Hi this is VHM signing back with the next shot of this few shots FF on Shivika ….sorry for the typo and grammatical mistakes….. thank you to all the readers who gave such nice comments and encouragement….
Here goes the next shot
Recap: Malvika brings alliance of Anika with Shivaay to Oberois…Shivaay has been explained the matter about alliance by Tej….Anika got to know about the alliance from Reyansh..
Reyansh: Kya soch rahe ho…tension mat lo…aapko koi thukra nahi sakta…ye rishtha hoke rahega mujhe yakeen hain….
(what are you thinking…don’t worry…no one will reject you…this marriage will happen…I have complete faith )
Anika cries and Reyansh worries
Reyansh: kya huan didi…mein aapko aise nahi dekh sakta…please batoo dii baat kya hain
(what happened dii..i cannot see you like this…please say what happened)
Anika controls herself and says
Anika: Reyansh mein shaadi shuda hoon….
(Reyansh I am already married)
Reyansh: kya? Kab? Kisse? Bataoo dii
(what? When? With whom? Please say dii)
Anika: meri shaadi Shivaay Singh Oberoi ke saath huin hain…wahi jisse abhi auntyji rishtha lekar gayi hai…. Haan mein oberoi’s ki badi bahu hoon….
(I am married to Shivaay Singh Oberoi..the same to whom Auntyji went to talk about my alliance…I am elder daughter-in-law of Oberoi’s)
Reyansh: kya? Aapne itni badi baat hamse kyun chuapaya? Ab mujhe Om aur Rudra ki batein samajh aa rahi hain….unki bartaav mein changes ab samajh aa raha hain )
(what? Why did you hide such a big matter from us…now I understand Om and Rudra’s words…the change in their behaviour is getting cleared)
Anika: mein maanthi hoon.. maine kabhi aap sabse mere ateet ke baare mein baat nahi kiya…mujhe kabhi batane ki jaroot nahi padi ya mujhe mauka mila….lekin aaj agar nahi batoongi tho aapko dhoka dena ho jayega….meri baat pehle sunna …fir mere baare mein kisi nateezein par pahunchna….
(I agree I have hidden about my past from you…but I never felt the need to say about it or did I get an opportunity…if today I don’t say then it will be deceiving you…first listen and then get into some opinion…)
Anika reveals about herself starting from breaking Shivaay’s car glass till how Shivaay insulted her sometime before…she din’t hide even the smallest matter….she confided everything though leaving their personal moments…………
Reyansh Kanika were completely shocked hearing Anika’s past….Reaynsh went near Anika and said
Reyansh: Sorry dii…aap kaam ke baad hamesha akele bhethi hoti thi…kisi soch mein..maine bahut baar dekha..lekin aapse kabhi poocha nahi aap aise kyun ho…agar pooch leta tho aapki madat kar pata…I am sorry dii….lekin aap chinta mat karo dii abhi bhi kuch der nahi huan aur ab jo ho raha hain sahi ho raha hain….aapka jo bhi faisla hoga mein aapke saath hoon…vaada kijiye aap agey se mujhse kuch bhi nahi chupayengi….
(Iam sorry dii…after work you used to sit alone I some thoughts…I have observed many times but never asked you…had I did then I could have helped you….i am sorry dii…but don’t be depressed it’s not too late and whatever is happening it’s right…whatever you decide iam with you…but from now on don’t hide anything from me)
Kanika: haan diii…aapki koi galti nahi aur hame aapse koi shikayat nahi….ham aapke saath denge hamesha
(Yes dii…there is no fault of you and we don’t have any complaints…we are with you forever)
Anika thanks them and hugs both of them and says
Anika: par aunty ji ko kya kahenge?
(but what will we say to auntyji?)
Reyansh: filhaal kuch nahi …mein mom se iss baare mein baat karoonga….sahi waqt par
(right now nothing…I will talk to mom but when right time comes)
Anika: nahi reyansh aur chupana galat hoga…mein khud unko bataoongi aur unka jo bhi faisla hoga mujhe manjoor hain….
(No Reyansh it will be wrong to hide the matter anymore…I will talk to her and whatever she decides I will accept it)
Reyansh: Dii relax…mein aur aap mom ko jaante hain…woh hame jaroor samjhengi…accha theek hain unke aane ke baad ham unse baat karenge…abhi aap pareshaan mat ho aur aagey kya karna chahthi hain socho….
