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Namkaran- AvNeil (just enjoy it) Chapter-5

I was thinking that I should continue or not?? What do u all think…??

Sorry if it hurts anyone’s feelings….n also sorry because its abit too long…

Chinki-(Whispers) avni yaar we r stuck very badly … He is Mumbai’s don ‘Master’ … He is very dangerous… If he kills us today then maybe he will go to jail but he gets bail before even entering police station… Avni we r gone, u were a true friend avni I will never forget u .. Our journey was till here only … Bye bye see u in heaven
(She dreams of her deadbody taken away)

On the other side-
Dd-Sirji u r awesome I mean no officer have progress so much in this case like u r doing

Neil-Dd no need to praise so much now when I will put the handcuffs on the fraud gangs hand that time u praise me… (Smiles)
A old woman shouts plz help my granddaughter plz someone help… Looks like u r an officer Plz beta u help me they kidnapped my granddaughter (shows towards the van)
Neil n dd sits in jeep n follows the van
On other side-
Avni-Aare u r friend or enemy instead of giving courage u r scaring me… Chinki- chinki
Chinki faints

Avni- Oh no! Chinki- wake up … truely died or what.. aarre so soon u can’t die leaving me alone in this problem wake up

Master-Oye do something n bring this girl to sense she will die when I will shoot her like this with her own wish she can’t die

Suddenly an ideas pops in avni’s mind

Avni- Master (she shouts)
Master gives an angry look with gun pointing towards her

Avni-Master(says calmly with low voice) u wanted to know why I broke ur car glass windows right

Master-From that time I was asking u this question but u didn’t reply so I (points gun)

Avni- I will tell u wait… (Thinks if i am not wrong he is very big don of Mumbai ‘Master’ but when he hears any love story he gets emotional Great… then suddenly she sees a holding of bride n groom dress)

Avni- I want to say (acts like crying) u know I loved a person his name was (she sees a poster of Salman Khan)….. salman khan

Mastet-Salman khan?? not only u love salman khan all girls love salman khan…

Avni-( Thinks .. What name I said) yes but I mean he was different only his name was salman khan rest!! … but my parents didn’t agree for our marriage so we .. We planed to escape

Master-(Little emotional) then what happened

Avni- Then we both escaped n got married but but but…

Master-Hurry up tomorrow I have to leave for pune

Avni- But while returning n while crossing the road he met with an accident n died……(acts like crying)And u know the car which did his accident was of the same model n colour that u have n from that time I have a problem whenever I see this kind of cars I can’t control myself from breaking them

Avni thought that master would get emotional n leave them but instead the opposite happened he took his gun n one of the guards gun n started firing in the air…
Chinki who came to sense by the time hearing the noise again fainted
Avni- Oh no what the hell .. What happened?? Why he became so angry like a bull who is shown red colour??
Gaurd1-Not red colour but incomplete love story

Avni- What?

Gaurd2-Yes our boss loved one girl very much but she left him n married someone else from that time whenever boss hears ‘incomplete love stories’ he kills that person

Avni- Whaaaaatttttttttttt????

On the other side-

Neil stopped that van n the goons came out

Goon1-Oo officer no need to show Herogiri just leave or else

Neil- Or else what listen I am giving u first n last warning leave that girl or else u all even won’t be able to walk properly…..

2 goons comes to attack neil but he beats them badly n they fall on the ground…

Dd goes to free the girl…

More goons attack neil but neil (author-our hero) hits them badly n they all fall on ground screaming/bleeding in pain but suddenly one goon from the back hits neil’s head with a bear bottle n neil starts bleeding but he fights with him n he too falls on ground bleeding heavily from his nose/mouth
Meanwhile another jeep comes n the officer with his team arrest them

Dd-Sirji oh God u r bleeding very badly come let’s go to hospital

On the other side-

Avni- (Thinks .. This is called apne hi legs mai kulhari marna) what do I do now??

As master was about to pull the trigger saying I hate Incomplete Love Stories

Avni- (shouts) Stop he is alive yes he is in the hospital let’s go there n see na chinki has also not come in sense till now

Master-Ok but if it turns out lie then I won’t spare u

Avni n Neil come to the same hospital

As neil was doing his bandage next to neil room was Chinkis room

Avni- what will I do now

Master-Will u say where he is

Avni-Yes but remember what I said.. I said let chinki come in sense first then…

Master-She came in sense
Avni- U also had to come in sense now only

Chinki- What but why …(avni tells everything to chinki) Wow what a story u told him avni super n where will u get ur husband now??

Suddenly she spots neil going with bandage in his head … She tells avni I think I got ur husband while avni looks with confusion chinki runs behind neil calling him Jiju.. While neil looks bag chinki says how r u jiju

Neil- (Confused) Who jiju ,what jiju, what r u talking

All of them comes there n avni gets shocked

Avni- What the hell chinki don’t tell me that u r thinking to make him my husband in front of master

Chinki- Avni do u fine any other option n any such person now

Avni- But him..

Chinki- Avni u only decide how u want to go from this hospital-
1)Savely by walking on ur own legs or
2)Ambulance taking our deadbody

Avni- 1 one

Chinki- Perfect then act with me, jiju how r u is ur pain now little less

Neil- What … what r u talking

Avni- Baby u again forgot us right (acts like crying) u know I am waiting for that day when u will regain ur memory n take me home with the right of a wife

Neil- Whaatt???

Dd-Sirji this is so shocking u didn’t tell ur parents or even me that u r already married wait u just wait I am calling aunty right now

Neil- (Takes away the phone) What r u doing dd have u gone mad

Dd-No I am perfect but u became mad Mr. Neil Khanna u destroyed a girls life u secretly married her n kept her hidden from all of us … Why?? I never expected this from u sirji… Never

Neil- Shut up dd stop this melodrama and u miss what r u planning to make me mad first throwed things at my face than doing all this baby drama … What??

Avni- (Thinks oh so his name is neil khanna) I know its not your problem baby after that accident u have this amnesia (again acts like crying) she goes near master n says after that accident though he survived he forgot everything our love our marriage his sali even me even his name….

Master gets teary eyes hids all the gun n goes near neil

Master-Wow salman khan wow u r very lucky to have such a loving n caring wife

Neil- What?? I just can’t understand what is happening n who is salman

Dd-Sirji total how many secrets do u have u even didn’t tell anyone that ur name is not neil but salman khan

Master-Its OK don’t put pressure on ur head but truely u have goddess in ur wife she loves u so much she is still waiting for u to recover n take her home… U will surely become OK one day and if u need any money for treatment then surely tell me … OK (He blesses avni n leaves)

Neil n dd r still very confused neil looks at avni as if she tried to kill him, as he goes near her to talk to her avni n chinki both leave from there running here n there……..

Neil- Crazy stupid girls … Next time if I get them I won’t spare them directly I will put them in jail….

Precap-Kumar comes to police station… Neil looks at some sketch n says they….

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