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na jaana dil se door pt 25

Hey guys its sobia back with part 25….this is all of your love that I have reached part 25…thank you all so much!!!!! I am so sorry guys I didn’t post for 2-4 days….it’s my first cousin’s wedding in august and we were just shopping for clothes and all….but I will try posting every day from today….now let’s start and a lot of you said to keep it as raglak so I will ship raghavi and laksh as raglak

Recap: swasansahuttlak leave for Mumbai and raghavi meets sansahlak
In the evening sansahlak come home from office picking up the kids from school….laksh says kids go and change and then we all will go eat out today….all the kids scream yay and swasansahutt look at laksh in shock….laksh says to swasansahutt to get ready too….swara stops laksh and says bhai are you okay? Laksh says yes swara I am fine….uttara says I am so happy seeing you smile bhai….he smiles and says chutkiii….they hug and sansah look at them puzzled….sahil says huh see bhai our wives forgot us….uttara says aww my hubby come….
Swara says do you need invitation sweety? Sansah come too….laksh goes to get ready….swautt ask sansah what is wrong with bhai? Sanskar says this is because of the girl he saw today….uttara says girl? Sahil says yeah actually laksh fired so many PA so we had to get more for interviews….he said no to all but then raghavi came….swara says who is raghavi? Sanskar says dear she I so sweet….you know she looks just like ragini di….swautt are shocked….we thought it was our di but found out it is raghavi….sanskar tells swara I will make you meet her one day….

They all get ready and then go for dinner….sahil says kids where do you want to go eat? All the kids at once says Chinese….laksh laughs and says Chinese it is….they get to the restaurant….everyone order their favorite food….ragya says papa actually I have to tell you something….laksh gets serious and says haan beta tell me….ragya looks at aryan and samar and they nod telling her to tell bade papa….sanskar says wait laksh did you find a PA yet? Laksh thinks about raghavi and says yes jiju…let me go call her…he tells ragya I’ll be back and then tell me….she smiles and nods….
Laksh calls raghavi and she picks the phone….hello…laksh hears her voice and falls in love with it all over again….raghavi keeps saying hello…she says kaun ho tum ghade? Agar baat nahi karni toh phone kyun karte ho? Jangli kahi ka (who are you donkey? If you don’t want to speak than why do you call? Stupid idiot)…finally laksh says it’s me laksh maheswari….she bites her tongue and says sir….I am so sorry I thought it was those blank calls people do to annoy you….laksh says I just called to inform you that you have been selected as my PA….she gets happy and says really? He says yes dear….i..i mea..mean raghavi…she smiles and says okay I’ll be there tomorrow at….laksh finishes for her and says 7 am….she says 7 am okay bye sir….they hang up….

Laksh comes back and sansah ask him who he selected….he smiles and says raghavi….sansah get surprised and so do swautt….ragya now speaks and says papa I want to say something….laksh says sorry beta okay tell me….she is about to speak when dinner comes…laksh says beta let’s eat first and then you can tell…she again fake smiles and nods….they eat when raghavi coincidently comes there…she asks the waiter for a seat…sanskar sees raghavi and is shocked…he says raghavi…laksh stops eating and gets a smile and says where jiju?

He points where she is eating….laksh gets happy and tells swasansahutt he will be back…he goes to her….raghavi says you? He says yes I came with my family….how are you here? Raghavi says actually I was hungry and I wanted Chinese too so I thought to come to this Chinese restaurant….laksh says if you don’t mind can you come sit with us? Raghavi says sir how can I? laksh says please I insist…what will you do by sitting here alone…raghavi after much sayings agrees….she goes and greets everyone…swautt get teary eyes seeing ragini’s lookalike but they control….they all sit and eat…after sometime ragya says now can I speak papa? Raghavi says papa? Laksh says yes she is my daughter ragya….raghavi looks at her and says aww so cute….where is your wife…laksh and everyone get shocked and he says I’ll tell you at the right time….laksh says sorry beta speak dear…

Everyone are listening to her closely….ragya says can you please call mamma here for a week….everyone gets shocked….swara says but why beta? Ragya says woh badi ma there is a competition in my school….sanskar says what competition? Ragya says it’s a mother-daughter singing competition….laksh says but beta mamma is busy….ragya innocently says how can mamma be so busy that she doesn’t have time for me? laksh is shocked seeing her talk like this….swara says ragya beta I will come….ragya says no I want my real mamma there….

Laksh says ragya she can’t come….ragya gets mad and shouts why not papa? Does my mamma not love me? I want my mamma I want her….laksh gets angry and says ragya stop being so stubborn….she cries and says I hate you papa I hate you….she runs outside……everyone get shocked seeing ragya behaving this way and aryan and samar run behind her….raghavi says sir I know I shouldn’t be talking in between but you should be more calm with her….I’ll see you tomorrow in office….she waves bye to everyone….