(Dii relax…you and I know our mom..she will definitely understand us…ok after she comes we will talk to her…now you don’t worry and just think what to do next)
Anika: pehle mujhe Shivaay ko sach batana hoga uski galat faimi door karni hogi…tabhi sab kuch sahi hoga warna hamare beech auur dooriyaan dadhengi….par iss baar shivaay ko mere paas aana hoga…isliye mujhe aise halaath paida karna hoga ki woh sach janne mere paas aaye lekin kaise?
(First of all I have to say the truth to Shivaay and clear his misunderstanding…then only everything would become right and the distance between us will be filled…but this time shivaay has to come to me to know the truth…so I have to create situations by which he himself would want to know the truth..but how?)
Reyansh: Ham Om aur Rudra ki madat le sakthe hain….kyun ki aapki baton se aur mere khud ki dekhe hue lamhon se woh dono Shivaay ke bahut kareeb hain…
(shall we take the help of Om and Rudra…as much as I have known them and from your words I understand they both are very close to Shivaay)
Anika: haan tum theek keh rahe ho….lekin ham aunty ji ko sach bolne ke baad hi koi kadam uthayenge…….
(You are right..but we will take any further steps after we reveal the truth to auntyji…)
Reyansh: pakka dii…
(sure dii)
Anika, Reyansh and Kanika unite their hands……………….
In the Hotel…Shivaay was thinking and everyone was eagerly waiting for his response….
Here Malvika realised she forgot her purse and she came back and entered into the hotel…
In Hotel room….
Tej: Shivaay is mein itna sochnewali baat kya hain…Anika se tumhari shaadi already ho chuki hain tumhe ek aur baar apni hi patni se shaadi karni hain…mein tumhari jagah hota tho yehi kartha….
(Shivaay what’s there to think so much…you are already married to Anika and you need to marry your own wife once again..if I was in your place then I would have done the same)
Shivaay: theek hain…. agar baat deal par asar padne ki hain tho…. Mein Anika se shaadi karne keliye tayar hoon….
(OK…if this decision is impacting the deal…Then I am ready to marry Anika)
Saying this he goes silent and thinks ………
Shivaay POV: mein usse shaadi karne keliye haan kahoonga aur jaise deal seal karenge uske baad koi bhi wazah dekar ye shaadi rok doonga..…Anika mein tumko itni asaani se nahi chodoonga…jitna dard tumne mujhe diya hain utna dard tumko bhi bhugatna hoga…tumne mera dil todh diya…maine tumhare liye sab kuch kiya aur badle mein tum mujhe chod ke chali gayi…mera gussa har tareekein se zayaz hain….
( I will say YES to marry her and once the deal is sealed I will give some excuse and stop the marriage…Anika I am not going to leave you so easily…the amount of pain you gave me , the same amount you should also bear..you broke my heart..i have done everything for you but you left me…my anger is justified…)
Malvika takes her purse and while leaving crosses Shivaays suite and listens the final words of Shivaay “mein Anika se shaadi karne keliye tayar hoon”…..(I am ready to get married to Anika)
she gets happy and smiles and silently crosses without being noticed …..
In the suite everyone take a sigh of relief and disperses to their rooms to call off the day…………
Here Malvika returns to her home where Anika, Reyansh and Kanika were eagerly waiting for her…..everyone turn and see her being very happy….
Reyansh: kya baat hain maa aap badi khush lag rahe ho?
(What’s the matter mom you seem to be very happy?)
Malvika: haan beta khush tho aaj bahut hoon…..
(Yes dear am very happy today)
Anika: aunty ji isse pehle aap kuch kahe mein aapse kuch jaroori baat kehna chahthi hoon…
(Aunty ji before you say anything I have to say something very important to you)
Malvika: sunoongi par tum pehle meri baat suno….Reyansh ne tumhe ab tak bata diya hoga mein kaha gayi thi….aur mujhe tum sabko batate hue khushi ho rahi hain ki Shivaay Singh Oberoi Anika se shaadi karne keliye tayar hain…
(I will listen but before that please listen to what I say …Reyansh might have already said where I was..and I am happy to say all of you that Shivaay singh Oberoi has agreed to marry Anika)
Anika, Reyansh and Kanika together say “Kya?” (Whaat?) and look at each other shockingly…
Malvika: kya ho gaya tum logon ko …itne shocked kyun ho? Anika ko bhala koi kaise naa bol saktha hain…jitney sadgun shivaay mein hain uss se kahi jyada sadgun Anika mein hain…
(What happened to all of us? Why are you so shocked? How can anyone deny Anika…Shivaay has many good Qualities but Anika has much more good qualities)
Reyansh: Mom ye baat Shivaay ne aapse khud kaha hain?
