Hello everyone!!!
I m back..
I m so so so happy…u guys seriously made my day..
Ur comments…ufff maar dala!!
So now my turn to make u guys happy so see m back again with d 4 chappy..
Enjoy!!!
But wait a minute..smile is necessary on every face while reading ahead..
Okay!!
Recap:- kabir waking up Sanchi.
Kabir is about to wear his suit when kusum come and helps him.
Ku:- thank u beta.
Ka:- fr what mom
Ku:- fr listening to me and waking up Sanchi.
Ka:- mom (he turns towards her and cups her face) don’t say thank u..i can wake Sanchi everyday if u say..after all u r my maa
Ku:- oh really ..
Ka:- koi shaq..
Ku:- in that case from today u will wake Sanchi everyday.
Ka:- everyday..he said with his eyes wide open
K:- yes my boy.. everyday.
Ka:- hey bhagwan..socha mom ko impress krunga..lekin mom ne toh depress kr dia..oh no..ek baar dialogue kya mara …zindagi hi barbad ho gayi..
Ku:- Sanchi ka asar ho gaya hai tumpe..u r talking like her..
Ka:- oh pls mom.Anyways m getting late so bye..
Ku:- Kabir wait fr Sanchi na..today is her first day ..take her with u .
Ka:- Mom I m a senior doc
And she is my intern.. I can’t take her with me..its against the Hospital protocols.
Ku:- U and ur protocols..Aag lage tere protocols ko.Ab vo bechari kaise jaigi.
Ka:- mom firstly vo kisi bhi angle se bechari nhi hai..and Secondly if u r so concerned about her so I guess u forgot we have another car at home.
Ku:- Are haan..I forgot.
Ka:- I guess mom now u r getting old..see these white hairs pointing to her head..and now u r forgetting things too.
Ku:- oh accha m getting old hai na…wait abhi batati hu..she pulled kabir ‘s ears..
Ka:- maa leave it na it’s paining..u know u r lady dara singh..so strong..
Ku:- haan I know that..showing her muscles.
Ka:- he sees his watch…accha mom now I think I should leave..
Aaj miss sanchi ko shock bhi toh dena hai…and haan mom pls don’t tell her that even I work at SDCH.
Ku:- Fine..she huffs
Ka:- Ok maa bye..and he leaves..
Ku:- Bye sambhal k jana..Ab Sanchi k paas jaati hu..dekhti hu tayyar hui ya nhi..
And she went to Sanchi’s room.
Ku:- Sanchi r u ready..
Sa:- yes aunty just 1 min..she said while tieing her hair.
Sa:- Done..bye aunty..it’s 8:30 I have to reach there by 9.
Ku:- what bye.. breakfast kaun krega.
Sa:- aunty breakfast krungi na tab toh ghar pe hi reh jaungi..samjho na..
Ku:- I won’t listen anything..sit here have breakfast and then go .without having breakfast I wont let u go outside.
Sa:- ok boss…
She sits for having breakfast.
After few minutes..
Sa:- Happy…I ate my breakfast.ab jaun..
Ku:- yes happy..but kaise jaogi..
Sa:- by cab.. simple
Ku:- no not at all..I won’t allow u to go by cab.
Sa:- toh kya mai aeroplane se jaun.
Ku:- no we r not that much rich..but haan u can go by our car..
Sa:- but..
Ku:- ab late nhi ho raha hai??
Sa:- fine..lady india
Ku:- wait
She calls Kim and he comes.
K:- yes mam
Ku:- Ask driver to drop Sanchi
K:- But mam Robin has taken car with him to the market.
Ku:- What ?? Now how will she go..
Kim lowered his head..
S:- Aunty do u have a bike at home..
Ku:- No beta..
Ki:- Mam but we have a cycle…
Ku:- shutup Kim..will she go to hospital on a cycle..
Sa:- Kim not a bad idea..Give me a hi-5
Kim gives hi-5 showing his 32 teeth..
Ku:- Sanchi.r u crazy..u r not going on a cycle..u know how much traffic is there in mumbai..And apart from this do u even know how much far is ur Hospital..u will not be able to reach there by evening..And do u even know about India’s traffic rules..
Sa:- Calm down Lady india..Firstly it’s just 8 kms from here..secondly I have seen the traffic and thirdly I m a cyclist..I have a record fr cycling 10 kms in 20 mins..
( Practically impossible..hai na ??)and lastly Im familiar woth the rules..so no tension.
Ku:- but Sanchi..
Sa:- Aunty no ifs and buts..I have no option other than this..
K:- Fine ..but call me as soon as u reach there…
Sa:- ok boss.bye!
Ku:- Bye..
Sa:- Kim show me where is ur Kabir Sir’s cycle..
Ki:- this way mam..
And Sanchi left with Kimwhile Kusum stood there smiling.
After few minutes Sanchi wore the helmet and sat on the cycle..
S:- bye Kim..pray krna that I teach my destination on time…
K:- bye mam..all the best..
Sa:- thank u …chal beta Sanchi..ready steady go..and she started cycling as fast she could..
After cycling for sometime she stops at a signal because of Red light.??
Sa:- Oh shit..yaar ab 1 min wait krna padega..she sees her watch
Just 15 mins to 9…oh god…help me..
Suddenly she sees a person on bike breaking the signal and nobody saw him..
Sa:- wohoo ..it means we can jump the signal it’s legal..thank u god…and she starts pedalling..
But to her bad luck a traffic police saw her..
Traffic police :- oh madam wait..
The traffic police along with his companion started following Sanchi.
Po:- ruko madam.
Sanchi turned behind and saw the two police officer asking her to stop.
