Epiosde 2
Epiosde starts with Raman hitting Neelu’s scooty. Raman comes out of his car removing his sun glasses. She gives angry look. She comes near him and yell at him. She ask how dare him to make her fall. Raman says it was not his mistake. She comments on his face saying he is a monster. In reply Raman says that if monkey sees her Witch face then monkey will go to coma. She gets angry and scold him saying she is getting late. Raman says even he dont have any interest to speak with her. They give angry look to eachother and leaves.
Scene shifts to Bhalla’s house where Mrs Bhalla ask ishita to wake up Rinki.(Ishita was a servent appointed in thier house.) She enter Rinki’s room and and sees nail polish. She thinks its a lipstick. She thinks to please Rinki and she goes near Rinki to apply it who was sleeping. She removes the lid of nail polish and get happy seeing the colour. She applies it to Rinki’s lips. When she apply it to Rinki’s upper lips she wakes up by smell. Rinki shouts on Ishita saying she is foolish, stupid, idiot , ignorant and etc. Ishita cries and ask her not to fire from job. She cries vigrously which irritates Rinki. Rinki ask her get lost from my room. She leaves.
Ishita sees Romi’s expensive shoe and thinks to please him by cleaning it. She puts it in washing Machine. She puts detergent. Washing machine make noises and it get damaged. Romi comes and asks for shoes. Ishita says she cleaning it.. Everyone comes by washing machine’s noice. All gets shocked seeing it. Romi takes out his shoes from machine and gets shocked seeing it spoiled. Everyone shouts at ishita for her foolishness. Again she cries…
At Raman’s office.
Raman ask his peon Bala to bring tea for him. Ashok (Ramans best friend) comes to his office and greets Raman. Ashok give some papers and says congrats, we got the the contract. Raman says oh u r really a best friend. Neelu comes to his office for interview. She ask Bala where is boss and she have come for interview for the job of secretary. Bala says u have to wait for sometime. She says OK. After sometime , the peon calls her for interview.She goes to Ramans cabin and shocked to see Raman.
Precap: Neelu pleads Raman for her job. At Bhalla house ishita get scolded by everyone for her another foolishness.
Credit to :Rithushree
NOTE: This Rithushree is different than the one who comments everyday.
32 Comments
Seriously I couldn’t hold my laughter ur story is way beyond imagination
Rofl
Ha ha what sort of stupidity.Ishita even don’t know abt lipstick and nail polish.don’t destroy ishita’s character like this.
R u CRAZY Miss or Mrs..Writer…Just stop saying Ishita as a Servant we cant tolerate it …pls stop this..y don’t u understand all r asking u to stop this ..if u want to write then write but pls MAKE THE PAIR OF ISHRA NOT NEERA…AND ISHITA AS A MAIN LEAD…NOT AS A SERVANT..
HAVEN’T U SEEN THE FIRST UPDATE OF UR FF..ALL R ASKING U TO STOP THIS AND SCOLDING U ..
AND PLS STOP USING OTHERS NAME CAN’T U C ALL R SCOLDING ANOTHER RITUSHREE WHO ACTUALLY HAVEN’T WRITTEN THIS…
PLS STOP INSULTING THE FANS OF ISHRA..
AND I AM SORRY IF IT HURTS U BUT U TOO DOING THE SAME BY HURTING ISHRA FANS..
Excuses who right this story ????? How can ishu be a servant sooo stupid….in this story ishu should be doctor……
What d hell …..whoever u r , y r u using rithushree’s name ????
If u want to cntnue this, give credit to u ., y u r using someone else name…??
Guys , d one who writes this… Dfntly he or she is not YHM fan, nd dsnt like ishita.. He or she doing this to irritate d YHM fans…, nd using rithushree’s name… Now pls don’t blame again ritu.., it’s Better to avoid this…
Nd yeah …..whoever write this …., jst shame on u….u r using someone else’s name…
Don’t u have dare to write ur name, or don’t u have ur own name….???? If yes then write ur name… Not others…
Can’t 2 people have same name????
u r trying completely making fun of yhm and all the character….so cheap.
even u don’t reveal it real identity….so mean….
Guys ppllzzz ignore this don’t comment here this person is playing with our feelings is ko bahooo mat do akir tang a jage ga ppplllzzzz I don’t ishita to be further insulted
HAHAHA Thank you for this comedy, this is the BEST FAN FICTION! PLEASEE DONT STOP WRITING! IGNORE ALL THE NEGATIVE COMMENTS! i love your writing and you are entitled to your own opinion, whoever does not agree then don’t read it! All the negative commenters are soo stupid why are they here if they hate your writing? Just get lost!
This is awesome???? please continue to write! I found this very funny and entertaining. Anyone who disagrees then don’t come here!
Yeah u all are right guys..this story is not bad like ashok and raman are friends..its nice but about ishu and neelu..we cant tolerate..u can even use vandu or mika infct shagun in her place and ishu could be a doc or her sis in law..buy not servant at all..and what about rinki simi and romi why they were not changed?? And beside this bala as peon…just stop ur rubbish story mr or miss unknown.
We wont comment frm now on..
Hi everyone, i love this story! It is soooo much better than the horror rubbish. And the actors deserve to be changed and made into slaves for acting in such a horrible evil serial! Please write the next episode quickly! But i have a question who is neera? I have never seen anyone with that name in the show, please does anyone know?
I meant who is neelu???
the maid servant in bhalla house
Yeah why not “best fan fiction”
Keep enjoying reading it all alone…u just get lost coz the true fans of yhm wont read this evr again..!
Am i right????
I know lots of people who read this actually but don’t comment, its better than the actual rubbish show! And if you don’t like it then dont follow.
Please continue, thank you very much writer!
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I donot like yhm so much but do not hurt other fans feeling atleast ur story is good but please change the character’s name atleast and if u could interchange ishita’s and neelu’s character in the fanfiction it would be a hit
All those who worship these actors that don’t even know you exist, they just love your money, you should all stop being obsessed with a fake story/drama! Why don’t you talk like that about real life and all the injustices happening in India and around the world? Wake up people!
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I said it earlier that the writer have loose focus. The writer have lost it completely.
Make it a story where Ishu is actually a really smart person in disguise doing something to help the Bhalla Family(like save them from terrorists but the family finds out. and then Raman falls in love with Ishu, and Ishita turns him down, but they both get together and have two kids Adi and Ruhi.
How ridiculous ! The writer is jealous of ishra love that’s why he /she is taking out their frustrations by writing this kind of nonsense ! Worse than horror bakwass! ?
U r ff was really so crazy n funny… But ishu fans r really fire… They vill attack surely… Neelu wid raman, really horrible
for god sake stop writing this fan fiction i think ishra forever is 1000 times better than this
Yes u r right. Ishra forever is better than this.
I think best fan fiction one is the one who wrote this
I am damp sure best fan fiction is the one behind this
i love this
GUYS PLEASE STOP WITH THE HATE, YOU GET TO SEE PEOPLE IN A DIFFERNT LIGHT LIKE THIS. ITS NOT BAD IF THE OWRSON WANTS TO SEE NEERA OR WANTS TO TAKE ANGER OUT ON YHM FOR CURRENT TRACK. LET HIM, I THINK I WOULD DO THE SAME THING, JUST NOT TO THIS EXTENT, BUT IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN DONT READ IT!!!!!
yes
Wow..superb episode…lovd ur stry yar .. 🙂
Ishita part was so funny…
Ur imagination power is too good
Keep writing
It is much much better than faltu dragging serials Lima kumkum bhagya..
Gud luck
Waiting fr next part