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na jaana dil se door pt 3

Hey guys its sobia back with part 3….I hope I am not boring you and if you guys don’t like the way my storyline is going please tell me….now without wasting any time let’s get started…..

Recap: MM meeting with godadia for raglak’s wedding date
Precap: what happened only time will tell…are raglak meant to be together?

It’s another day and MM has to go to godadia house for the priest so he can tell them a good date for the wedding….they get there and are having fun and talking and enjoying when suddenly there is a door bell….laksh says aunty I’ll go see….sumi replies beta not aunty you call me maa after all we will be relatives now….laksh smiles and says okay aunty and before going he winks at ragini…she blushes and uttara sees it and says bhai you had to go see who was at the door right? Then why are you winking at Bhabhi?? Raglak feel embarrassed and everyone else start laughing…..he leaves to see who came….
He opens the door and is shocked seeing the person….suddenly you hear a loud noise. It’s laksh who goes like ahhhh swara you came!!!Swara and sanskar smile seeing how happy laksh was seeing his little sister….5 seconds later swara also screams OMG OMG OMG my bro how’s it going?? Laksh laughs loud and says oh swara you haven’t changed a bit….she smiles and both hug….swalak enjoy their brother sister moment when suddenly sanskar coughs and says now if sweetheart and my sweetheart’s brother are done can we go inside….sanskar just wanted to go inside but not to see his family just his sister ragini….laksh says of course jiju come lets go in….sanskar just hopes in his mind that everything goes well
Sumi asks laksh beta who is it? Laksh says you can see for yourself maa….swara is shown first and dp and ap get teary eyed and say “SWARA” everyone get shocked and she is a bit hesitant but slowly smiles…few seconds later sanskar is shown….as soon as ragini sees him she screams BHAIII omg I missed you so much….she runs and gives him a tight hug….dp and ap look on shocked….they can’t believe what they just heard….sanskar is ragini’s brother….meaning he is Bengali too…..they look stunned and dp cannot stand Bengali’s….ragsan are hugging really tight and enjoying their brother and sister moment….everyone is happy but dp….suddenly dp shouts and asks sumi and Shekar if sanskar is their son? They happily nod yes and he gets more angry…AP knows what he is about to do….
The priest also comes there and says is this Shekar godadia’s home? Shekar replies yes and he asks the priest to come in….dp stops him right there and says no pandit ji you don’t need to come in you may leave….everyone look on confused while dp and swasan know what dp is about to announce….their fear was right dp screams YEH SHAADI NAHI HO SAKTI!!!! Everyone get shocked while swasan and ap close their eyes in fear…..sumi asks dp why but he says I don’t need to tell you that Mrs. Godadia…..Shekar gets angry because dp is now crossing his limits so he shouts DP JI aap ki himmat kaise hui sharmistha pe aise aawaz mein baat karne ki??? (dp how dare you speak with sharmistha in this tone)
laksh asks but papa why can’t I marry ragini?? Dp stands their silent and everyone ask for his reply…he loses temper and shouts KYUNKI YEH LADKI EK BENGALI PAARIVAR SE HAI (because this girl is from a Bengali family) everyone look on shocked and Shekar gets really mad and says excuse me dp ji but my daughter has a name….she is not some ladki….her name is ragini godadia….dp screams no need to tell me what’s right and what’s wrong Shekar ji…I said it so I said it this marriage is not possible….Shekar is already mad and shouts tum kya? Main yeh shaadi abhi aur issi waqt tod tha hoon and ragini from the back screams but papa…he orders her to be quiet and say challo ragini…. (You what? I break this wedding right now….come ragini lets leave) raglak eye each other in tears and the song bol do na zara from azhar plays while raglak part ways while crying
Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akele, khawabon mein aaya karo (I can’t sleep alone, please come in my dreams)
Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina main, mera tum sahara bano (I won’t be able to walk without you, please become my support/partner)
Ek tumhe chaahne ke alaawa, aur kuch humse hoga nahi (except loving you, I won’t be able to do anything else)
Bol do na zara, dil mein jo hai chhipa (please tell me whats hidden in your heart)
Main kisi se kahunga nahi (I won’t tell anyone else)
They go inside their home and dp and his family leave in their car…swasan are the only ones left in the hall…swara breaks down and says it’s all because of me…if we didn’t come than my brother and your sister would have married happily…now they can’t even marry because of us….sanskar consoles a crying swara and says shhhh don’t say that my dear…it’s not your fault….it’s dp uncle’s fault…I don’t understand why he has a problem with Bengali people…swara stops crying and says you are right sanskar…even I don’t understand why papa is against Bengali’s….
We need to find out…that to soon…once we know what it is then only can we help papa understand that Bengali’s are not bad….swasan look at each other and both hug intensely….swara while hugging says I want to know why he hates Bengali and why he did that to us two years ago too…..
SCREEN FREEZES ON SWASAN HUGGING AND RAGLAK SEPARATE SCREENS
Precap: Kya iss nafrat ki khel mein kabhi milege humare swasan aur raglak?
Will raglak ever unite? What happened 2 years ago in swasan’s life? Why does dp hate Bengalis?
GUYS I DON’T KNOW HOW MUCH YOU FEEL BORED OR HOW MUCH YOU ENJOY IT….BUT PLEASE TELL ME WHAT I CAN DO TO MAKE IT LESS BORING? DO YOU WANT MORE RAGLAK OR SWASAN SCENES OR EQUAL IMPORTANCE?? PLEASE TELL ME SO I KNOW…I REALLY HOPE YOU ALL ENJOYED IT AND IF NOT THAN TELL ME WHERE I MADE A BLUNDER…THANKS FOR ALL THE AFFECTION YOU ALL GIVE ME….I’LL SEE YALL SOON
SORRY THERE WERE NO RAGLAK/SWASAN SCENES TODAY BUT I PROMISE I WILL TRY SHOWING MORE SCENES OF THEM:)

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