Swasansahutt tell laksh to go speak with ragya….he goes after her….ragya is seen sitting on the bench outside….she cries and aryan and samar tell ragya to be strong….you know badi maa is busy…ragya says but how can she be busy and doesn’t have time for me….laksh comes and signals samar and aryan to go by their mom and dad…laksh goes and sits beside ragya….she hugs laksh immediately and cries with a heavy heart….papa it’s been 5 years…I haven’t seen my mamma yet….will she ever come?

Laksh silently cries and says of course she will come beta….ragya says you know papa sometimes I feel like I don’t even have a mamma…I have never seen her…she never comes to meet me….does she even love me? laksh is shocked hearing his 5 year old daughter speak all this about ragini…he says no ragya beta your mamma loves you very much….this is why she gave birth to you….he silently murmurs and left us which ragya doesn’t hear…ragya and laksh hug and cry while from the back swasansahutt are seeing them with teary eyes…..they all come with aryan and samar and the whole family hugs….
IT’S MORNING AND A NEW DAY LAKSH IS IN OFICE WITH SANSAH AND SARYA ARE AT SCHOOL….

Laksh sees his watch and says 6:50 am….10 more minutes…I hope raghavi comes by 7 because I hate late comers…..but I don’t want to yell at her (it’s his reaction that he just has to yell at late comers…5 years have really changes laksh)….it feels like I am yelling at my own ragini….he sees his watch again….6:59 am…..he starts counting hoping raghavi will come before he finishes counting….10….9….8…..7….6….5….raghavi finally gets to office….she quickly pays the rickshaw driver and sees her watch…
oh god one more minute….she runs…..4….3….laksh hopes she comes….2….raghavi gets to laksh’s door….she says thanks god ji….laksh says 1….he is about to say zero when raghavi comes just then….she says I am so sorry sir…I overslept and oh god I am so sorry….laksh smiles and says just in time…..she smiles and laksh asks her next time try coming a bit earlier…she says yes sir….they start working….raghavi is looking here and there like she is hiding…laksh sees raghavi looking here and there and says are you fine? Do you need something? Raghavi says no..not..nothing sir just looking around….laksh nods….she looks at some places and areas and notes them….
It’s 5 pm….laksh says raghavi can you please go get me gupta and sons file…..she smiles and say yes sir….she looks for the file when her eyes fall on another file….she gets scared seeing the name….it said bose and company file….she quickly puts the file back and hands the gupta file to laksh….here sir…he says hmm…laksh asks raghavi to open the laptop please…she says yes sir….laksh gets up and raghavi sits on his seat….she opens it and laksh asks her to open the software….
She smiles and opens it and asks what now sir…he gives her some information to put in it….she gets confused so laksh comes behind her and helps her…..winds start blowing and a cute tune plays….raghavi smiles and says sir now? He helps her and laksh is so into the work that he doesn’t realize how close he is to raghavi….she moves the mouse to click on stuff but it seems she isn’t doing it right so laksh keeps the files down and holds the mouse with her….his one arm is around her chair and other hand is on her hand on the mouse…..they are very close to each other
Haal-e-dil ko sukoon chahiye….poori ik aarzoo chahiye….jaise pehle kabhi…kuch bhi chaaha nahi….waise hi kyun chahiye….dil ko teri mojoodgi ka ehsaas yun chahiye….tu chahiye…tu chahiye…shaam-o-subah tu chahiye…..
Raghavi feels a current in her body when laksh is holding her hand…she looks at him and is lost when laksh breaks her thoughts saying now do you understand? She nods and thinks yeh mai kya kari ho? Jo kaam karne ayi ho woh kaar aur phir chali ja? Pyaar nahi karne ayi hai raghavi….. (What am I doing? The work I am here for then do it….you didn’t come here to fall in love….)
SCREEN FREEZES ON RAGHAVI’S FACE AND LAKSH FACE…..

PRECAP: KAUN JAEGA RAGYA KE COMPETITION MAI? KAUN HAI RAGHAVI? KYA MAKSAT SAI AYI HAI? KYA CHAAL RAHA HAI RAGHAVI KE DIMAAK MAI? KYUN AYI HAI LAKSH KI ZINDAGI MAI?
SO MANY QUESTIONS ONLY TIME WILL TELL…..KEEP READING JAANA NA DIL SE DOOR
HOW WAS IT? LIKING THE TWISTS AND TURNS OR TOO MUCH TO HANDLE???  SEE YOU GUYS SOON

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