(Mom did Shivaay say this to you?)
Malvika : pehle tho tum Shivaay nahi Shivaay jiju kaho aur doosri baat abhi tak unlogon mujhe aagey se koi jawaab nahi diya par jab mein purse lene wapas gayi tho maine suna Shivaay ko kehthe hue ki woh Anika se shaadi karne keliye tayar hain…..
(First of all call him Shivaay jiju not Shivaay…secondly they have not said upfront to me.when I went to take my purse I heard Shivaay saying that he is ready to marry Anika)
Reyansh: maa aap jasoosi kar rahi thi? Ye galat baat hain
(Mom you were dropping ears? This is wrong)
Malvika: chup kar …maine kaha na mein purse bhool gayi aur lene gayi jab wapas aa rahi tho suna…mein kuch unke kamre ke bahar kahde hoke unki baat nahi suni…..
(Shut up…I already said that I forgot my purse and when I went to take it back I eard…it’s not like I stood behind the door and listened to his words)
Reyansh : fir theek hain… waise maa ham sabko …I mean Anika ko aapse kuch jaroori baat kehni hain aur aap bilkul shaanth hoke sunoge…poori baat sunna fir react karna…
(Then it’s fine…mom we all.. I mean Anika dii wants to talk something very important with you…please listen to her calmly and after listening completely react…)
Malvika stares at Anika and says
Malvika: kya baat hain Reyansh sab theek tho haina tu aise kyun samjha raha hain mujhe….jaldi bolo mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain….
(What’s the matter Reyansh…is everything fine..why are you saying all these… I don’t understand..please say it fast I am getting scared)
Anika: aunty ji mein shaadishuda hoon….
(Aunty ji iam already married)
Malvika: kya?
(what?)
Anika: please aap pehle meri poori baat suniye…
(Please listen to me completely)
Anika again explains her about her past till the afternoon Shivaays insult….Malvika couldn’t believe what she heard…she sits silently…
Anika: mujhe maaf kar dijiye aunty ji…mera ye sari batein chupane ka koi irada nahi tha ….lekin batane ka bhi koi wazah nahi tha…
(Please forgive me aunty ji…I din’t want to hide all this..but I din’t have any reason to say this)
Reyansh: haan maa Anika dii theek keh rahi hain….is mein dii ka kya kasoor hain….ab tho hame sach bataya na…aap kuch bolo maa …aise chup mat raho
(Yes mom Anika dii is saying truth…she is not at fault…now she has said it right…please say something mom…don’t be so quiet)
Malvika: mein kya boloon…khush ho jaoo ya dukhi samjh nahi aa raha…. Anika ki himmat ki data doon ya uski kamzori ko kosoon ….
(what should I say …should I be happy or sad I can’t understand…Should I praise Anika’s courage or should I crack her weakness)
Reyansh: aap kya keh rahi hain maa kuch samajh nahi aa raha…
(we can’t understand what you are saying)
Malvika gets up and goes to Anika and hugs her, she kisses her and says
Malvika: mujhe tum par garv hain Anika agar tum apne pati keliye ye sab kar sakti ho tho tum kabhi galat nahi ho sakti….aagey tum jaisa chahogi waise hi hoga…mein tumhare har faisle mein tumhara saath hoon….
(Iam proud of you Anika…if you can bear this for your husband then you can never be wrong or at fault…you do whatever you want to further…I will always support your decision)
She turns towards Reyansh and Kanika and says
Malvika: mujhe tum dono par bhi Garv hain …jis tarah se tum dono meri beti ka saath de rahe ho …mein bata nahi sakti ki tum dono se accha beta aur bahu mujhe mil nahi sakte….
Abhi tum log aagey kya aur kaise karna hain sochlo aur mujhe batana….ek aur baat…..
Maine Oberois ko yaha ek deal karne keliye yaha bulaya socha deal karenge aur saath mein Anika aur Shivaay ki shaadi bhi….kal deal hame sign karni hain…aur iss deal ko seal karne keliye mere, Reyansh ke, Kanika ke aur Anika ke sign ki bhi unko jaroorat padegi….kyunki ham Charon mein se agar koi ek bhi sign karne se mana karega tho ye deal kabhi seal nahi hogi….