Sa:- oh teri..it means it’s not legal..now m gone..she says while cycling..aunty asked me whether I know the rules.. overconfidence mein bol toh diya haan..but
Po:- Madam ruko…
Sa:- Srry bhaiya..aj ruk gayi toh hamesha k lie rukk jaungi..srry..
Oh god enough of today’s adventure..now no more adventures please.
Sanchi continued to cycle as fast as she could and the traffic police also followed her as fast they could..
After few minutes Sanchi saw SDCH’s gate..
At SDCH
Kabir was examining some reports
Ka:-Miss Fernandez ask Dr Awasthi to examine these reports.
Miss:- ok doc.
Suddenly Kabir ‘s phone rings.
K:- excuse me ..
Miss:- sure sir And she went
Here kabir remembered his and Sanchi ‘s first meeting, how she gave him a free advice to throw his phone and smiled.
His phone rang again..and he came back to his senses..
He picked up the phone
Ka:- Hello
Ku:- kabir did Sanchi reach there..
Ka:- Huh!! Hamesha Sanchi Sanchi…Sometimes I doubt that I m ur son or she..
Ku:- Kabir jokes aside did Sanchi reach..
Ka:- I guess no..because if she had come then she would have surely reported to me..but anyways y r u so stressed ..she is coming by our car na..she will reach soon..
Ku:- I wouldn’t have called u if she had gone in our car..
Ka:- means
Ku:- She has gone on ur cycle…
Ka:- what????????????
Lag gaya 440 volts ka shock…..??
To b continued..
So guys how was it..??
Long??
And haa this chappy was dedicated to my sweetest frnd Annie…
Happy b’day Annie ?????????????
Hope u liked it..????????????❤❤
Precap:- Jail or Hospital???
Guys don’t forget to comment..they r my inspiration..
Thanks to all the commentors..❤
Lots of Love..??❤❤
~Inara?
18 Comments
Sanchi in cycle,,sooo much funny.. The episode was mindblowing like u dear.. Plz update soon..!
Amazing
Sanchi on cycle?…..I just can’t imagine that situation when she is cycling and traffic police is following her…..I also liked the dailogue of Kabir:”sochata mom ko impress karoongi par mom ne to depress kardiya..oh no…ek bar dailogue Kya mar Diya…zindgi hi barbad hogaya…”precap is interesting it will be fun to read if she is caught by the traffic police and then Kabir got call from the traffic police and he reaches there and saving sanchi….and if she reaches hostel then gets a shock to see kabir and then Kabir teases her for coming in cycle…just a guess nevermind
Oh sweetie, I ‘ve become a fan of urs… Such an amazing concept … I love the way u portrayed Sanchi and Kabir….
It is “terrific” in a word…. Love you and update asap
super duper and sanchi in cycle so funny when kabir heard that she’ll come one his cycle he get 440 volt zatka he he he …
update next one soon…
Sanchi on a cycle!! Is it even possible to bike in india?? And Kabir talking to Kusum about Sanchi so rude yet super funny. Great to see Kusum and Kabir’s cute relationship
Omg amazing concept dear ! You rocked it yr
Outstanding inara.. ur ff always makes me laugh.. i just loved it from core of my heart .its totally different from other ff..which is a good point..ur dialogue writing is amazing..i love whole episode but this lines are my fav..
hey bhagwan..socha mom ko impress krunga..lekin mom ne toh depress kr dia..oh no..ek baar dialogue kya mara …zindagi hi barbad ho gayi..
Ku:- Sanchi ka asar ho gaya hai tumpe..u r talking like her..
Keep it up..good going.
Lots of love
first of all, a very Happy Durgashtami Inu dear……….dear u just made me speechless……..when kabir said”hey bhagwan..socha mom ko impress krunga..lekin mom ne toh depress kr dia..oh no..ek baar dialogue kya mara …zindagi hi barbad ho gayi”……wow……….so hilarious yaar…….I couldn’t stop laughing……….so, is she going to make her 1st entry as a doc or a patient???????haha……..anyways dear, plz update nxt one asap………luv u loads………………
Awesome episode ?? it was hilarious. ???your title perfectly suits on the story. She’s nautanki nd he’s khadoos. Nd kabir got 440 volt shock???yeh to hona hi tha. I think I m in love with ffs of urs???.
Nd one last request pls update soon with longer episode like this one (if you have tym)
Take care
It was hilarious Ina dea !!! Sanchi in cycle!!! I can’t stop laughing imagining it.
Now Sanchi will get 440 volt shock probably when she meets Kabir in SDCH.It will be fun.
Plz post next epi asap.
Nice
Awesome super fabulous fantastic and sooo cutee and funny really title suits alot please update soon dear now I can’t wait that y
Really nice
Hey inara mindblowing epi dear cutie pie….uff maar daala tumne to hassa kar…nd plzzzz 440 volt ka jhatka mat to kabir ko bechara pagla jayega…best dialogue impression krne k chakkar mein maa ne depression me daal diya…superb or kya khaun jhakkasss…fadoo…post nxt asap
The best thing was dialogues especially of kabir…..really loved it…my stomach is aching due to extreme laugh…..made my day!!
Hey Inara.. I am late.. Sorry!!! I finally got time to read and I totally loved today’s part.. It was awesome and I am soo excited for the next one.and the set-up and dialogues were amazing!!! And thanks for such a cute surprise and dedicating this chapter to me!! It means soo much… I don’t have enough words to thank you for such a sweet approach and I am also grateful for all the wishes!! I was already a big fan when u started such a fabulous storyline and now its has gotten to be better and sooo interesting. I am really addicted to this ff. Since you had a surgery I will let you post in ease and no rush!!! Hope u get well soon.. Love u loads..?
Mind blowing… Outstanding… Fantastic.. Keep going