Guys,i dont know how but my 7th chapter got rejected??but i have made minor changes
Chp 7-
Morning at 6pm all the elders reach home and khyati sees them coming..
Khyati-mom!dad!masimaa!dadu!
I have something to tell
She then tells everyone what happened last evening
Nirmala-naina-meghna are his childhood frds
Khyati-yea
Dadu-yeh to accha hua
Nk-lets go and fresh up
Sandhya-ok..come lets go
They all meet up for breakfast
Naina Meghna were serving
Kartik comes down with a dashing entry wearing ankle lent trousers,black-white stripped t-shirt and a black blazer with aviator sunglasses with a titan watch(i hope u can imagine??)
Nk stands up
Kartik-mr.chauhan plz sit
Nk-lekin.
Kartik-no lekin..pls
Kartik sit beside karan
All say goodmorning to him
Dadu-we didnt knew u r our bahu’s frd
Kartik-i m not their frd..i m meghna di’s brother and naina’s bff
All laugh
Sandhya-oh god!!this means now our deal will happen more nicely
Kartik and naina look at each other
Naina-woh masimaa..
Kartik-sandhyaji,i never bring my personal matters into professional matters..
Kunal-u r eeally honest!
Kartik-so karan!?what do u do?
Nk-nothing
Karan looks on
Naina-karan tell na,of u wont tell i will
Naina-karan is a music composer and a music teacher and is currently working on his career
Everyone look on
Nk-so,mr.malhotra r u coming to office
Kartik-i will handle office from home
Nk-can we do that!?
Kartik-and what!?being a business tycoon..i have to go with the time..
They all leave
(i hate dragging story so i will come to point)
They all enjoy kartik’s company alot but somewhere karan was a bit insecure
Naina was running here and der and kartik was chasing her
Kartik-stop!i said stop!
Naina-try try…
Naina hides behind karan
And their chase stops when kunal comes from office
Kartik-karan,kunal i wanna tell u both something LADIES PLEASE!!(telling them to leave)
Kartik-i have a plan,why shud only the ladies work?this time lets suprise them
Karan-say clearly
Kunal-yea
Kartik-i mean cant we make breakfast for them tomorrow
Karan-kunal-COOKING!?
kartik-yea..
Kunal-thats a good idea
Karan-lets do it
Karan-but who will guide us?i know only the basicsKunal-mr.perfect means ME!!
karan-haha!!big joke!!now be serious
Kartik-i will!!i know to cook all type of food
Kunal-u r indeed PERFECT!!
Kartik-take this 3 glasses of milk and give it to nirmala aunty,meghna di and cheeku .
Karan u go and give this to aunty i will give to cheeku and jeeju u…
Kunal-yaya!!meghna..i knw
Karan-why dont u give bhabhi,kunal bhai give to maa and i to naina.
Kunal-bcoz u r ma’s fav.now go
They give the milk to all three women(the milk had sleeping pills in them so that they wake a bit late)
Karan goes to his room and finds naina feeling dizzy
Karan-it must be the pills
Naina-karan ..that milk..
Saying this she faints and falls in karan’s arms
Karan-naina!
He makes her sleep and smiles at her
Next morning
The men’s prepare the breakfast with a lot of hardwork?
Naina wakes up and sees the time and gets up and gets ready meanwhile she also thinks where is karan !?
She goes down and finds the breakfast table ready and sees nirmala and meghna coming down together
Naina-have u both done it?
Meghna-nirmala-No..have u??
Naina nods no
They ask Dadu
Dadu smiles and signs them to look behind
They look behind and find karan,kartik,kunal in the shahrukh khan pose
They laugh
Sandhya,nk,khyati come down and get suprised
Karan-all sit,we will serve
Nirmala-whoz idea was this?
Naina-let me guess it is 102% kartik
Kunal-bingo!!
Karan was serving naina orange juice
Kartik-karan,pass that juice
Karan-but its naina’s juice
Kartik-naina likes guava juice so i told
Naina-its ok
Karan-no no..take
Khyati-i cant believe bhai’s made this
Sandhya-me too
Kartik-cheeku,take this poha!! naina used to fight with all for maa’s poha!!
Khyati-kartik,u know so much about naina bhabi,it seems like u r her husband not karan bhai!
All look at her shocked
Sandhya smirks
Nirmala looks at khyati angrily
Nk-i m sorry mr.kartik
Kartik-no prb
They finish their breakfast and go
Guys,i have a question WHAT ARE YOUR THOUGHTS ON THE CURRENT TRACK OF ESS!?I REALLY LIKE IT BUT I READ ON TELLYREVIEWS THAT MEGHNA WILL NOT ALLOW NAINA TO LIVE WITH KARAN IN ONE ROOM!!???
Plzz comment and express ur views