Mein ye sab isliye keh rahi hoon ki shayad tumhe agey sochne keliye yeh rastha kuch kaam aa jaaye isliye soch samjh ke kya karna hain faisla karna…
Abhi mein thak gayi hoon mein thodi der araam karthi hoon….
(I am proud of you both …the way you have handled my daughter is praiseworthy…I can’t express how good iam feeling to have such a good son and Daughter-in-law
Now decide what you want to do further and let me know…and one more thing…
I have called Oberois here to sign a deal and thought I would get Anika married to Shivaay…tomorrow we need to sign the deal..and to seal this deal I, Reaynsh, Kanika and Anika have to sign…if even one of us doesn’t sign then deal will be cancelled…
I am tired and want to take rest)
Anika goes to her bends and touches her feet, Malvika hugs her and turns to leave when Anika runs and hugs her and says
Anika: Thank you MAA….
Malvika, reyansh and Kanika are happy to hear Maa word from Anika’s mouth instead of aunty ji….
Malvika kisses her, caresses her face and blesses her teary eyed…
As soon as Malvika leaves Reyansh says that they must call Om and Rudra immediately as they don’t have much time….Anika and Kanika nods positive…very next moment Anika calls Rudra and asks him and Om to come immediately to Goyal’s house without telling Shivaay…Rudra obliges and with in half an hour OmRu reach Goyal’s house
Rudra: kya baat hain Bhabhi…aapne hame aise kyun bulaya…sab theek haina?
(What happened Bhabhi…why did you call us like this…is everything fine?)
Anika: haan sab theek hain aur ab waqt hain saara faila huan raita sametne ka…
(Yes everything is fine , now we have to set things into correct place)
Om: matlab?
(means?)
Anika: samjhathi hoon Om….isse pehle mein kuch kahoon mujhe tum dono ko batana hain ki teen mahine pehle aise kya huan jo mein kisi ko bina bataye Sahil ko lekar yaha aa gayi….
(I will explain Om…but before I need to tell you what happened before three months that I along with Sahil had to leave all of you and come here)
OmRu: ham bhi jaan na chahthe hain Bhabhi akhir aise kya huan…
(we too want to know what exactly happened then)
Anika says everything to them (which is for now muted)
Rudra: mein uss Daksh aur ACP ko nahi chodoonga…kitni saari galat famiya badha diya aur aapko hamse door kiya
(I will not spare Daksh and ACP …how many misunderstandings they have created that you had to leave us)
Anika: galat famiya ? kya keh rahe ho tum ?
(Misunderstandings? What are you saying?)
Om: haan Bhabhi sacch keh raha hain Rudra….aapko jo bhi kaha gaya woh sab jhoot tha aisa kuch nahi huan…aur aap uss jhoot ko sach maan kar darr kar yaha chali aayi
(Yes Bhabhi Rudra is saying the truth…whatever has been said to you is a big lie…nothing such happened..and you believed it and came here scared)
Anika: aisa nahi ho sakta par unhone mujhe sab kuch dikhaya
(this can’t happen they have shown me the evidence)
Om: tumko darane keliye …aur tum darr gayi…..
(it was just to scare you..and you did get scared)
Anika: yeh maine kya kar diya Om…mujhe agar sach pata hota tho itna raita nahi failtha….mujhse bahut badi galthi ho gayi Om bahut badi galti …. Mujhe maaf kardo ….
(what did I do Om…had I known the truth then all this wouldn’t have happened…I made a very big mistake…a very big mistake…please forgive me…)
Om: nahi Anika Bhabhi is mein aapki koi galti nahi hain….aap ko sacchayi pata nahi tha…aur aapne uss halath mein jo karna chahiye tha wahi kiya….tum bahut acchi ho Anika Bhabhi …aapne Shivaay ko bachane keliye khud ko unse door hone mein bhi nahi socha….Shivaay ko tumse acchi patni kabhi nahi mil sakti aur hame tumse acchi Bhabhi bhi nahi mil sakti….
