so I know guys
I forgot to give Ali and nanno’s character sketch in intro page but they are same as show they both are badly missing their avni and still searching for her as only they are the one who don’t believe she is dead.
[some one asked a doubt that in newyork if avni is a famous business person she has changed he name or not so answer is No but everyone in business world know her as Av A. Owner nd CEO of ashiyana other doubt will be cleared… so read Chap 1
In Newyork
Ashiyana AN industries
A huge building and a guard opens the gate for a car to enter.A girl comes out of the car and says to guard to park her car. yes she is Avni. As she enter in her office campus everyone wished her good morning. she then headed towards her cabin.
when she was in her cabin and was talking on phone with a investor someone who came in hurry in office enter in her cabin in an angry mood.yes he is prithvi.
Prithvi: what is this?
Avni: what??
Avni: I was on a call talking with our new investors Mr.Watson. BTW why are u looking so angry
Prithvi: I am not talking about any investor….
Avni: then
Prithvi:.what is this avni u are planning to go to india(Mumbai)
Avni: ya but this was already planned and u know that and u also know that to go to India i have made fake ID proofs,profile,documents, passport by the name Ananya varma and much more things I have planned
Prithvi: I know this was pre-planned but….(said in a upset tone)
Avni: u know I have only one agenda in my life,only one motive and that’s why I am living.
Prithvi: but so soon
Avni: what are u mad prith? I was waiting for this time since 15 years
Prithvi: OK then let me book tickets.(still upset)
Avni: no need! I have already booked… after three days.
Prithvi:wow! good. so u have booked for me also na
Avni: no! who said
Prithvi: u only said na u have booked flight tickets
Avni: ya but for me and Maa
Prithvi :ohh! then let me book tickets for me
Avni: no
Prithvi: I am coming with u
Avni: no ur not coming with us
Prithvi: but
Avni:no means no
Prithvi: but I want to help u(said in concern)
Avni : so help me na but by handling company properly and perfectly because we both are owners of this company
Prithvi: I know but we have such a big staff and also Rohan(MD) to handle important meetings.
Avni: still if uncle need any help in his company work then and u know na I am leaving all the responsibility of company and NGO’s of ashiyana on u and how much I trust u
Note:[Prithvi’s Dad has his own company Bedi corporations but prith likes to work with his best friend and for that his dad have no problem and even is proud of both Avni and Prithvi and their industry]
Prithvi: u trust me na that I can handle everything properly after u and without u. …(emotionaly) and I promise I will not break ur trust and ya I am also 30percent owner I also care for company(now said this one in a naughty tone)
Avni: thanku (by smiling a little)
Prithvi: but allow me to come for some time
Avni: u know I don’t need anybody’s help in my mission
And also I have lost many people in this fight before also
Prithvi: OK I will not help u but I will come with u for only few days
Avni: no can’t u understand this
Prithvi: OK!l listen I won’t help u but I will help neela mom in settling there and in cooking till u find a good servant
Avni : what do u said?? Cooking..???
Prithvi: ya
Avni: are u out of ur mind u don’t know cooking and I at least know how to cook poha and how to boil noodles but u…u only know to create disaster
Prithvi: OK leave that but most important….listen…u know na u are a ‘punch Marti hui machine’ and u get angry so fast and if….if u came into a fight with anyone then and will be in a problem then
(khana wana choro…meri baat sunn tu janti h na ki tu ek punch Marti hui machine he upar se itni jaldi gussa ho jati h aur agar kisi se panga mor Liya toh….aur musibatt me aagayi fiir..)
Avni: Prithviii
Prithvi: avnii. (still trying to convince her)
Prithvi: u know na in newyork there
2 Comments
Good start… But please bring Neil fast… Keep updating
it’s really good. From the beginning of your episode I can find different & some new elements which makes me interested to read your update. very beautifully you express all the conversation between avni & prithvi (buisness partner of avni). just carry on your writing with making your storyline more interesting. All the best.