Hey! Guy I am here with the first episode of my first fan fiction hope you will like it and again sorry for any mistake and if you like it so plz comment and one thing more I love siddhi’s ff and that’s why I have started to write my own ff so if you read this siddhi plz comment it means a lot for me
So let’s start with the first episode
Episode 1
The episode starts in singh mention ( shivanya’s house )
Ankush raheja has send marriage proposal of his son ritik raheja for Rahul singh’s elder daughter shesha
In rahul’s room an argument is going on as shesha did’nt want to get married
Shesha – dad you can’nt do this to me I am not going to marry anyone
Rahul – shesha you have to do this marriage at any cost otherwise we have to face a big loss in business and your kundli is also perfect for ritik
Saying this he left the room angrily,
Shivanya – d!i please say yes for the marriage for our parents
Shesha – ok I am ready( in mind – I will run from this marriage , as no option left for me )
Shivanya – oh my god di ! so lets go they all are waiting for you
Shivanya helps shesha in wearing saree and they both coming down where ritik and his whole family is sitting
Ritik – ( in mind – I am doing this marriage for only my parents otherwise I am not interested in this wedding)mom I Forget to lock my car I am coming
Yamini – ok! beta
Ritik goes
Shesha ( in stairs ) – Shivanya will you plz bring my phone I left it in my car
Shivanya – yes di
and shivanya goes near car from where ritik is coming suddenly shivanya slips and ritik catches her by her waist and her dupatta falls on her face ritik removes her dupatta from her face and sees shivanya for first time and lost in her beauty and they shared an eye lock suddenly they came in sense
Ritik – sorry by mistake
Shivanya – no no need to say sorry
Ritik -( in mind – why I am feeling attracted to her ) by the way I am ritik raheja and you
Shivanya – so you are ritik raheja who is going to marry my sister by the way I am shivanya
Ritik – beautiful name just like you
Shivanya – Thank you so much lets go inside the house
They go inside the home and shesha says yes for weeding and weeding preparation started in both the house
In the day of mehendi,haldi and saangeet in shivanya ‘s room
Shivanya is thinking of ritik and suddenly she realizes, why I am thinking of ritik he is my sister’s husband-to-be I don’nt have any right to think about him , and she left for hall ,in hall haldi which comes from ritik,s house falls on shivanya and allthe ladies said this haldi is for shesha and falls on shivanya
Sana – don’nt worry shivanya go and change beta
Shivanya – yes mom ( but she is still thinking of ritik)
In raheja house,
In ritik’s room he is also thinking of shivanya suddenly his sibling comes and teases him
Angad – bhai are you thinking about shesha bhabhi
Amrita – so what bhai can think of bhabhi
Ritik – nothing like that
Divya – don’t hide bhaiya
Suddenly yamini comes and said
Yamini – you all don’t tease my son let him rest tomorrow is his wedding
PRECAP – Wedding but with a twist
17 Comments
Nice but I want to give you a tip-it know that no reader likes dragging but you should drag the track a little and not take it too fast.It’s just my point of view don’t feel bad and I liked it
Thanks siddhi I will drag story a little
Good start….. Loved it and even I’m a rivanya fan forever and ever……missing dem a lot….
Thanks riya I also miss rivanya so much
wow good start!
Thanks meera
Really loved it continue it ?
The episode is great ! I think the twist is Shesha runs away from the mandap and to save the pride of parents Shivanya will sit down in the mandap .
Thanks writer
Thanks RSTHEFFWRITER you are write but one twist is more
I like it pls continue
Thanks lucky I will update it soon
That’s very nice…can’t wait for next episodes
hope you’ll update them soon
Thanks nainaa I will update it tomorrow hope you will like next episode also
First episode is very intersting dear…
Thanks Ramya.riya
Thanks Ramya.riya keep up reading