂🤣🤣🤣😂
ofc 😂😂😂 always continue following
Just perfect 🥰
Thank you ❤❤
It was just wonderful parita 😍😍!! Bitter truth of our society 🙂🙂! I am glad that my parents are not like that to compare girls and boys! But still some parents exist who treat boys and girls differently! My school friend too share her experiences that she is not allowed to wear shorts ,skirts or frocks. She is not allowed to do activities like cycling and all as she is a girl!! I mean what the hell!! Problem is not in the clothes problem is in the person who finds it wrong! You highlighted a very important topic!! It was just fabulous!!❤️❤️
Thank you❤❤ Yes it’s true. Same here, i’m lucky to have a family too who allows me to do anything and want me to be independent. It’s true, one of my good friend’s parents behave the same way. We need to change our thinking, times are changing. Thank you once again❤
Nice one madam jii❤❤aap jaise madam se hum proud feel krte h. You literally rocked mam. It is so beautiful os. I love the concept very much. Want more like this. 🙂🙂🌝🌚😉😉😊😊
Thank you❤❤😂😂 Yes i will
no word to describe this os parita ji
Thank you❤❤ ji
Nice episode
Thank you❤❤
Amazing and it’s the bitter truth of society but am happy my dad and mom want me to be independent. This was an great os about a great topic but everyone is not lucky like Riddhima. I just hope people realize and change their mentality. By the way awesome 👏 writing
Thank you❤❤ Yes same here, my parents want me to be on my feet, independent and they let mo do anything i want too. Yes so many suffer but not everyone is lucky like Riddhu to get someone like Vansh and his family.
Amazing 😍 you conveyed best message beautifully ❤️
Thank you❤❤Glad you liked it
Mindblowing dear…. Loved it
Thank you❤❤
Amazing…..with wonderful msg….
Ridhima was lucky that she had vansh and his family…….
But many girls in our society don’t possess such an angel like Vansh….and they suffer whole life….
Thank you❤❤ Yes that’s very true, not everyone is lucky to have a family like Vansh. Riddhima is indeed very lucky
Parita ma’am sorry I got late today. I’m coming back after reading.🤣🤣
Wow PARITA DI LOVED it♥️. Indeed it is very important message you have gave through your OS😊. Girls are not less then Boys, they are EQUAL to them. If Boys are getting education then it is girls equal right to get education also 📖.
The society who has that type of mentality that girls are BURDEN needs to know that THEY ARE NOT BURDEN!! THEY ARE EQUAL TO BOYS.
But I am grateful to my parents who never stop me from doing any thing, they want me independent.😊😊
No problem, carry on the trend😂😂🥳
Thank you❤❤ Yes Girls aren’t less than boys but are equal to them. People need to change their mentality and stop differentiating between girls and boys. That’s the same with me, my parents never restrict me from doing anything (except if it’s bad ofc)❤❤
Woow well done Parita dear 👏🏻👏🏻 Hard hitting truth told beautifully with Riansh as a means. Not every affected girl is as lucky as Riddhu and not every guy is as good and understanding as Vansh. You conveyed a girl’s feeling excellently.
Thank you❤❤ Exactly, only some are destined to have such people in their lives. Thanks, i’m glad you liked it
Awesome OS Pari really only girls have to suffer every time what ever circumstances may be your story is excellent I thoroughly
Thank you❤❤ di. Exactly why only girls are to be blamed.
Parita, I’m glad you wrote about this sensitive and sad topic that is happening in some parts of the world, including India here. It is sad that this is happening in the world and you caught this so well in Ridhima’s words. Absolutely gorgeous! ❤❤❤
Thank you❤❤ di. Yes di, there so many cases around the world and they r my inspiration in writing this and conveying my message to you all. Thnkss❤
This was Magnificent ❤️
Simple yet unique!
Thank you❤❤
This is really lovely girl 🥰, is true we all have the right to educate either a girl or a boy.
Thank you❤❤ Yes both have equal rights
Pari sis, I really like the message you sent as it is one not to be ignored. Girls are equal to boys and can do anything that they can. Also bullying and ragging is not a nice thing either. Many suicides are caused by bullying and ragging. Both of these problems should stop.
I really liked the story and message and I like how Uma and Ajay were nice to Rid and treated her like Van.
Overall I liked everything about your story. Plus your writing has improved. Its more detailed and you know how to display emotions.
Brilliant Fan fiction Pari!
Thank you❤❤ di. Yes exactly, they are equal. There should be no discrimination between girls n boys. I’m glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for telling me my progress, will improve more now. Thank you!!
Nice OS pari
Thank you❤❤
Nice work parita.Keep up and glad that you raised such a delicate matter/topic that has hugely affected our societies differently .
That was really good Parita.❤🌹. Excellent os. Well done n keep iit up. I was feeling emotional whilst reading . I agree that both boys n girls r equal now .
Should alwsys be that way. Lots of love🥰😘❤👌. Wonderful writing.
Thank you❤❤. Yes people need to change their mindsets on this topic
@Angela, Thank you❤❤ Yes both are to be considered equal! Thanks a lot
Lovely episode
Thank you❤❤
True girls can do anything what they want
Yes absolutely!!
What an os… Keep writing on such topics… They r very important… And exactly we are bit burden on anyone..they always blame a mother for delivering a gurl but If they r educated persons they would know that it’s not their fault, it’s the male’s fault…. Proud of u parita.. superb os… Pls post soon more
Thank you❤❤I will dear. Yea true, it’s not anyone’s fault, and girls aren’t a burden, and girls have shown that! Thank you so much dear, i will soon
Amazing OS❤️
Thank you❤❤
Nice update. I like the message
Thank you❤❤ Just wanted to spread this message
Please upload next episode of riansh a cute loge story
I’m sorry but i don’t write riansh a cute love story. Dear i think you’re mistaken