Hello everyone I’m new here at telly updates…but an old ,huge fan & silent reader of Naamkarann!! So From now unwards at every Saturday & Sunday I will write this story.. Hope you guys will enjoy it š & also friends please comment below& give urs views..so that it would inspires me more to write this story.. So let’s get started!!!
Starting: Neil Lock Dayawanti Inside The Jail & Avni Comes…
Avni comes & says Dayawanti that now the pot of her bad works are filled.. Now if she thinks of doing wrong work also then even she can’t do anything.. Dayawantim gets mad & starts shouting “No! No! I can’t loose from you No! No!” Then Avni says ” You have loosed with me, with urs bad works, urs respect & everything!!! ” And leaves from there..
Scene 2 : Outside the police stations Ali,Mitali, Reha,Amol(Aman) ,Nanno,Neela,Neel & Avni are standing.. Reha& Amol(Aman) apologize everyone for troubling them..Avni says “you guys don’t need to feel sorry..now it’s Dayawanti’s time to feel it!!” Amol(Aman) comes near to Avni and touches her feet & ask for a blessing.. Avni gets in tears and hugs him& calls him as Aman..Mitali says to stop the emotional drama nor she will also cry,everyone laughs!!
Scene 3: Avni & Neel are inside the car and they both tries to trun on radio..the song “Phir Vi Tumko Chahauga” plays on back ground.. They starts to remembere their lovely flash backs..After sometimes in middle of jungle their car stops, Avni says it’s going to be night we have to do some arrangement to go home.Then Neel say to wait a minute & goes to check cars,he founds that the engine had got over heated so asks Avni to wait him till he brings water and leaves her!!
Its has been Night but Neel doesn’t comes back so Avni gets tensed.
Tomorrow: Baybay(Harleen: Neel’s grandmother) ask Neel to fill sindoor on Avni head, Avni become very happy but Neel says he will not!!!
12 Comments
Good ff read mine too Avneil Sweetest Love Story 10 Episodes
Yes I had done already..u r too creative š
Thanks aasma
Wow awesome
Continue soon…it’s awesome ?
Please please update soon
Don’t mind if you get one comment from only ??..I’ll support till the end but please continue
Thanks..sure I will continue it for uāŗ
It was amazing
Thankyou š
It was really nice ,I wish to continue and ? 4 it
Yeah nice start. I am generally from Ishqbaaz family but read your this story. Lets see where you are trying to take this love destination by your good writing skill. Keep going dear.
Superb
No word 2 express
Amazing
Thanks dear??