A big mansion is seen….written
Khanna Mansion
A guy sleeping in bed hears alarm….and he is our Shaurya….
Shaurya – biwi hea….but she never wakes me up…
Shaurya gets up from bed and gets ready wearing white shirt and black pant with black coat….
Voice ( from down ) – find u have any manners…I am the queen of this house…and u r just a servant…stay in ur limits…
Shaurya comes down..
Shaurya – Nikki darling…stop it mistakes happen…
Nikki – u don’t know this cheap kinds of people…
Shaurya – no problem drr leave it…
Nikki calls down… – k…get lost..tc next time…
Servant – thanq u mam…
And leaves…
Shaurya – everyday…u do this…why….don’t do it…
Nikki – i try my best….but they create a fuss…
Shaurya – no problem…I understand…did Mehak come…??
Nikki gets upset – no..
A girl enters with a pint tail…a black shirt with knee lenght grey skirt…2 files in hand..touch up..black pencil heel…and she is our Mehak…
Mehak – gm man and sir
Shaurya was memerized while Nikki was jealous…
Shaurya, everday she is looking more beautifull..control u r married…but she is amazing..
Nikki – gm Mehak…
Shaurya – let’s go we have meeting today…at 3:00 pm… ( present time 7:00 am )
Mehak – yes sir…I have these files to discuss with u…
Nikki – what’s the hurry…have something first…
Mehak – i had…sir did u…
Shaurya – not hungry…
Mehak – sir u should have something…It will affect ur health…
Nikki – yes hubby…
Shaurya – u both will kill me 1 day…
Servant serves him with coffee…he has it…
He drinks and leaves with Mehak…
Nikki is upset + Angry
guys I know too short…next 1 will be too long…I ‘ll upload only 2 times a week…very busy as my school started..
do comment…I know too short…plsss forgive..ignore mistakes…take care love u all…thanxxx for ur comments in the previous 1…promise next 1 will je longer…it was a long of intro type…k bye…love u all…
love u all…
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Too much late… After intro
Anywayits good…
But next part upload soon..
sorry drr…will upload next tomorrow maybe…thanxxx also ☺☺
Update was gud dear but when u will update the next part pls tell soon
thanq u drr….will upload soon…maybe tomorrow….☺☺
Hi everyone. me Anisha. hi Aizaellahi. the first part was nice but too short. and it if too long after the intro that you had posted the first part. by the way it was nice. i can understand ur busy schedule for i am also a student. so if you are posting only twice a week make sure that the episodes are long i mean quite long so the you can compensate for the rest of the week. but as we all know that you are a excellent writer so don’t take my sayings as order but take them as request because i think if you think and apply my request or suggestion as you would think it will make your ff better. too much of saying lastly i say to give some twist.
faithful regards
Anisha
oh thanq u so much…I ‘ll try my best to do it…
Sorry one more thing. when will you post the next episode?? . Aizaellahi
May i ask one more thing please don’t mind and answer if you wish
As a student in which class or which college you are or which level education are you doing.
And can i call you sis
I think I have u to call u sis…coz i am just in 7th…??
what about u…
next episode maybe tomorrow or on Sunday…other days r mostly not possible…
dear it is really nice………awsome,mehek`s look is nice try to write a little big updates princess
thanq u di for ur encouragement…love u a lot…will try my best for long update…?????
Hi Aoza . hw r u . bhol to nhi gyi mujhe . do u remember me. zikra . Nice yaar it was too good . write the next one soon
hii aiza . can i call u aiza cause am in same class u r . and yeah mujhe bhol to nhi gayi am ur old friend zikra rember !!! . but ff is soooooo nice
of course u can…thank god some is of my class…well i ‘ll never u forget u…