(No bhabhi you are not at fault…you didn’t know the truth..and you what anyone else would have done being at your place…you are very good Bhabhi…you din’t think once that you have to move away from Shivaay to save shivaay…Shivaay wouldn’t get anyother better wife than you…and we wouldn’t have got any other better Bhabhi than you…)
Anika: nahi Om mein acchi patni nahi ban paayi…Shivaay ka gussa zayaz hain…unko mujh par aur gussa hona chahiye…bina soche samjhe maine ye kya kardiya… jhoot ko sach maan ke kitna galat kar diya…ab mein sab kuch kaise theek karoongi…mujhe tho shivaay ke saamne jaane ki himmat nahi hain Om….
(no Om I couldn’t become good wife…Shivaays anger is justified…he should have been more angry on me…without thinking what have I done….i believed a lie and did wrong..how will I make everything right…Om, I am now unable to even face shivaay)
Rudra: Bhabhi please sambhalo apne aapko…..shivaay bhayya bhi kam kasoorvaar nahi hain…agar unhone aapko sari batein kahi hoti tho aisa kuch nahi hota….woh sab khud handle karne ke chakkar mein sab ki band bhaja dete hain…..
(Bhabhi please control yourself…Shivaay bhayya is also not less at fault…had he said truth to you all this wouldn’t have happened….he in order to handle everything alone messes up everyone and everything)
Reyansh: dii please aur mat rona…abhi bhi itna der nahi huan…jaise hamne pehle socha jiju ki galat famiya door karni hogi….uske baad ham dhoom dhaam se aapki ek aur baar shaadi karenge aapke pati se….aur ek bataoo yeh sab nahi hota tho aap hamse thodi na milti…fir mein didi kisko bulata?
(Dii please stop crying…it’s not too late…as we thought we have to clear out the misunderstandings of Shivaay jiju…then we will perform you rwedding with Jiju with much pomp…and tell me onething had all this not happened you would have not met us…and then whom would I call didi?)
Anika hugs Reyansh lovingly and Rudra gives Hifi to Reyansh…
Anika : tum theek keh rahe ho…mein itni jaldi haar nahi maan sakti…mujhe sab kuch theek karna hoga ham sab keliye mere pati keliye…
(You are saying right…I can’t give up so easily…I have to make everything right for everyone and for my husband)
Kanika: ohhooo pati …patidev ….
(Ohh…husband…)
Everyone smile , Anika blushes and AniOmRu hug….Anika calls Reyansh and Kanika to join and they also share the group hug…..
On the other hand Shivaay doesn’t get sleep, he reminisces what all happened whole day..there was an emotional outburst happening within him…he reminsced…how he insulted Anika…when the thought of insulting Anika came tears started flowing from his eyes unknowingly…he was crying silently….he never wanted to hurt her …but his love for Anika came out in the form of anger….at that moment he wanted Anika to be beside him , taking care of him….he was terribly missing her, he was very near to her yet so far….he wished everything gets fine….very next moment he thought that it was too late to expect that…he started reminiscing every romantic and personal moments of him with Anika…a smile came on his face and peace hugged him !!!
In Goyal’s house everyone started thinking of what needs to be done …nothing strikes them and finally Anika says
Anika: mein abhi jaake Shivaay se sab kuch sacch batati hoon….mein pagal thi ye zid karke ki shivaay khud aake jab tak sach nahi poochtha tab tak unko sach nahi bataoongi….ab jab mein khud galat hoon tho mera unke paas jaakar sach bolna banta hain….
(I will right now go and say the truth to Shivaay…..i was mad , I wanted to be stubborn thinking till Shivaay doesn’t come and ask me to say truth I wouldn’t say him…and now when I know I am at fault then I should go and tell him truth…)
Om: aur tumhe lagta hain in halaathon mein woh aapki baat sunega…aur agar sun bhi liya tho sach maanlega…tum bhool rahi ho woh Shivaay hain…
(And you think in this situation he will listen to you…and even if he listens he will believe you are saying truth…you are forgetting he is Shivaay)
Rudra: Aapki language mein Akdu Singh Oberoi…..
(In your language Akdu Singh Oberoi)
Anika gets disheartened and everyone again starts thinking what needs to be done…. when Om gets an idea … Om says the plan to change Shivaay’s heart…..Anika doesn’t agree but Reyansh and Rudra succeeds in making her agree and everyone agrees to it…. Later they reveal the plan to Mrs.Malvika and Sahil…Malvika too gets scared but everyone assures her that everything will be alright and taken care of….
Precap: What was Om’s plan? Will the deal take place? Will they succeed in clearing Shivaay’s misunderstandings? Will Anika and Shivaay’s marriage happen again ? What happened three months before ? too many questions whose answers will be in next part so STAY TUNED !!!
We are slowly moving towards conclusion. May be in one or two shots this FF would end. So let me know how you felt? Did you find it inetresting? Also please post in your comments…I will reply as soon as possible…this is VHM signing off…..
57 Comments
It is interesting. …..post next part soon
Thank you Chinnu…just uploaded will have to wait till it gets published
Excellent
thank you charitha…two more shots this FF would end …so please continue to show your support for upcoming episodes
Loved it.
thank you so much Shivika….please do continue your support till the end of this FF
Nice… plz plz update soon
Thank you Anju…just uploaded …will have to wait for some more time for it to get published
It is damn gud.
thank you so much Jerry…
Awesome…..waiting fr d nxt 1…
thank you Shivika..your wait will be over in very less time
Amazing.. I enjoyed every bit of the story… I’m over curious.. Please update soon.. Waiting and waiting.. Thanks for the wonderful episode… Happy holi
thank you jane…wish you too a very happy Holi …please keep your curiosity raising till the next shot is published
Awesome
thank you shainaya….
Ohh god..Aaj fir suspense nahi PTA chla.. Fantastic epi..All muted ????
Post the next today only plzzzzz
thanks for the comments Sairan…you had been a very great support…ab suspense khuk jayega..bas thodi der aur …i will be waiting to know your opinion on the upcoming episode
❤??
thank you so much
interesting……
thanks Arya…glad that you found it interesting….
It is awesome dear… Waiting for the next update and happy holi….
thank you so much Nikita…i can’t say how much you encouraged me for this FF….Happy holi to you too….wait will be over in short time and then my wait to read your comments starts….
Awesome Plz continue
Thank you Rashi…will continue for sure…two more parts and we are done with this FF….please do continue to say your opinions
Amazing epi… waiting for next…
Thank you Lilly…in a short time your wait will end
Nice waiting 4 next epi…
thank you Haridhra….waiting for your next comments
Amazing fantastic please post next part soon
thank you Shivika1233….i have just uploaded i am also waiting for it to get published and the for your comments
thank you Shivika1233….i have just uploaded and i am also waiting for it to get published and the for your comments
Awesome…. U know I m just eagerly waiting ur ff… When I open the site I check first ur ff
aww so nice of you Vincy to say such awesome words…i am sure you wouldn’t be disappointed as I have posted it and it will soon get published
Wow VHM…..Awesome episode….loved it…..N loved to see goyals n omru supporting Anika….So eager to read the next part…..
Happy Holi…..!!!
thanks Nita for the wonderful comments…i have readied some special comment to post it for you on the last shot of my FF specially for you…may be that comment is the only thing i can give back
Happy Holi to you too
OMG…..really…..thank u so much…..
Actually even I have something to say since long, but even I have thought to write about it in the last episode.
Uff. Suspense again. I hope misunderstandings get cleared. Well,nice ff.
Uff so sorry that i have kept the suspense… you will be getting to know everything you want to in the next part
Great job with the narrative. 🙂
Thanks Shaoni for your nice comments…i am sure you are also writing an FF … i haven’t yet started to read but i promise i will read and comment …i am sure it will be a beautiful piece of art
Oh ya that it is…..I m reading her Imagining The Future…..N it’s awesome…..
Shaoni, i dont remember whether I have mentioned it in my comment there, but Anika’s secret message for Shivaay, that was very well thought….
Thanks VHM …. yes, I’m writing one and this is my first time…. but I wouldd like to mention that both of our 6th shot published almost at the same time but I read your one first … 🙂 You are far better dear and I mean it!! 🙂
That’s true i too observed that both our FF’s shot 6 were published almost at the same time…you are damn good writer i must say…keeping the suspense element through out is a difficult job…but you are doing it so perfect…kudos lady!!!
Thank you so much Nita. You are one of my favourite readers out of the lot!! ♥
And if VHM is gonna read it let’s not reveal it to her!! Let the surprise element work 😉
really nice one dr waiting for the next part….
thanks Arthi…just some more time …i have uploaded and it’s under review
Asum update,cont soon
thank you Alekhika…i have posted next one waiting for it to get published
Amazing…..loved it…
Thank you bhavana…please do post your comments till the end of this OS….
Amazing…..loved it…
Thank you Kumar hope you would have liked the next two shots too
??mind-blowing! Please post next part asap……
Thank you Hirah…i am so sorry i responded pretty late